Comments received on poems by Archdoom



Lunar Lure
2781 said:

In the day of the new moon it shall be opened.

February 28th, 2023 06:16

Age of Extinction
mvvenkataraman said:

Truly great poetry,
Thanks for this poem,
I enjoyed reading it,
A brilliant one indeed!

February 23rd, 2023 08:42

Age of Extinction
2781 said:

No answer?

February 22nd, 2023 04:28

Beyond Redemption
2781 said:

I will bless those that bless you, and whoever curses you I will curse; and all the peoples of the earth will be blessed through you.\"

February 21st, 2023 07:47

The Hollow Pursuit
2781 said:

Naked we shall return.

February 20th, 2023 16:49

A Future In Ashes
2781 said:

I must work work the works of him who sent me, while it is day; the night comes, when no man can work.

February 17th, 2023 07:58

Trapped in Brilliance
2781 said:

Living proof.

February 17th, 2023 07:51

A Future In Ashes
Iva Hotko said:

🖤

February 16th, 2023 15:05

The Death of Joy
ModernPoemLover said:

Hiya, I found this poem really interesting and thought provoking, thank you for posting it :)

February 16th, 2023 12:37

A Future In Ashes
Doggerel Dave said:

https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155649

February 16th, 2023 06:20

The Death of Joy
Mara \"Marzipan\" said:

I rather enjoyed this, grim as it is. You merely penned down the fleeting visceral thoughts of many, making them more concrete and I appreciate that.
Thank you for sharing.

February 15th, 2023 12:05

The Death of Joy
Doggerel Dave said:

Absurd? Agreed - But for me anyone who uses such terminology as \'the world\', or \'we\' is just fudging issues, and the same goes for a pile of words about which others have to make an interpretation...

Do keep going , though - MPS can be a fun place if you approach it in the right way...

\'See You later - it\'s late and I\'m off to bed.

February 15th, 2023 07:32

The Death of Joy
Doggerel Dave said:

I won\'t be reading many of yours, Sir - they are too bloody grim.

And what is this world you keep nagging on about? Not the world - it\'s the man made political system we live under........

February 15th, 2023 06:40

Black Embrace
Iva Hotko said:

I read it twice, just to get the feel right.
Light and dark entwined in the notion of everlasting love 📜🖋🤍

February 15th, 2023 04:51

Black Embrace
Natalie Gladmir said:

I like the triumph of love in the last line of your poem. Gives hope for the best.

February 8th, 2023 16:13

Hour by Hour
Christina8 said:

Very good poem. Leaves one to ponder life and how we are spending our time. Thanks for sharing!

February 8th, 2023 07:19