Comments received on poems by 2781
Plunder
sorenbarrett said:
Karma? What goes around comes around. This seems old testament the new would be turn the other cheek. Nice
January 4th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Karma? What goes around comes around. This seems old testament the new would be turn the other cheek. Nice
January 4th, 2024 06:23
Plunder
arqios said:
Of the promise of old the Emmanuel is the one to Whom we flee…
January 4th, 2024 06:23
arqios said:
Of the promise of old the Emmanuel is the one to Whom we flee…
January 4th, 2024 06:23
I am
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
My next poem is the gramatically incorrect poem: \'I Is\'. heehee.
January 3rd, 2024 03:08
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
My next poem is the gramatically incorrect poem: \'I Is\'. heehee.
January 3rd, 2024 03:08
I think
Neville said:
Sounds like either
1) A plan
2) An excuse to get stoned
3) An advertisement for an Israeli open-bolt, blowback-operated submachine gun
Neville
January 2nd, 2024 05:05
Neville said:
Sounds like either
1) A plan
2) An excuse to get stoned
3) An advertisement for an Israeli open-bolt, blowback-operated submachine gun
Neville
January 2nd, 2024 05:05
I think
orchidee said:
I\'m in a cage. I\'m a wild beast - or just a pussy cat?! lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:18
orchidee said:
I\'m in a cage. I\'m a wild beast - or just a pussy cat?! lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:18
Not
Neville said:
This is very Masonic if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and was also very much enjoyed .. 👁️ Neville
January 1st, 2024 10:12
Neville said:
This is very Masonic if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and was also very much enjoyed .. 👁️ Neville
January 1st, 2024 10:12
Not
sorenbarrett said:
Seven a magical number like three, eleven and twenty two. I take it there is a good deal of symbolism here. The Mason\'s tool of the plumb, the mention of stone foundation, olive branches for peace. Then there is the balance between good and evil but not heaven or hell. Nice
January 1st, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Seven a magical number like three, eleven and twenty two. I take it there is a good deal of symbolism here. The Mason\'s tool of the plumb, the mention of stone foundation, olive branches for peace. Then there is the balance between good and evil but not heaven or hell. Nice
January 1st, 2024 09:02
Not
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here: [To be or] not [to be]? lol.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here: [To be or] not [to be]? lol.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
To be
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me next poem will of course be entitled, ....or not to be!\' lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:47
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me next poem will of course be entitled, ....or not to be!\' lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:47
Repair
sorenbarrett said:
The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely done.
December 30th, 2023 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely done.
December 30th, 2023 10:34
Repair
Cassie58 said:
Oh yes, the foundations need a great deal of attention for sure. Meaningful poetry. Well penned.
December 30th, 2023 06:57
Cassie58 said:
Oh yes, the foundations need a great deal of attention for sure. Meaningful poetry. Well penned.
December 30th, 2023 06:57
Laces
2781 said:
When I was attempting to join I wanted to call myself a name but got rejected so I tried the numbers and \"bingo.\"
I was in.
December 29th, 2023 10:53
2781 said:
When I was attempting to join I wanted to call myself a name but got rejected so I tried the numbers and \"bingo.\"
I was in.
December 29th, 2023 10:53
Laces
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:47
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:47
Raise
sorenbarrett said:
This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and recognition well written.
December 28th, 2023 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and recognition well written.
December 28th, 2023 09:04
Raise
orchidee said:
Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has 8 syllables at present.
But it\'s a tricky one - I can\'t think of any hymns with that meter.
December 28th, 2023 03:00
orchidee said:
Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has 8 syllables at present.
But it\'s a tricky one - I can\'t think of any hymns with that meter.
December 28th, 2023 03:00
Raise
orchidee said:
This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to mind?
Maybe it\'s an 8.8.8.8. or a 3.8.5.6. or 32.34.95.68. or summat like that. Depends how many syllables in each line.
December 28th, 2023 02:58
orchidee said:
This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to mind?
Maybe it\'s an 8.8.8.8. or a 3.8.5.6. or 32.34.95.68. or summat like that. Depends how many syllables in each line.
December 28th, 2023 02:58
Horns
Neville said:
Sadly this could very easily apply to the dreadful things that are being allowed to happen in Gaza .. a timely and most impressive poem indeed .. Neville
December 27th, 2023 08:55
Neville said:
Sadly this could very easily apply to the dreadful things that are being allowed to happen in Gaza .. a timely and most impressive poem indeed .. Neville
December 27th, 2023 08:55
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