Comments received on poems by 2781



Balance
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 23rd, 2023 01:39

Arrivals
Neville said:



drinking coffee in a roadside cafe .. checking flight times & keeping fingers crossed there shall be no delays .. Neville


November 22nd, 2023 08:14

Arrivals
arqios said:

Arrivals are always the best… Departures not so much, except perhaps for fleeing the worst that pursues…

November 22nd, 2023 05:41

Arrivals
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 22nd, 2023 02:58

Arrivals
Thomas W Case said:

Nice imagery.

November 22nd, 2023 02:30

Creaks
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

November 21st, 2023 21:09

Creaks
sorenbarrett said:

So well worded and written.It gives pause and brings on many thoughts. Age portrayed so well.

November 21st, 2023 12:27

Creaks
arqios said:

Being aged and rickety, both material stuff and humans alike. TFS 🙏🏻

November 21st, 2023 04:26

Creaks
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 21st, 2023 03:04

The vow
2781 said:

It\'s all part of the process.

November 20th, 2023 06:56

The vow
arqios said:

To all us rotten little sods out there may find our way to real life. Most uplifting exhortation by way of first hand testimony, quite a costly and precious undertaking.

November 20th, 2023 06:34

Relationship
Neville said:


I wish you well in all your endeavours
my antipodean friend ..

November 20th, 2023 04:52

I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m a
Neville said:



FFS will you neva learn you daft MF you N

November 17th, 2023 03:38

I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m a
orchidee said:

Similar to my FFFF poem recently. Ooohh!

November 17th, 2023 02:32

I just want
arqios said:

And let this be a sacred moment for writing ✍🏻 to occur.

November 17th, 2023 01:04

I just want
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

November 16th, 2023 16:32

Drunk
Lil said:

Just love this.

November 15th, 2023 14:40

Drunk
arqios said:

Winebibbing has always been a hilarious term…. Like baby whines and bibs. Not besmirching this poem though. And the Day is soon approaching.

November 15th, 2023 04:40

Drunk
Lorenz said:

you\'ll never drink alone !

November 15th, 2023 03:42

Drunk
orchidee said:

A finesh writesh I shay!
Notice the good acting dialogue there? Or have I had a gin or three?! heehee.

November 15th, 2023 02:51

Joy
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 14th, 2023 19:34

Saved
Lil said:

Great writing!!

November 14th, 2023 18:53

Saved
orchidee said:

Now would this be the charismatic speaking in tongues?! Not a mystery if we understand it simply.

November 12th, 2023 11:01

I want
John Prophet said:

Was once called over generous. Go figure!

November 11th, 2023 19:34

I want
Bella Shepard said:

If we were all givers, then we would all be receivers in the best sense. What a wonderful thought you have expressed here. Loved it!

November 11th, 2023 15:03

I want
orchidee said:

I want to say good write 2.

November 11th, 2023 13:17

I want
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant thought.

November 11th, 2023 09:01

I want
Positive Girl said:

Great idea. I enjoyed your poem.

November 11th, 2023 08:43

The dove
arqios said:

Plovers and ibises also make for watching and waiting.

November 10th, 2023 06:48

The dove
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 10th, 2023 03:51



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