Comments received on poems by 2781
Surrender
Syd said:
\"Don\'t worry if it ever gets read\" I can very much relate to this line. I suppose it is what has kept me writing over the years.
- Syd
March 12th, 2023 08:00
Syd said:
\"Don\'t worry if it ever gets read\" I can very much relate to this line. I suppose it is what has kept me writing over the years.
- Syd
March 12th, 2023 08:00
Attraction
hzugman said:
I think the voice inside is our ego that is both indispensable and a pain in the ass simultaneously. Like your poem.
March 11th, 2023 17:35
hzugman said:
I think the voice inside is our ego that is both indispensable and a pain in the ass simultaneously. Like your poem.
March 11th, 2023 17:35
Old school
2781 said:
Peace is my middle name! I have no bitterness, just a longing for righteousness. Thanks for reading.
March 10th, 2023 05:41
2781 said:
Peace is my middle name! I have no bitterness, just a longing for righteousness. Thanks for reading.
March 10th, 2023 05:41
Old school
L. B. Mek said:
life punches hard
even when the sun is out...
sorry for your troubles
try to not let bitterness
determine your worth!
stay strong
hope it felt good to ink it out,
if it did, treasure that solace
seek peace, dear poet
March 10th, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
life punches hard
even when the sun is out...
sorry for your troubles
try to not let bitterness
determine your worth!
stay strong
hope it felt good to ink it out,
if it did, treasure that solace
seek peace, dear poet
March 10th, 2023 04:57
Today
BlessedbyGod said:
Hahaha thank you 2781 I needed that Hahaha Hahaha 😆 😂
March 9th, 2023 00:35
BlessedbyGod said:
Hahaha thank you 2781 I needed that Hahaha Hahaha 😆 😂
March 9th, 2023 00:35
Kumquats
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣Keep the kumquat trees, otherwise he\'ll be at your wood work next...............They were here first, though....
March 6th, 2023 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣Keep the kumquat trees, otherwise he\'ll be at your wood work next...............They were here first, though....
March 6th, 2023 07:20
Kumquats
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely write, dear poet
(nature vies to serenade us
we seldom, find the peace within
to notice; turmoil of mind
and unsettled emotions, warping
our experience of existence)
March 6th, 2023 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely write, dear poet
(nature vies to serenade us
we seldom, find the peace within
to notice; turmoil of mind
and unsettled emotions, warping
our experience of existence)
March 6th, 2023 06:34
What if
2781 said:
No toil a little uncertainty maybe but who knows? Thanks again
March 4th, 2023 15:53
2781 said:
No toil a little uncertainty maybe but who knows? Thanks again
March 4th, 2023 15:53
What if
orchidee said:
Was this poem much toiling, or did it flow easily?! lol.
March 4th, 2023 12:52
orchidee said:
Was this poem much toiling, or did it flow easily?! lol.
March 4th, 2023 12:52
Go figure
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
reading or listening
is only, the beginning
it\'s only
when we\'ve churned it
in our mind\'s, mill
utilise our insight\'s, mulch
by questioning, it
so as to nurture, it
as an idea, a truth
we can call our own...
(an inventive write, a memorable read
something to consider and mulch)
thank you!
March 3rd, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
reading or listening
is only, the beginning
it\'s only
when we\'ve churned it
in our mind\'s, mill
utilise our insight\'s, mulch
by questioning, it
so as to nurture, it
as an idea, a truth
we can call our own...
(an inventive write, a memorable read
something to consider and mulch)
thank you!
March 3rd, 2023 05:35
The Beach 2023
arqios said:
Same here but with an Ikea chair, that should count for Danish. We did have Danish style chairs at one home in Sydney; not comfy at all. Missing them fish and chips.
March 2nd, 2023 06:31
arqios said:
Same here but with an Ikea chair, that should count for Danish. We did have Danish style chairs at one home in Sydney; not comfy at all. Missing them fish and chips.
March 2nd, 2023 06:31
Daniel
2781 said:
Daniel said it much better than I ever could. I felt I may be breaking the rules but I don\'t know the fine print. Thanks for reading.
March 1st, 2023 08:14
2781 said:
Daniel said it much better than I ever could. I felt I may be breaking the rules but I don\'t know the fine print. Thanks for reading.
March 1st, 2023 08:14
Daniel
sorenbarrett said:
Very biblical, hopeful and bright. What you believe becomes true.
March 1st, 2023 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Very biblical, hopeful and bright. What you believe becomes true.
March 1st, 2023 07:21
Daniel
2781 said:
Plenty of food for them out there, unfortunately. Thanks again.
March 1st, 2023 04:32
2781 said:
Plenty of food for them out there, unfortunately. Thanks again.
March 1st, 2023 04:32
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