Comments received on poems by 2781
Feeding the Beast
Bobby O said:
It’s real, it’s a story for us all to absorb and to commit to the battle. Nice write, good read.
May 13th, 2023 03:58
Bobby O said:
It’s real, it’s a story for us all to absorb and to commit to the battle. Nice write, good read.
May 13th, 2023 03:58
Narrative
arqios said:
It often starts as a cry in the wilderness and a stirring from heartfelt sharing and then again almost consuming as a still silent voice and even the lightest touch of a caring hand and even the brushing on of a loved one\'s lips. In many mysterious ways thus declare a glory that is still knowable to humanity.
May 12th, 2023 05:58
arqios said:
It often starts as a cry in the wilderness and a stirring from heartfelt sharing and then again almost consuming as a still silent voice and even the lightest touch of a caring hand and even the brushing on of a loved one\'s lips. In many mysterious ways thus declare a glory that is still knowable to humanity.
May 12th, 2023 05:58
Narrative
Neville said:
tis lovely sir and while one can beat a drum and an egg etc etc, one simply can not beat a bit of truth .. :)
May 12th, 2023 05:29
Neville said:
tis lovely sir and while one can beat a drum and an egg etc etc, one simply can not beat a bit of truth .. :)
May 12th, 2023 05:29
Dumbed down
L. B. Mek said:
we need only imagine
\'that good book\'
was once the AI of its Time
..
and here we are
..
and hope, \'there\'
someday, future generations
will arrive
...
and on, we find a way
till all is revealed, in time
May 12th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
we need only imagine
\'that good book\'
was once the AI of its Time
..
and here we are
..
and hope, \'there\'
someday, future generations
will arrive
...
and on, we find a way
till all is revealed, in time
May 12th, 2023 02:53
Narrative
orchidee said:
The \'bad, mad, or God\' thing? No one else could truly make claims such as \'I am the Way, the Truth, and the Life\'.
May 12th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
The \'bad, mad, or God\' thing? No one else could truly make claims such as \'I am the Way, the Truth, and the Life\'.
May 12th, 2023 01:52
Narrative
Bloodorange said:
Wow you have so much emotion in your poetry. It’s amazing I hope I can me as good as you .
May 12th, 2023 01:25
Bloodorange said:
Wow you have so much emotion in your poetry. It’s amazing I hope I can me as good as you .
May 12th, 2023 01:25
Dumbed down
arqios said:
AI is never a friend and \"2001: A Space Odyssey\" made that clear with HAL\'s increasingly bizarre behaviour.
May 9th, 2023 07:16
arqios said:
AI is never a friend and \"2001: A Space Odyssey\" made that clear with HAL\'s increasingly bizarre behaviour.
May 9th, 2023 07:16
Graduation day
L. B. Mek said:
\'Parent\'s like me just wanted to see their son\'
every so often, you gift us a glimpse
of a most sensitive, articulate
and genuinely eloquent, Poet
what a beautifully vivid account
for us, childless
we can but be jealous
bless your shared fatherly success
and may your son, surpass
your laudable, levels
of wisdom and empathetic genius..
I hope serenity finds you
thank you! for choosing to share
stay strong
stay blessed
May 8th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Parent\'s like me just wanted to see their son\'
every so often, you gift us a glimpse
of a most sensitive, articulate
and genuinely eloquent, Poet
what a beautifully vivid account
for us, childless
we can but be jealous
bless your shared fatherly success
and may your son, surpass
your laudable, levels
of wisdom and empathetic genius..
I hope serenity finds you
thank you! for choosing to share
stay strong
stay blessed
May 8th, 2023 04:54
Common
orchidee said:
There\'s that controversial verse in \'All things bright and beautiful\', removed from some hymn books:
\'The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate....\'
May 8th, 2023 02:09
orchidee said:
There\'s that controversial verse in \'All things bright and beautiful\', removed from some hymn books:
\'The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate....\'
May 8th, 2023 02:09
Elements
arqios said:
There and soon the day of reckoning shall bless and assail one and all at the feet of the Worthy One.
May 7th, 2023 16:18
arqios said:
There and soon the day of reckoning shall bless and assail one and all at the feet of the Worthy One.
May 7th, 2023 16:18
Graduation day
2781 said:
Well I do feel worn, and a life of salt and sun has left me a little leathery!
May 6th, 2023 18:59
2781 said:
Well I do feel worn, and a life of salt and sun has left me a little leathery!
May 6th, 2023 18:59
Graduation day
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
Graduation day
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Strong
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Strong
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Strong
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
Strong
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
Howard
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Fact or fiction
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
Business
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Tonight
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
Blood
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Blood
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
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