Comments received on poems by 2781
Acronyms
L. B. Mek said:
\'innit!\'
AFAIK
TMI
TL;DR
ICYMI
NVM
fighting it, is only cursing ourselves
with waging an impossible battle
eloquence is archaic
vocabulary\'s art as obsolete
spoken word \'poetry\'
now accepted and written
with colloquial ease
inclusive of \'y\'all\' and wanna
typing shrt-cuts
..
but eh, at least full novels
are only 50k words now..
..
same writer\'s dishing out
a new one every frikin hr...
(a top-Down
demise
strategical devised
indoctrinating herds
with that plug-n-play
mentality, of corrosive lazy)
... and on
we watch, wait
popcorn in-hand
clueless
at what \'they\' hope
to inherit
when \'the WE meek\'
have been marginalised
to extinct..
hope it\'s what they envisioned
\'cos\'
we\'ll be jus fine, traversing that
\'Great Perhaps...\'
September 25th, 2023 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'innit!\'
AFAIK
TMI
TL;DR
ICYMI
NVM
fighting it, is only cursing ourselves
with waging an impossible battle
eloquence is archaic
vocabulary\'s art as obsolete
spoken word \'poetry\'
now accepted and written
with colloquial ease
inclusive of \'y\'all\' and wanna
typing shrt-cuts
..
but eh, at least full novels
are only 50k words now..
..
same writer\'s dishing out
a new one every frikin hr...
(a top-Down
demise
strategical devised
indoctrinating herds
with that plug-n-play
mentality, of corrosive lazy)
... and on
we watch, wait
popcorn in-hand
clueless
at what \'they\' hope
to inherit
when \'the WE meek\'
have been marginalised
to extinct..
hope it\'s what they envisioned
\'cos\'
we\'ll be jus fine, traversing that
\'Great Perhaps...\'
September 25th, 2023 05:30
Acronyms
Doggerel Dave said:
Can relate to that - the number of times I have to resort to Prof Google is without number, the whole a conspiracy to increase revenue (part of his business model?)
September 25th, 2023 04:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Can relate to that - the number of times I have to resort to Prof Google is without number, the whole a conspiracy to increase revenue (part of his business model?)
September 25th, 2023 04:06
Acronyms
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Wondrous. A Masterpiece, Fellow Poet. Just 2 Say: Remembering Is The Key. How About We Find Another Way 2 Shortcut Our Lives?
September 25th, 2023 01:44
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Wondrous. A Masterpiece, Fellow Poet. Just 2 Say: Remembering Is The Key. How About We Find Another Way 2 Shortcut Our Lives?
September 25th, 2023 01:44
Vine and fig
orchidee said:
Ohh, I can\'t eat figs. Too much Info (TMI) to tell ya why! lol.
September 23rd, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Ohh, I can\'t eat figs. Too much Info (TMI) to tell ya why! lol.
September 23rd, 2023 01:57
Sever
Pop64 said:
very sad truths provided here in this clever write. I enjoyed this.
September 22nd, 2023 07:44
Pop64 said:
very sad truths provided here in this clever write. I enjoyed this.
September 22nd, 2023 07:44
Sever
L. B. Mek said:
the true horror
is in comprehending how long
its been in the planning
way back, from when
they decided to lie about zeros in
a billion digits...
yeah, now wage a war on that
in one lifetime...
(I so relate with your rage, dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
the true horror
is in comprehending how long
its been in the planning
way back, from when
they decided to lie about zeros in
a billion digits...
yeah, now wage a war on that
in one lifetime...
(I so relate with your rage, dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 06:17
Southerly
orchidee said:
You\'ve given me some fantastic inspiration for some more poems. they will be called Northerly, Easterly, and Westerly!
Then I might be more advanced, and try south-westerly, north-easterly, etc!
September 21st, 2023 06:37
orchidee said:
You\'ve given me some fantastic inspiration for some more poems. they will be called Northerly, Easterly, and Westerly!
Then I might be more advanced, and try south-westerly, north-easterly, etc!
September 21st, 2023 06:37
Try
BlessedbyGod said:
I have no doubt that you will do just that my friend, \"rise on eagles wings and glorify His name\" I LOVE IT!!!!
we will never be perfect and all we can do is reach higher and higher until we meet Him,
Never giving up and never giving in to the enemy and their lies and tricks,
I\'m behind u 100% valiantstar,
100%
September 19th, 2023 10:32
BlessedbyGod said:
I have no doubt that you will do just that my friend, \"rise on eagles wings and glorify His name\" I LOVE IT!!!!
we will never be perfect and all we can do is reach higher and higher until we meet Him,
Never giving up and never giving in to the enemy and their lies and tricks,
I\'m behind u 100% valiantstar,
100%
September 19th, 2023 10:32
Petrols down
Doggerel Dave said:
A well wrought piece which depicts a situation I recognise all too well.
To the pursuit of the tourist dollar one could also add the deification of \'growth\' by means of high immigration levels (need I add that I refer to numbers only?).
September 15th, 2023 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
A well wrought piece which depicts a situation I recognise all too well.
To the pursuit of the tourist dollar one could also add the deification of \'growth\' by means of high immigration levels (need I add that I refer to numbers only?).
September 15th, 2023 19:49
Petrols down
BlessedbyGod said:
Back in the day things were so much better and easier,
I don\'t understand why or how things got so out of hand, great piece friend
September 15th, 2023 08:32
BlessedbyGod said:
Back in the day things were so much better and easier,
I don\'t understand why or how things got so out of hand, great piece friend
September 15th, 2023 08:32
Original
L. B. Mek said:
that
\'I think therefore I am\'
is the shallowest thing in philosophy
to begin with, it has \'I\'
in there twice
who here knows what \'I\' or \'self\'
represents in their lives
when we are a product of our influences..
yeah, question
seek, believe
fall, bleed, scar
then rise
back to the grind
question, seek
believe
live, live, LIVE!
(a great message dear Poet
thank you!)
September 15th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
that
\'I think therefore I am\'
is the shallowest thing in philosophy
to begin with, it has \'I\'
in there twice
who here knows what \'I\' or \'self\'
represents in their lives
when we are a product of our influences..
yeah, question
seek, believe
fall, bleed, scar
then rise
back to the grind
question, seek
believe
live, live, LIVE!
(a great message dear Poet
thank you!)
September 15th, 2023 06:29
Original
Bobby O said:
Who gives the songs? Maybe what matters how the gifted if song places them in the world,let’s them thrive and shine.
September 15th, 2023 00:20
Bobby O said:
Who gives the songs? Maybe what matters how the gifted if song places them in the world,let’s them thrive and shine.
September 15th, 2023 00:20
Original
BlessedbyGod said:
Good thought to ponder my friend,
Never thought of that, now I will !! Great work friend
September 14th, 2023 23:26
BlessedbyGod said:
Good thought to ponder my friend,
Never thought of that, now I will !! Great work friend
September 14th, 2023 23:26
Mouth
orchidee said:
Yep, this is an example of an unspeakable treasure! :)
September 2nd, 2023 12:45
orchidee said:
Yep, this is an example of an unspeakable treasure! :)
September 2nd, 2023 12:45
Do do
L. B. Mek said:
truth inked sincere is never boring
questing for our true voice
a meaningful way to utilise our art
unapologetic, that who we are
is whoever we will go-on to become
so indeed, invest your ink
ask and battle with those muddy
waters, in your heart
be not be ruled by fear of your potential
instead, seek that crossroad
designed to test your resolve, then
learn from your choices..
\'know thy self: to be worthy\'
(i read and learn wise poet)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
truth inked sincere is never boring
questing for our true voice
a meaningful way to utilise our art
unapologetic, that who we are
is whoever we will go-on to become
so indeed, invest your ink
ask and battle with those muddy
waters, in your heart
be not be ruled by fear of your potential
instead, seek that crossroad
designed to test your resolve, then
learn from your choices..
\'know thy self: to be worthy\'
(i read and learn wise poet)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 05:26
Do do
LIZ said:
This was so much fun to read!! And true! Thank you for sharing!!!
September 1st, 2023 03:23
LIZ said:
This was so much fun to read!! And true! Thank you for sharing!!!
September 1st, 2023 03:23
Seek
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Now my next poem: \'Find\'. I mean - find the bone, (imaginary) dog Fido of mine! lol.
August 26th, 2023 12:22
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Now my next poem: \'Find\'. I mean - find the bone, (imaginary) dog Fido of mine! lol.
August 26th, 2023 12:22
Sodomites
Bella Shepard said:
I hear ya, and I agree. I usually turn up my tunes and try to ignore the blur of motor mainacs that whiz around me. But the ones that ride my butt, when there\'s ample room to pass, I\'ll never understand. Hang in there my friend.
August 26th, 2023 12:03
Bella Shepard said:
I hear ya, and I agree. I usually turn up my tunes and try to ignore the blur of motor mainacs that whiz around me. But the ones that ride my butt, when there\'s ample room to pass, I\'ll never understand. Hang in there my friend.
August 26th, 2023 12:03
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