Comments received on poems by 2781



What\'s it
Goldfinch60 said:

Good question 2781 it is like the question I often ask \"What if....?\"

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:16

Death spiral
Mutley Ravishes said:

The iron age is trial and a half isn\'t it?!
The struggle not to identify with the fear. I\'m working on changing the gears of imagination.
Wishing you all the best.

May 10th, 2024 07:07

Death spiral
sorenbarrett said:

I like the feel of spiraling out of control in this poem and subject. More than anything I like the way it is left at the end, being our choice.

May 10th, 2024 01:55

Death spiral
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful writing.

May 9th, 2024 20:22

Death spiral
Neville said:



I am a great believer in what will be will be

May 9th, 2024 11:18

Death spiral
Lorenz said:

Blessed be you cursed !

May 9th, 2024 10:04

Two who
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

May 8th, 2024 09:17

Two who
Neville said:



I\'ve got no idea .. that\'s a statement of fact, not an answer to the question you raise

May 8th, 2024 01:33

Two who
orchidee said:

I thought this was about a confused owl - two who - two whit two whoo!
Do shut up Orchi. lol.

May 8th, 2024 01:32

Knives
Neville said:


if there was an easy solution to this dreadful epidemic, then I think even the dumbest of political parties would have arrived at it by now .. and believe me, most of em are [pretty bloomin dumb, and or corrupt ..


May 7th, 2024 10:35

Knives
Doggerel Dave said:

Complex social issues .
Needs society to sort it out - but there\'s little hope where there are vast inequities of wealth.

May 7th, 2024 06:43

Knives
orchidee said:

Aww, the knives are out. I shall have to eat me dinner with just a fork! lol.

May 7th, 2024 02:23

Tech
Neville said:


You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat an Aston Martin .. This is correctly labelled unclassifiable ..

May 6th, 2024 03:18

Chess
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

May 5th, 2024 14:00

Chess
2781 said:

Squeak, Squeak,
put another one on the barbie.

May 5th, 2024 02:06

Chess
orchidee said:

Are we mice or men? Pawns or prawns?! lol.

May 5th, 2024 02:01

Chess
Goldfinch60 said:

Life can be like that 2781, unexpected things can happen but we just need to move on into that new day every day.

Andy

May 5th, 2024 01:22

Disrespectful
Kylie the 8th grade female poet said:

sounds like a nicer version of what my dad would say

May 4th, 2024 14:35

Disrespectful
2781 said:

I love them but....

May 4th, 2024 07:25

Disrespectful
Doggerel Dave said:

Instructions to offspring? Well said , sir.

May 4th, 2024 06:05

Two aspects
Neville said:



two aspects, one afront & always keep a spare for the rear

May 3rd, 2024 01:30

Plagiarism
orchidee said:

You - and I - in our \'spiritual\' poems, don\'t copy words verbatim.
We can check with the Author - He will say it\'s OK to use His words - the \'man upstairs\'!

May 1st, 2024 02:42

Let
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Beautiful and powerful write 2871. 🙏

April 30th, 2024 12:01

Let
sorenbarrett said:

Many great pleas for what would bring happiness and peace. Nicely done

April 30th, 2024 04:28

Let
2781 said:

No shame, the words are His: just rearrange!

April 30th, 2024 02:37

Let
orchidee said:

Let this be a good write - it is!

April 30th, 2024 02:13

Let
Neville said:


what a nice little poem if ever there was ..

April 30th, 2024 01:48

Vain
sorenbarrett said:

Everyone needs a bit of security gained from different sources, some from men some from God some from inside themselves. A good message.

April 29th, 2024 11:19

Is it
Neville said:



there are just not enough phoenixes around these days .. but long overdue

April 28th, 2024 10:38

Is it
orchidee said:

I put me shopping into a bag with holes. By the time I got home it had all fallen out! lol.

April 28th, 2024 09:46



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