Comments received on poems by 2781
Original
L. B. Mek said:
that
\'I think therefore I am\'
is the shallowest thing in philosophy
to begin with, it has \'I\'
in there twice
who here knows what \'I\' or \'self\'
represents in their lives
when we are a product of our influences..
yeah, question
seek, believe
fall, bleed, scar
then rise
back to the grind
question, seek
believe
live, live, LIVE!
(a great message dear Poet
thank you!)
September 15th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
that
\'I think therefore I am\'
is the shallowest thing in philosophy
to begin with, it has \'I\'
in there twice
who here knows what \'I\' or \'self\'
represents in their lives
when we are a product of our influences..
yeah, question
seek, believe
fall, bleed, scar
then rise
back to the grind
question, seek
believe
live, live, LIVE!
(a great message dear Poet
thank you!)
September 15th, 2023 06:29
Original
Bobby O said:
Who gives the songs? Maybe what matters how the gifted if song places them in the world,let’s them thrive and shine.
September 15th, 2023 00:20
Bobby O said:
Who gives the songs? Maybe what matters how the gifted if song places them in the world,let’s them thrive and shine.
September 15th, 2023 00:20
Original
BlessedbyGod said:
Good thought to ponder my friend,
Never thought of that, now I will !! Great work friend
September 14th, 2023 23:26
BlessedbyGod said:
Good thought to ponder my friend,
Never thought of that, now I will !! Great work friend
September 14th, 2023 23:26
Mouth
orchidee said:
Yep, this is an example of an unspeakable treasure! :)
September 2nd, 2023 12:45
orchidee said:
Yep, this is an example of an unspeakable treasure! :)
September 2nd, 2023 12:45
Do do
L. B. Mek said:
truth inked sincere is never boring
questing for our true voice
a meaningful way to utilise our art
unapologetic, that who we are
is whoever we will go-on to become
so indeed, invest your ink
ask and battle with those muddy
waters, in your heart
be not be ruled by fear of your potential
instead, seek that crossroad
designed to test your resolve, then
learn from your choices..
\'know thy self: to be worthy\'
(i read and learn wise poet)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
truth inked sincere is never boring
questing for our true voice
a meaningful way to utilise our art
unapologetic, that who we are
is whoever we will go-on to become
so indeed, invest your ink
ask and battle with those muddy
waters, in your heart
be not be ruled by fear of your potential
instead, seek that crossroad
designed to test your resolve, then
learn from your choices..
\'know thy self: to be worthy\'
(i read and learn wise poet)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 05:26
Do do
LIZ said:
This was so much fun to read!! And true! Thank you for sharing!!!
September 1st, 2023 03:23
LIZ said:
This was so much fun to read!! And true! Thank you for sharing!!!
September 1st, 2023 03:23
Seek
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Now my next poem: \'Find\'. I mean - find the bone, (imaginary) dog Fido of mine! lol.
August 26th, 2023 12:22
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Now my next poem: \'Find\'. I mean - find the bone, (imaginary) dog Fido of mine! lol.
August 26th, 2023 12:22
Sodomites
Bella Shepard said:
I hear ya, and I agree. I usually turn up my tunes and try to ignore the blur of motor mainacs that whiz around me. But the ones that ride my butt, when there\'s ample room to pass, I\'ll never understand. Hang in there my friend.
August 26th, 2023 12:03
Bella Shepard said:
I hear ya, and I agree. I usually turn up my tunes and try to ignore the blur of motor mainacs that whiz around me. But the ones that ride my butt, when there\'s ample room to pass, I\'ll never understand. Hang in there my friend.
August 26th, 2023 12:03
Sodomites
Doggerel Dave said:
You wanna go for public transport - much more civilized.
August 24th, 2023 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
You wanna go for public transport - much more civilized.
August 24th, 2023 07:30
Over
orchidee said:
I read somewhere of Babylon\'s walls - massive fortifications. Or was it Nineveh? Have to look up the data in one of me poems.
Or I will let you\'ll know when I get back from me hols to both places. lol. But all ruins now?
August 22nd, 2023 06:45
orchidee said:
I read somewhere of Babylon\'s walls - massive fortifications. Or was it Nineveh? Have to look up the data in one of me poems.
Or I will let you\'ll know when I get back from me hols to both places. lol. But all ruins now?
August 22nd, 2023 06:45
Keep some cash
Nature said:
Its so well written. I appreciate it! And its very much true from my side.
August 20th, 2023 23:42
Nature said:
Its so well written. I appreciate it! And its very much true from my side.
August 20th, 2023 23:42
Beyond
2781 said:
We were the worst, you were next. Hardly understand English, so can\'t comment on the rest.
The Spanish seemed nice.
August 20th, 2023 09:25
2781 said:
We were the worst, you were next. Hardly understand English, so can\'t comment on the rest.
The Spanish seemed nice.
August 20th, 2023 09:25
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