Comments received on poems by Josh Taylor
About The Girl
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh wow! This one is VERY sweet! I love it! And hope she loves you too. It is excellent in all its varied descriptions of your consuming passion for her. I like it very well!
November 28th, 2010 01:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh wow! This one is VERY sweet! I love it! And hope she loves you too. It is excellent in all its varied descriptions of your consuming passion for her. I like it very well!
November 28th, 2010 01:54
He’s Nobody’s Everything But Everybody’s Nothing
Kri2arch said:
Thats great
November 27th, 2010 03:57
Kri2arch said:
Thats great
November 27th, 2010 03:57
He’s Nobody’s Everything But Everybody’s Nothing
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting.
November 26th, 2010 22:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting.
November 26th, 2010 22:28
My Island
Cheeky Missy said:
I quite enjoyed this piece! Made me chuckle and I am still smiling! I love how you wrote it all in couplets...that made the thoughts under consideration so effective. It really was quite pleasant to read it all! Your end-rhyming is so nice and your syllables per line are fairly consistent...altogether....I quite liked it!
November 25th, 2010 12:39
Cheeky Missy said:
I quite enjoyed this piece! Made me chuckle and I am still smiling! I love how you wrote it all in couplets...that made the thoughts under consideration so effective. It really was quite pleasant to read it all! Your end-rhyming is so nice and your syllables per line are fairly consistent...altogether....I quite liked it!
November 25th, 2010 12:39
The Path of Life
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a very serious admonition and the closing couplets remind me of the verse which makes me squirm.....
I Tim 4:15-16 "Meditate upon these things; give thyself wholly to them; that thy profiting may appear to all. Take heed unto thyself, and unto the doctrine; continue in them: for in doing this thou shalt both save thyself, and them that hear thee."
.....Since I know I should, and yet think it too much trouble to apply myself thus.
Hmmm.
November 23rd, 2010 20:37
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a very serious admonition and the closing couplets remind me of the verse which makes me squirm.....
I Tim 4:15-16 "Meditate upon these things; give thyself wholly to them; that thy profiting may appear to all. Take heed unto thyself, and unto the doctrine; continue in them: for in doing this thou shalt both save thyself, and them that hear thee."
.....Since I know I should, and yet think it too much trouble to apply myself thus.
Hmmm.
November 23rd, 2010 20:37
Time Of Death
Cheeky Missy said:
A very fascinating admonition. I disagree though that we should believe in ourselves....we should believe in the Lord Jesus Christ, and trust in Him with all our heart, that when all is said and done, may He greet us with these words...."Well done, thou good and faithful servant." Oh, how far I fall short!
Your end-rhyming is excellent...I quite liked it.
November 22nd, 2010 15:36
Cheeky Missy said:
A very fascinating admonition. I disagree though that we should believe in ourselves....we should believe in the Lord Jesus Christ, and trust in Him with all our heart, that when all is said and done, may He greet us with these words...."Well done, thou good and faithful servant." Oh, how far I fall short!
Your end-rhyming is excellent...I quite liked it.
November 22nd, 2010 15:36
