Comments received on poems by Aya Kadid
A crime against love
Myth said:
When the poem\'s spell invites us to stand a witness in infatuation court .. We will say the truth
All are condemned :.the orphan love, that depleting longing and that silent pain which refused to leave ..
March 19th, 2023 16:23
Myth said:
When the poem\'s spell invites us to stand a witness in infatuation court .. We will say the truth
All are condemned :.the orphan love, that depleting longing and that silent pain which refused to leave ..
March 19th, 2023 16:23
Time travel
Myth said:
(Well written. ..)
Why you prone to drench the dream into mourn ?
You suffocated the three (yesterday/today/tomorrow )
Is that the depth of the (sign) or
i just failed to read the name\'\'..
.
March 18th, 2023 17:37
Myth said:
(Well written. ..)
Why you prone to drench the dream into mourn ?
You suffocated the three (yesterday/today/tomorrow )
Is that the depth of the (sign) or
i just failed to read the name\'\'..
.
March 18th, 2023 17:37
Time travel
Mello said:
you are you. Don\'t focus too much on the past or future, but rather enjoy the present and the love that you share. great poem
March 18th, 2023 15:16
Mello said:
you are you. Don\'t focus too much on the past or future, but rather enjoy the present and the love that you share. great poem
March 18th, 2023 15:16
How dare you?
jennie said:
How dare they show up one fine day in our lives just to leave us devastated for ever......
And how similar is this experience as if the script of it is written multiple times but with similar beginnings and similar endins....
March 18th, 2023 07:27
jennie said:
How dare they show up one fine day in our lives just to leave us devastated for ever......
And how similar is this experience as if the script of it is written multiple times but with similar beginnings and similar endins....
March 18th, 2023 07:27
How dare you?
Myth said:
The tragedy remains :
No court for love liars ..
No solace for broken hearts ..
(Stay stout...!. .)
March 17th, 2023 01:13
Myth said:
The tragedy remains :
No court for love liars ..
No solace for broken hearts ..
(Stay stout...!. .)
March 17th, 2023 01:13
Do I make sense?
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a lot of sense, no. You are compos mentis enough to write and post this piece, yet you can\'t put your clothes away? Either get yourself together or hire some help.
March 15th, 2023 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a lot of sense, no. You are compos mentis enough to write and post this piece, yet you can\'t put your clothes away? Either get yourself together or hire some help.
March 15th, 2023 18:27
Do I make sense?
Myth said:
Time is all you need to heal ..
till that moment ..
We are lucky reading your throbs.
March 15th, 2023 13:25
Myth said:
Time is all you need to heal ..
till that moment ..
We are lucky reading your throbs.
March 15th, 2023 13:25
The cycle of blame
Myth said:
Suffering begins when justifications intersect before our eyes.
Self-blaming becomes a painful daily routine.
Then the spell of the moment mutates into a wonderful new poem.
(I\'m overwhelmed )
March 14th, 2023 14:26
Myth said:
Suffering begins when justifications intersect before our eyes.
Self-blaming becomes a painful daily routine.
Then the spell of the moment mutates into a wonderful new poem.
(I\'m overwhelmed )
March 14th, 2023 14:26
A love lost
Mello said:
The imagery of the memories and love running through your veins was so powerful, and I could feel the weight of the loss you were experiencing. The repetition of the words you were called - beautiful, caring, supportive, understanding, a miracle, out of this world - was really effective in conveying the depth of your connection with the person who said them. The final question of what you\'ve done wrong was so poignant and really made me feel the sense of confusion and hurt you must be experiencing. Your writing is so heartfelt and emotional, and I appreciate you sharing this piece with us.
March 13th, 2023 15:35
Mello said:
The imagery of the memories and love running through your veins was so powerful, and I could feel the weight of the loss you were experiencing. The repetition of the words you were called - beautiful, caring, supportive, understanding, a miracle, out of this world - was really effective in conveying the depth of your connection with the person who said them. The final question of what you\'ve done wrong was so poignant and really made me feel the sense of confusion and hurt you must be experiencing. Your writing is so heartfelt and emotional, and I appreciate you sharing this piece with us.
March 13th, 2023 15:35
wandering in the abyss
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
stay strong! may you find a path
to that peace, you seek
March 13th, 2023 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
stay strong! may you find a path
to that peace, you seek
March 13th, 2023 04:39
wandering in the abyss
Myth said:
Eloquent wording ..tactful lettering ..
As if waves of sadness have immersed the athreal ..
Have you ever written something festive, joyous..I want to cheer up my screen ..
March 13th, 2023 02:10
Myth said:
Eloquent wording ..tactful lettering ..
As if waves of sadness have immersed the athreal ..
Have you ever written something festive, joyous..I want to cheer up my screen ..
March 13th, 2023 02:10
Everyday’s the same
Myth said:
At least you have got a lovely name .. Aya ...
March 12th, 2023 03:18
Myth said:
At least you have got a lovely name .. Aya ...
March 12th, 2023 03:18
