Comments received on poems by bliss
The First Touch of an Earthly Embrace
bliss said:
I’m truly touched that you felt a genuine sense of love in the words😊 It’s readers like you who make sharing my poetry so rewarding.Thank you!❤️ (sorry for the late reply)
September 24th, 2023 09:52
bliss said:
I’m truly touched that you felt a genuine sense of love in the words😊 It’s readers like you who make sharing my poetry so rewarding.Thank you!❤️ (sorry for the late reply)
September 24th, 2023 09:52
Soaring Heights of Platitude
Doggerel Dave said:
Must keep (fave) this one for future reference. My occasional campaign against the concept ‘Love’ and the plethora of poetry which buries it, finds a boost here – although I feel I must re-read several of your propositions to fully extract their message.
I even found your commentary worth the effort (not normally fond of long commentary – feel the meaning should be in the poem or not at all) but here you gave the subject real depth.
Many thanks for this one.
September 15th, 2023 19:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Must keep (fave) this one for future reference. My occasional campaign against the concept ‘Love’ and the plethora of poetry which buries it, finds a boost here – although I feel I must re-read several of your propositions to fully extract their message.
I even found your commentary worth the effort (not normally fond of long commentary – feel the meaning should be in the poem or not at all) but here you gave the subject real depth.
Many thanks for this one.
September 15th, 2023 19:03
Soaring Heights of Platitude
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dreams may not come true lest you sacrifice your reality.
A quest you weren\'t ready for won\'t await you.\'
\'Soulmates attract like opposing magnets.\'
these words hit home for me
a great write
a balanced perspective on
both sides of romance
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 15th, 2023 07:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dreams may not come true lest you sacrifice your reality.
A quest you weren\'t ready for won\'t await you.\'
\'Soulmates attract like opposing magnets.\'
these words hit home for me
a great write
a balanced perspective on
both sides of romance
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 15th, 2023 07:28
Mirror
Bobby O said:
I liked it but I’ll offer a one view that may be easily set aside. I just think it’s too long there was a heightened tension achieved about thirty lines before the end and it was one choice to close. It stayed tight but maybe it didn’t get stronger which I believe is often a desired style. You can write. Reminds of a miles Davis , John Coltrane talk when miles asked Trane why his solos were so long with Trane saying he just don’t know how to quit. Miles, cantankerously said, “you just pull the fucking horn away from your lips”! Comparing to Coltrane is highest prop I got.
September 9th, 2023 20:50
Bobby O said:
I liked it but I’ll offer a one view that may be easily set aside. I just think it’s too long there was a heightened tension achieved about thirty lines before the end and it was one choice to close. It stayed tight but maybe it didn’t get stronger which I believe is often a desired style. You can write. Reminds of a miles Davis , John Coltrane talk when miles asked Trane why his solos were so long with Trane saying he just don’t know how to quit. Miles, cantankerously said, “you just pull the fucking horn away from your lips”! Comparing to Coltrane is highest prop I got.
September 9th, 2023 20:50
The First Touch of an Earthly Embrace
Pop64 said:
This speaks with a genuine feeling of love, respecting not only the adoration of another and their importance, but more so celebrating the simplistic beauty of the earthly completed love, that not too many are lucky enough to ever find. Beautifully written!!
August 29th, 2023 07:24
Pop64 said:
This speaks with a genuine feeling of love, respecting not only the adoration of another and their importance, but more so celebrating the simplistic beauty of the earthly completed love, that not too many are lucky enough to ever find. Beautifully written!!
August 29th, 2023 07:24
