Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Serenade for Elena
Thomas W Case said:
Very atmospheric. You paint the scene.
October 27th, 2023 10:31
Thomas W Case said:
Very atmospheric. You paint the scene.
October 27th, 2023 10:31
Serenade for Elena
Ellen Marsell said:
Your piece creates a captivating atmosphere. So many sensual intonations!
\"Desire of a sensuous island,
exquisite cascading droplets,
summer drunk on volcan sap,...\"
Thanks for this bright poetic picture!
October 27th, 2023 06:00
Ellen Marsell said:
Your piece creates a captivating atmosphere. So many sensual intonations!
\"Desire of a sensuous island,
exquisite cascading droplets,
summer drunk on volcan sap,...\"
Thanks for this bright poetic picture!
October 27th, 2023 06:00
The zen garden
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully crafted exploration of the spiritual journey!
October 26th, 2023 09:08
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully crafted exploration of the spiritual journey!
October 26th, 2023 09:08
Game of chance
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and mood. Very well crafted.
October 25th, 2023 12:54
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and mood. Very well crafted.
October 25th, 2023 12:54
Bus 60 riverbanks
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I could see it in my mind\'s eye.
October 25th, 2023 10:18
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I could see it in my mind\'s eye.
October 25th, 2023 10:18
Timeshifting
Thomas W Case said:
Great pacing. You make this work very well. Well-crafted and Inteligent.
October 24th, 2023 15:42
Thomas W Case said:
Great pacing. You make this work very well. Well-crafted and Inteligent.
October 24th, 2023 15:42
Timeshifting
Ellen Marsell said:
A delightful journey! A sense of spontaneity and adventure, as if you are going wherever your thoughts and desires take you. A carefree spirit.
Thanks for sharing!
October 24th, 2023 07:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A delightful journey! A sense of spontaneity and adventure, as if you are going wherever your thoughts and desires take you. A carefree spirit.
Thanks for sharing!
October 24th, 2023 07:37
Prelude to Elsa
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, dear friend!
October 22nd, 2023 06:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, dear friend!
October 22nd, 2023 06:01
Prelude to Elsa
Lorenz said:
A very carnal and earthy love prose !
I made some small changes in a second version to enrich this terrestrial feeling .
October 22nd, 2023 04:52
Lorenz said:
A very carnal and earthy love prose !
I made some small changes in a second version to enrich this terrestrial feeling .
October 22nd, 2023 04:52
Prelude to Elsa
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and use of language. Truly sublime.
October 22nd, 2023 02:56
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and use of language. Truly sublime.
October 22nd, 2023 02:56
The wheel of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for your philosophical creation!
Je l\'aime beaucoup !
October 21st, 2023 12:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for your philosophical creation!
Je l\'aime beaucoup !
October 21st, 2023 12:01
Brussels
Ellen Marsell said:
A grim picture of urban life filled with contradictions and hidden histories...
October 20th, 2023 08:10
Ellen Marsell said:
A grim picture of urban life filled with contradictions and hidden histories...
October 20th, 2023 08:10
Exhilaration
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully written piece that engages the imagination and emotions. Fascinating imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
October 19th, 2023 10:51
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully written piece that engages the imagination and emotions. Fascinating imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
October 19th, 2023 10:51
Dolce vita
Pop64 said:
A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon each word, through the imagery. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 07:02
Pop64 said:
A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon each word, through the imagery. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 07:02
Dolce vita
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so creative, your prowess
includes
deft, subtle notes as well..
a joy to read, dear Poet
thank you!
October 16th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so creative, your prowess
includes
deft, subtle notes as well..
a joy to read, dear Poet
thank you!
October 16th, 2023 05:37
Poet and backpacker
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
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