Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The universal
Dan Williams said:
In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all contemplate our evening; you do it so well.
August 19th, 2024 23:59
Dan Williams said:
In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all contemplate our evening; you do it so well.
August 19th, 2024 23:59
The universal
Doggerel Dave said:
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more perspective than when involved in the events and relationships now recalled.
Rich in detail, your portrait feels like empathy to me.
August 18th, 2024 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more perspective than when involved in the events and relationships now recalled.
Rich in detail, your portrait feels like empathy to me.
August 18th, 2024 16:58
The universal
sorenbarrett said:
A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then it goes deep.
August 18th, 2024 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then it goes deep.
August 18th, 2024 12:40
Totem
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Totem
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
Cocktails
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Cocktails
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
In the mood
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
The ledger
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
The streetcar girl
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Punishment
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
Prelude
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
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