Comments received on poems by Lorenz
There\'s the one who stays
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
There\'s the one who stays
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
A letter
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
A letter
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
Facing the dragon
Ellen Marsell said:
The beauty of this poem is in its contradictions: the horror and mesmerizing power of the dragon, despair and a glimmer of hope in the distant flicker of light, which may be just the breath of this mythical creature.
You invite to a meeting with the abyss - not only external, but also internal.
Captivating piece and magnificent images!
November 10th, 2024 14:57
Ellen Marsell said:
The beauty of this poem is in its contradictions: the horror and mesmerizing power of the dragon, despair and a glimmer of hope in the distant flicker of light, which may be just the breath of this mythical creature.
You invite to a meeting with the abyss - not only external, but also internal.
Captivating piece and magnificent images!
November 10th, 2024 14:57
Facing the dragon
sorenbarrett said:
A whimsical scent of distance well from the shores of any known place. Nicely stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A whimsical scent of distance well from the shores of any known place. Nicely stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:07
Love cruise
Dan Williams said:
I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools. You take a really good stab at it though. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools. You take a really good stab at it though. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:20
Love cruise
Ellen Marsell said:
The combination of humor and cynicism gives your poem a darkish charm. Great!
November 9th, 2024 07:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The combination of humor and cynicism gives your poem a darkish charm. Great!
November 9th, 2024 07:39
Love cruise
Cassie58 said:
Such a fun write Lorenz. Loved the clever ending:)
November 9th, 2024 07:17
Cassie58 said:
Such a fun write Lorenz. Loved the clever ending:)
November 9th, 2024 07:17
Dead in Venice
Ellen Marsell said:
Venice has long symbolized vice, temptation, and hidden danger, making it a source of inspiration for some writers and poets.
This poem is like a creepy ballad. Roberto Succo, infamous for his cruelty, is felt as a ghost wandering through Venice. His image gives the poem an ominous tone, combining the beauty of Venice with tragedy and decay.
November 8th, 2024 09:37
Ellen Marsell said:
Venice has long symbolized vice, temptation, and hidden danger, making it a source of inspiration for some writers and poets.
This poem is like a creepy ballad. Roberto Succo, infamous for his cruelty, is felt as a ghost wandering through Venice. His image gives the poem an ominous tone, combining the beauty of Venice with tragedy and decay.
November 8th, 2024 09:37
Dead in Venice
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and angry tone to this well written piece. It speaks of foul deeds and has a fotting smell that takes the reader to the shadows. Very nicely done
November 8th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and angry tone to this well written piece. It speaks of foul deeds and has a fotting smell that takes the reader to the shadows. Very nicely done
November 8th, 2024 06:36
Dead in Venice
Lorenz said:
Your insignificant production has no interest for me .Bye !
November 8th, 2024 04:17
Lorenz said:
Your insignificant production has no interest for me .Bye !
November 8th, 2024 04:17
The venom of days
Dan Williams said:
Well done Lorenze, high marks impressing my basic beliefs, \"A bitter sap flows from the tree of possibilities.\" is so thought provoking. Nice.
November 8th, 2024 01:38
Dan Williams said:
Well done Lorenze, high marks impressing my basic beliefs, \"A bitter sap flows from the tree of possibilities.\" is so thought provoking. Nice.
November 8th, 2024 01:38
My inner language
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a sensual, spiritual and emotional work that reveals your deep inner world. The idea of “inner language” as a complex mosaic - a fusion of cultures and eras - is beautifully revealed here.
November 7th, 2024 11:22
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a sensual, spiritual and emotional work that reveals your deep inner world. The idea of “inner language” as a complex mosaic - a fusion of cultures and eras - is beautifully revealed here.
November 7th, 2024 11:22
The venom of days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderfully engaging and alluring danger lurking in these words, one that the cynical tone is conveying clearly, along with themes of loss and memory. I love the surrealist imagery, always a grab for me and the way you slither those venomous snakes in, brilliantly done! This poem, friend, is masterful.
November 6th, 2024 15:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderfully engaging and alluring danger lurking in these words, one that the cynical tone is conveying clearly, along with themes of loss and memory. I love the surrealist imagery, always a grab for me and the way you slither those venomous snakes in, brilliantly done! This poem, friend, is masterful.
November 6th, 2024 15:05
The venom of days
Ellen Marsell said:
A truly November atmosphere, and with a touch of grim irony, is what I felt.
November 6th, 2024 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A truly November atmosphere, and with a touch of grim irony, is what I felt.
November 6th, 2024 13:50
The venom of days
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I taste the cynicism as it pours out of the lines. There is a darkness that speaks from the shadows. A heavy poem of metaphor lovely
November 6th, 2024 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I taste the cynicism as it pours out of the lines. There is a darkness that speaks from the shadows. A heavy poem of metaphor lovely
November 6th, 2024 09:37
Wise old man
Ellen Marsell said:
Such exquisite writing!
Wisdom is not just knowledge and years, but the ability to savor the moment, to observe and see the world with greater depth and simplicity. I think of it this way.
November 5th, 2024 12:38
Ellen Marsell said:
Such exquisite writing!
Wisdom is not just knowledge and years, but the ability to savor the moment, to observe and see the world with greater depth and simplicity. I think of it this way.
November 5th, 2024 12:38
Wise old man
sorenbarrett said:
Could be. Wisdom grows like the trunk of a tree discarding those branches not needed. After years only what is important remains. A lovely write so well worded and very reflective of those things that hold meaning.
November 5th, 2024 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Could be. Wisdom grows like the trunk of a tree discarding those branches not needed. After years only what is important remains. A lovely write so well worded and very reflective of those things that hold meaning.
November 5th, 2024 09:42
Radio garden
NafisaSB said:
music has no boundaries- and can take you around the world - enjoyed the ride
November 5th, 2024 00:48
NafisaSB said:
music has no boundaries- and can take you around the world - enjoyed the ride
November 5th, 2024 00:48
I would return
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The beauty of Versailles lies in its mystery: it remains an eternal illusion where everyone sees only what they want to see.\"
A beautiful poem!
November 4th, 2024 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The beauty of Versailles lies in its mystery: it remains an eternal illusion where everyone sees only what they want to see.\"
A beautiful poem!
November 4th, 2024 12:06
I would return
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful a wonderful and fanciful poem of a dreamy type
November 4th, 2024 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful a wonderful and fanciful poem of a dreamy type
November 4th, 2024 11:46
Radio garden
Cheeky Missy said:
Very delightfully eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a subtly striking poignancy. Yes, isn\'t music so wonderful?! Thank you very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Very delightfully eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a subtly striking poignancy. Yes, isn\'t music so wonderful?! Thank you very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:21
Radio garden
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey through soundscapes, an exploration without boundaries... And each place offers its own unique musical flavor.
November 3rd, 2024 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey through soundscapes, an exploration without boundaries... And each place offers its own unique musical flavor.
November 3rd, 2024 10:59
Radio garden
sorenbarrett said:
Music can take you to places never seen or dreamed of. A most lovely mood enhancer and vacation in the mind. Wonderful write
November 3rd, 2024 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Music can take you to places never seen or dreamed of. A most lovely mood enhancer and vacation in the mind. Wonderful write
November 3rd, 2024 09:29
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