Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Ordo ab chao
Ellen Marsell said:
It seems like a poetic commentary on the absurdity of life. I like your play with imagery. Great!
October 10th, 2024 10:22
Ellen Marsell said:
It seems like a poetic commentary on the absurdity of life. I like your play with imagery. Great!
October 10th, 2024 10:22
Ordo ab chao
MaxSmith said:
Hey Lorenz
Nice to see your still writing.
I am a lonely atom in an answer without a question
I get that, it holds so much power.
Great read Lorenz
October 10th, 2024 09:38
MaxSmith said:
Hey Lorenz
Nice to see your still writing.
I am a lonely atom in an answer without a question
I get that, it holds so much power.
Great read Lorenz
October 10th, 2024 09:38
Gardens
Dan Williams said:
Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems well thought out, or experienced. Nice.
October 7th, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems well thought out, or experienced. Nice.
October 7th, 2024 00:12
Gardens
jarcher54 said:
Nice combination of the magic of painting and poetry. Both tell stories, one through mute images, one through sightless words... but somehow they both end up stirring the imagination and transporting the audience!
October 6th, 2024 12:23
jarcher54 said:
Nice combination of the magic of painting and poetry. Both tell stories, one through mute images, one through sightless words... but somehow they both end up stirring the imagination and transporting the audience!
October 6th, 2024 12:23
Gardens
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s as if these spaces are beyond reality. Beautiful and melancholic, with a sense of loss and longing for something that is slipping away...
October 6th, 2024 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s as if these spaces are beyond reality. Beautiful and melancholic, with a sense of loss and longing for something that is slipping away...
October 6th, 2024 10:59
Ode to the fair lady
Ellen Marsell said:
A mixture of melancholy, inevitability, acceptance ... Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem!
October 3rd, 2024 09:22
Ellen Marsell said:
A mixture of melancholy, inevitability, acceptance ... Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem!
October 3rd, 2024 09:22
Acta est fabula
Ellen Marsell said:
A profound philosophical allegory. I love it!
October 2nd, 2024 09:21
Ellen Marsell said:
A profound philosophical allegory. I love it!
October 2nd, 2024 09:21
My parodic side
Lorenz said:
Nostalgia of a child from another dimension...
September 30th, 2024 13:16
Lorenz said:
Nostalgia of a child from another dimension...
September 30th, 2024 13:16
My parodic side
Ellen Marsell said:
A complex emotional picture - between irony and melancholy...
September 30th, 2024 10:53
Ellen Marsell said:
A complex emotional picture - between irony and melancholy...
September 30th, 2024 10:53
The tale of years gone by
Ellen Marsell said:
The bittersweet essence of memories...
Beautiful images.
September 28th, 2024 08:24
Ellen Marsell said:
The bittersweet essence of memories...
Beautiful images.
September 28th, 2024 08:24
Fiery clouds
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a soft rhythm in your words that seems meditative, like observing life in its purest form.
On the other hand you have created an expressive contrast between the peaceful life on islands in the middle of two oceans and the shadow of distant conflicts of the “masters of the world”.
I really enjoyed your piece.
September 27th, 2024 05:39
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a soft rhythm in your words that seems meditative, like observing life in its purest form.
On the other hand you have created an expressive contrast between the peaceful life on islands in the middle of two oceans and the shadow of distant conflicts of the “masters of the world”.
I really enjoyed your piece.
September 27th, 2024 05:39
Green fragrance
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...cold and icy--\" eh? That initial assessment plaguing me to the very passionate conclusion, whose subtle flame melted the other until it vapourized, still haunts me. Mint will swear on it, yet I must disagree. Envy burns stronger than most else yet does not stand against jealousy, and green perpetually warming the soul even in bitter climes cannot truly be icy, rather the strength of its fire seems thus. Fascinating and intriguing, thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 14:08
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...cold and icy--\" eh? That initial assessment plaguing me to the very passionate conclusion, whose subtle flame melted the other until it vapourized, still haunts me. Mint will swear on it, yet I must disagree. Envy burns stronger than most else yet does not stand against jealousy, and green perpetually warming the soul even in bitter climes cannot truly be icy, rather the strength of its fire seems thus. Fascinating and intriguing, thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 14:08
Green fragrance
Ellen Marsell said:
Nothing can be as peaceful as a green field, but at the same time nothing can be as wild as forests flaming with green fire...
September 25th, 2024 13:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Nothing can be as peaceful as a green field, but at the same time nothing can be as wild as forests flaming with green fire...
September 25th, 2024 13:22
Postcard
NafisaSB said:
sad memories and moving description of a bygone era
well written.
September 17th, 2024 01:28
NafisaSB said:
sad memories and moving description of a bygone era
well written.
September 17th, 2024 01:28
As the years go by...
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is filled with subtle sadness and wonderful imagery. Very touching!
September 14th, 2024 11:09
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is filled with subtle sadness and wonderful imagery. Very touching!
September 14th, 2024 11:09
Camille
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and haunting, drawing the soul into that other, ethereal world with unseen tentacles.
September 8th, 2024 17:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and haunting, drawing the soul into that other, ethereal world with unseen tentacles.
September 8th, 2024 17:23
Camille
Ellen Marsell said:
It was as if fate itself was jealous of her talent. A beautiful poem!
September 8th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
It was as if fate itself was jealous of her talent. A beautiful poem!
September 8th, 2024 12:00
On the road to Novgorod
Dan Williams said:
OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:32
Dan Williams said:
OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:32
On the road to Novgorod
Ellen Marsell said:
One of the greatest movies ever. Thank you!
September 6th, 2024 09:21
Ellen Marsell said:
One of the greatest movies ever. Thank you!
September 6th, 2024 09:21
On the road to Novgorod
Ellen Marsell said:
The melancholic tone, rich imagery, all combine a deep personal journey with a broader history and the spirit of the land. Excellent!
September 6th, 2024 08:25
Ellen Marsell said:
The melancholic tone, rich imagery, all combine a deep personal journey with a broader history and the spirit of the land. Excellent!
September 6th, 2024 08:25
Swing minor mode
Dan Williams said:
A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37
Swing minor mode
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\" 👏
A deep, melancholy and
captivating write! ✍️
Great use of metaphor
and to read a delight!! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 1st, 2024 12:25
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\" 👏
A deep, melancholy and
captivating write! ✍️
Great use of metaphor
and to read a delight!! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 1st, 2024 12:25
Swing minor mode
Ellen Marsell said:
Through imagery and metaphors you managed to convey the unique combination of melancholy and energy inherent in Django\'s compositions. This is great writing!
August 31st, 2024 18:24
Ellen Marsell said:
Through imagery and metaphors you managed to convey the unique combination of melancholy and energy inherent in Django\'s compositions. This is great writing!
August 31st, 2024 18:24
The summit
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful natural images in a metaphor about life. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful natural images in a metaphor about life. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:49
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