Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Anti portraits
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot with this, you rascal! I declare! How deliciously loaded with so much weighty imagery you\'ve got my head spinning, its inherent poignancy haunting with a tantalizing tease. Thank you for sharing.
May 24th, 2025 19:55
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot with this, you rascal! I declare! How deliciously loaded with so much weighty imagery you\'ve got my head spinning, its inherent poignancy haunting with a tantalizing tease. Thank you for sharing.
May 24th, 2025 19:55
Anti portraits
Ellen Marsell said:
This work combines dark humor and wounded tenderness, looking at the fall of the world with sacred irony.
May 24th, 2025 14:14
Ellen Marsell said:
This work combines dark humor and wounded tenderness, looking at the fall of the world with sacred irony.
May 24th, 2025 14:14
Anti portraits
sorenbarrett said:
This is in a different way what we all are. We are a mix of so many things a recipe that is unequal never to be duplicated. and with all this we share feelings and sometimes love. Wonderful!
May 24th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
This is in a different way what we all are. We are a mix of so many things a recipe that is unequal never to be duplicated. and with all this we share feelings and sometimes love. Wonderful!
May 24th, 2025 10:45
My twin sister
sorenbarrett said:
You know what it is to hear discordant music this poem was so many chords that needed resolution. Metaphor after metaphor and I am just now recovering. A good read Lorenz that is satisfying in its shifts of direction.
May 23rd, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
You know what it is to hear discordant music this poem was so many chords that needed resolution. Metaphor after metaphor and I am just now recovering. A good read Lorenz that is satisfying in its shifts of direction.
May 23rd, 2025 11:39
My twin sister
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is like a mystical farewell symphony. A deep, tender requiem addressed to that part of oneself which remained in another dimension. This letter is both a testament, a goodbye, and a promise of reunion. I love it.
May 23rd, 2025 11:08
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is like a mystical farewell symphony. A deep, tender requiem addressed to that part of oneself which remained in another dimension. This letter is both a testament, a goodbye, and a promise of reunion. I love it.
May 23rd, 2025 11:08
Self portraits
Ellen Marsell said:
Grotesque, caricature, tragicomedy. The poem feels like it’s assembled from brushstrokes of old posters, half-forgotten jokes, and cultural references. That’s its special charm. I really like it.
May 22nd, 2025 13:40
Ellen Marsell said:
Grotesque, caricature, tragicomedy. The poem feels like it’s assembled from brushstrokes of old posters, half-forgotten jokes, and cultural references. That’s its special charm. I really like it.
May 22nd, 2025 13:40
Self portraits
sorenbarrett said:
What is of importance? Whatever blows your hair back. A fun read full of more metaphor than I could keep track of
May 22nd, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
What is of importance? Whatever blows your hair back. A fun read full of more metaphor than I could keep track of
May 22nd, 2025 10:55
Incarnation
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of mystical autobiography of the soul.
A brilliant poem where the soul wanders between reincarnations, dissolving into images and eras.
May 21st, 2025 13:19
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of mystical autobiography of the soul.
A brilliant poem where the soul wanders between reincarnations, dissolving into images and eras.
May 21st, 2025 13:19
The return of the lamb
Ellen Marsell said:
An apocalyptic satire with a philosophical undertone. A powerful text.
May 21st, 2025 10:52
Ellen Marsell said:
An apocalyptic satire with a philosophical undertone. A powerful text.
May 21st, 2025 10:52
The return of the lamb
Cheeky Missy said:
You DO know what you\'re saying, don\'t you? Fascinating and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Gorgeous. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2025 10:12
Cheeky Missy said:
You DO know what you\'re saying, don\'t you? Fascinating and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Gorgeous. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2025 10:12
The return of the lamb
sorenbarrett said:
Catholic images pervade this poem and certainly must unlock the meaning hidden beneath the layers. Love the symbolism.
May 21st, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Catholic images pervade this poem and certainly must unlock the meaning hidden beneath the layers. Love the symbolism.
May 21st, 2025 08:09
Incarnation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is another mind provoking one. Some great lines.
May 20th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is another mind provoking one. Some great lines.
May 20th, 2025 15:51
Bug
Ellen Marsell said:
Love turned into poison?
A poetic mini-drama laced with humor... The imagery borders on surreal, yet remains emotionally recognizable.
May 19th, 2025 10:41
Ellen Marsell said:
Love turned into poison?
A poetic mini-drama laced with humor... The imagery borders on surreal, yet remains emotionally recognizable.
May 19th, 2025 10:41
Bug
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of some I have know and of me at times. A very nicely written poem with so many great lines and images. Poignant and felt.
May 19th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of some I have know and of me at times. A very nicely written poem with so many great lines and images. Poignant and felt.
May 19th, 2025 08:32
Retro
Ellen Marsell said:
A light, slightly rebellious poem, saturated with the cultural imagery of the 20th century. A journey through worlds of memory, across the associative maps of eras, along the winding paths of scattered feelings... Touching. Playful. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A light, slightly rebellious poem, saturated with the cultural imagery of the 20th century. A journey through worlds of memory, across the associative maps of eras, along the winding paths of scattered feelings... Touching. Playful. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:48
Retro
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A fun read
May 18th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A fun read
May 18th, 2025 09:07
The magician\'s dawn
Ellen Marsell said:
In the stream of images, amid metaphors and symbols, lingers a thick smoke of decadence and postmodern irony.
May 16th, 2025 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
In the stream of images, amid metaphors and symbols, lingers a thick smoke of decadence and postmodern irony.
May 16th, 2025 11:11
The magician\'s dawn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the feel of music song titles. I know that they are not but even so it feels like something right out of an album. This has so many metaphors applied all that I can get is a feel of frustration and anger. It emotes. Nicely done Lorez
May 16th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the feel of music song titles. I know that they are not but even so it feels like something right out of an album. This has so many metaphors applied all that I can get is a feel of frustration and anger. It emotes. Nicely done Lorez
May 16th, 2025 09:03
The magician\'s dawn
Libellule said:
Has such a timeless... LOTR feel to it... well done... carried me along
May 16th, 2025 08:09
Libellule said:
Has such a timeless... LOTR feel to it... well done... carried me along
May 16th, 2025 08:09
Sunset visitors
Ellen Marsell said:
A reflection on eternal themes of loneliness, freedom, memory, and the end. An excellent poem!
May 14th, 2025 13:12
Ellen Marsell said:
A reflection on eternal themes of loneliness, freedom, memory, and the end. An excellent poem!
May 14th, 2025 13:12
Sunset visitors
sorenbarrett said:
Once again filled with metaphor and symbolism this poem speaks to me of questions of faith in love and religion, trust in what is said. Innocence is dismissed and a good question would we want to return if we could. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Once again filled with metaphor and symbolism this poem speaks to me of questions of faith in love and religion, trust in what is said. Innocence is dismissed and a good question would we want to return if we could. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 06:51
Redemption
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Redemption
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Manifesto of ordinary madness
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
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