Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My little polish café
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmosphere of quiet melancholy and tenderness. Very beautiful!
October 22nd, 2024 08:54
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmosphere of quiet melancholy and tenderness. Very beautiful!
October 22nd, 2024 08:54
My little polish café
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the past and the feelings that accompany them
October 22nd, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the past and the feelings that accompany them
October 22nd, 2024 05:57
Deus ex machina
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
Ecce homo
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
The day to come
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Fortress
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
Fortress
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Flowers
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a beautifully written ode to the unbridled side of nature and human emotion. An inspiring piece...
October 17th, 2024 07:17
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a beautifully written ode to the unbridled side of nature and human emotion. An inspiring piece...
October 17th, 2024 07:17
Vixit
Ellen Marsell said:
Longing for the past, hope for the future, humility and wisdom in simplicity. One can feel the soul and motifs of old Russia. Bravo!
October 16th, 2024 14:17
Ellen Marsell said:
Longing for the past, hope for the future, humility and wisdom in simplicity. One can feel the soul and motifs of old Russia. Bravo!
October 16th, 2024 14:17
Vixit
sorenbarrett said:
Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too heavy for Turgenev.
October 16th, 2024 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too heavy for Turgenev.
October 16th, 2024 10:47
Black hole
peet said:
Well, there is madness there and a touch of darkness. A rare mix of words but well thought out. The fact is the line \"I\'m gonna die old and alone ,
coming out of a black hole\" says it all. No one can stop that.
October 15th, 2024 13:04
peet said:
Well, there is madness there and a touch of darkness. A rare mix of words but well thought out. The fact is the line \"I\'m gonna die old and alone ,
coming out of a black hole\" says it all. No one can stop that.
October 15th, 2024 13:04
Black hole
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a rather tense and dark piece with some impressive imagery!
October 15th, 2024 07:15
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a rather tense and dark piece with some impressive imagery!
October 15th, 2024 07:15
The voice of blood
Ellen Marsell said:
The cycle of violence and justice is inextricably linked to the silent but omnipresent voice of blood.
October 12th, 2024 10:42
Ellen Marsell said:
The cycle of violence and justice is inextricably linked to the silent but omnipresent voice of blood.
October 12th, 2024 10:42
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