Comments received on poems by Lorenz



My little polish café
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 22nd, 2024 09:30

My little polish café
Ellen Marsell said:

An atmosphere of quiet melancholy and tenderness. Very beautiful!

October 22nd, 2024 08:54

My little polish café
sorenbarrett said:

Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the past and the feelings that accompany them

October 22nd, 2024 05:57

Deus ex machina
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

October 21st, 2024 07:48

Deus ex machina
Ellen Marsell said:

Very impressive!

October 21st, 2024 06:46

Deus ex machina
Lorenz said:

I am exhausted of this calvary of perfection..

October 21st, 2024 05:22

Deus ex machina
sorenbarrett said:

Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!

October 21st, 2024 04:58

Ecce homo
Lorenz said:

Deus ex machina .

October 20th, 2024 10:58

Ecce homo
Ellen Marsell said:

A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!

October 20th, 2024 10:48

Ecce homo
Tony36 said:

Powerful

October 20th, 2024 09:54

Ecce homo
sorenbarrett said:

Powerfull words worded powerfully

October 20th, 2024 06:15

The day to come
sorenbarrett said:

Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write

October 19th, 2024 10:56

The day to come
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 19th, 2024 07:36

The day to come
Ellen Marsell said:

Maybe...

October 19th, 2024 05:26

The day to come
Ellen Marsell said:

Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!

October 19th, 2024 05:08

Fortress
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

October 18th, 2024 09:28

Fortress
sorenbarrett said:

Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world

October 18th, 2024 05:21

Fortress
Ellen Marsell said:

I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?

October 18th, 2024 05:13

Fortress
tallisman said:

Neat!

October 18th, 2024 04:31

Flowers
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 17th, 2024 07:43

Flowers
Ellen Marsell said:

It\'s a beautifully written ode to the unbridled side of nature and human emotion. An inspiring piece...

October 17th, 2024 07:17

Vixit
Lorenz said:

Thank you dear blog for the trending !

October 16th, 2024 15:14

Vixit
Ellen Marsell said:

Longing for the past, hope for the future, humility and wisdom in simplicity. One can feel the soul and motifs of old Russia. Bravo!


October 16th, 2024 14:17

Vixit
sorenbarrett said:

Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too heavy for Turgenev.

October 16th, 2024 10:47

Vixit
Lorenz said:

Thank you soren.

October 16th, 2024 10:46

Black hole
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 15th, 2024 14:13

Black hole
peet said:

Well, there is madness there and a touch of darkness. A rare mix of words but well thought out. The fact is the line \"I\'m gonna die old and alone ,

coming out of a black hole\" says it all. No one can stop that.

October 15th, 2024 13:04

Black hole
Ellen Marsell said:

It\'s a rather tense and dark piece with some impressive imagery!

October 15th, 2024 07:15

Voyager
Ellen Marsell said:

A profound and heartfelt poem.

October 14th, 2024 09:01

The voice of blood
Ellen Marsell said:

The cycle of violence and justice is inextricably linked to the silent but omnipresent voice of blood.

October 12th, 2024 10:42



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