Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My kingdoms of legend
Ellen Marsell said:
“My illusions at the stake on the river Ganga banks, freed from its suffering ...” - The lines I like best. Fascinating images.
December 14th, 2024 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
“My illusions at the stake on the river Ganga banks, freed from its suffering ...” - The lines I like best. Fascinating images.
December 14th, 2024 11:06
My kingdoms of legend
sorenbarrett said:
Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an exotic setting surreal. Lovely Lorenz
December 14th, 2024 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an exotic setting surreal. Lovely Lorenz
December 14th, 2024 11:02
The woman inside me
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem! This approach inspires the reader to realize their own inner versatility 😊
December 14th, 2024 04:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem! This approach inspires the reader to realize their own inner versatility 😊
December 14th, 2024 04:20
The woman inside me
sorenbarrett said:
You have named many of the archetypes that fill are feminine side. Each of us contain a mixture of these. Beautifully worded and clearly stated it is most poetic.
December 13th, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
You have named many of the archetypes that fill are feminine side. Each of us contain a mixture of these. Beautifully worded and clearly stated it is most poetic.
December 13th, 2024 10:05
Made in Japan
sheta said:
im going to japan someday
its my favorite place on earth im trying to learn their language
December 12th, 2024 14:49
sheta said:
im going to japan someday
its my favorite place on earth im trying to learn their language
December 12th, 2024 14:49
Made in Japan
Ellen Marsell said:
A lighthearted look at the characteristics of Japan\'s deep and rich culture. It was a pleasure to read.
December 12th, 2024 10:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A lighthearted look at the characteristics of Japan\'s deep and rich culture. It was a pleasure to read.
December 12th, 2024 10:42
Made in Japan
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply rooted in culture this poem has a sense of cynicism and it comes through in the lines
December 12th, 2024 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply rooted in culture this poem has a sense of cynicism and it comes through in the lines
December 12th, 2024 10:19
Made in Japan
rin said:
You will definitely be resurrected. That\'s what a hero is.
December 12th, 2024 06:03
rin said:
You will definitely be resurrected. That\'s what a hero is.
December 12th, 2024 06:03
Made in Japan
rin said:
I don\'t know that much about America, but I was surprised at how much you know about Japan. Without love and curiosity, we would not be able to obtain this much information about Japanese culture. It\'s especially wonderful that you wrote a poem about kokeshi dolls. I haven\'t written enough yet. Thank you,You called me friend. We are friends!
December 12th, 2024 05:26
rin said:
I don\'t know that much about America, but I was surprised at how much you know about Japan. Without love and curiosity, we would not be able to obtain this much information about Japanese culture. It\'s especially wonderful that you wrote a poem about kokeshi dolls. I haven\'t written enough yet. Thank you,You called me friend. We are friends!
December 12th, 2024 05:26
the death of the star
Ellen Marsell said:
C\'est un brillant exemple de la façon dont la poésie peut être une arme.
I love your poem with these strong images and metaphors!
December 11th, 2024 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
C\'est un brillant exemple de la façon dont la poésie peut être une arme.
I love your poem with these strong images and metaphors!
December 11th, 2024 12:30
the death of the star
sorenbarrett said:
The mind requires absurdities to gain its attention and maintain it. Once gained the stranger the image the greater the metaphor. The mind needs these like crossword puzzles to keep it occupied. Don\'t know where I\'m going but know where I came from. Loved the poem
December 11th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
The mind requires absurdities to gain its attention and maintain it. Once gained the stranger the image the greater the metaphor. The mind needs these like crossword puzzles to keep it occupied. Don\'t know where I\'m going but know where I came from. Loved the poem
December 11th, 2024 08:58
the death of the star
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
Young wolves
Ellen Marsell said:
The unbridled energy of youth, simultaneously creative and destructive. Great poem!
December 10th, 2024 14:16
Ellen Marsell said:
The unbridled energy of youth, simultaneously creative and destructive. Great poem!
December 10th, 2024 14:16
The rat\'s diagonal
rin said:
The Divine World of Donald Mouse and Mickey Duck.
It\'s a bittersweet, deep coffee called reality.
December 9th, 2024 15:46
rin said:
The Divine World of Donald Mouse and Mickey Duck.
It\'s a bittersweet, deep coffee called reality.
December 9th, 2024 15:46
The rat\'s diagonal
sorenbarrett said:
You have found so many poetic lines to tell the tale and make your point. It is mind provoking and deep in meaning going far beyond the litteral scope. In a way it seems Nihilistic. Loved it
December 9th, 2024 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
You have found so many poetic lines to tell the tale and make your point. It is mind provoking and deep in meaning going far beyond the litteral scope. In a way it seems Nihilistic. Loved it
December 9th, 2024 15:17
The rat\'s diagonal
Ellen Marsell said:
Despite its bleakness, your piece is powerful and appealing. It exposes the inner struggle between the desire to find support and the realization that it doesn\'t exist. The despair mixed with irony sounds particularly honest.
December 9th, 2024 12:07
Ellen Marsell said:
Despite its bleakness, your piece is powerful and appealing. It exposes the inner struggle between the desire to find support and the realization that it doesn\'t exist. The despair mixed with irony sounds particularly honest.
December 9th, 2024 12:07
The catcher of light
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in every way a tribute to a poetic and musical genious.
December 9th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in every way a tribute to a poetic and musical genious.
December 9th, 2024 06:03
A letter
rin said:
People tend to only look at beautiful things, but your eye for what is not and making it into a poem is wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 01:59
rin said:
People tend to only look at beautiful things, but your eye for what is not and making it into a poem is wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 01:59
Bobby Fischer
teardrop said:
I read this last nifgr and never commeted. So, I read it again tonight. I clicked on this poem basically for the title. Bobby Fischer always did intrigue me. Can you imagine your mind playing itself over and over, all the time? Yes, Bobby Fischer was a legend yet, a sad soul.
December 7th, 2024 23:26
teardrop said:
I read this last nifgr and never commeted. So, I read it again tonight. I clicked on this poem basically for the title. Bobby Fischer always did intrigue me. Can you imagine your mind playing itself over and over, all the time? Yes, Bobby Fischer was a legend yet, a sad soul.
December 7th, 2024 23:26
The magic box
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginary magic of the box allows the hero to keep his faith in a miracle. A touching story of loneliness, alienation and illusions in a cruel reality.
December 7th, 2024 16:07
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginary magic of the box allows the hero to keep his faith in a miracle. A touching story of loneliness, alienation and illusions in a cruel reality.
December 7th, 2024 16:07
The magic box
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I took as a Christmas story of the disadvantage and poor the homeless and discarded. They too have dreams and not far different than any of our own. In this season of giving, I would hope that we reach out to hand to the disadvantage.
December 7th, 2024 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I took as a Christmas story of the disadvantage and poor the homeless and discarded. They too have dreams and not far different than any of our own. In this season of giving, I would hope that we reach out to hand to the disadvantage.
December 7th, 2024 14:01
Shadows
teardrop said:
My shadow sometimes talks ro much. Love the write and the thought provoking words. Thank you!
December 7th, 2024 05:43
teardrop said:
My shadow sometimes talks ro much. Love the write and the thought provoking words. Thank you!
December 7th, 2024 05:43
The catcher of light
rin said:
Yes. I am John Lemon.
By the time I got to know John Lennon, he was already dead.
I was listening to their music without knowing it was his or the Beatles\'.
December 7th, 2024 02:49
rin said:
Yes. I am John Lemon.
By the time I got to know John Lennon, he was already dead.
I was listening to their music without knowing it was his or the Beatles\'.
December 7th, 2024 02:49
The catcher of light
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful reflection on the ambiguity of light and shadow in human heritage.
December 6th, 2024 15:09
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful reflection on the ambiguity of light and shadow in human heritage.
December 6th, 2024 15:09
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