Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Charm
L. B. Mek said:
who needs colour or paint
when poetic art
can imbue hues of immersive
wonder
in but a line or two, of choice
wording..
Thank you! for colouring my day
bright, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:14
L. B. Mek said:
who needs colour or paint
when poetic art
can imbue hues of immersive
wonder
in but a line or two, of choice
wording..
Thank you! for colouring my day
bright, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:14
Charm
2781 said:
Well, that may be well?
If your on the right side.
Time will tell.
October 6th, 2023 02:11
2781 said:
Well, that may be well?
If your on the right side.
Time will tell.
October 6th, 2023 02:11
Existential boots
Neville said:
I think this is Brill and I aint talkin fish neither and guess wot .. I am INFJ too .. not sure I ever met one before ..
October 3rd, 2023 04:31
Neville said:
I think this is Brill and I aint talkin fish neither and guess wot .. I am INFJ too .. not sure I ever met one before ..
October 3rd, 2023 04:31
Anti social
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Rage against the Machine!\'
\'Brainwatched our chimera,
glamorous matrone hours,
captain scam preserve my life,
soldier hacker keep me safe ,
madam webscam sink me out,
brother concrete kill me loud...\'
October 2nd, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Rage against the Machine!\'
\'Brainwatched our chimera,
glamorous matrone hours,
captain scam preserve my life,
soldier hacker keep me safe ,
madam webscam sink me out,
brother concrete kill me loud...\'
October 2nd, 2023 04:28
Legacy a cursed poet
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liturgy for a couple of flies\'
(oh to be awarded that \'Gadfly\' fate..)
so much energy imbued in this one
a great read, dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liturgy for a couple of flies\'
(oh to be awarded that \'Gadfly\' fate..)
so much energy imbued in this one
a great read, dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 06:40
Orchard of delights
Pop64 said:
You use such marvelous imagery to convey the intent of the write. Truly a lovely read!
September 28th, 2023 06:15
Pop64 said:
You use such marvelous imagery to convey the intent of the write. Truly a lovely read!
September 28th, 2023 06:15
Riviera hotel
Ellen Marsell said:
\"your journey is my day ...\"
Beautiful !
September 27th, 2023 08:07
Ellen Marsell said:
\"your journey is my day ...\"
Beautiful !
September 27th, 2023 08:07
Fugue in runaway
Bobby O said:
I’m very much in achord with bright poetic real-time origin verse as it no doubt dances with counterpart Belgium chocolate dark escorted fragrance of same shade
September 25th, 2023 03:51
Bobby O said:
I’m very much in achord with bright poetic real-time origin verse as it no doubt dances with counterpart Belgium chocolate dark escorted fragrance of same shade
September 25th, 2023 03:51
Fugue in runaway
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(state of unaware, just knowing
escape
is all the answer we have
for now...
till we stop long enough
to excavate that repressed, voice
beyond perfection\'s, panic..
now the clouds gather, adding
unsurmountable distance
so returning, becomes obsolete..
onwards we crawl, dragging
all that we could have been..
once
when Sun was in-sync
with our heartbeat\'s
accords, of you and me
entwined
in an eternal picket fence, ever-after
synchronicity
..once
before life\'s scars, made poetry
flow easily, in the barren of night
inking that hollow of heart, readily
oh cruelty
I name thee, visionary art
steeped
in life\'s
un-relinquished heartbreaks..)
September 25th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(state of unaware, just knowing
escape
is all the answer we have
for now...
till we stop long enough
to excavate that repressed, voice
beyond perfection\'s, panic..
now the clouds gather, adding
unsurmountable distance
so returning, becomes obsolete..
onwards we crawl, dragging
all that we could have been..
once
when Sun was in-sync
with our heartbeat\'s
accords, of you and me
entwined
in an eternal picket fence, ever-after
synchronicity
..once
before life\'s scars, made poetry
flow easily, in the barren of night
inking that hollow of heart, readily
oh cruelty
I name thee, visionary art
steeped
in life\'s
un-relinquished heartbreaks..)
September 25th, 2023 03:36
Dark sabbath
L. B. Mek said:
Caravaggio would approve this page
as do I, dear Poet
a little noir release never hurt, those
true to themselves
September 25th, 2023 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
Caravaggio would approve this page
as do I, dear Poet
a little noir release never hurt, those
true to themselves
September 25th, 2023 03:23
Tropical interlude
Pop64 said:
Your use of imagery through choice of words and careful subtle inferences, leave the reader to experience all that is within the write, to be there. Lovely
September 22nd, 2023 08:13
Pop64 said:
Your use of imagery through choice of words and careful subtle inferences, leave the reader to experience all that is within the write, to be there. Lovely
September 22nd, 2023 08:13
Tropical interlude
L. B. Mek said:
love the wording/wordplay
this is wonderful to read out loud
\'in search of close shores,
sunset make me hurt ,
secret taboo doors ...
once upon atoll,
shipwreck, the call...
space tropicorn lagoon,
spice lolita moon ...
Vanilla hours,deep vertigo,
archipelago feelings mango..\'
thank you! dear Poet
great poetic ambition
subtle in execution
a lovely read
September 22nd, 2023 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
love the wording/wordplay
this is wonderful to read out loud
\'in search of close shores,
sunset make me hurt ,
secret taboo doors ...
once upon atoll,
shipwreck, the call...
space tropicorn lagoon,
spice lolita moon ...
Vanilla hours,deep vertigo,
archipelago feelings mango..\'
thank you! dear Poet
great poetic ambition
subtle in execution
a lovely read
September 22nd, 2023 04:45
Urban tragicomedy
L. B. Mek said:
(simply Brilliant dear Poet
I\'m sorry if my interpretation
or understanding is mistaken
but I couldn\'t help scribbling
a little feeble reply
thank you for sharing, inspiring)
judgemental fingers and toes
ignorance in their hearts
herd mindset as their mind setting
yet
they lead us with blindfolded eyes
expect us to follow their broken paths
demand we copy and replicate their mistakes..
then teach us, to love/trust blind
because of their biological titles..
a universe of limitless
light
yet from our lullabies
we learn to look up and see
darkness, in our life\'s skies
...
September 18th, 2023 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
(simply Brilliant dear Poet
I\'m sorry if my interpretation
or understanding is mistaken
but I couldn\'t help scribbling
a little feeble reply
thank you for sharing, inspiring)
judgemental fingers and toes
ignorance in their hearts
herd mindset as their mind setting
yet
they lead us with blindfolded eyes
expect us to follow their broken paths
demand we copy and replicate their mistakes..
then teach us, to love/trust blind
because of their biological titles..
a universe of limitless
light
yet from our lullabies
we learn to look up and see
darkness, in our life\'s skies
...
September 18th, 2023 03:26
The park bench
Lorenz said:
Some objects hold in them the memory (just a little ride..) of the secret annals.Dear max\' just the time to sit on the old bench and listen to the message.
September 17th, 2023 08:14
Lorenz said:
Some objects hold in them the memory (just a little ride..) of the secret annals.Dear max\' just the time to sit on the old bench and listen to the message.
September 17th, 2023 08:14
My lady kate
Lorenz said:
Is she woman or a cat ? it\'s the whole question of this fascinating feminine ambiguity .
September 16th, 2023 01:57
Lorenz said:
Is she woman or a cat ? it\'s the whole question of this fascinating feminine ambiguity .
September 16th, 2023 01:57
My lady kate
jarcher54 said:
Very sensual, elusive, and rich with mesmerizing, mingling images and mixed metaphors... like being intoxicated with love... my two feline boys are like willows-o-th-wisp, sparring like Mercutio and Tybalt, dancing through the trees like spider monkeys, and sleeping intertwined like Romeo and Juliet on their one-morning honeymoon. Thanks for the heartfelt playful lines.
September 16th, 2023 01:43
jarcher54 said:
Very sensual, elusive, and rich with mesmerizing, mingling images and mixed metaphors... like being intoxicated with love... my two feline boys are like willows-o-th-wisp, sparring like Mercutio and Tybalt, dancing through the trees like spider monkeys, and sleeping intertwined like Romeo and Juliet on their one-morning honeymoon. Thanks for the heartfelt playful lines.
September 16th, 2023 01:43
Sad way of life
Lorenz said:
We are all bright and brilliant to the eyes of our feelings !
September 15th, 2023 08:53
Lorenz said:
We are all bright and brilliant to the eyes of our feelings !
September 15th, 2023 08:53
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