Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The sepia photo
Ellen Marsell said:
And shadows of historical upheavals on the horizon.
November 13th, 2023 07:57
Ellen Marsell said:
And shadows of historical upheavals on the horizon.
November 13th, 2023 07:57
The sepia photo
Ellen Marsell said:
In delicate sepia tones, your touching story. Magnificent!
November 13th, 2023 07:15
Ellen Marsell said:
In delicate sepia tones, your touching story. Magnificent!
November 13th, 2023 07:15
The oracle of times
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid, graphic imagery. You paint a dark picture. Fantastic work.
November 12th, 2023 15:05
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid, graphic imagery. You paint a dark picture. Fantastic work.
November 12th, 2023 15:05
Requiem for a lift
Bella Shepard said:
I think I see Elisa battling mental illness. Her bag of exploded polarity, the mood swings in which she is held captive by the cabalistic shape that canabalizes her mind and from which she cannot escape. To her it is real. I may have it all wrong, but I love it. Powerful write dear poet.
November 11th, 2023 14:58
Bella Shepard said:
I think I see Elisa battling mental illness. Her bag of exploded polarity, the mood swings in which she is held captive by the cabalistic shape that canabalizes her mind and from which she cannot escape. To her it is real. I may have it all wrong, but I love it. Powerful write dear poet.
November 11th, 2023 14:58
Requiem for a lift
Ellen Marsell said:
\"the truth is out there\" ?
Your poem is impressive!
November 11th, 2023 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
\"the truth is out there\" ?
Your poem is impressive!
November 11th, 2023 12:02
Enlightenment
Ellen Marsell said:
An enchanting realm of serenity and inspiration...
November 9th, 2023 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
An enchanting realm of serenity and inspiration...
November 9th, 2023 10:58
After body smell
Bella Shepard said:
The lovely picture truly enhances the lingering fragrance, and afterglow of such pleasure, if only for one more night. Beautifully crafted, thoroughly enjoyed.
November 8th, 2023 15:29
Bella Shepard said:
The lovely picture truly enhances the lingering fragrance, and afterglow of such pleasure, if only for one more night. Beautifully crafted, thoroughly enjoyed.
November 8th, 2023 15:29
After body smell
Ellen Marsell said:
L\'amour, comme une fleur fragile, se fane sous les vents d\'hiver, laissant derrière lui le goût persistant d\'un délicieux poison.
Beau poème!
November 8th, 2023 11:40
Ellen Marsell said:
L\'amour, comme une fleur fragile, se fane sous les vents d\'hiver, laissant derrière lui le goût persistant d\'un délicieux poison.
Beau poème!
November 8th, 2023 11:40
After body smell
2781 said:
I liked it but I have a habit of bad interpretation!
You keep my muddled mind in fine tune.
November 8th, 2023 07:23
2781 said:
I liked it but I have a habit of bad interpretation!
You keep my muddled mind in fine tune.
November 8th, 2023 07:23
Pagan wedding
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. It looks to me mystic and fantastic, like to read mythology. Thanks a lot.
November 7th, 2023 20:44
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. It looks to me mystic and fantastic, like to read mythology. Thanks a lot.
November 7th, 2023 20:44
Pagan wedding
Ma5on said:
Gothic erotic! Yet sensual and tranquil.
Your atmospheric scenery creates a vivid detail to the theme.
M
November 7th, 2023 13:58
Ma5on said:
Gothic erotic! Yet sensual and tranquil.
Your atmospheric scenery creates a vivid detail to the theme.
M
November 7th, 2023 13:58
Pagan wedding
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful pic juxtaposed upon the carnal intensity of this poem, a Pagan Wedding extraordinaire! You piqued my curiousity, and doing a little research found that Pagan Weddings are happening today with various types of ceremonies. I\'ve learned something new, thank you.
November 6th, 2023 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful pic juxtaposed upon the carnal intensity of this poem, a Pagan Wedding extraordinaire! You piqued my curiousity, and doing a little research found that Pagan Weddings are happening today with various types of ceremonies. I\'ve learned something new, thank you.
November 6th, 2023 15:22
A single ticket to Mars
Ma5on said:
From my castle of sand I watched the crows tears drown the world.
Imagery as thick and heavy as dark velvet!
I was immersed in this heavy cloak of misery from beginning to end.
Great piece!
M
November 6th, 2023 15:02
Ma5on said:
From my castle of sand I watched the crows tears drown the world.
Imagery as thick and heavy as dark velvet!
I was immersed in this heavy cloak of misery from beginning to end.
Great piece!
M
November 6th, 2023 15:02
Pagan wedding
2781 said:
When he speaks a lie he speaks his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
On the other hand, it speaks the truth.
November 6th, 2023 07:40
2781 said:
When he speaks a lie he speaks his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
On the other hand, it speaks the truth.
November 6th, 2023 07:40
A single ticket to Mars
Ellen Marsell said:
Un récit visuellement riche. Un travail remarquable !
November 5th, 2023 15:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Un récit visuellement riche. Un travail remarquable !
November 5th, 2023 15:36
A single ticket to Mars
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. Great use of senses.
November 5th, 2023 11:59
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. Great use of senses.
November 5th, 2023 11:59
Summer love
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I like the painting you did with words.
November 3rd, 2023 09:02
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I like the painting you did with words.
November 3rd, 2023 09:02
La Seine
Thomas W Case said:
To use another baseball analogy, you knocked this out of the park. I could write 5-page essay on the brilliance of this work of yours, but then I would get nothing done today. Suffice it to say, sheer genius.
November 2nd, 2023 07:48
Thomas W Case said:
To use another baseball analogy, you knocked this out of the park. I could write 5-page essay on the brilliance of this work of yours, but then I would get nothing done today. Suffice it to say, sheer genius.
November 2nd, 2023 07:48
Prometheus
Kinsley Lee said:
Thank you for your sharing poem. The story of the Invincible heart of hero in mythology. The poem gives me encourage. Thank you very much.
November 1st, 2023 17:39
Kinsley Lee said:
Thank you for your sharing poem. The story of the Invincible heart of hero in mythology. The poem gives me encourage. Thank you very much.
November 1st, 2023 17:39
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