Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Timeshifting
Ellen Marsell said:
A delightful journey! A sense of spontaneity and adventure, as if you are going wherever your thoughts and desires take you. A carefree spirit.
Thanks for sharing!
October 24th, 2023 07:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A delightful journey! A sense of spontaneity and adventure, as if you are going wherever your thoughts and desires take you. A carefree spirit.
Thanks for sharing!
October 24th, 2023 07:37
Prelude to Elsa
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, dear friend!
October 22nd, 2023 06:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, dear friend!
October 22nd, 2023 06:01
Prelude to Elsa
Lorenz said:
A very carnal and earthy love prose !
I made some small changes in a second version to enrich this terrestrial feeling .
October 22nd, 2023 04:52
Lorenz said:
A very carnal and earthy love prose !
I made some small changes in a second version to enrich this terrestrial feeling .
October 22nd, 2023 04:52
Prelude to Elsa
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and use of language. Truly sublime.
October 22nd, 2023 02:56
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and use of language. Truly sublime.
October 22nd, 2023 02:56
The wheel of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for your philosophical creation!
Je l\'aime beaucoup !
October 21st, 2023 12:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Thanks for your philosophical creation!
Je l\'aime beaucoup !
October 21st, 2023 12:01
Brussels
Ellen Marsell said:
A grim picture of urban life filled with contradictions and hidden histories...
October 20th, 2023 08:10
Ellen Marsell said:
A grim picture of urban life filled with contradictions and hidden histories...
October 20th, 2023 08:10
Exhilaration
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully written piece that engages the imagination and emotions. Fascinating imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
October 19th, 2023 10:51
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautifully written piece that engages the imagination and emotions. Fascinating imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
October 19th, 2023 10:51
Dolce vita
Pop64 said:
A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon each word, through the imagery. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 07:02
Pop64 said:
A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon each word, through the imagery. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 07:02
Dolce vita
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so creative, your prowess
includes
deft, subtle notes as well..
a joy to read, dear Poet
thank you!
October 16th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so creative, your prowess
includes
deft, subtle notes as well..
a joy to read, dear Poet
thank you!
October 16th, 2023 05:37
Poet and backpacker
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
Poet and backpacker
Ellen Marsell said:
Douceur du temps dans votre poème captivant et tendre. Merci !
October 14th, 2023 05:47
Ellen Marsell said:
Douceur du temps dans votre poème captivant et tendre. Merci !
October 14th, 2023 05:47
Legacy a cursed poet
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language to paint your scene. It\'s sublime.
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language to paint your scene. It\'s sublime.
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Poet and backpacker
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and space to create your scene. Fantastic.
October 14th, 2023 01:00
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and space to create your scene. Fantastic.
October 14th, 2023 01:00
Dead-end diagonal
L. B. Mek said:
don\'t really like all that hell n heaven mysticism
but still, I doubt there\'s a lot of honor in an eternity of fire
just burnt bits
a lot of burnt bits..
lol
your creativity let loose on this one
a wild ride
thank you! dear poet
October 13th, 2023 07:40
L. B. Mek said:
don\'t really like all that hell n heaven mysticism
but still, I doubt there\'s a lot of honor in an eternity of fire
just burnt bits
a lot of burnt bits..
lol
your creativity let loose on this one
a wild ride
thank you! dear poet
October 13th, 2023 07:40
Sharing with you
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was a delight to read, and your choice of picture really accentuated the peaceful feeling of contentment that sharing evokes.
Loved it!
October 10th, 2023 15:29
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was a delight to read, and your choice of picture really accentuated the peaceful feeling of contentment that sharing evokes.
Loved it!
October 10th, 2023 15:29
Frozen life
Neville said:
Q - how much was this enjoyed
A - Very much indeed
NB - the tipsy cadaver tipped the balance .. Neville
October 9th, 2023 07:56
Neville said:
Q - how much was this enjoyed
A - Very much indeed
NB - the tipsy cadaver tipped the balance .. Neville
October 9th, 2023 07:56
Sun light dance
L. B. Mek said:
\'I love you silt spirit,
mangrove and rain forest ..\'
such a beautiful and musical
poetic treat
this kinda of poetry births fairies into our world
Brilliant!
October 9th, 2023 02:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'I love you silt spirit,
mangrove and rain forest ..\'
such a beautiful and musical
poetic treat
this kinda of poetry births fairies into our world
Brilliant!
October 9th, 2023 02:46
Frozen life
L. B. Mek said:
rage as ink
well, that\'s one way to defeat insomnia
lol
expressive to say the least, thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
rage as ink
well, that\'s one way to defeat insomnia
lol
expressive to say the least, thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 02:42
Sun light dance
Parisab said:
This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of all sorts-thanks for the write Darkfragrance…
October 8th, 2023 11:43
Parisab said:
This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of all sorts-thanks for the write Darkfragrance…
October 8th, 2023 11:43
Sun light dance
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetic expression is vivid and full of imagery, capturing the essence of passion and love in a dance of words. Well done, my friend!
October 8th, 2023 08:07
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetic expression is vivid and full of imagery, capturing the essence of passion and love in a dance of words. Well done, my friend!
October 8th, 2023 08:07
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