Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Motionless voyager
Priya Tomar said:
Marriage of sun and silence ...... catchy line
Lovely metaphors .....
July 20th, 2025 05:13
Priya Tomar said:
Marriage of sun and silence ...... catchy line
Lovely metaphors .....
July 20th, 2025 05:13
Motionless voyager
sorenbarrett said:
(On the pier a white shadow
will wait ...
Marriage of sun and silence ,
the bride of the ocean don\'t cry.)
Such great lines here. They paint a picture and metaphor in one fell swoop. Very nicely done Lorez
July 20th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
(On the pier a white shadow
will wait ...
Marriage of sun and silence ,
the bride of the ocean don\'t cry.)
Such great lines here. They paint a picture and metaphor in one fell swoop. Very nicely done Lorez
July 20th, 2025 04:11
Lolita
Sealgair said:
Beautifully written.
As if the mask of rationality has been lifted, and you allow yourself to speak from that part of the mind usually pushed into the shadows - where imagined love and the eternal \'what if\' reside.
July 18th, 2025 14:37
Sealgair said:
Beautifully written.
As if the mask of rationality has been lifted, and you allow yourself to speak from that part of the mind usually pushed into the shadows - where imagined love and the eternal \'what if\' reside.
July 18th, 2025 14:37
Lolita
Ellen Marsell said:
A charming and enigmatic poem, infused with delicate sensuality.
July 18th, 2025 14:23
Ellen Marsell said:
A charming and enigmatic poem, infused with delicate sensuality.
July 18th, 2025 14:23
Lolita
Tony Grannell said:
An alluring nymphet on rout 66 in a sensuous and deliciously composed passage of superlative poetry. I really loved this one. Well done indeed, lorenz.
Kind regards,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 12:19
Tony Grannell said:
An alluring nymphet on rout 66 in a sensuous and deliciously composed passage of superlative poetry. I really loved this one. Well done indeed, lorenz.
Kind regards,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 12:19
Lolita
Priya Tomar said:
nice poetry.
Mystry .....
Your poetic power is praiseworthy .
You wrote some beautiful metaphors.
Lovely !
July 18th, 2025 11:00
Priya Tomar said:
nice poetry.
Mystry .....
Your poetic power is praiseworthy .
You wrote some beautiful metaphors.
Lovely !
July 18th, 2025 11:00
Lolita
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had just gotten on the magic mystery tour, rode the bus to Jefferson Airplane. A mystical and wistful read Lorenz.
July 18th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had just gotten on the magic mystery tour, rode the bus to Jefferson Airplane. A mystical and wistful read Lorenz.
July 18th, 2025 09:51
Red kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Absinth liquor of hallucination seems present in this poem. Nicely written Gray
July 12th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Absinth liquor of hallucination seems present in this poem. Nicely written Gray
July 12th, 2025 06:32
I\'m the intelligence
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
I\'m the intelligence
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
Lethal jingle
Ellen Marsell said:
You’re looking back at the \'80s — at pop culture, at those deceptive sparkles that once seemed like real magic but now feel like a masquerade. Very vivid...
July 4th, 2025 12:35
Ellen Marsell said:
You’re looking back at the \'80s — at pop culture, at those deceptive sparkles that once seemed like real magic but now feel like a masquerade. Very vivid...
July 4th, 2025 12:35
Lethal jingle
sorenbarrett said:
Madonna twice and her butt too. I get a postmodern feeling of a Salvador Dali painting mixed with Harmonious Bosch and a dab of Bob Dylan. An intriguing write.
July 4th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Madonna twice and her butt too. I get a postmodern feeling of a Salvador Dali painting mixed with Harmonious Bosch and a dab of Bob Dylan. An intriguing write.
July 4th, 2025 10:54
Lili
Ellen Marsell said:
What remains of a man when he becomes part of the war machine?
This is a drama of consciousness — one that sees the absurdity and injustice of what is happening, yet is powerless to change the course.
July 1st, 2025 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
What remains of a man when he becomes part of the war machine?
This is a drama of consciousness — one that sees the absurdity and injustice of what is happening, yet is powerless to change the course.
July 1st, 2025 13:15
Lili
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamy, mythical, romantic but with the lust of man it now becomes quizzical and calls for reflection. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamy, mythical, romantic but with the lust of man it now becomes quizzical and calls for reflection. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 10:49
The rain manifesto.
Ellen Marsell said:
A whole parade of images and references passes through the poem like a procession of shadows. Here we find artists, poets, politicians, and urban phantoms. In each image — something familiar, but reimagined, ironic... Excellent work!
June 30th, 2025 09:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A whole parade of images and references passes through the poem like a procession of shadows. Here we find artists, poets, politicians, and urban phantoms. In each image — something familiar, but reimagined, ironic... Excellent work!
June 30th, 2025 09:58
The rain manifesto.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a modern Hieronymus Bosch is what comes to mind. Very nice Lorenz
June 30th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a modern Hieronymus Bosch is what comes to mind. Very nice Lorenz
June 30th, 2025 06:55
The clash of civilizations
Lorenz said:
\'\' Civilization is not a comfort but a requirement ! \'\' ( Charles De Gaulle )
June 27th, 2025 13:25
Lorenz said:
\'\' Civilization is not a comfort but a requirement ! \'\' ( Charles De Gaulle )
June 27th, 2025 13:25
The clash of civilizations
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep reflection on the clash of two worldviews.
June 27th, 2025 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep reflection on the clash of two worldviews.
June 27th, 2025 11:41
The clash of civilizations
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts, different beliefs east to west. Could the belief in reincarnation make a difference in how death and war are handled? There are different forms of stoic the eastern different than the western. the Spartan or the Samurai. A thought provoking poem Lorenz
June 27th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts, different beliefs east to west. Could the belief in reincarnation make a difference in how death and war are handled? There are different forms of stoic the eastern different than the western. the Spartan or the Samurai. A thought provoking poem Lorenz
June 27th, 2025 10:59
The poem
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a rare thing — remarkable for its honesty, grim irony, and intellectual despair.
June 27th, 2025 10:34
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a rare thing — remarkable for its honesty, grim irony, and intellectual despair.
June 27th, 2025 10:34
The poem
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go but their memory lives on in the minds of the reader. A poignant write for the poet. Very nicely done
June 26th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go but their memory lives on in the minds of the reader. A poignant write for the poet. Very nicely done
June 26th, 2025 13:08
One morning a beach
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, sensual vignette — a space of images, sensations, and memories. The poem breathes music and gentle melancholy. So beautiful, so delicate!
June 26th, 2025 10:56
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, sensual vignette — a space of images, sensations, and memories. The poem breathes music and gentle melancholy. So beautiful, so delicate!
June 26th, 2025 10:56
One morning a beach
sorenbarrett said:
Que poema mais bonita. Gostei era uma poema de beleza de natrueza, praia e mulher. Loved your poem very nice.
June 25th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Que poema mais bonita. Gostei era uma poema de beleza de natrueza, praia e mulher. Loved your poem very nice.
June 25th, 2025 17:44
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