Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Time machine
sorenbarrett said:
This evoked many old memories and resurrected some old emotions. That is good enough for a poem. Thank you for writing.
December 5th, 2024 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
This evoked many old memories and resurrected some old emotions. That is good enough for a poem. Thank you for writing.
December 5th, 2024 08:41
Bobby Fischer
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby had his troubles and became a bit paranoid in the end. I feel rooked all the time and like a pawn much of the time but worst of all I hate when I\'m check mated. Oh yes then I know the king is dead.
December 4th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby had his troubles and became a bit paranoid in the end. I feel rooked all the time and like a pawn much of the time but worst of all I hate when I\'m check mated. Oh yes then I know the king is dead.
December 4th, 2024 13:05
Bobby Fischer
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Tremble sinners who think they are players !\". The paradoxical nature of Bobby Fischer.
Powerful imagery in your poem!
December 4th, 2024 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Tremble sinners who think they are players !\". The paradoxical nature of Bobby Fischer.
Powerful imagery in your poem!
December 4th, 2024 12:30
The book
Dan Williams said:
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it has carried me and propelled me through life. Thanks for this.
December 4th, 2024 01:32
Dan Williams said:
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it has carried me and propelled me through life. Thanks for this.
December 4th, 2024 01:32
It\'s wonderful
Lorenz said:
These wonderful ghosts that emerge from the corridors of time !
December 3rd, 2024 10:38
Lorenz said:
These wonderful ghosts that emerge from the corridors of time !
December 3rd, 2024 10:38
It\'s wonderful
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a pleasant, dreamy, aesthetic journey! ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a pleasant, dreamy, aesthetic journey! ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:59
The book
Ellen Marsell said:
The feeling that this poem is not just a literary work, but evidence of a deep spiritual practice. It is filled with light mysticism, inspiring reflection on the spiritual path, the value of inner peace...
December 2nd, 2024 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
The feeling that this poem is not just a literary work, but evidence of a deep spiritual practice. It is filled with light mysticism, inspiring reflection on the spiritual path, the value of inner peace...
December 2nd, 2024 11:11
The book
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
A soul\'s journey
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
A soul\'s journey
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Home so sweet
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
Home so sweet
Ellen Marsell said:
Your home is a reflection of your soul. And this tour through a cozy and very personal world is really enjoyable.
November 30th, 2024 09:24
Ellen Marsell said:
Your home is a reflection of your soul. And this tour through a cozy and very personal world is really enjoyable.
November 30th, 2024 09:24
Red and dreams girl
sorenbarrett said:
Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of wishes a beautiful poem
November 29th, 2024 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of wishes a beautiful poem
November 29th, 2024 12:07
Red and dreams girl
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to capture the elusive: the feelings, thoughts and stories that the girl in red carries within herself, not even realizing that someone can read them. She remains a mystery and her reality dissolves into the poet\'s fantasies. A very enjoyable read!
November 29th, 2024 11:42
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to capture the elusive: the feelings, thoughts and stories that the girl in red carries within herself, not even realizing that someone can read them. She remains a mystery and her reality dissolves into the poet\'s fantasies. A very enjoyable read!
November 29th, 2024 11:42
Ayahuasca spirit
Ellen Marsell said:
The fusion of Ravel and Ayahuasca: something of a cultural experiment. Music, psychedelics and poetry create a symphony of perception!
November 28th, 2024 12:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The fusion of Ravel and Ayahuasca: something of a cultural experiment. Music, psychedelics and poetry create a symphony of perception!
November 28th, 2024 12:39
Rinascimento
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Rinascimento
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
Departure
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Summer of dead leaves
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
Summer of dead leaves
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
Summer of dead leaves
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Madhouse
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
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