Comments received on poems by Yassin Tamam
surrealist realism
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
July 24th, 2024 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
July 24th, 2024 06:51
surrealist realism
HoboBilbo said:
Now, I know a simple trick that can take this from you, but maybe teach yourself the real meaning of the \"-\". - be it be betwixt words or between them || be it be connected to words or otherwise. to.
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greek-head, surrealist-fraud, side-by-side, de-edit, pop-mouge, self-love, m-dash, n-dash, semi-colon, etc. | —.
July 24th, 2024 00:00
HoboBilbo said:
Now, I know a simple trick that can take this from you, but maybe teach yourself the real meaning of the \"-\". - be it be betwixt words or between them || be it be connected to words or otherwise. to.
***
greek-head, surrealist-fraud, side-by-side, de-edit, pop-mouge, self-love, m-dash, n-dash, semi-colon, etc. | —.
July 24th, 2024 00:00
words of God, words of man
2781 said:
Good and upright is the Lord: therefore will he teach sinners in the way. The meek will he guide in judgement:and the meek he will teach his way.
April 10th, 2024 07:24
2781 said:
Good and upright is the Lord: therefore will he teach sinners in the way. The meek will he guide in judgement:and the meek he will teach his way.
April 10th, 2024 07:24
it\'s you what i have left
A.D. Small said:
I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed it was so naturally written like a flowing river!!!! Great job!
April 3rd, 2024 03:08
A.D. Small said:
I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed it was so naturally written like a flowing river!!!! Great job!
April 3rd, 2024 03:08
I
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about. It mentions dreams but doesn\'t describe what they are.
January 27th, 2024 00:29
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about. It mentions dreams but doesn\'t describe what they are.
January 27th, 2024 00:29
defy defy defy defy
G.Cabús said:
Beautiful writing, transparent words from a profound feeling.
November 14th, 2023 18:59
G.Cabús said:
Beautiful writing, transparent words from a profound feeling.
November 14th, 2023 18:59
defy defy defy defy
2781 said:
Come now, and let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow; though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool.
November 14th, 2023 18:30
2781 said:
Come now, and let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow; though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool.
November 14th, 2023 18:30
the loss of it all
Thomas W Case said:
It has a atmospheric effect which is very cool.
November 11th, 2023 09:33
Thomas W Case said:
It has a atmospheric effect which is very cool.
November 11th, 2023 09:33
the more I know the less I comprehend
Goddess of the Mist said:
This was amazing. My favorite part was, \"Live through ruins so God gifts you a palace in paradise.”
I said, “I want a hut.\"
I can relate a lot to this.
November 7th, 2023 23:38
Goddess of the Mist said:
This was amazing. My favorite part was, \"Live through ruins so God gifts you a palace in paradise.”
I said, “I want a hut.\"
I can relate a lot to this.
November 7th, 2023 23:38
the more I know the less I comprehend
dtrusss said:
This is pretty deep and dark, but it resonates with my heart.
November 7th, 2023 17:09
dtrusss said:
This is pretty deep and dark, but it resonates with my heart.
November 7th, 2023 17:09
I am;
Goddess of the Mist said:
I enjoyed reading this. The punctuation seems significant.
November 5th, 2023 00:33
Goddess of the Mist said:
I enjoyed reading this. The punctuation seems significant.
November 5th, 2023 00:33
I don\'t wanna talk
dtrusss said:
Legit. Don\'t be afraid to speak it. I do it every day, making a fool of myself along the way. I just accept the dreamer accusations and let flow the woo woo. Have fun being the smoke in the room.
October 31st, 2023 15:43
dtrusss said:
Legit. Don\'t be afraid to speak it. I do it every day, making a fool of myself along the way. I just accept the dreamer accusations and let flow the woo woo. Have fun being the smoke in the room.
October 31st, 2023 15:43
