Comments received on poems by Yassin Tamam
It\'s getting clearer and I don\'t care if it goes all away
sorenbarrett said:
Pondering and the mind wandering are part of processing and understanding and here I hear the gears of poetry grinding. Nice
February 18th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Pondering and the mind wandering are part of processing and understanding and here I hear the gears of poetry grinding. Nice
February 18th, 2025 06:16
It\'s getting clearer and I don\'t care if it goes all away
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this reflective piece of writing, it is good sometimes to look back because if we can make sense of our past we can make a better future, a lovely write
February 18th, 2025 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this reflective piece of writing, it is good sometimes to look back because if we can make sense of our past we can make a better future, a lovely write
February 18th, 2025 02:01
It\'s getting clearer and I don\'t care if it goes all away
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your pondering here in this reflective write. It’s good to live in the present, but the past, if it’s understood can help make the future better. Thank you for sharing. Quiet times can be revealing.
February 17th, 2025 23:22
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed your pondering here in this reflective write. It’s good to live in the present, but the past, if it’s understood can help make the future better. Thank you for sharing. Quiet times can be revealing.
February 17th, 2025 23:22
surrender with dignity
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing, interwoven with many messages and a very interesting and enjoyable read, thank you
December 13th, 2024 17:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing, interwoven with many messages and a very interesting and enjoyable read, thank you
December 13th, 2024 17:36
surrealist realism
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
July 24th, 2024 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
July 24th, 2024 06:51
surrealist realism
HoboBilbo said:
Now, I know a simple trick that can take this from you, but maybe teach yourself the real meaning of the \"-\". - be it be betwixt words or between them || be it be connected to words or otherwise. to.
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greek-head, surrealist-fraud, side-by-side, de-edit, pop-mouge, self-love, m-dash, n-dash, semi-colon, etc. | —.
July 24th, 2024 00:00
HoboBilbo said:
Now, I know a simple trick that can take this from you, but maybe teach yourself the real meaning of the \"-\". - be it be betwixt words or between them || be it be connected to words or otherwise. to.
***
greek-head, surrealist-fraud, side-by-side, de-edit, pop-mouge, self-love, m-dash, n-dash, semi-colon, etc. | —.
July 24th, 2024 00:00
words of God, words of man
2781 said:
Good and upright is the Lord: therefore will he teach sinners in the way. The meek will he guide in judgement:and the meek he will teach his way.
April 10th, 2024 07:24
2781 said:
Good and upright is the Lord: therefore will he teach sinners in the way. The meek will he guide in judgement:and the meek he will teach his way.
April 10th, 2024 07:24
it\'s you what i have left
A.D. Small said:
I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed it was so naturally written like a flowing river!!!! Great job!
April 3rd, 2024 03:08
A.D. Small said:
I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed it was so naturally written like a flowing river!!!! Great job!
April 3rd, 2024 03:08
I
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about. It mentions dreams but doesn\'t describe what they are.
January 27th, 2024 00:29
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about. It mentions dreams but doesn\'t describe what they are.
January 27th, 2024 00:29
defy defy defy defy
G.Cabús said:
Beautiful writing, transparent words from a profound feeling.
November 14th, 2023 18:59
G.Cabús said:
Beautiful writing, transparent words from a profound feeling.
November 14th, 2023 18:59
defy defy defy defy
2781 said:
Come now, and let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow; though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool.
November 14th, 2023 18:30
2781 said:
Come now, and let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow; though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool.
November 14th, 2023 18:30
the loss of it all
Thomas W Case said:
It has a atmospheric effect which is very cool.
November 11th, 2023 09:33
Thomas W Case said:
It has a atmospheric effect which is very cool.
November 11th, 2023 09:33
the more I know the less I comprehend
Goddess of the Mist said:
This was amazing. My favorite part was, \"Live through ruins so God gifts you a palace in paradise.”
I said, “I want a hut.\"
I can relate a lot to this.
November 7th, 2023 23:38
Goddess of the Mist said:
This was amazing. My favorite part was, \"Live through ruins so God gifts you a palace in paradise.”
I said, “I want a hut.\"
I can relate a lot to this.
November 7th, 2023 23:38
the more I know the less I comprehend
dtrusss said:
This is pretty deep and dark, but it resonates with my heart.
November 7th, 2023 17:09
dtrusss said:
This is pretty deep and dark, but it resonates with my heart.
November 7th, 2023 17:09
I am;
Goddess of the Mist said:
I enjoyed reading this. The punctuation seems significant.
November 5th, 2023 00:33
Goddess of the Mist said:
I enjoyed reading this. The punctuation seems significant.
November 5th, 2023 00:33
I don\'t wanna talk
dtrusss said:
Legit. Don\'t be afraid to speak it. I do it every day, making a fool of myself along the way. I just accept the dreamer accusations and let flow the woo woo. Have fun being the smoke in the room.
October 31st, 2023 15:43
dtrusss said:
Legit. Don\'t be afraid to speak it. I do it every day, making a fool of myself along the way. I just accept the dreamer accusations and let flow the woo woo. Have fun being the smoke in the room.
October 31st, 2023 15:43
