Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Girl with the black cloud
WriteBeLight said:
Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.
November 28th, 2016 08:41
WriteBeLight said:
Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.
November 28th, 2016 08:41
Jack and Jill : Enter the Matrix
SabreLi said:
I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described potently and the realisation that with the choice they made - they made their beds and must now lie in them! Nods to both titular works went down well, and the whole piece was wound together nicely though their journey exposing both the cowardice of the two and the future they have sown for the next generation. Look forward to your next work :) xx
November 27th, 2016 18:20
SabreLi said:
I really love this piece, very well written :) Such realism described potently and the realisation that with the choice they made - they made their beds and must now lie in them! Nods to both titular works went down well, and the whole piece was wound together nicely though their journey exposing both the cowardice of the two and the future they have sown for the next generation. Look forward to your next work :) xx
November 27th, 2016 18:20
Him
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This was such an awesome liege to read. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH~
November 25th, 2016 11:45
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This was such an awesome liege to read. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH~
November 25th, 2016 11:45
Him
WriteBeLight said:
Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your poem.
November 25th, 2016 08:14
WriteBeLight said:
Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your poem.
November 25th, 2016 08:14
Sweet dreams are made of cheese
Augustus said:
Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.
November 22nd, 2016 14:44
Augustus said:
Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.
November 22nd, 2016 14:44
You\'re not even
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem. It speaks to what true and everlasting love is. Amazing!--Christina
November 21st, 2016 16:37
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem. It speaks to what true and everlasting love is. Amazing!--Christina
November 21st, 2016 16:37
I had a life
Augustus said:
Well written, thought provoking, powerful yet sweet and gentle.
November 16th, 2016 14:50
Augustus said:
Well written, thought provoking, powerful yet sweet and gentle.
November 16th, 2016 14:50
I had a life
willyweed said:
this is a very interesting take, I like it. write on ww.
November 16th, 2016 11:16
willyweed said:
this is a very interesting take, I like it. write on ww.
November 16th, 2016 11:16
I wrote this just for you
willyweed said:
well done with good advise.
peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:18
willyweed said:
well done with good advise.
peace ww.
November 15th, 2016 16:18
My poetess
Augustus said:
That you make peautiful poetry together. When someone accepts us with all our warts we can share ourselves completely and be better than what we are. When they were created the mold was broken. They are one of a kind. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
October 17th, 2016 08:05
Augustus said:
That you make peautiful poetry together. When someone accepts us with all our warts we can share ourselves completely and be better than what we are. When they were created the mold was broken. They are one of a kind. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
October 17th, 2016 08:05
The lady in the flowers
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This was amazing....Just writing your work IS the copyright nowadays...nobody can take something that you have the hand written original to...I have all of mine
September 28th, 2016 08:23
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This was amazing....Just writing your work IS the copyright nowadays...nobody can take something that you have the hand written original to...I have all of mine
September 28th, 2016 08:23
Once upon a time
Augustus said:
It reminds me of oral history passed down through generations.
September 26th, 2016 15:38
Augustus said:
It reminds me of oral history passed down through generations.
September 26th, 2016 15:38
How to write a bad poem
Aa Harvey said:
Just to be clear with everyone, I'm not judging people for having errors in their poetry, everyone makes mistakes and I am first to admit I am not perfect and do not expect perfection. This was just inspired by reading many poems where the errors stopped me mid-sentence and ruined the flow of the poem for me. Do things your way and ignore what I say...
September 13th, 2016 17:34
Aa Harvey said:
Just to be clear with everyone, I'm not judging people for having errors in their poetry, everyone makes mistakes and I am first to admit I am not perfect and do not expect perfection. This was just inspired by reading many poems where the errors stopped me mid-sentence and ruined the flow of the poem for me. Do things your way and ignore what I say...
September 13th, 2016 17:34
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