Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
In Retrospect
arqios said:
This I truly get, including almost being killed by an abscessed tooth. It could be called grackle-mania. The tang of yellow mustard fills my lungs!
October 20th, 2023 05:28
arqios said:
This I truly get, including almost being killed by an abscessed tooth. It could be called grackle-mania. The tang of yellow mustard fills my lungs!
October 20th, 2023 05:28
In Retrospect
2781 said:
I can relate to loosing weight. If you can find a real 2nd hand leather belt you can keep knocking holes in it.
As for all other aliments, tell them to piss off.
October 20th, 2023 01:23
2781 said:
I can relate to loosing weight. If you can find a real 2nd hand leather belt you can keep knocking holes in it.
As for all other aliments, tell them to piss off.
October 20th, 2023 01:23
In Retrospect
Teddy.15 said:
Bologna? An excellent poem, to be down and out on the streets I\'ve never been but this poetic verse truly makes the reader see and feel the life before and after . ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:58
Teddy.15 said:
Bologna? An excellent poem, to be down and out on the streets I\'ve never been but this poetic verse truly makes the reader see and feel the life before and after . ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:58
In Retrospect
Parisab said:
Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my heart ache but kept my eyes open-those words deserve to be written in gold (and not mustard.)
You are a strong poet!
October 20th, 2023 00:53
Parisab said:
Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my heart ache but kept my eyes open-those words deserve to be written in gold (and not mustard.)
You are a strong poet!
October 20th, 2023 00:53
Waltzing Through Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
May she appear to you in reality soon Thomas.
Andy
October 20th, 2023 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May she appear to you in reality soon Thomas.
Andy
October 20th, 2023 00:44
Waltzing Through Memories
Parisab said:
Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You design the picture the dance of loneliness and longing so well in your poems, Thomas!
October 19th, 2023 12:13
Parisab said:
Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You design the picture the dance of loneliness and longing so well in your poems, Thomas!
October 19th, 2023 12:13
4 Walls
MendedFences27 said:
Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every person are distinctly theirs. As writers we prioritize our writing area. We spend a great deal of time imagining the abodes of others. Your \"4 Walls\" takes us on a journey through the times of your life, and seems to give a sense of desire to be free like \"that feral cat.\"
It\'s a most interesting journey, one that I thoroughly enjoyed, and hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting. - Phil A.
October 18th, 2023 18:38
MendedFences27 said:
Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every person are distinctly theirs. As writers we prioritize our writing area. We spend a great deal of time imagining the abodes of others. Your \"4 Walls\" takes us on a journey through the times of your life, and seems to give a sense of desire to be free like \"that feral cat.\"
It\'s a most interesting journey, one that I thoroughly enjoyed, and hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting. - Phil A.
October 18th, 2023 18:38
4 Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
Those four walls are so important to many of us Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those four walls are so important to many of us Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:17
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Parisab said:
Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and human way… “her eyes hated her face” and washing the eyes away from all that she had seen and hated about herself. One can discover so much more by reading this poem, more than once.
October 18th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and human way… “her eyes hated her face” and washing the eyes away from all that she had seen and hated about herself. One can discover so much more by reading this poem, more than once.
October 18th, 2023 02:13
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:07
4 Walls
Parisab said:
Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four walls” bringing a sense of security and warmth. The relief comes with the realization, that they also bring limitations in freedom and movement like the Gold fish inside a fish bowl. The Feral cat as the alter ego is still howling and telling the other (darker) side of the story outside of the four walls. Exquisite and rich work…
October 18th, 2023 01:58
Parisab said:
Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four walls” bringing a sense of security and warmth. The relief comes with the realization, that they also bring limitations in freedom and movement like the Gold fish inside a fish bowl. The Feral cat as the alter ego is still howling and telling the other (darker) side of the story outside of the four walls. Exquisite and rich work…
October 18th, 2023 01:58
4 Walls
Bobby O said:
Wow! There is so much here with purposely angled directional changes that require a prejudice and then a blank slate analyst. Gotta read it more. I salute the fact all the content is alive but I think it would me naive to state a certain ability to unravel. It’s a journey I’ll enjoy
October 18th, 2023 00:57
Bobby O said:
Wow! There is so much here with purposely angled directional changes that require a prejudice and then a blank slate analyst. Gotta read it more. I salute the fact all the content is alive but I think it would me naive to state a certain ability to unravel. It’s a journey I’ll enjoy
October 18th, 2023 00:57
4 Walls
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous poetry, what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger I was brought up in London in the 70/80/90 it\'s the simple things that catch our eye and ground us for sure. Your imagery is spectacular brought me to places I myself had forgotten. ❤️
October 18th, 2023 00:45
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous poetry, what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger I was brought up in London in the 70/80/90 it\'s the simple things that catch our eye and ground us for sure. Your imagery is spectacular brought me to places I myself had forgotten. ❤️
October 18th, 2023 00:45
4 Walls
LIZ said:
\"it\'s the simple things that bring me pleasure\" Yes indeed!!!
October 18th, 2023 00:23
LIZ said:
\"it\'s the simple things that bring me pleasure\" Yes indeed!!!
October 18th, 2023 00:23
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
aDarkerMind said:
a true poet of a modern world;
October 17th, 2023 16:10
aDarkerMind said:
a true poet of a modern world;
October 17th, 2023 16:10
Apathetic, Empathetic
John Lee said:
Yes! Lol.. I love it. I\'m more of a empathetic person myself.. poor mouse.
October 17th, 2023 15:51
John Lee said:
Yes! Lol.. I love it. I\'m more of a empathetic person myself.. poor mouse.
October 17th, 2023 15:51
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
LIZ said:
Oh I enjoyed this one....\"She saw too much, felt too much\". Beautiful!!!!
October 17th, 2023 09:56
LIZ said:
Oh I enjoyed this one....\"She saw too much, felt too much\". Beautiful!!!!
October 17th, 2023 09:56
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
novaa said:
Beautiful lines painting an evocative imagery. Nice write!
October 17th, 2023 06:09
novaa said:
Beautiful lines painting an evocative imagery. Nice write!
October 17th, 2023 06:09
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
sorenbarrett said:
You might want to check out my poem \"Mockingbird\"
October 17th, 2023 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
You might want to check out my poem \"Mockingbird\"
October 17th, 2023 05:21
Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird
sorenbarrett said:
I like mockingbirds and have watched them from mating, egg laying, raising their young and admire their loyalty and fighting spirit to defend what they have. Nice write
October 17th, 2023 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
I like mockingbirds and have watched them from mating, egg laying, raising their young and admire their loyalty and fighting spirit to defend what they have. Nice write
October 17th, 2023 05:19
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