Not ready, yet?
Introverted Sage said:

Beautiful!

March 3rd, 2024 15:33

Coffee shop
rhmn_7 said:

Coffee shops are full with different tastes and memories..

March 3rd, 2024 08:09

Coffee shop
Cassie58 said:

Coffee and cake in a beautiful setting sounds like a bit of bliss to me. Can’t resist stopping for seconds. A scrummy write Alan. Have a happy weekend.

March 2nd, 2024 08:50

I escaped, barely
Neville said:


that\'s one very lucky escape mister .. enjoy that freedom & then some .. I know I enjoyed being here ..

March 1st, 2024 07:05

Cigar
Cassie58 said:

Ah love, now is there a magic formula Alan? I don’t think so. Trial and error:) Have a happy Monday. I enjoyed reading your lines:)

February 26th, 2024 07:05

Reflection
rhmn_7 said:

So many mirrors reflecting your inner self, that I was not aware of. Nice poetry!

February 25th, 2024 08:59

Reflection
Cloie said:

Your poem captures the elusive dance of self-perception brilliantly! It\'s like a whirlwind tour through the maze of mirrors, where truth and illusion intertwine. Keep shedding light on life\'s enigmas!

February 25th, 2024 05:16

Dead or Alive
Kieron said:

After the Israelites escaped the tyranny of Egypt, didn’t it take 40 years of wandering the desert before they came to the Promised Land? Have faith that your rebirth will come—though hopefully much sooner than 40 years :P

February 24th, 2024 08:22

Space in Time
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Time flies.

February 21st, 2024 15:58

Space in Time
David Wakeling said:

This is an amazing work.It made me think.Well done

February 21st, 2024 05:19

Color coded cliché
Thomas W Case said:

Great one.

February 20th, 2024 22:12

Don\'t make me choose
Kieron said:

Reading this reminded me of something that I heard on the radio last night, in a programme about George Eliot and her characters, one of which discussed was Dorothea. I have done a quick search for the segment, but the programme is very long. I have found this one, which may or may not be the one that I recall hearing: \"Particularly if you\'re not reading very well, and particularly at the beginning, she can feel a bit two-dimensional because of her moral strength. But the novel is her discovering the three-dimensionality of her own life and of other people\'s reality. That\'s what\'s happening, that\'s her character arc: that she starts off with this rather black-and-white view of the world and of humanity, but, as she achieves maturity, her maturity is not about sexuality and marriage; it\'s about the multidimensionality of being human, of recognizing the reality of other people.\"

Thanks for your poem, Alan.

February 18th, 2024 05:04

Who\'s the best poet?
Lorenz said:

In poetry I don\'t trust !

February 17th, 2024 05:24

Who\'s the best poet?
Introverted Sage said:

an incessant desire indeed!
good write!

February 17th, 2024 02:41

Valentine\'s Verve
Kieron said:

I like the contrasting main images of perfume and gifts, and baking bread. Lovely.

February 16th, 2024 13:53