Comments received on poems by Alan R
I could never
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
Don\'t blame your Heart
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and your reflection 😊
January 29th, 2024 08:31
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and your reflection 😊
January 29th, 2024 08:31
Don\'t blame your Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks wisdom. Heart and mind are not one of a kind. The mind defined and the heart blind.
January 29th, 2024 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks wisdom. Heart and mind are not one of a kind. The mind defined and the heart blind.
January 29th, 2024 08:03
Poetic Injustice
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Poetic Injustice
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
Blue sky Pink
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful to see such reflections through your eyes. Thanks for reading and for your kind words 🙂
January 25th, 2024 04:05
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful to see such reflections through your eyes. Thanks for reading and for your kind words 🙂
January 25th, 2024 04:05
Blue sky Pink
Cassie58 said:
It never ceases to amaze me the colours that wash across the sky. I have seen so many glorious shades. Pink is so warm against a background of blue. I love it when the colours are reflected in water. Have seen some marvelous sunsets in river water, sunrises too. Your poem took me there. Have a good Thursday Alan.
January 25th, 2024 03:40
Cassie58 said:
It never ceases to amaze me the colours that wash across the sky. I have seen so many glorious shades. Pink is so warm against a background of blue. I love it when the colours are reflected in water. Have seen some marvelous sunsets in river water, sunrises too. Your poem took me there. Have a good Thursday Alan.
January 25th, 2024 03:40
Love got to her
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and for your reflection...have a nice day!
January 23rd, 2024 08:09
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and for your reflection...have a nice day!
January 23rd, 2024 08:09
Love got to her
Cassie58 said:
When love is broken , we are a shell of our former selves. Love makes the world go round. When it breaks, our world stops. That’s where your lines took me. Have a lovely day Alan.
January 23rd, 2024 05:27
Cassie58 said:
When love is broken , we are a shell of our former selves. Love makes the world go round. When it breaks, our world stops. That’s where your lines took me. Have a lovely day Alan.
January 23rd, 2024 05:27
Ghost of an Action
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Inspiration
Gregoria said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Gregoria said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Saved
Gregoria said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
Gregoria said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
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