Comments received on poems by Alan R
Valentine\'s Verve
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that not only contains beauty but wisdom
February 15th, 2024 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that not only contains beauty but wisdom
February 15th, 2024 08:18
Took the wrong train
Neville said:
some of us learn the hard way .. let that be a lesson to ya ..
February 14th, 2024 03:44
Neville said:
some of us learn the hard way .. let that be a lesson to ya ..
February 14th, 2024 03:44
Poetic Injustice
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Poetic injustice” by Alan R.
Language has its inherent limitations. It can only convey or say so much. It can never say entirely what we feel or think. Strangely, the unspoken words say more and are more impactful : the look in the eyes, the expression on the face… These have bigger and more lasting impacts. Tears, too, are more powerful than words. Tears are a powerful tool of babies. They don’t do it deliberately; it’s part of human instincts and human means of seeking help or attention. Soman Ragavan. 14 February, 2024.
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February 14th, 2024 01:53
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Poetic injustice” by Alan R.
Language has its inherent limitations. It can only convey or say so much. It can never say entirely what we feel or think. Strangely, the unspoken words say more and are more impactful : the look in the eyes, the expression on the face… These have bigger and more lasting impacts. Tears, too, are more powerful than words. Tears are a powerful tool of babies. They don’t do it deliberately; it’s part of human instincts and human means of seeking help or attention. Soman Ragavan. 14 February, 2024.
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February 14th, 2024 01:53
A Silent Crash
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading, indeed that\'s what I was trying...
February 12th, 2024 15:44
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading, indeed that\'s what I was trying...
February 12th, 2024 15:44
A Silent Crash
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful write. You convey anxiety well.
February 12th, 2024 15:43
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful write. You convey anxiety well.
February 12th, 2024 15:43
Lost & Found
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir .. and very much so .. Neville
February 6th, 2024 04:05
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir .. and very much so .. Neville
February 6th, 2024 04:05
I could never
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
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