Comments received on poems by Alan R
Ghost of an Action
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Inspiration
Calliope said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Calliope said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Saved
Calliope said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
Calliope said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
Behind the eyes
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for reading, for your reflection and appreciation 🙂
January 17th, 2024 03:36
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for reading, for your reflection and appreciation 🙂
January 17th, 2024 03:36
Behind the eyes
Cassie58 said:
It!s a pity we can’t switch our dreams on and off like the tv. At times they can be upsetting and unsettling. All that stuff churning away in our heads. We have no control over it. Hopefully they will fade into the background soon. Nicely narrated lines.
January 17th, 2024 03:33
Cassie58 said:
It!s a pity we can’t switch our dreams on and off like the tv. At times they can be upsetting and unsettling. All that stuff churning away in our heads. We have no control over it. Hopefully they will fade into the background soon. Nicely narrated lines.
January 17th, 2024 03:33
Cornflower
Cassie58 said:
The cornflower is a favourite of mine. A beautiful blue. Fresh flowers are bound to lift blue moods and they are a gift of love too. A lovely poem Al.
January 17th, 2024 02:39
Cassie58 said:
The cornflower is a favourite of mine. A beautiful blue. Fresh flowers are bound to lift blue moods and they are a gift of love too. A lovely poem Al.
January 17th, 2024 02:39
Immortalized
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely poem. That first like was just perfect.
January 15th, 2024 03:39
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely poem. That first like was just perfect.
January 15th, 2024 03:39
Muse
Neville said:
One can very easily beat an egg and a drum & at a push, a rug or a carpet .. But you just can\'t beat a decent bit of erotica .. Neville
January 11th, 2024 02:59
Neville said:
One can very easily beat an egg and a drum & at a push, a rug or a carpet .. But you just can\'t beat a decent bit of erotica .. Neville
January 11th, 2024 02:59
Shape of life
Introverted Sage said:
\'Redeem this passion to stay out of the maze\'...
If that\'s not the truth!
Good write!
January 9th, 2024 01:38
Introverted Sage said:
\'Redeem this passion to stay out of the maze\'...
If that\'s not the truth!
Good write!
January 9th, 2024 01:38
Do me, honey
sorenbarrett said:
Alternate ways to see the universe about us. Great follow through.
January 4th, 2024 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
Alternate ways to see the universe about us. Great follow through.
January 4th, 2024 08:29
School
Alan R said:
Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words 😊
January 3rd, 2024 04:45
Alan R said:
Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words 😊
January 3rd, 2024 04:45
School
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this piece and its presentation. Liked the repetitive ending of each stanza and the message from each idiom. It\'s somewhat vague ending is great leaving it up to the reader to interpret.
January 3rd, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this piece and its presentation. Liked the repetitive ending of each stanza and the message from each idiom. It\'s somewhat vague ending is great leaving it up to the reader to interpret.
January 3rd, 2024 04:38
Prince charming
Cassie58 said:
Some things aren’t meant to be. It can take time and pain to adjust to that. Very nicely composed. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
Cassie58 said:
Some things aren’t meant to be. It can take time and pain to adjust to that. Very nicely composed. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
Prince charming
Rocky Lagou said:
This is precious. Sentiments overlap, yet all culminate in a beautiful moment: a realization. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2024 03:17
Rocky Lagou said:
This is precious. Sentiments overlap, yet all culminate in a beautiful moment: a realization. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2024 03:17
Music
Calliope said:
Nice . When 2 artistic people come together it\'s another level of deepness. When they express feelings either with words or music, love never dies. O wish O could finally hear his song, promised to me...💙💛
December 31st, 2023 18:01
Calliope said:
Nice . When 2 artistic people come together it\'s another level of deepness. When they express feelings either with words or music, love never dies. O wish O could finally hear his song, promised to me...💙💛
December 31st, 2023 18:01
For a living
Alan R said:
Yes, I am usually always looking for answers... can\'t help it
December 31st, 2023 13:27
Alan R said:
Yes, I am usually always looking for answers... can\'t help it
December 31st, 2023 13:27
For a living
sorenbarrett said:
I like poems that ask questions. The repetitive asking of the one question gives great emphasis and provokes more thought.
December 31st, 2023 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
I like poems that ask questions. The repetitive asking of the one question gives great emphasis and provokes more thought.
December 31st, 2023 12:50
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