Comments received on poems by Alan R
Poetic Injustice
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Poetic Injustice
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
Blue sky Pink
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful to see such reflections through your eyes. Thanks for reading and for your kind words 🙂
January 25th, 2024 04:05
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful to see such reflections through your eyes. Thanks for reading and for your kind words 🙂
January 25th, 2024 04:05
Blue sky Pink
Cassie58 said:
It never ceases to amaze me the colours that wash across the sky. I have seen so many glorious shades. Pink is so warm against a background of blue. I love it when the colours are reflected in water. Have seen some marvelous sunsets in river water, sunrises too. Your poem took me there. Have a good Thursday Alan.
January 25th, 2024 03:40
Cassie58 said:
It never ceases to amaze me the colours that wash across the sky. I have seen so many glorious shades. Pink is so warm against a background of blue. I love it when the colours are reflected in water. Have seen some marvelous sunsets in river water, sunrises too. Your poem took me there. Have a good Thursday Alan.
January 25th, 2024 03:40
Love got to her
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and for your reflection...have a nice day!
January 23rd, 2024 08:09
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and for your reflection...have a nice day!
January 23rd, 2024 08:09
Love got to her
Cassie58 said:
When love is broken , we are a shell of our former selves. Love makes the world go round. When it breaks, our world stops. That’s where your lines took me. Have a lovely day Alan.
January 23rd, 2024 05:27
Cassie58 said:
When love is broken , we are a shell of our former selves. Love makes the world go round. When it breaks, our world stops. That’s where your lines took me. Have a lovely day Alan.
January 23rd, 2024 05:27
Ghost of an Action
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Neville said:
a brilliant title heading a delightfully reflective little gem ..
January 18th, 2024 07:05
Inspiration
Gregoria said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Gregoria said:
\" It hit me , like you\'re mine\"- the illusion I have no power to let go of .
January 17th, 2024 06:20
Saved
Gregoria said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
Gregoria said:
It\'s deep...I\'m not the one who was saved and killed by him... perhaps 💜💜💜.
January 17th, 2024 06:18
Behind the eyes
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for reading, for your reflection and appreciation 🙂
January 17th, 2024 03:36
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for reading, for your reflection and appreciation 🙂
January 17th, 2024 03:36
Behind the eyes
Cassie58 said:
It!s a pity we can’t switch our dreams on and off like the tv. At times they can be upsetting and unsettling. All that stuff churning away in our heads. We have no control over it. Hopefully they will fade into the background soon. Nicely narrated lines.
January 17th, 2024 03:33
Cassie58 said:
It!s a pity we can’t switch our dreams on and off like the tv. At times they can be upsetting and unsettling. All that stuff churning away in our heads. We have no control over it. Hopefully they will fade into the background soon. Nicely narrated lines.
January 17th, 2024 03:33
Cornflower
Cassie58 said:
The cornflower is a favourite of mine. A beautiful blue. Fresh flowers are bound to lift blue moods and they are a gift of love too. A lovely poem Al.
January 17th, 2024 02:39
Cassie58 said:
The cornflower is a favourite of mine. A beautiful blue. Fresh flowers are bound to lift blue moods and they are a gift of love too. A lovely poem Al.
January 17th, 2024 02:39
Immortalized
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely poem. That first like was just perfect.
January 15th, 2024 03:39
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely poem. That first like was just perfect.
January 15th, 2024 03:39
Muse
Neville said:
One can very easily beat an egg and a drum & at a push, a rug or a carpet .. But you just can\'t beat a decent bit of erotica .. Neville
January 11th, 2024 02:59
Neville said:
One can very easily beat an egg and a drum & at a push, a rug or a carpet .. But you just can\'t beat a decent bit of erotica .. Neville
January 11th, 2024 02:59
Shape of life
Introverted Sage said:
\'Redeem this passion to stay out of the maze\'...
If that\'s not the truth!
Good write!
January 9th, 2024 01:38
Introverted Sage said:
\'Redeem this passion to stay out of the maze\'...
If that\'s not the truth!
Good write!
January 9th, 2024 01:38
Do me, honey
sorenbarrett said:
Alternate ways to see the universe about us. Great follow through.
January 4th, 2024 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
Alternate ways to see the universe about us. Great follow through.
January 4th, 2024 08:29
School
Alan R said:
Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words 😊
January 3rd, 2024 04:45
Alan R said:
Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words 😊
January 3rd, 2024 04:45
School
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this piece and its presentation. Liked the repetitive ending of each stanza and the message from each idiom. It\'s somewhat vague ending is great leaving it up to the reader to interpret.
January 3rd, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this piece and its presentation. Liked the repetitive ending of each stanza and the message from each idiom. It\'s somewhat vague ending is great leaving it up to the reader to interpret.
January 3rd, 2024 04:38
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