Comments received on poems by Alan R
Lost & Found
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir .. and very much so .. Neville
February 6th, 2024 04:05
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir .. and very much so .. Neville
February 6th, 2024 04:05
I could never
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument. It\'s this kind of piece that weaves its way into me the more I repeatedly read it. Not because I didn\'t understand it, but because like a rare song, it gets more beautiful and familiar each time it goes through me. This poem embodies the picture, the person, the village, and the affection of it all so well and with earnest. I love this piece. Very well depicted, gifted one.
February 2nd, 2024 05:13
Don\'t blame your Heart
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and your reflection 😊
January 29th, 2024 08:31
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and your reflection 😊
January 29th, 2024 08:31
Don\'t blame your Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks wisdom. Heart and mind are not one of a kind. The mind defined and the heart blind.
January 29th, 2024 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks wisdom. Heart and mind are not one of a kind. The mind defined and the heart blind.
January 29th, 2024 08:03
Poetic Injustice
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Alan R said:
Thanks for reading and being so patient with it 😊 Its a poem about how incomplete my writing feels to me. It\'s about how I am unable to fully describe what I want to describe, no matter how many different ways I try, to do so. Human language limitations, biases, strengths and weaknesses, make me feel, incompetent in expressing the things hard to define...The plethora of feelings...so hard to contain and describe at times...specially when I write...Time also feels like a limiting factor....for eg. When I write about love, it never fully describes all that my heart feels.
January 28th, 2024 01:17
Poetic Injustice
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have gone into that piece of yours.
I\'m just a little unsure of the message.
January 28th, 2024 00:37
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