Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Poor and Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of metaphor enhances this poem and is brilliant in its usage. Masterfully done
November 13th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of metaphor enhances this poem and is brilliant in its usage. Masterfully done
November 13th, 2024 04:48
Chains and Hunger
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
November 13th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
November 13th, 2024 04:45
A violent gun
sorenbarrett said:
Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for him control or at least restraint. A beautiful and powerful write
November 13th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for him control or at least restraint. A beautiful and powerful write
November 13th, 2024 04:41
Hearts That Break
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
A violent gun
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
Hearts That Break
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
Chains and Hunger
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
Poor and Forgotten
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant 😢 , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! 💯
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant 😢 , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! 💯
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Storm
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Walking
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
Songbird
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
Forest Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
A walk
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
Angel Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
Rumors
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
The quiet
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
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