Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a feel of antiquity. It takes one back through time, but mentions that time keeps going on. There is a sense of urgency with it as well. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a feel of antiquity. It takes one back through time, but mentions that time keeps going on. There is a sense of urgency with it as well. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely last line to ponder. Many of us talk of gradations when in fact, it is not necessary. It is the due or do not like or not like that counts. Very nicely expressed.
November 19th, 2024 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely last line to ponder. Many of us talk of gradations when in fact, it is not necessary. It is the due or do not like or not like that counts. Very nicely expressed.
November 19th, 2024 14:13
Stigma
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written in paradox this poem calls out for understanding. It reads as almost a prophecy.
November 18th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written in paradox this poem calls out for understanding. It reads as almost a prophecy.
November 18th, 2024 05:48
Failing Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this poem emits. Nicely done
November 17th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this poem emits. Nicely done
November 17th, 2024 05:29
Failing Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
Iām most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
November 16th, 2024 19:59
sorenbarrett said:
Iām most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
November 16th, 2024 19:59
Hearts That Break
Dan Williams said:
Whew. Lots here. \"For time has lost us in the wind,
And blown us back to dust,
My love, thou taught me near to sin,
Forget you though I must.\" is kind of the story of my life.
Thanks for this.
November 14th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
Whew. Lots here. \"For time has lost us in the wind,
And blown us back to dust,
My love, thou taught me near to sin,
Forget you though I must.\" is kind of the story of my life.
Thanks for this.
November 14th, 2024 00:34
Hearts That Break
JuneM said:
Amazing poem, I could envision and feel every emotion and thought put in this, a wonderful write =) I hope the pain eases with time
November 13th, 2024 15:02
JuneM said:
Amazing poem, I could envision and feel every emotion and thought put in this, a wonderful write =) I hope the pain eases with time
November 13th, 2024 15:02
Albina
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of deep love and highest steam, as well as a pledge for the continuance of such. Nicely worded and stated.
November 13th, 2024 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of deep love and highest steam, as well as a pledge for the continuance of such. Nicely worded and stated.
November 13th, 2024 07:31
Poor and Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of metaphor enhances this poem and is brilliant in its usage. Masterfully done
November 13th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of metaphor enhances this poem and is brilliant in its usage. Masterfully done
November 13th, 2024 04:48
Chains and Hunger
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
November 13th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
November 13th, 2024 04:45
A violent gun
sorenbarrett said:
Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for him control or at least restraint. A beautiful and powerful write
November 13th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for him control or at least restraint. A beautiful and powerful write
November 13th, 2024 04:41
Hearts That Break
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
A violent gun
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
Hearts That Break
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
Chains and Hunger
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
Poor and Forgotten
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! š®
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant š¢ , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! šÆ
Best regards peace āļø. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! š®
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant š¢ , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! šÆ
Best regards peace āļø. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Storm
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Walking
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
Songbird
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
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