Comments received on poems by RSM0812
My Daisy
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
My Daisy
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem evokes a sense of timelessness, as it references both night and day, suggesting that beauty exists across different times.
April 19th, 2026 06:34
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem evokes a sense of timelessness, as it references both night and day, suggesting that beauty exists across different times.
April 19th, 2026 06:34
Death My Love
marissa said:
Somethings telling me the story behind this write is a deep one.The emotions you flowed through were so real,great read!
April 18th, 2026 14:59
marissa said:
Somethings telling me the story behind this write is a deep one.The emotions you flowed through were so real,great read!
April 18th, 2026 14:59
Death My Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem walks in the surreal exploring the scenery of the existential. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem walks in the surreal exploring the scenery of the existential. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:43
The Forest Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Pictured and imaged nicely this poem presents a lovely portrayal of nature.
April 17th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Pictured and imaged nicely this poem presents a lovely portrayal of nature.
April 17th, 2026 06:50
Eyes of Mars
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around the complex interplay of love, remorse, longing, and the natural world.
April 16th, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around the complex interplay of love, remorse, longing, and the natural world.
April 16th, 2026 08:55
Eyes of Mars
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and surreal in its beauty this poem speaks of flowing wonders collected. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and surreal in its beauty this poem speaks of flowing wonders collected. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 06:34
Rose Repose
arqios said:
The ‘angels dancing upon thorns,’ that’s what did it for me! 🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:23
arqios said:
The ‘angels dancing upon thorns,’ that’s what did it for me! 🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:23
Rose Repose
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on a withered flower in a garden, representing fragility, sorrow, and the natural cycle of life and death. You painted an imagery of angels, weeping petals, and nesting birds, which suggests a connection to spirituality, nature, and the hope of regeneration.
April 15th, 2026 10:47
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on a withered flower in a garden, representing fragility, sorrow, and the natural cycle of life and death. You painted an imagery of angels, weeping petals, and nesting birds, which suggests a connection to spirituality, nature, and the hope of regeneration.
April 15th, 2026 10:47
Rose Repose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the beauty of the real world with the fantasy and imagined angelic. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the beauty of the real world with the fantasy and imagined angelic. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 06:31
Blooming flower
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem centers around flowers as symbols of growth and emotional connection, particularly focusing on the nurturing aspect of love and the risks that come with it.
April 14th, 2026 17:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem centers around flowers as symbols of growth and emotional connection, particularly focusing on the nurturing aspect of love and the risks that come with it.
April 14th, 2026 17:40
Blooming flower
sorenbarrett said:
Very visual and rhythmic in its rhyme. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Very visual and rhythmic in its rhyme. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:46
Iran
Doggerel Dave said:
The current situation is beyond words, but I thank you for having a go.
April 13th, 2026 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
The current situation is beyond words, but I thank you for having a go.
April 13th, 2026 18:02
Iran
Abdullah123 said:
Thank you so much for speaking up. If onyl our leaders understand this too.
Great write
April 13th, 2026 06:44
Abdullah123 said:
Thank you so much for speaking up. If onyl our leaders understand this too.
Great write
April 13th, 2026 06:44
Iran
RSM0812 said:
Are our children going to trained to uselessly hide under their desks again?
April 13th, 2026 06:43
RSM0812 said:
Are our children going to trained to uselessly hide under their desks again?
April 13th, 2026 06:43
Iran
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem about the state of affairs in this world. Well written
April 13th, 2026 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem about the state of affairs in this world. Well written
April 13th, 2026 06:37
Rules of Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem sets a definite mood. It paints its picture well. Loved it a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem sets a definite mood. It paints its picture well. Loved it a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:55
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