Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Weeping Rose
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the interplay between love, nature, and the passage of time. It conveys a sense of longing and reflection on the beauty and transience of love, using the garden as a metaphor for growth and decay.
March 6th, 2026 07:50
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the interplay between love, nature, and the passage of time. It conveys a sense of longing and reflection on the beauty and transience of love, using the garden as a metaphor for growth and decay.
March 6th, 2026 07:50
Weeping Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes me feel stupid yet tickles feelings unnamed, shakes the dust out of old rugs and opens doors on cobweb closets. It brings light that exposes little but feels so good to be aired out. It is one of those mysterious poems that come every blue moon that just leaves one feeling better for being too dumb to understand it. Nicely done and a fave
March 6th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes me feel stupid yet tickles feelings unnamed, shakes the dust out of old rugs and opens doors on cobweb closets. It brings light that exposes little but feels so good to be aired out. It is one of those mysterious poems that come every blue moon that just leaves one feeling better for being too dumb to understand it. Nicely done and a fave
March 6th, 2026 03:46
Death of Roses
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image may well be a rose or a metaphor for love itself. Nicely framed in good meter and rhyme it is a fave
March 5th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image may well be a rose or a metaphor for love itself. Nicely framed in good meter and rhyme it is a fave
March 5th, 2026 04:43
Duration of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of the chaos of nature to me. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of the chaos of nature to me. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 06:39
Untitled
RSM0812 said:
Hi Sorenbarrett. Do u know how to find a specific poet on this site? The search engine only brings up titled poetry.
March 3rd, 2026 21:47
RSM0812 said:
Hi Sorenbarrett. Do u know how to find a specific poet on this site? The search engine only brings up titled poetry.
March 3rd, 2026 21:47
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
There is a weaving of the words, their sounds, meaning all creating a strange fabric that\'s pattern I can not identify but that draws me in and for the haunting feeling a fave
March 3rd, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is a weaving of the words, their sounds, meaning all creating a strange fabric that\'s pattern I can not identify but that draws me in and for the haunting feeling a fave
March 3rd, 2026 04:56
The Garden Gate
sorenbarrett said:
The gate is the portal for entry and exit. A lovely poem about protection. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
The gate is the portal for entry and exit. A lovely poem about protection. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 19:04
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A moral lessen woven in this nicely worded poem with rhyme and great flow. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
A moral lessen woven in this nicely worded poem with rhyme and great flow. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2026 05:15
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of impending threat as if karma was speaking. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of impending threat as if karma was speaking. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 11:45
Generosity
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a reflection and the question is whether it is of internal or external issues. Well written
February 26th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a reflection and the question is whether it is of internal or external issues. Well written
February 26th, 2026 10:01
Eternal Love
sorenbarrett said:
A true poetic love letter is in this poem. Nicely constructed it rings with rhyme. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
A true poetic love letter is in this poem. Nicely constructed it rings with rhyme. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 15:00
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a torturous journey. Written with great images and setting. Well done
February 22nd, 2026 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a torturous journey. Written with great images and setting. Well done
February 22nd, 2026 19:54
The Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Hope\'s flaws the desperation in faith. Nicely written
February 19th, 2026 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
Hope\'s flaws the desperation in faith. Nicely written
February 19th, 2026 12:32
The Spring
sorenbarrett said:
Ah spring a time of festivals and of new life. Well painted in this piece it breaths fresh air and bids a sunny day. Nicely written
February 16th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Ah spring a time of festivals and of new life. Well painted in this piece it breaths fresh air and bids a sunny day. Nicely written
February 16th, 2026 08:34
Lonely Star
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem explores themes of loss, despair, and the longing for hope amid darkness. It reflects on the fragility of truth and beauty in a world overshadowed by pain and sorrow.
February 15th, 2026 18:17
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem explores themes of loss, despair, and the longing for hope amid darkness. It reflects on the fragility of truth and beauty in a world overshadowed by pain and sorrow.
February 15th, 2026 18:17
Lonely Star
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a roller coaster of falling darkness with its dips and climbs with rhyme and beating meter. Nicely said
February 15th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a roller coaster of falling darkness with its dips and climbs with rhyme and beating meter. Nicely said
February 15th, 2026 14:48
Lonely Star
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
impossible mission to clearly decipher as what appeared as amorphous, yet in a way that worded chaos perhaps analogous to how the universe came into once, twice, thrice...but even if way off the mark regarding my interpretation, i did relish rhyming pattern and lengthy mental exercise though as iterated above the vagueness possibly metaphorical for just the random entropy within which the cosmos thrives.
February 15th, 2026 13:45
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
impossible mission to clearly decipher as what appeared as amorphous, yet in a way that worded chaos perhaps analogous to how the universe came into once, twice, thrice...but even if way off the mark regarding my interpretation, i did relish rhyming pattern and lengthy mental exercise though as iterated above the vagueness possibly metaphorical for just the random entropy within which the cosmos thrives.
February 15th, 2026 13:45
Tortourous Hell
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, surreal, dark and angry this poem casts a shadow that darkens turning black as coal. Although the conscience may burn and torment worse than physical pain from past cankers of acts and though one may pick these emotional scabs the devil is in the details and is usually oneself. Good write
February 14th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, surreal, dark and angry this poem casts a shadow that darkens turning black as coal. Although the conscience may burn and torment worse than physical pain from past cankers of acts and though one may pick these emotional scabs the devil is in the details and is usually oneself. Good write
February 14th, 2026 06:18
Sifting Universe
sorenbarrett said:
Replete with biblical references this poem speaks to me of good and evil and as the last line reveals that evil may be stronger.
February 13th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Replete with biblical references this poem speaks to me of good and evil and as the last line reveals that evil may be stronger.
February 13th, 2026 11:25
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about love it speaks of it as eternal. Nicely worded.
February 12th, 2026 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about love it speaks of it as eternal. Nicely worded.
February 12th, 2026 15:05
Kiss from an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian vision presented in this poem of heaven. Nicely written
February 11th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian vision presented in this poem of heaven. Nicely written
February 11th, 2026 15:29
The apple Tree
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of inner conflict, the struggle between moral righteousness and personal suffering, and the quest for understanding and redemption amidst chaos.
February 10th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of inner conflict, the struggle between moral righteousness and personal suffering, and the quest for understanding and redemption amidst chaos.
February 10th, 2026 07:57
The apple Tree
sorenbarrett said:
You wording in this poem combines with rhyme and meter to flow in power and grace and deserves a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
You wording in this poem combines with rhyme and meter to flow in power and grace and deserves a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:43
Silver Spoon
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of peace, silver to gold as star to sun traded nargentum. So nicely written with meaning and rhyme in good meter it is a fave
February 8th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of peace, silver to gold as star to sun traded nargentum. So nicely written with meaning and rhyme in good meter it is a fave
February 8th, 2026 05:05
Begotten Time
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and that of relationships as well in this poem nicely done
February 7th, 2026 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and that of relationships as well in this poem nicely done
February 7th, 2026 10:27
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