Comments received on poems by RSM0812
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Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
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sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
The Women at the Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
Julys Purple Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
The Boiled Black Sea
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
Behold a rose
Damaso said:
What beauty enjoyed it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:40
Damaso said:
What beauty enjoyed it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:40
Behold a rose
sorenbarrett said:
Classically set in the form of a rose and with accompanying language it in metaphor speaks of love. Well done and so common a theme I too am writing a poem now of the same subject.
July 1st, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Classically set in the form of a rose and with accompanying language it in metaphor speaks of love. Well done and so common a theme I too am writing a poem now of the same subject.
July 1st, 2025 09:02
Home
sorenbarrett said:
There is no place like home and although this poem seems literal in a sense it may be taken metaphorically as well. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is no place like home and although this poem seems literal in a sense it may be taken metaphorically as well. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 11:12
A Spring Storm
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
A Spring Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
Natures Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
From the Dragons Mouth
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
Fields of Daffodils
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
Truth and Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
The darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
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sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
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arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
Swcond Chances
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
Swcond Chances
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Swcond Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
Fields of Daffodils
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
Fields of Daffodils
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Fields of Daffodils
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Fields of Daffodils
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
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