Comments received on poems by RSM0812
A Spring Storm
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
A Spring Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
Natures Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
From the Dragons Mouth
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
Fields of Daffodils
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
Truth and Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
The darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
Untitled
arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
Swcond Chances
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
Swcond Chances
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Swcond Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
Fields of Daffodils
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
Fields of Daffodils
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Fields of Daffodils
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Fields of Daffodils
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
Fields of Daffodils
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really good write, RSM. I enjoyed the read.
June 18th, 2025 07:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really good write, RSM. I enjoyed the read.
June 18th, 2025 07:43
One Day at a Time
Damaso said:
What more perfect and pure piece! It is stunned, I can\'t believe it. Thanks for sharing. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:15
Damaso said:
What more perfect and pure piece! It is stunned, I can\'t believe it. Thanks for sharing. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:15
One Day at a Time
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that calls out tot he readers. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that calls out tot he readers. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 10:43
Damn it
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve done that before and it is most aggravating. Lucky I always have a spare.
June 15th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve done that before and it is most aggravating. Lucky I always have a spare.
June 15th, 2025 12:35
Untittled
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic dance that lingers in the mind\'s quiet space.
June 14th, 2025 13:05
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic dance that lingers in the mind\'s quiet space.
June 14th, 2025 13:05
Untittled
Poetic Licence said:
A call to a higher poem to stop the pretence and come clean with the truth, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
A call to a higher poem to stop the pretence and come clean with the truth, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 10:54
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of a relationship whether real of internal or with a higher power it asks for clarity and a dropping of masks. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of a relationship whether real of internal or with a higher power it asks for clarity and a dropping of masks. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 08:26
The belligerent
sorenbarrett said:
The poem itself is surreal and take one on a journey through the dark streets of mind\'s mist. A haunting and lovely write
June 13th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
The poem itself is surreal and take one on a journey through the dark streets of mind\'s mist. A haunting and lovely write
June 13th, 2025 08:22
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