Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Red rose in repose
sorenbarrett said:
Rose red a fairy tale a sleeping beauty another both seem to apply. Beauty taken to bed, slept on may leave the injuries of time wasted, a love that leads to picking what is of nature cutting its natural force leaving it to wilt and die. Awaken and foster our own beauty living in harmony with that of others. A lovely write.
December 27th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Rose red a fairy tale a sleeping beauty another both seem to apply. Beauty taken to bed, slept on may leave the injuries of time wasted, a love that leads to picking what is of nature cutting its natural force leaving it to wilt and die. Awaken and foster our own beauty living in harmony with that of others. A lovely write.
December 27th, 2025 08:24
Christmas in Hell
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of the odyssey of hell and its various aspects. Nicely pictured and imaged. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of the odyssey of hell and its various aspects. Nicely pictured and imaged. Well done
December 26th, 2025 03:44
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem points out the continuation of everything in everything else there is a sense of eternal unity in it. A lovely write
December 18th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem points out the continuation of everything in everything else there is a sense of eternal unity in it. A lovely write
December 18th, 2025 10:49
All is Love
sorenbarrett said:
A very nicely worded work filled with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done
December 17th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
A very nicely worded work filled with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done
December 17th, 2025 09:53
Wrath of God
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of a beautiful vision. So nicely set in a poetic style.
December 16th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of a beautiful vision. So nicely set in a poetic style.
December 16th, 2025 09:15
My Angel
sorenbarrett said:
There is more depth to this poem than first appears and it is revealed in the last two lines. To me is is the rational versus the irrational and emotional wish. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is more depth to this poem than first appears and it is revealed in the last two lines. To me is is the rational versus the irrational and emotional wish. Well done
December 15th, 2025 08:07
Mountain Peak
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a Hawaiian volcano. Great images
December 14th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a Hawaiian volcano. Great images
December 14th, 2025 17:06
Space Traveler
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem that talks to the reader about facing their own fears well done
December 13th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem that talks to the reader about facing their own fears well done
December 13th, 2025 12:07
This Christmas
NafisaSB said:
a really positive and uplifting poem. Merry X\'mas to you, and all the fellow poets...
December 12th, 2025 01:43
NafisaSB said:
a really positive and uplifting poem. Merry X\'mas to you, and all the fellow poets...
December 12th, 2025 01:43
Cresent Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! a lovely write with wonderful images so well set. Nicely done.
December 11th, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! a lovely write with wonderful images so well set. Nicely done.
December 11th, 2025 10:31
Sleepy Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
Creatures of the night set in a beautifully imaged poem. Very nicely done
December 10th, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Creatures of the night set in a beautifully imaged poem. Very nicely done
December 10th, 2025 07:43
Love Alone
Friendship said:
Metaphor, comparing love to something that can be lost or found, emphasizing its elusive nature.
December 9th, 2025 13:29
Friendship said:
Metaphor, comparing love to something that can be lost or found, emphasizing its elusive nature.
December 9th, 2025 13:29
Love Alone
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a sad poem to one that put his values in the wrong box and reaped what he had sowed. Well written
December 9th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a sad poem to one that put his values in the wrong box and reaped what he had sowed. Well written
December 9th, 2025 09:51
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A gem this poem is a small grain of the truth. Well written
December 8th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A gem this poem is a small grain of the truth. Well written
December 8th, 2025 07:11
An Angel Sighs
sorenbarrett said:
We all need such encouragement and from a divine source would not hurt either. A most lovely poem of support. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
We all need such encouragement and from a divine source would not hurt either. A most lovely poem of support. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 09:32
This Christmas
Neilton said:
Such a festive and Christmas mood!! Amazing poem and really conveys a Christmas comfort!
December 6th, 2025 13:32
Neilton said:
Such a festive and Christmas mood!! Amazing poem and really conveys a Christmas comfort!
December 6th, 2025 13:32
This Christmas
Bella Shepard said:
This poem of Christmas is filled with such joy, the magic of which comes but once a year. Thank you for these wonderful images that evoke the warmth and happiness of the season. Beautifully done!
December 6th, 2025 10:53
Bella Shepard said:
This poem of Christmas is filled with such joy, the magic of which comes but once a year. Thank you for these wonderful images that evoke the warmth and happiness of the season. Beautifully done!
December 6th, 2025 10:53
This Christmas
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem celebrates the joy and togetherness of the Christmas season,
December 6th, 2025 07:35
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem celebrates the joy and togetherness of the Christmas season,
December 6th, 2025 07:35
This Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter and a joy to read
December 6th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter and a joy to read
December 6th, 2025 07:04
Love and Death
sorenbarrett said:
A really beautiful write that has great images and rhyme. So well done a fave
December 5th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
A really beautiful write that has great images and rhyme. So well done a fave
December 5th, 2025 06:45
A Farmers Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of natures beauty and healing force. Well written in most poetic form with rhyme and good flow it speaks to me a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of natures beauty and healing force. Well written in most poetic form with rhyme and good flow it speaks to me a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:51
Turning Tides
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic description of beauty kept in the mind. Very nice images used in this poem
December 3rd, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic description of beauty kept in the mind. Very nice images used in this poem
December 3rd, 2025 15:45
Love and Life
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the juxtaposition of light and darkness, life and death, and the transient nature of existence. It explores the emotional complexities of the human experience, highlighting themes of grief, beauty, and the importance of living in the moment. The subject matter delves into the inner workings of the human soul, suggesting that life should be cherished and that one should seek beauty and understanding, even in times of despair.
December 2nd, 2025 05:55
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the juxtaposition of light and darkness, life and death, and the transient nature of existence. It explores the emotional complexities of the human experience, highlighting themes of grief, beauty, and the importance of living in the moment. The subject matter delves into the inner workings of the human soul, suggesting that life should be cherished and that one should seek beauty and understanding, even in times of despair.
December 2nd, 2025 05:55
Love and Life
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
Midnight Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
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