Comments received on poems by RSM0812
My Word is my Bond
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
Untitled
isa kemmy said:
its a great artistic display of sunset, i also liked sunset photographing with those closed to me, great write
July 14th, 2026 06:48
isa kemmy said:
its a great artistic display of sunset, i also liked sunset photographing with those closed to me, great write
July 14th, 2026 06:48
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Passion is a poem where physicality is expressed in touch. Nicely worded
July 13th, 2026 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
Passion is a poem where physicality is expressed in touch. Nicely worded
July 13th, 2026 07:14
Blinded Rath
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and imagery love your last lines they are powerful. 🌹
July 13th, 2026 01:45
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and imagery love your last lines they are powerful. 🌹
July 13th, 2026 01:45
Blinded Rath
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads as an incantation. It holds magic and flows well off the tongue, well done.
July 12th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads as an incantation. It holds magic and flows well off the tongue, well done.
July 12th, 2026 11:32
Enter Time
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its feel this poem is powerful in its wording. Well done
July 11th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its feel this poem is powerful in its wording. Well done
July 11th, 2026 07:57
The sleepy Tree
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem in the sense of images and natural beauty. Well done
July 9th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem in the sense of images and natural beauty. Well done
July 9th, 2026 19:02
Linger More
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost prayerlike and unfolds its story in good rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost prayerlike and unfolds its story in good rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 03:53
Restless Beauty
Friendship said:
A lovely poem. Your poem explores themes of unrequited love, longing, and the transcendence of beauty. You express the deep emotional connection between two souls who seem destined to meet but remain apart, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of their relationship.
July 6th, 2026 16:58
Friendship said:
A lovely poem. Your poem explores themes of unrequited love, longing, and the transcendence of beauty. You express the deep emotional connection between two souls who seem destined to meet but remain apart, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of their relationship.
July 6th, 2026 16:58
Calm Before the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Stormy images in this write. It seems metaphoric regarding a relationship turned cold and stormy. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Stormy images in this write. It seems metaphoric regarding a relationship turned cold and stormy. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:02
Twisted Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted indeed this poem convolutes the mind well done
July 4th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted indeed this poem convolutes the mind well done
July 4th, 2026 15:57
Till Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
An intoxicating poem of fantasy as surreal and dove\'s milk. Images flow in and out of this romantic dream. Lovely
June 30th, 2026 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
An intoxicating poem of fantasy as surreal and dove\'s milk. Images flow in and out of this romantic dream. Lovely
June 30th, 2026 14:22
The Dragonfly
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images well worded and rhymed with a very easy and nice flow. A fave
June 26th, 2026 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images well worded and rhymed with a very easy and nice flow. A fave
June 26th, 2026 18:55
Tremble the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
This poem emphasizes the contrast between those who have love and those that are lonely against a romantic backdrop for those with a love and the sharp reminder for those that have none. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem emphasizes the contrast between those who have love and those that are lonely against a romantic backdrop for those with a love and the sharp reminder for those that have none. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2026 06:32
Through an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of love set in a classic rhyme scheme well written.
June 23rd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of love set in a classic rhyme scheme well written.
June 23rd, 2026 04:33
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