Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Wife of Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the stone,
Our love, ne\'er to be undone.)
A most inspired write with deep metaphorical meaning
April 17th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the stone,
Our love, ne\'er to be undone.)
A most inspired write with deep metaphorical meaning
April 17th, 2025 06:21
Positive Side
sorenbarrett said:
Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very nicely stated
April 16th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very nicely stated
April 16th, 2025 13:28
Golden Rose
NafisaSB said:
the words flow out so beautifully, and touch the heart with its simplicity, and yet lovely imagery
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2025 00:00
NafisaSB said:
the words flow out so beautifully, and touch the heart with its simplicity, and yet lovely imagery
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2025 00:00
Howling Wolf
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and well written images that sends the message Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and well written images that sends the message Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 10:48
The Calm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very nicely done
April 11th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very nicely done
April 11th, 2025 09:25
My Love Taps with the Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and the sea. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and the sea. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 07:21
My Love Taps with the Moon
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoy reading your writings, this is another wonderful piece
April 10th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoy reading your writings, this is another wonderful piece
April 10th, 2025 07:11
Golden Rose
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely day write with beautiful imagery, reads really nicely and as is with the flower we evolve and eventually bloom, lovely write
April 9th, 2025 11:49
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely day write with beautiful imagery, reads really nicely and as is with the flower we evolve and eventually bloom, lovely write
April 9th, 2025 11:49
Golden Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a common subject yet so unique. It grows as the poem flows and with such wonderful imagery painted in detail that fits the metaphor so well. It evolves so nicely and patiently like the flower it blooms in poetic beauty and has to be a fave
April 9th, 2025 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a common subject yet so unique. It grows as the poem flows and with such wonderful imagery painted in detail that fits the metaphor so well. It evolves so nicely and patiently like the flower it blooms in poetic beauty and has to be a fave
April 9th, 2025 08:31
Rose
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write as the flower grows and the petals bloom so does love, both in all there beauty, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write as the flower grows and the petals bloom so does love, both in all there beauty, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 07:17
Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless metaphor here blooms fresh. So nicely crafted it like the rose shows its colors and opens its petals to the reader. So many wonderful lines with great rhyme and meter a pleasure to read.
April 8th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless metaphor here blooms fresh. So nicely crafted it like the rose shows its colors and opens its petals to the reader. So many wonderful lines with great rhyme and meter a pleasure to read.
April 8th, 2025 07:05
Heaven or Hell
Poetic Licence said:
Wow, that is some piece of writing, expressed so well, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
Wow, that is some piece of writing, expressed so well, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:35
Heaven or Hell
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic prophesy, they say that the word is God and was with him since the beginning. I believe God is a poet, he has to be to have created nature. A good solid poem that speaks with strength
April 7th, 2025 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic prophesy, they say that the word is God and was with him since the beginning. I believe God is a poet, he has to be to have created nature. A good solid poem that speaks with strength
April 7th, 2025 10:11
Loss and Gain
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write around redemption and forgiveness, nicely expressed
April 7th, 2025 02:18
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write around redemption and forgiveness, nicely expressed
April 7th, 2025 02:18
Loss and Gain
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
April 6th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
April 6th, 2025 11:56
Awaiting The Will
Poetic Licence said:
Ignorance is bliss until it is no more, and we all arrive at our final destination, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:17
Poetic Licence said:
Ignorance is bliss until it is no more, and we all arrive at our final destination, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:17
Awaiting The Will
sorenbarrett said:
The tree of knowledge has a price. They say ignorance is bliss and so it might be until it ends. Death is the stopping place. A deep write
April 5th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
The tree of knowledge has a price. They say ignorance is bliss and so it might be until it ends. Death is the stopping place. A deep write
April 5th, 2025 11:38
Untittled
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write that can have many meanings, enjoyed the flow of the read
April 4th, 2025 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write that can have many meanings, enjoyed the flow of the read
April 4th, 2025 12:27
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 11:07
Raindrop
Poetic Licence said:
Nature\'s life blood and cleanser, lovely imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
Nature\'s life blood and cleanser, lovely imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 10:42
Raindrop
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow) and missed the first comma reading it umbrella rainbow which was such an image the rainbow coming after the rain and a promise of protection. Great rhyme patterns internal and line end very nice and leaving a cleansing feeling
April 3rd, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow) and missed the first comma reading it umbrella rainbow which was such an image the rainbow coming after the rain and a promise of protection. Great rhyme patterns internal and line end very nice and leaving a cleansing feeling
April 3rd, 2025 08:19
Betterfly
Poetic Licence said:
You can see wonderful imagery as you read this delightful read, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:41
Poetic Licence said:
You can see wonderful imagery as you read this delightful read, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:41
Betterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
Decay
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Decay
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
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