Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Prayer
Poetic Licence said:

That is a lovely poetic write, enjoyed

March 26th, 2025 11:30

Prayer
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

March 26th, 2025 09:24

Prayer
sorenbarrett said:

This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and organization and well deserves a fave

March 26th, 2025 08:50

Fiery Hall
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 25th, 2025 09:51

Fiery Hall
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write although the images are haunting and sad they convey the story nicely, enjoyed the read

March 25th, 2025 05:44

Fiery Hall
sorenbarrett said:

This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor it matters not. It is ghostly and haunts the reader. Nicely worded with great images and vivid powerful words.

March 25th, 2025 04:17

Tapestyr
Lorenz said:

Wonderful chat gpt tapestry !

March 24th, 2025 16:02

Tapestyr
Poetic Licence said:

A thoroughly enjoyable and well written write

March 24th, 2025 07:14

Tapestyr
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem full of wonderful images and as a metaphor it works so well. Absolutely lovely

March 24th, 2025 06:19

The Will
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 23rd, 2025 14:04

Storm
sorenbarrett said:

Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally. Well written

March 23rd, 2025 11:55

The Will
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful intricate piece of writing, which will, will win, enjoyed the read

March 23rd, 2025 08:56

A Moment
RSM0812 said:

Thanks. I\'m delighted that you liked it. Thanks for the fav too!!

March 23rd, 2025 07:06

The Will
sorenbarrett said:

Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to be unwound in poetic words found. Brilliant!

March 23rd, 2025 05:49

A Moment
MR.apocalypse said:

this might be the best poem ive seen today.
the way i could easily understand your rhythm and rhyme.
the unique words give it a new an refreshing taste.
this is a phenomenal poem in my opinion


March 23rd, 2025 01:55

A Moment
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts. Well written with internal and end rhyme it echoes in the mind. Very nicely done

March 22nd, 2025 06:44

My Rose
sorenbarrett said:

This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A great painting and metaphor and well said

March 21st, 2025 06:44

Speeches Freedoms
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 20th, 2025 09:58

Speeches Freedoms
Poetic Licence said:

Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read

March 20th, 2025 05:00

Speeches Freedoms
sorenbarrett said:

Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely

March 20th, 2025 04:29

Winters Kiss
Neville said:



I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville

March 20th, 2025 03:16

Fake
Neville said:



I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville


March 20th, 2025 03:12

Fake
Poetic Licence said:

How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read

March 19th, 2025 12:08

Fake
sorenbarrett said:

A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded

March 19th, 2025 11:04

A women or a flower
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read

March 18th, 2025 12:58

A women or a flower
sorenbarrett said:

A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done

March 18th, 2025 12:08

700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
sorenbarrett said:

Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.

March 16th, 2025 07:13

700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write

March 16th, 2025 05:25

Relationship
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 15th, 2025 12:05

Relationship
Poetic Licence said:

The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed

March 15th, 2025 11:56

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