Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Cardinal and Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Charming this poem feels like something out of my childhood it feels maternal some way and from my childhood its rhyme carries me away to dream. Nicely done and a fave
June 17th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Charming this poem feels like something out of my childhood it feels maternal some way and from my childhood its rhyme carries me away to dream. Nicely done and a fave
June 17th, 2026 04:31
Until the Day of Scrutiny
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a an atypical love poem with rhyme and good flow that tells of natures love and beauty not just human in nature. Well written
June 16th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a an atypical love poem with rhyme and good flow that tells of natures love and beauty not just human in nature. Well written
June 16th, 2026 09:48
Devil Will
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem delves into concepts of eternal punishment, moral sacrifice, and the seductive nature of evil. It paints a vivid picture of a hellish existence where one\'s desires lead to destruction and despair.
June 15th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem delves into concepts of eternal punishment, moral sacrifice, and the seductive nature of evil. It paints a vivid picture of a hellish existence where one\'s desires lead to destruction and despair.
June 15th, 2026 07:57
Devil Will
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a witch\'s sabot, a demon\'s dream, the devils work well written
June 15th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a witch\'s sabot, a demon\'s dream, the devils work well written
June 15th, 2026 04:14
Beckoning Violence
sorenbarrett said:
I feel discontent with this poem as a theme. Yet there seems hope in the end. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
I feel discontent with this poem as a theme. Yet there seems hope in the end. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:42
Weeping Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal poetic images in each line this poem sets sail on strange seas. Well written
June 13th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal poetic images in each line this poem sets sail on strange seas. Well written
June 13th, 2026 04:05
Morning Song
Shah Asst said:
The worlds word, never changed… similar poetry on Motivation Shayari .
June 12th, 2026 07:13
Shah Asst said:
The worlds word, never changed… similar poetry on Motivation Shayari .
June 12th, 2026 07:13
Morning Song
sorenbarrett said:
Here states static and change interplay and one is left in a frozen form sheltered in sleep. Well done
June 12th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Here states static and change interplay and one is left in a frozen form sheltered in sleep. Well done
June 12th, 2026 04:14
The emporer and his games
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a dark feel that is at the same time carefree. It has a roll to the rhyme that helps keep the feel of it. Nicely done
June 11th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a dark feel that is at the same time carefree. It has a roll to the rhyme that helps keep the feel of it. Nicely done
June 11th, 2026 07:43
Monotone Choir
sorenbarrett said:
There is something almost Shakespearian in this poem its wording, its meter, and even its flow. Nicely done
June 10th, 2026 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is something almost Shakespearian in this poem its wording, its meter, and even its flow. Nicely done
June 10th, 2026 06:47
Soul Traveler
sorenbarrett said:
Whether physical, spiritual, mental we all travel in this life and often end far from where we begin. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
Whether physical, spiritual, mental we all travel in this life and often end far from where we begin. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:34
A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem in wording that feels classic of an emotion that has filtered through time. A lovely write and a fave
June 8th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem in wording that feels classic of an emotion that has filtered through time. A lovely write and a fave
June 8th, 2026 06:32
Natures Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Here the heart becomes surreal and takes on more than sympathy. Lovely
June 7th, 2026 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Here the heart becomes surreal and takes on more than sympathy. Lovely
June 7th, 2026 10:48
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that speaks poetically of angels and our journey onward. Well done
June 6th, 2026 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that speaks poetically of angels and our journey onward. Well done
June 6th, 2026 15:30
Neutral
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful thought. Well expressed
June 4th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful thought. Well expressed
June 4th, 2026 07:07
Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A restless poem of energy not contained and what is left behind. Nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A restless poem of energy not contained and what is left behind. Nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 06:24
Untitled
Durdica Porobija said:
An introspective, psychological poem that also highlights the existential question of why in a silent sky. Very moving!
May 30th, 2026 06:52
Durdica Porobija said:
An introspective, psychological poem that also highlights the existential question of why in a silent sky. Very moving!
May 30th, 2026 06:52
Ethreal Dawn
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Ethreal Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
Linger
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
The Bridge
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
The Bridge
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
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