Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Light and dark both needed or the other could not exist and so it is with love as well. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Light and dark both needed or the other could not exist and so it is with love as well. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 07:12
The Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
The mingling of love, death and a kiss seems romantic in a storybook way yet it is dark and with a realism that gives a warning to all that have the courage to enter into love. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
The mingling of love, death and a kiss seems romantic in a storybook way yet it is dark and with a realism that gives a warning to all that have the courage to enter into love. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 10:28
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Strength in unity, well written this poem speaks of love. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Strength in unity, well written this poem speaks of love. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 09:05
Lightning storm
Thomas W Case said:
This snaps and sparks like lightning over worn streets—images striking, jagged, and alive.
The rhythm jolts the reader, and the sense of inevitable turn carries a quiet, elemental weight.
February 1st, 2026 07:42
Thomas W Case said:
This snaps and sparks like lightning over worn streets—images striking, jagged, and alive.
The rhythm jolts the reader, and the sense of inevitable turn carries a quiet, elemental weight.
February 1st, 2026 07:42
Lightning storm
sorenbarrett said:
Do I hear a threat in this poem? It sounds menacing and a bit dark. Well written
February 1st, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Do I hear a threat in this poem? It sounds menacing and a bit dark. Well written
February 1st, 2026 06:26
Lasting Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love holds a tension up to the end. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love holds a tension up to the end. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 11:27
Good of kind
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in the feel of its meter and rhyme this poem sends its message to all. Well done
January 30th, 2026 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in the feel of its meter and rhyme this poem sends its message to all. Well done
January 30th, 2026 10:22
The Pilgrimage
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem encompasses themes of pilgrimage, longing for peace, the struggles of life, and the idea that true wealth is not monetary but rather found in spiritual fulfillment and communal harmony.
January 29th, 2026 08:10
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem encompasses themes of pilgrimage, longing for peace, the struggles of life, and the idea that true wealth is not monetary but rather found in spiritual fulfillment and communal harmony.
January 29th, 2026 08:10
The Pilgrimage
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded with a great meter. Loved it
January 29th, 2026 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded with a great meter. Loved it
January 29th, 2026 07:58
Forezt Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of nature and renewal very nicely worded
January 29th, 2026 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of nature and renewal very nicely worded
January 29th, 2026 03:01
No more tears
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prediction with wonderful images throughout. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prediction with wonderful images throughout. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 20:09
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
Happiness
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
The Dance
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
The Dance
sorenbarrett said:
A moment of exultation and excitement of soaring nicely described
January 18th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A moment of exultation and excitement of soaring nicely described
January 18th, 2026 12:36
My Bride
sorenbarrett said:
Oh how strong the passion we call love when first its new, how beautiful the flower bud and how shines new steel before corruption and rust take their toll. Curse the clock that it may stop. A lovely poem full of such brightness and hope
January 17th, 2026 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
Oh how strong the passion we call love when first its new, how beautiful the flower bud and how shines new steel before corruption and rust take their toll. Curse the clock that it may stop. A lovely poem full of such brightness and hope
January 17th, 2026 13:41
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written a poem of encouragement to become all that one can be. A lovely piece of poetry
January 16th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written a poem of encouragement to become all that one can be. A lovely piece of poetry
January 16th, 2026 07:59
Ripples
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of internal rhyme that speaks to the heart
January 14th, 2026 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of internal rhyme that speaks to the heart
January 14th, 2026 12:17
My Garden Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of the beauty of commitment to another and its undying fidelity in age. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of the beauty of commitment to another and its undying fidelity in age. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 13:06
Silent Prayers
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely lovely imagery, this is a path I want to take!
January 12th, 2026 16:42
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely lovely imagery, this is a path I want to take!
January 12th, 2026 16:42
Silent Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful poem that calls out to the reader through natures images to rest in a calm and serene place.
January 12th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful poem that calls out to the reader through natures images to rest in a calm and serene place.
January 12th, 2026 16:01
Guild the Rose
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a rose and love that are woven into one braided line. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a rose and love that are woven into one braided line. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:57
Dafodil
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the images, rhyme and internal rhyme in this poem
January 10th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the images, rhyme and internal rhyme in this poem
January 10th, 2026 09:46
Space and Time
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture painted in words. The universe in all its power and majesty. A picture of creation. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture painted in words. The universe in all its power and majesty. A picture of creation. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 09:08
A Curious Thing
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me this poem could be about imagination and memory with all that emotion that goes with it. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me this poem could be about imagination and memory with all that emotion that goes with it. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 06:02
Day of Kindness
Friendship said:
So beautiful, your poem revolves around compassion, charity, and the importance of kindness in human interactions. The poet emphasizes the significance of recognizing and alleviating the suffering of others, particularly those who are marginalized or impoverished. It calls for a collective responsibility to share joy and resources with those in need, highlighting the interconnectedness of humanity.
January 4th, 2026 08:26
Friendship said:
So beautiful, your poem revolves around compassion, charity, and the importance of kindness in human interactions. The poet emphasizes the significance of recognizing and alleviating the suffering of others, particularly those who are marginalized or impoverished. It calls for a collective responsibility to share joy and resources with those in need, highlighting the interconnectedness of humanity.
January 4th, 2026 08:26
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