Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
Kiss From a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor of love. Nicely depicted in this image. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor of love. Nicely depicted in this image. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:33
Frayed Lovers
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal passion pours from this cosmic love story. Nicely written my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal passion pours from this cosmic love story. Nicely written my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:02
Death by Suicide
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and I would agree everything must die but in its own time and not to be rushed. Well done
August 21st, 2026 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and I would agree everything must die but in its own time and not to be rushed. Well done
August 21st, 2026 10:42
Tears of Hell
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery of a conceptual hell. Threats and fears contained in this verse are well pictured. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery of a conceptual hell. Threats and fears contained in this verse are well pictured. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 07:05
Pond Song
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and rhyme Richard. Nicely written
August 19th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and rhyme Richard. Nicely written
August 19th, 2026 04:13
Changed to Tell
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanting rhyme and meter sweep thoughts forward without reflection. Very hypnotically written.
August 17th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanting rhyme and meter sweep thoughts forward without reflection. Very hypnotically written.
August 17th, 2026 04:40
Beauties Taste
sorenbarrett said:
A tender love poem set to wonderful rhyme. Very nicely done my friend
August 15th, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A tender love poem set to wonderful rhyme. Very nicely done my friend
August 15th, 2026 13:46
From Kong to Peasant
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
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arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
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sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
One Night Stand
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful set of rhymes that paint a beautiful sexual encounter, psychoactive in proportion to a painted dream of passion. A fave
August 3rd, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful set of rhymes that paint a beautiful sexual encounter, psychoactive in proportion to a painted dream of passion. A fave
August 3rd, 2026 12:54
Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a love that is no longer present except in the words and mind of the author
July 31st, 2026 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a love that is no longer present except in the words and mind of the author
July 31st, 2026 17:32
My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Great meter and rhyme sets this poem apart. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Great meter and rhyme sets this poem apart. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 15:40
Universal Earth
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images \"silver winds\" and great flow. Well done
July 28th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images \"silver winds\" and great flow. Well done
July 28th, 2026 08:39
Directions lost
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I echo the previous comments, good write
July 25th, 2026 04:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I echo the previous comments, good write
July 25th, 2026 04:58
Directions lost
sorenbarrett said:
Words that cause one to ponder where the sorrowful is judged pleasant. A thought provoking write
July 25th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Words that cause one to ponder where the sorrowful is judged pleasant. A thought provoking write
July 25th, 2026 04:32
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Not only the music but its pauses and silence make the mood. A lovely write
July 24th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Not only the music but its pauses and silence make the mood. A lovely write
July 24th, 2026 05:35
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