Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Ethreal Dawn
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Ethreal Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
Linger
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
The Bridge
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
The Bridge
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
The Peaceful Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
The Angel
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
A Rose
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
A Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
Whispey leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
Dying Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that presents the other side of the rose not commonly written about. With lovely wording you weave your message concisely and most poetically a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that presents the other side of the rose not commonly written about. With lovely wording you weave your message concisely and most poetically a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:37
Morning Song
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting and surreal feel to it very nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting and surreal feel to it very nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:07
Darker Paint
sorenbarrett said:
This biblical reference to dark and light apples from the tree is nicely framed in rhyme of poetry. Well done
May 11th, 2026 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
This biblical reference to dark and light apples from the tree is nicely framed in rhyme of poetry. Well done
May 11th, 2026 07:47
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