Comments received on poems by RSM0812
An Angel Sighs
sorenbarrett said:
We all need such encouragement and from a divine source would not hurt either. A most lovely poem of support. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
We all need such encouragement and from a divine source would not hurt either. A most lovely poem of support. Lovely
December 7th, 2025 09:32
This Christmas
Neilton said:
Such a festive and Christmas mood!! Amazing poem and really conveys a Christmas comfort!
December 6th, 2025 13:32
Neilton said:
Such a festive and Christmas mood!! Amazing poem and really conveys a Christmas comfort!
December 6th, 2025 13:32
This Christmas
Bella Shepard said:
This poem of Christmas is filled with such joy, the magic of which comes but once a year. Thank you for these wonderful images that evoke the warmth and happiness of the season. Beautifully done!
December 6th, 2025 10:53
Bella Shepard said:
This poem of Christmas is filled with such joy, the magic of which comes but once a year. Thank you for these wonderful images that evoke the warmth and happiness of the season. Beautifully done!
December 6th, 2025 10:53
This Christmas
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem celebrates the joy and togetherness of the Christmas season,
December 6th, 2025 07:35
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poem celebrates the joy and togetherness of the Christmas season,
December 6th, 2025 07:35
This Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter and a joy to read
December 6th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter and a joy to read
December 6th, 2025 07:04
Love and Death
sorenbarrett said:
A really beautiful write that has great images and rhyme. So well done a fave
December 5th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
A really beautiful write that has great images and rhyme. So well done a fave
December 5th, 2025 06:45
A Farmers Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of natures beauty and healing force. Well written in most poetic form with rhyme and good flow it speaks to me a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of natures beauty and healing force. Well written in most poetic form with rhyme and good flow it speaks to me a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:51
Turning Tides
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic description of beauty kept in the mind. Very nice images used in this poem
December 3rd, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic description of beauty kept in the mind. Very nice images used in this poem
December 3rd, 2025 15:45
Love and Life
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the juxtaposition of light and darkness, life and death, and the transient nature of existence. It explores the emotional complexities of the human experience, highlighting themes of grief, beauty, and the importance of living in the moment. The subject matter delves into the inner workings of the human soul, suggesting that life should be cherished and that one should seek beauty and understanding, even in times of despair.
December 2nd, 2025 05:55
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the juxtaposition of light and darkness, life and death, and the transient nature of existence. It explores the emotional complexities of the human experience, highlighting themes of grief, beauty, and the importance of living in the moment. The subject matter delves into the inner workings of the human soul, suggesting that life should be cherished and that one should seek beauty and understanding, even in times of despair.
December 2nd, 2025 05:55
Love and Life
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
Midnight Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
The Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its colors in spring and summer of a relationship. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its colors in spring and summer of a relationship. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 04:59
Will of the Sires
Friendship said:
The poem “Will of the Sires” explores themes of desire, longing, and the complexity of human emotions. It delves into the connection between the speaker and the “sires of the lake,” suggesting a deep, possibly mystical relationship with women who embody both nurturing and consuming qualities.
November 29th, 2025 09:56
Friendship said:
The poem “Will of the Sires” explores themes of desire, longing, and the complexity of human emotions. It delves into the connection between the speaker and the “sires of the lake,” suggesting a deep, possibly mystical relationship with women who embody both nurturing and consuming qualities.
November 29th, 2025 09:56
Will of the Sires
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has some classical traits but is melded with more contemporary style. It travels from the romantic, to the mythical to the modern world. A vast trip
November 29th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has some classical traits but is melded with more contemporary style. It travels from the romantic, to the mythical to the modern world. A vast trip
November 29th, 2025 04:25
Gentle Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter and rhyme. Well crafted
November 26th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter and rhyme. Well crafted
November 26th, 2025 04:42
A Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well. Funny how people think alike in that my poem today was a rose as well
November 17th, 2025 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well. Funny how people think alike in that my poem today was a rose as well
November 17th, 2025 20:47
Shadows Toll
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem punctuated with natural images and some of personal nature that pledge oneself to another. Well rhymed and with good meter. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 20:02
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem punctuated with natural images and some of personal nature that pledge oneself to another. Well rhymed and with good meter. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 20:02
Moon in a box
sorenbarrett said:
The magnificence of the universe in this poem. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
The magnificence of the universe in this poem. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 20:30
The Race
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read that seems a bit cryptic with its metaphors. Nicely done
November 12th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read that seems a bit cryptic with its metaphors. Nicely done
November 12th, 2025 13:08
Reap
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of time, we each experience it in different ways, but can never capture. Good write!
November 11th, 2025 16:03
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of time, we each experience it in different ways, but can never capture. Good write!
November 11th, 2025 16:03
Reap
sorenbarrett said:
Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where the finish line is. a wonderful write
November 11th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where the finish line is. a wonderful write
November 11th, 2025 15:05
Seasoned summer
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
November 10th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
November 10th, 2025 14:55
Sunday sun rise
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful words that leave a sense of melancholy and even a wistfulness. A fave
November 9th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful words that leave a sense of melancholy and even a wistfulness. A fave
November 9th, 2025 11:44
Tempered Life
sorenbarrett said:
I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value what tempering does. Well done
November 8th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value what tempering does. Well done
November 8th, 2025 14:59
Universal Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Such good meter and flow in this poem is wonderful. Loved the lines:
How me, how I love the rose.
Bent and broke her twisted thorns,
Very nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Such good meter and flow in this poem is wonderful. Loved the lines:
How me, how I love the rose.
Bent and broke her twisted thorns,
Very nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 13:13
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