Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Lily in a Pind
sorenbarrett said:
Lilly not capitalized seems a flower although the word could be a name. Metaphor makes it so. A love poem though and feels most romantic.
October 29th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Lilly not capitalized seems a flower although the word could be a name. Metaphor makes it so. A love poem though and feels most romantic.
October 29th, 2026 07:15
Card Game with The Devil
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of playing against the devil equivalent of playing against the house and the house always wins. Well done
October 28th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of playing against the devil equivalent of playing against the house and the house always wins. Well done
October 28th, 2026 11:29
The Question
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a bitter, unsettled struggle here between surrender and resistance, with the beast at the breast, the compliant rain, and the shadow of pain suggesting a speaker wrestling with the cost of accepting what hurts rather than confronting it. “The difference is in the haunt” is the keeper for me, because it hints that the real distinction isn’t simply between anger and love, or resistance and surrender, but in what continues to follow us afterward, the unseen residue of every choice we make.
October 27th, 2026 08:43
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a bitter, unsettled struggle here between surrender and resistance, with the beast at the breast, the compliant rain, and the shadow of pain suggesting a speaker wrestling with the cost of accepting what hurts rather than confronting it. “The difference is in the haunt” is the keeper for me, because it hints that the real distinction isn’t simply between anger and love, or resistance and surrender, but in what continues to follow us afterward, the unseen residue of every choice we make.
October 27th, 2026 08:43
The Question
Novaselic said:
In my interpretation, I believe this may be about confronting your emotional pain or letting it continue, or just the struggle to find inner peace. Regardless, a wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:02
Novaselic said:
In my interpretation, I believe this may be about confronting your emotional pain or letting it continue, or just the struggle to find inner peace. Regardless, a wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:02
The Question
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write, I believe you meant (stainless) don\'t know if you were using (sirenity) as a neologism for siren, which would be quite creative or meant (serenity). Regardless a most creative and emotive poem. Nicely worded.
October 26th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write, I believe you meant (stainless) don\'t know if you were using (sirenity) as a neologism for siren, which would be quite creative or meant (serenity). Regardless a most creative and emotive poem. Nicely worded.
October 26th, 2026 06:35
A kiss
Novaselic said:
In a way this poem kind of reminds me of the song “my kind of woman” from mac demarco. A lovely poem nonetheless
October 23rd, 2026 10:14
Novaselic said:
In a way this poem kind of reminds me of the song “my kind of woman” from mac demarco. A lovely poem nonetheless
October 23rd, 2026 10:14
A kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and tender this poem speaks of gentle and yet fiery feelings. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and tender this poem speaks of gentle and yet fiery feelings. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 07:43
God is Dead
RSM0812 said:
I agree. The end was weak. I missed a couple of words also. Thank you for the comment and enjoying.
October 22nd, 2026 18:04
RSM0812 said:
I agree. The end was weak. I missed a couple of words also. Thank you for the comment and enjoying.
October 22nd, 2026 18:04
God is Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely beginning to this poem. It brings to mind the music Also sprach Zarathustra chosen to start 2001 Space Odyssey nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely beginning to this poem. It brings to mind the music Also sprach Zarathustra chosen to start 2001 Space Odyssey nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 07:48
A Simpler Mankind
arqios said:
Our life can take so many different trajectories 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
October 21st, 2026 07:24
arqios said:
Our life can take so many different trajectories 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
October 21st, 2026 07:24
A Simpler Mankind
sorenbarrett said:
Life always finds a way. It may not be our species but life does evolve. Nicely written
October 21st, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Life always finds a way. It may not be our species but life does evolve. Nicely written
October 21st, 2026 05:29
The Madness
sorenbarrett said:
These pairings make for great associations and meaning in the poem. Well done
October 20th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
These pairings make for great associations and meaning in the poem. Well done
October 20th, 2026 07:15
Destiny
arqios said:
The rhyme pattern brought me there on top of the surging words and lines. Much enjoyed 👍🏻🕊️
October 19th, 2026 07:53
arqios said:
The rhyme pattern brought me there on top of the surging words and lines. Much enjoyed 👍🏻🕊️
October 19th, 2026 07:53
Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
Destiny from a deterministic view follows entropy where all returns to where it was and ought to be. lovely
October 19th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Destiny from a deterministic view follows entropy where all returns to where it was and ought to be. lovely
October 19th, 2026 07:25
Story of the Old
sorenbarrett said:
This one requires more than one reading. It casts a different mood each time. Nicely done
October 18th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This one requires more than one reading. It casts a different mood each time. Nicely done
October 18th, 2026 04:30
Untitled
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this introduction to your ink sir .. I\'m sure I shall be back for more .. All Good Things, stay well and write on .. Neville
October 18th, 2026 02:08
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this introduction to your ink sir .. I\'m sure I shall be back for more .. All Good Things, stay well and write on .. Neville
October 18th, 2026 02:08
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and symbolic it sends its message to those that will listen
October 17th, 2026 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and symbolic it sends its message to those that will listen
October 17th, 2026 09:55
Love in a Dream
RSM0812 said:
Dreams can be melodic i guess. The best kind anyway. Lol
October 16th, 2026 15:02
RSM0812 said:
Dreams can be melodic i guess. The best kind anyway. Lol
October 16th, 2026 15:02
Love in a Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely it speaks as if it were a song. Well done
October 16th, 2026 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely it speaks as if it were a song. Well done
October 16th, 2026 11:15
Dribble
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in the surreal abstractions form metaphors. Well done
October 15th, 2026 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in the surreal abstractions form metaphors. Well done
October 15th, 2026 18:29
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