Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Vows
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around love and devotion. It expresses deep affection for a beloved, highlighting the beauty found in both life and death. The speaker conveys a sense of commitment and unity, suggesting that love endures through both struggles and triumphs. The subject matter includes elements of romantic love, the passage of time, and the significance of shared life experiences.
October 9th, 2025 08:57
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around love and devotion. It expresses deep affection for a beloved, highlighting the beauty found in both life and death. The speaker conveys a sense of commitment and unity, suggesting that love endures through both struggles and triumphs. The subject matter includes elements of romantic love, the passage of time, and the significance of shared life experiences.
October 9th, 2025 08:57
Vows
sorenbarrett said:
Symbols of love are all we have be they our actions or a pink rose. From these we interpret another\'s feelings very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Symbols of love are all we have be they our actions or a pink rose. From these we interpret another\'s feelings very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 06:54
To the Universe
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, what an experience to be had. Thank you for sharing!
October 8th, 2025 20:23
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, what an experience to be had. Thank you for sharing!
October 8th, 2025 20:23
To the Universe
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor and allegory in this poem does not go unnoticed and it fits so well. The interesting change in rhyme scheme in the second stanza awakens the reader to the potential for change. This poem is thought provoking and philosophical. Nicely done and a fave
October 8th, 2025 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor and allegory in this poem does not go unnoticed and it fits so well. The interesting change in rhyme scheme in the second stanza awakens the reader to the potential for change. This poem is thought provoking and philosophical. Nicely done and a fave
October 8th, 2025 05:41
My Wandering heart
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love, nicely written in good rhyme
October 7th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love, nicely written in good rhyme
October 7th, 2025 09:45
Oh Star
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a spiritual nature it seems. Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a spiritual nature it seems. Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 19:21
The Lonely Star
sorenbarrett said:
Love like light not seen is like that tree that falls in a forest with no one around begs the question does it make a sound? Nicely penned
October 5th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love like light not seen is like that tree that falls in a forest with no one around begs the question does it make a sound? Nicely penned
October 5th, 2025 19:41
My love Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in nature, image and words with rhyme no less. Well done
October 5th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in nature, image and words with rhyme no less. Well done
October 5th, 2025 03:43
Dreamy Brook
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the beauty and tranquility of nature, particularly through the imagery of a brook. It evokes feelings of nostalgia, peace, and the cyclical nature of life, encompassing themes of childhood innocence and the natural world’s serenity.
October 3rd, 2025 06:59
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the beauty and tranquility of nature, particularly through the imagery of a brook. It evokes feelings of nostalgia, peace, and the cyclical nature of life, encompassing themes of childhood innocence and the natural world’s serenity.
October 3rd, 2025 06:59
Dreamy Brook
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem written with great rhyme and good meter it flows nicely. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 20:58
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem written with great rhyme and good meter it flows nicely. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 20:58
Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
The freedom of a butterfly in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
The freedom of a butterfly in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 15:23
Mountain Peak
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and rhyme in this poem it is wonderfully done
September 30th, 2025 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and rhyme in this poem it is wonderfully done
September 30th, 2025 21:05
My love, my love
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic rhythm to this poem that in rhyme and meter that carries the reader wafting them along on its feel. Charming
September 30th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic rhythm to this poem that in rhyme and meter that carries the reader wafting them along on its feel. Charming
September 30th, 2025 04:29
The Beautiful Fall
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet well written and with great meaning. Loved it
September 28th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet well written and with great meaning. Loved it
September 28th, 2025 09:34
The Beautiful Fall
Paul Bell said:
Stepping into the fall, watching nature going into rest mode.
For some reason, you seem to reflect more in the fall.
September 28th, 2025 08:25
Paul Bell said:
Stepping into the fall, watching nature going into rest mode.
For some reason, you seem to reflect more in the fall.
September 28th, 2025 08:25
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are all born to die it is a matter or when and how. A strong, powerful write of a somewhat nihilistic view.
September 27th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are all born to die it is a matter or when and how. A strong, powerful write of a somewhat nihilistic view.
September 27th, 2025 06:57
Death
Friendship said:
The poem \"Death\" explores the concept of mortality and the transition from life to death. It reflects on the inevitability of death, the emotions that accompany it, and the notion of finding peace in the afterlife. The poem juxtaposes fire (often associated with passion or destruction) with the coldness of death, suggesting that while life can be tumultuous, death may offer tranquility.
September 26th, 2025 11:05
Friendship said:
The poem \"Death\" explores the concept of mortality and the transition from life to death. It reflects on the inevitability of death, the emotions that accompany it, and the notion of finding peace in the afterlife. The poem juxtaposes fire (often associated with passion or destruction) with the coldness of death, suggesting that while life can be tumultuous, death may offer tranquility.
September 26th, 2025 11:05
Death
sorenbarrett said:
Death or sleep in this poem. A write of doom or nightmare. Written in rhyme and good meter it flows as a dark dream
September 26th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Death or sleep in this poem. A write of doom or nightmare. Written in rhyme and good meter it flows as a dark dream
September 26th, 2025 04:56
My Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Well put and nicely written this poem tells its story well. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Well put and nicely written this poem tells its story well. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 08:38
My Maiden
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one resounds with savage remembrance of Zeus and the gods in the rape of mortals and the creation of demigods. It has power and a sense of ownership that cries out with the sound of war drums. Lovely and a fave
September 24th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one resounds with savage remembrance of Zeus and the gods in the rape of mortals and the creation of demigods. It has power and a sense of ownership that cries out with the sound of war drums. Lovely and a fave
September 24th, 2025 08:18
Mountain Girls
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of rhyme, meter, flow and story that gets the fave this time. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of rhyme, meter, flow and story that gets the fave this time. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 07:55
Atheism
Doggerel Dave said:
\"what ever will be will be...\" Truth can be found in odd places sometimes....
September 22nd, 2025 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
\"what ever will be will be...\" Truth can be found in odd places sometimes....
September 22nd, 2025 16:53
Atheism
Paul Bell said:
Hate when that death is in the small print.
God is good, the sign tells me.
September 22nd, 2025 11:43
Paul Bell said:
Hate when that death is in the small print.
God is good, the sign tells me.
September 22nd, 2025 11:43
Atheism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
non believers beware seems to be the message
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
non believers beware seems to be the message
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
Atheism
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:34
Extended version
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
Beauty Rare
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
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