Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Passions of the dead.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
Eyes Closed
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
Eyes Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Eyes Closed
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
Floating Strem
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
The Universe and the Mountain
NinjaGirl said:
This is so so lovely, one of my favorites for sure!
September 8th, 2025 18:37
NinjaGirl said:
This is so so lovely, one of my favorites for sure!
September 8th, 2025 18:37
The Universe and the Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (where midnight takes a shallow nap) This piece it floats on poetic wings. A lovely write
September 8th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (where midnight takes a shallow nap) This piece it floats on poetic wings. A lovely write
September 8th, 2025 11:48
Lost Paradise
NinjaGirl said:
I like this depiction of humanity and Eve from the garden. Nicely said!
September 7th, 2025 16:39
NinjaGirl said:
I like this depiction of humanity and Eve from the garden. Nicely said!
September 7th, 2025 16:39
Lost Paradise
sorenbarrett said:
I love the veiled biblical metaphors incorporated in this poem. Well written in rhyme a fave
September 7th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love the veiled biblical metaphors incorporated in this poem. Well written in rhyme a fave
September 7th, 2025 15:40
Love Poem
sorenbarrett said:
In love one and the same is a thought that many say but few enact. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
In love one and the same is a thought that many say but few enact. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 14:11
Forever Old
NinjaGirl said:
In time, in time, we will know the secrets of life! Beautiful poem!
September 5th, 2025 14:23
NinjaGirl said:
In time, in time, we will know the secrets of life! Beautiful poem!
September 5th, 2025 14:23
Life is a Gift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a rhythm of life...hardships, gifts, and lessons all moving through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a rhythm of life...hardships, gifts, and lessons all moving through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:23
Forever Old
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems meditative or substance induced it is peaceful and mind expanding. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems meditative or substance induced it is peaceful and mind expanding. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 04:09
Frozen Time
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always time that\'s our savior and our captor. This is a beautiful poem describing both of those. Keep up the good writing!
September 4th, 2025 11:09
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always time that\'s our savior and our captor. This is a beautiful poem describing both of those. Keep up the good writing!
September 4th, 2025 11:09
Frozen Time
sorenbarrett said:
The view of the working man a communal desire to share equally but such is not nature whose fairness is measured in survival. Nicely written
September 4th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
The view of the working man a communal desire to share equally but such is not nature whose fairness is measured in survival. Nicely written
September 4th, 2025 09:13
For Only You
sorenbarrett said:
Very touching a poem nicely built from the beginning and completed tying the ending to the start. The element of carrying one\'s loneliness in a box a nice touch. Very nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very touching a poem nicely built from the beginning and completed tying the ending to the start. The element of carrying one\'s loneliness in a box a nice touch. Very nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 04:50
My Pen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of thoughts and feelings where drives and desires are addressed and in humor and strive where one chooses to roll the dice. Lovely
September 2nd, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of thoughts and feelings where drives and desires are addressed and in humor and strive where one chooses to roll the dice. Lovely
September 2nd, 2025 07:33
Time standing Still
NafisaSB said:
time ticks for everyone, and for no one..good one here...
September 2nd, 2025 02:04
NafisaSB said:
time ticks for everyone, and for no one..good one here...
September 2nd, 2025 02:04
A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:54
An empty Mug
Bella Shepard said:
The opposites of life coexist; my cup runeth over or the well is dry. When peace finally finds its seat at the table, then perhaps balance is at hand. This is what I feel here when reading your poem. A very thoughtful piece.
August 31st, 2025 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
The opposites of life coexist; my cup runeth over or the well is dry. When peace finally finds its seat at the table, then perhaps balance is at hand. This is what I feel here when reading your poem. A very thoughtful piece.
August 31st, 2025 13:45
An empty Mug
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too feel this mood from time to time. Well written
August 31st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too feel this mood from time to time. Well written
August 31st, 2025 04:37
Time standing Still
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of people make time to be the enemy, I love the way you described it in this work.
August 30th, 2025 19:46
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of people make time to be the enemy, I love the way you described it in this work.
August 30th, 2025 19:46
Time standing Still
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time, in beautiful rhyme. Love it!
August 30th, 2025 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time, in beautiful rhyme. Love it!
August 30th, 2025 13:20
Time standing Still
sorenbarrett said:
This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into one. So nicely said in poetic style
August 30th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into one. So nicely said in poetic style
August 30th, 2025 11:41
Guild the Lilly
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned. This poem explores the metaphor of lover and rose. Well done
August 29th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned. This poem explores the metaphor of lover and rose. Well done
August 29th, 2025 13:55
Guild the Lilly
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful metaphor for true love. The rose, perfection in and of itself, just by vitrue of its being. This was a joy to read!
August 29th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful metaphor for true love. The rose, perfection in and of itself, just by vitrue of its being. This was a joy to read!
August 29th, 2025 08:52
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This one rocks with religious feeling and the dichotomy of God and Satan and the soul. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one rocks with religious feeling and the dichotomy of God and Satan and the soul. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 08:38
A Ride From God
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the light humor in this poem. If there was a God I think he would very much enjoy this depiction. Nicely said
August 27th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the light humor in this poem. If there was a God I think he would very much enjoy this depiction. Nicely said
August 27th, 2025 07:02
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