Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The warm sun
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and grand in its theme and symbol. Interesting that it is presented as a she in that the sun is traditionally seen as a he but it makes some sense in that as a nurturer the sun could well be seen as a mother. Well done
October 27th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and grand in its theme and symbol. Interesting that it is presented as a she in that the sun is traditionally seen as a he but it makes some sense in that as a nurturer the sun could well be seen as a mother. Well done
October 27th, 2025 05:28
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that drips with feeling. An assertion and recounting of what is. Nicely worded and with good flow
October 26th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that drips with feeling. An assertion and recounting of what is. Nicely worded and with good flow
October 26th, 2025 09:38
The ocean Cove
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of longing, escape, and the tranquil beauty of nature, specifically through the imagery of the ocean and a desire for connection. It reflects both a yearning for an idyllic place and the emotional turbulence associated with love and rest.
October 26th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of longing, escape, and the tranquil beauty of nature, specifically through the imagery of the ocean and a desire for connection. It reflects both a yearning for an idyllic place and the emotional turbulence associated with love and rest.
October 26th, 2025 07:49
The ocean Cove
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to a love party is what I read into this poem. Very nice.
October 25th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to a love party is what I read into this poem. Very nice.
October 25th, 2025 10:01
Oh Nightmare
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the duality of dreams and nightmares, exploring the themes of solitude, introspection, and the quest for peace amidst life\'s struggles. It reflects on the complexities of existence—life and death, fear and comfort—ultimately expressing a longing for love and connection.
October 24th, 2025 17:01
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the duality of dreams and nightmares, exploring the themes of solitude, introspection, and the quest for peace amidst life\'s struggles. It reflects on the complexities of existence—life and death, fear and comfort—ultimately expressing a longing for love and connection.
October 24th, 2025 17:01
Oh Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Nightmare of dream this poem speaks of birth and love. Nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Nightmare of dream this poem speaks of birth and love. Nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:46
The phenomenon
Friendship said:
Well-written, my friend; your poem explores the complexities of love, depicting it as a multifaceted experience that involves both joy and pain. It emphasizes the transient and fragile nature of love, likening it to sand—both small and infinite, highlighting how it can be easily lost yet cherished.
October 23rd, 2025 11:35
Friendship said:
Well-written, my friend; your poem explores the complexities of love, depicting it as a multifaceted experience that involves both joy and pain. It emphasizes the transient and fragile nature of love, likening it to sand—both small and infinite, highlighting how it can be easily lost yet cherished.
October 23rd, 2025 11:35
The phenomenon
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is and a wonderful gift it is. A lovely write about one thing that people share in common with other animals
October 23rd, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is and a wonderful gift it is. A lovely write about one thing that people share in common with other animals
October 23rd, 2025 07:39
The Defiant Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
This write is nicely worded leaving a melancholic feeling a haunted sense. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
This write is nicely worded leaving a melancholic feeling a haunted sense. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 08:34
My nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
A poem beautiful in wording, imagery and flow it rolls off the tongue to be lapped up by the brain. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem beautiful in wording, imagery and flow it rolls off the tongue to be lapped up by the brain. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 05:31
My Only One
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around the intense emotions associated with love, desire, and longing. It explores the dual nature of passion — its beauty and its burdens — highlighting a yearning for physical and emotional connection with a beloved.
October 20th, 2025 17:27
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around the intense emotions associated with love, desire, and longing. It explores the dual nature of passion — its beauty and its burdens — highlighting a yearning for physical and emotional connection with a beloved.
October 20th, 2025 17:27
My Only One
sorenbarrett said:
A vampiric poem that builds until its reveal. A good write
October 20th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A vampiric poem that builds until its reveal. A good write
October 20th, 2025 11:57
The Sigh of Death
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful this poem speaks of the perfection and imperfection and cycle of life and death. So well integrated and written in poetic metaphor and rhyme. A wonderful write and a fave
October 19th, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful this poem speaks of the perfection and imperfection and cycle of life and death. So well integrated and written in poetic metaphor and rhyme. A wonderful write and a fave
October 19th, 2025 06:01
Divine Soul
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
Breath
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
The Garden
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
The Garden
sorenbarrett said:
A favorite retreat in the mind ideal in every way, beautiful and peaceful is presented in this poem. Nicely imaged and penned.
October 15th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A favorite retreat in the mind ideal in every way, beautiful and peaceful is presented in this poem. Nicely imaged and penned.
October 15th, 2025 10:10
I Sat on a Rose
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love this beautiful piece a lot. She left memories that are hard to let go, but you can eventually get through it, I promise.
October 14th, 2025 07:51
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love this beautiful piece a lot. She left memories that are hard to let go, but you can eventually get through it, I promise.
October 14th, 2025 07:51
I Sat on a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A magical metaphor that caught my heart. Couldn\'t help my thoughts racing ahead had planned a different ending to this poem. Hope you don\'t mind.
With a wink of an eye she then she turned with a sigh
Torn loose the sting, death it did bring, love to live and die
But then mine are always somewhat dark seeing love as a product of pain and beauty. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
A magical metaphor that caught my heart. Couldn\'t help my thoughts racing ahead had planned a different ending to this poem. Hope you don\'t mind.
With a wink of an eye she then she turned with a sigh
Torn loose the sting, death it did bring, love to live and die
But then mine are always somewhat dark seeing love as a product of pain and beauty. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2025 07:20
Flesh of Self
Friendship said:
Happy Thanksgiving,,,,,,,,The poem explores themes of love, connection, and the human experience, juxtaposing feelings of joy and loneliness. It reflects on the profound bond between individuals, the beauty of shared moments, and the intrinsic connection to nature and the cosmos.
October 13th, 2025 12:53
Friendship said:
Happy Thanksgiving,,,,,,,,The poem explores themes of love, connection, and the human experience, juxtaposing feelings of joy and loneliness. It reflects on the profound bond between individuals, the beauty of shared moments, and the intrinsic connection to nature and the cosmos.
October 13th, 2025 12:53
Flesh of Self
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful this poem speaks to a deeper level and thrills the heart
October 13th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful this poem speaks to a deeper level and thrills the heart
October 13th, 2025 05:22
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like images in this poem. Very nicely done
October 12th, 2025 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like images in this poem. Very nicely done
October 12th, 2025 10:47
Blood and wine
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s been a while since I read one of your poems and I have enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s been a while since I read one of your poems and I have enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:59
Blood and wine
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of life, death, and the beauty of existence, juxtaposing joy and sorrow, youth and aging, and the transient nature of time. It reflects on the human experience and the inevitability of mortality, while also celebrating the beauty and complexity of the universe.
October 10th, 2025 11:55
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of life, death, and the beauty of existence, juxtaposing joy and sorrow, youth and aging, and the transient nature of time. It reflects on the human experience and the inevitability of mortality, while also celebrating the beauty and complexity of the universe.
October 10th, 2025 11:55
Blood and wine
sorenbarrett said:
Blood and wine indeed it is symbol as old as wine itself nicely worded in this poem it is a fave
October 10th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
Blood and wine indeed it is symbol as old as wine itself nicely worded in this poem it is a fave
October 10th, 2025 09:09
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