Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Oh Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that in all its fantasy shows reality as well. Nice
September 22nd, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that in all its fantasy shows reality as well. Nice
September 22nd, 2026 09:11
Dusk
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge to take on danger when it brings beauty and purpose to life. Nicely said
September 21st, 2026 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge to take on danger when it brings beauty and purpose to life. Nicely said
September 21st, 2026 13:11
Morn of Pipers Dream
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem it is so well set and speaks of another time. The wording is most original and clever and takes one to a fantasy land. Make the most of the moment. Lovely and a fave
September 20th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem it is so well set and speaks of another time. The wording is most original and clever and takes one to a fantasy land. Make the most of the moment. Lovely and a fave
September 20th, 2026 08:37
Dreadful Peace
sorenbarrett said:
Peace they say is found in death (Rest in peace) but can it be found in life too. I would argue yes, in one\'s mind and heart. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Peace they say is found in death (Rest in peace) but can it be found in life too. I would argue yes, in one\'s mind and heart. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 09:18
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a distant echo vague but heard and distinct. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a distant echo vague but heard and distinct. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:33
I Love You
Jamiano said:
Beautiful sentiments of companionship and serenity. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 14:00
Jamiano said:
Beautiful sentiments of companionship and serenity. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 14:00
I Love You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the simple three words I love you. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the simple three words I love you. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 14:00
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A great love poem and proclamation nicely written in rhyme and good meter. Well done my friend
September 8th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A great love poem and proclamation nicely written in rhyme and good meter. Well done my friend
September 8th, 2026 03:52
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
Kiss From a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor of love. Nicely depicted in this image. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor of love. Nicely depicted in this image. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:33
Frayed Lovers
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal passion pours from this cosmic love story. Nicely written my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal passion pours from this cosmic love story. Nicely written my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:02
Death by Suicide
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and I would agree everything must die but in its own time and not to be rushed. Well done
August 21st, 2026 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and I would agree everything must die but in its own time and not to be rushed. Well done
August 21st, 2026 10:42
Tears of Hell
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery of a conceptual hell. Threats and fears contained in this verse are well pictured. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery of a conceptual hell. Threats and fears contained in this verse are well pictured. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 07:05
Pond Song
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and rhyme Richard. Nicely written
August 19th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and rhyme Richard. Nicely written
August 19th, 2026 04:13
Changed to Tell
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanting rhyme and meter sweep thoughts forward without reflection. Very hypnotically written.
August 17th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanting rhyme and meter sweep thoughts forward without reflection. Very hypnotically written.
August 17th, 2026 04:40
Beauties Taste
sorenbarrett said:
A tender love poem set to wonderful rhyme. Very nicely done my friend
August 15th, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A tender love poem set to wonderful rhyme. Very nicely done my friend
August 15th, 2026 13:46
From Kong to Peasant
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
Untitled
arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
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