Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Hearts That Break
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it
November 13th, 2024 04:35
A violent gun
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
jarcher54 said:
If only the last line were to come true... sigh
November 13th, 2024 00:53
Hearts That Break
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
jarcher54 said:
Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.
November 13th, 2024 00:51
Chains and Hunger
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful
November 8th, 2024 22:00
Poor and Forgotten
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant 😢 , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! 💯
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant 😢 , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! 💯
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad
November 7th, 2024 12:59
Storm
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:16
Walking
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 10:08
Songbird
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
Forest Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
A walk
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
Angel Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
Rumors
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
The quiet
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
The quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
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