Comments received on poems by Keeter C
Summer Rain
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This feels warm and nostalgic the way you link the rain and sun to memory gives the piece a gentle, reflective beauty. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 20:31
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This feels warm and nostalgic the way you link the rain and sun to memory gives the piece a gentle, reflective beauty. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 20:31
Summer Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes seldom is more of a trigger than frequent. A beautiful poem with great images
September 17th, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes seldom is more of a trigger than frequent. A beautiful poem with great images
September 17th, 2025 20:03
Finshed
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme on a poem that speaks of the troubles of today. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme on a poem that speaks of the troubles of today. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 20:13
Musings
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about man no better than creatures we despise and look down on. A measure of our faults.
September 15th, 2025 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about man no better than creatures we despise and look down on. A measure of our faults.
September 15th, 2025 15:41
That
sorenbarrett said:
Age takes us all beauty, health and all. Nicely done
September 13th, 2025 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
Age takes us all beauty, health and all. Nicely done
September 13th, 2025 16:08
Sad
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write about human entropy. We do seem to be a dead end on an evolutionary tree where we have put all our money on technology and ignored empathy. A stark but beautiful write
September 13th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write about human entropy. We do seem to be a dead end on an evolutionary tree where we have put all our money on technology and ignored empathy. A stark but beautiful write
September 13th, 2025 04:03
Creation
sorenbarrett said:
A great entry door to higher conceptualization where there are no parts and everything is a part Spinoza\'s god and Einstein\'s. Good write
September 10th, 2025 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
A great entry door to higher conceptualization where there are no parts and everything is a part Spinoza\'s god and Einstein\'s. Good write
September 10th, 2025 18:40
Automation
Doggerel Dave said:
Humans may not be as clean and tidy, but still my preference
Any mention of AI as maybe a problem in certain circumstances, gets a vote from me.
September 9th, 2025 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Humans may not be as clean and tidy, but still my preference
Any mention of AI as maybe a problem in certain circumstances, gets a vote from me.
September 9th, 2025 06:41
Automation
sorenbarrett said:
The irony is what is satire today is reality tomorrow. As with all other items in capitalism these items will be priced according to desirability with options available. A fun and mind provoking read.
September 9th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The irony is what is satire today is reality tomorrow. As with all other items in capitalism these items will be priced according to desirability with options available. A fun and mind provoking read.
September 9th, 2025 04:11
Vision
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes mirror of the soul show what lurks beneath if one can gain entrance with a long enough gaze and be sensitive enough to the view. Today most will not even make eye contact preferring a text where deception can be hidden. A lovely write and a fave
September 8th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes mirror of the soul show what lurks beneath if one can gain entrance with a long enough gaze and be sensitive enough to the view. Today most will not even make eye contact preferring a text where deception can be hidden. A lovely write and a fave
September 8th, 2025 07:55
Strife
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording and well imaged, a poem of warning that man is now able to destroy not just another individual but all mankind. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording and well imaged, a poem of warning that man is now able to destroy not just another individual but all mankind. Lovely
September 7th, 2025 14:14
Stage
sorenbarrett said:
If one could not think about the future it would be another type of bliss indeed but also another type of hell. Maybe they are one and the same just two different sides of the same coin. Very thought provoking
September 6th, 2025 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
If one could not think about the future it would be another type of bliss indeed but also another type of hell. Maybe they are one and the same just two different sides of the same coin. Very thought provoking
September 6th, 2025 17:15
Visible Realm
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and reflections that are worth thinking about. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and reflections that are worth thinking about. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 14:23
Gathering storm
sorenbarrett said:
Ah one world order so to speak. When one is not needed one is eliminated. A tough game. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Ah one world order so to speak. When one is not needed one is eliminated. A tough game. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 17:01
What could’ve been?
Demar Desu said:
Just as we sit to ask the question here we can be doing what the answer is… sometimes I ask to many questions
August 31st, 2025 23:41
Demar Desu said:
Just as we sit to ask the question here we can be doing what the answer is… sometimes I ask to many questions
August 31st, 2025 23:41
What could’ve been?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of what might have been and of art. Most lovely with a wistful but hopeful feeling
August 31st, 2025 18:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of what might have been and of art. Most lovely with a wistful but hopeful feeling
August 31st, 2025 18:02
Dare you think?
sorenbarrett said:
It is a world of control in which one does not know what to believe and what not to believe. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is a world of control in which one does not know what to believe and what not to believe. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 16:09
Watching.
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical blended with science it becomes poetic nicely done
August 25th, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical blended with science it becomes poetic nicely done
August 25th, 2025 17:07
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deepness to this poem that speaks. Nicely worded
August 24th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deepness to this poem that speaks. Nicely worded
August 24th, 2025 16:00
Hope
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, that might actually be useful. Guess you remind me of a discussion with one of my brothers years and years ago, he telling me sadly he was losing his faith in mankind. Last I saw him he\'d figured darker things out and enlightened me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 15:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, that might actually be useful. Guess you remind me of a discussion with one of my brothers years and years ago, he telling me sadly he was losing his faith in mankind. Last I saw him he\'d figured darker things out and enlightened me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 15:23
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this thorny problem of balance. As for the dead they would all be appalled. Deeply philosophical and with no good answer as all good philosophical questions are. To answer it we must step out of our moral and political views and enter a new level of justice and morals
August 23rd, 2025 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this thorny problem of balance. As for the dead they would all be appalled. Deeply philosophical and with no good answer as all good philosophical questions are. To answer it we must step out of our moral and political views and enter a new level of justice and morals
August 23rd, 2025 15:04
Regrets
sorenbarrett said:
Things we do we can seldom make up for completely. A poem of resilience but set by genetics. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Things we do we can seldom make up for completely. A poem of resilience but set by genetics. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 20:10
Futility
Cheeky Missy said:
Police chases, eh? My favorite was the late-ish night a motorcycle came through the lonely intersection we were perched on one corner of, stopped and turned into the darkness, a cruiser in hot pursuit, then a second and third, shortly thereafter. The motorcyclist came through again sans them and then they did. In the morning we heard the report which said they used a helicopter to get him since he sadly took off on foot into the woods, if I recall, and they got him when he emerged. Thanks for dredging that memory. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 22:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Police chases, eh? My favorite was the late-ish night a motorcycle came through the lonely intersection we were perched on one corner of, stopped and turned into the darkness, a cruiser in hot pursuit, then a second and third, shortly thereafter. The motorcyclist came through again sans them and then they did. In the morning we heard the report which said they used a helicopter to get him since he sadly took off on foot into the woods, if I recall, and they got him when he emerged. Thanks for dredging that memory. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 22:30
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