Comments received on poems by Keeter C
Red in the morning.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image turned metaphor in this poem. The storms of relationships can be treacherous but we hesitate to relinquish them. A lovely write
July 12th, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image turned metaphor in this poem. The storms of relationships can be treacherous but we hesitate to relinquish them. A lovely write
July 12th, 2025 15:55
Labor pains
sorenbarrett said:
In each human fetus there exist millions and millions of cells each doing their job. If they could think would they think they are wise? A great write with good metaphor. Lovely
July 11th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
In each human fetus there exist millions and millions of cells each doing their job. If they could think would they think they are wise? A great write with good metaphor. Lovely
July 11th, 2025 09:51
Snippet
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it always can be much worse. A good thought to keep in mind when one is down. Good write
July 10th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it always can be much worse. A good thought to keep in mind when one is down. Good write
July 10th, 2025 03:50
Forgot
Poetic Licence said:
A very apt and poignant write at the current state of affairs, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:44
Poetic Licence said:
A very apt and poignant write at the current state of affairs, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:44
War
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a strong feeling of impending doom and a us and them feel. I shines with strong religious indications. Very clearly written
June 13th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a strong feeling of impending doom and a us and them feel. I shines with strong religious indications. Very clearly written
June 13th, 2025 04:14
Wisdom
sorenbarrett said:
A great write on why what seems so obvious to the common man is so obscure to the elite and why the common man can not see the shell game where no matter which cup he picks there is no pea. Well written
June 6th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great write on why what seems so obvious to the common man is so obscure to the elite and why the common man can not see the shell game where no matter which cup he picks there is no pea. Well written
June 6th, 2025 03:55
Reality
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep thought that can not be seen except in the print on the page. A most interesting problem that precedes another question even more elusive of what happens after death. Good write
June 1st, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of deep thought that can not be seen except in the print on the page. A most interesting problem that precedes another question even more elusive of what happens after death. Good write
June 1st, 2025 17:28
The rumblings
Poetic Licence said:
It is a warning that all should take notice of, there is a huge volcano building in our world, and it will be devastating when it erupts, nicely expressed and written
May 31st, 2025 02:17
Poetic Licence said:
It is a warning that all should take notice of, there is a huge volcano building in our world, and it will be devastating when it erupts, nicely expressed and written
May 31st, 2025 02:17
The rumblings
sorenbarrett said:
At first I took this to be an actual volcano but then moved to the idea of metaphorical. We all have those volcanos in our lives that we may be aware are going to erupt and those we are not being unaware. The poem seems to be a warning. Well done
May 30th, 2025 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
At first I took this to be an actual volcano but then moved to the idea of metaphorical. We all have those volcanos in our lives that we may be aware are going to erupt and those we are not being unaware. The poem seems to be a warning. Well done
May 30th, 2025 17:10
Choices
Poetic Licence said:
The very few get to where they really wanted to be, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
The very few get to where they really wanted to be, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 02:15
Choices
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable few people end up where they planed early in life. A good read
May 25th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable few people end up where they planed early in life. A good read
May 25th, 2025 17:28
One
Poetic Licence said:
This is so relatable to me , so true, nicely written and expressed
May 25th, 2025 02:45
Poetic Licence said:
This is so relatable to me , so true, nicely written and expressed
May 25th, 2025 02:45
One
arqios said:
I can attest to this and boy does being alone echo poundingly within the soul! Might good stuff here.🙏🏻🕊️
May 24th, 2025 23:06
arqios said:
I can attest to this and boy does being alone echo poundingly within the soul! Might good stuff here.🙏🏻🕊️
May 24th, 2025 23:06
Returned to the wild
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write with a meaningful message, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write with a meaningful message, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:15
Returned to the wild
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write and a good message in this poem. A lovely write
May 22nd, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write and a good message in this poem. A lovely write
May 22nd, 2025 19:00
Family
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This really captures how our view of family evolves with time. Well done!!!
May 21st, 2025 08:56
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This really captures how our view of family evolves with time. Well done!!!
May 21st, 2025 08:56
Family
Poetic Licence said:
We can all learn the wisdom and knowledge of our elders, nicely expressed write
May 21st, 2025 08:52
Poetic Licence said:
We can all learn the wisdom and knowledge of our elders, nicely expressed write
May 21st, 2025 08:52
Family
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the value of those lost and those still here. A plea for acknowledgement of their wisdom and what they have left us. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the value of those lost and those still here. A plea for acknowledgement of their wisdom and what they have left us. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 06:40
Perspective
arqios said:
Loaded with so much truth... much to think about springing forth from brevity. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 02:27
arqios said:
Loaded with so much truth... much to think about springing forth from brevity. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 02:27
Perspective
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question is there such a thing as the truth, nicely written
May 19th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question is there such a thing as the truth, nicely written
May 19th, 2025 02:15
Perspective
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and rhyme spit truth if there is such a thing in this poem. Very nice a fave for the cleverness
May 18th, 2025 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and rhyme spit truth if there is such a thing in this poem. Very nice a fave for the cleverness
May 18th, 2025 18:42
Long game
Poetic Licence said:
The balancing act of positives and negatives, the tightrope we all walk, nicely expressed and written
May 18th, 2025 02:29
Poetic Licence said:
The balancing act of positives and negatives, the tightrope we all walk, nicely expressed and written
May 18th, 2025 02:29
Long game
sorenbarrett said:
A trade of in positive and negative thoughts and beliefs. Well done
May 17th, 2025 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
A trade of in positive and negative thoughts and beliefs. Well done
May 17th, 2025 18:27
« Return to the profile of Keeter C
