Comments received on poems by Keeter C



Regrets
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic realization of what one has lost with time. Very nicely written.

July 23rd, 2025 18:27

Duty
Keeter C said:

Thank you. A break from
The somber world yet true nonetheless.

July 22nd, 2025 16:29

Duty
sorenbarrett said:

A golden piece of advice given when hidden in a type of nursery rhyme thereby making it a fable. A lovely write

July 22nd, 2025 14:14

Peace
Poetic Licence said:

Hopefully this is not the future, but I am not so sure, enjoyed the read

July 21st, 2025 17:39

Peace
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 21st, 2025 17:35

Peace
sorenbarrett said:

A view of the future in this poem. Political, geographical, logistical elements fall into this prophesy.

July 21st, 2025 15:11

Trepidation
RSM0812 said:

We are very complicated creatures. The ID and the subconscious end up reading different pages sometimes.

July 21st, 2025 09:03

Trepidation
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 20th, 2025 13:23

Trepidation
sorenbarrett said:

Well expressed the fear of falling basophobia akin to acrophobia many suffer from and some would interpret in various ways Freudian, Jungian on and on. Is it biological, psychological who knows but debilitating at times. Nicely written

July 20th, 2025 12:52

Trepidation
Poetic Licence said:

Nightmare feeling to have, like being in a vacuum of darkness, nicely expressed

July 20th, 2025 11:22

Beginnings
Priya Tomar said:

Sad side of social system....
Nicely done

July 19th, 2025 22:49

Beginnings
Poetic Licence said:

Sad result of technology, Even if you chose to read, in many places you are told what you can and what you can\'t, especially in educational establishments , enjoyed the read

July 19th, 2025 17:56

Beginnings
sorenbarrett said:

Sad but no one reads anymore, no one can spell, grammar is poor, why people don\'t even talk anymore. A good read.

July 19th, 2025 13:15

History
2781 said:

The final chapter has been written.

July 18th, 2025 10:08

History
arqios said:

Cyclical lessons of history like spin cycle after a wash. But will we ever learn?

July 18th, 2025 06:24

History
Priya Tomar said:

Nice poem

July 18th, 2025 03:01

History
Poetic Licence said:

Ovet history they come conquer and go, the author asks for one that will stay around, enjoyed the read

July 18th, 2025 00:51

History
sorenbarrett said:

Looking over history all empires have dwindled and died and this poem looks for the emergence of a new one that will last. Nicely done

July 17th, 2025 16:52

Results
arqios said:

Quite so.

July 17th, 2025 07:25

Results
sorenbarrett said:

This one requires thought. The more I see the more I perceive the more I perceive the more I realize and there we have it. A most interesting poem.

July 17th, 2025 04:15

Results
Priya Tomar said:

Very well

July 16th, 2025 21:57

Results
Demar Desu said:

Take a Bow

July 16th, 2025 21:25

Father
Priya Tomar said:

Logic vs emotions
Very well

July 13th, 2025 22:33

Red in the morning.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 12th, 2025 18:30

Red in the morning.
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful image turned metaphor in this poem. The storms of relationships can be treacherous but we hesitate to relinquish them. A lovely write

July 12th, 2025 15:55

Labor pains
sorenbarrett said:

In each human fetus there exist millions and millions of cells each doing their job. If they could think would they think they are wise? A great write with good metaphor. Lovely

July 11th, 2025 09:51

Snippet
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 10th, 2025 09:20

Snippet
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed it always can be much worse. A good thought to keep in mind when one is down. Good write

July 10th, 2025 03:50

Forgot
Poetic Licence said:

A very apt and poignant write at the current state of affairs, nicely expressed and written

July 5th, 2025 22:44

Forgot
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written a religious feel to this poem.

July 5th, 2025 17:32

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