Comments received on poems by John



The Eternal Locker
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and brave. Poignant write.

February 4th, 2024 13:01

Hope
Thomas W Case said:

Truly superb. You evoke emotion in the scene.

January 31st, 2024 12:03

Justice
John said:

I\'m pleased Thomas, always good to hear someone enjoyed your poem

January 31st, 2024 08:14

Silenced
John said:

Thanks bud that means alot

January 31st, 2024 08:13

Silenced
Thomas W Case said:

Very relatable. Powerful work.

January 30th, 2024 19:53

Justice
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful wor, John. I really enjoyed this.

January 29th, 2024 21:05

The Bottle
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant and very relatable. Great use of rhyme here.

January 28th, 2024 12:43

Tomorrow\'s Fish & Chip Paper
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work John. I can see the seagull in my mind\'s eye. I love fish and chips with malt vinegar. Great work.

January 27th, 2024 21:54

Hold my hand
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work, love the metaphor.

January 26th, 2024 10:23

Nature\'s Revenge
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted. Excellent work.

January 26th, 2024 10:13

Hold my hand
orchidee said:

Good write J.

January 26th, 2024 03:22

Butterfly
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant imagery. Fantastic work.

January 25th, 2024 15:54

Fraying Days
Thomas W Case said:

Great metaphor and symbolism.

January 23rd, 2024 19:41

Nature\'s Revenge
mvvenkataraman said:

Electricity gives shock,
Trains meet with accidents,
Planes also crash,
Cars, scooters and bikes
Also may bring death,
If humans follow the right way
And act as per conscience,
Accidents can be averted,
Modernity always has dangers,
So, we must cooperate
With nature in a proper way !

January 23rd, 2024 07:58

Alistair
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

January 17th, 2024 15:37