Comments received on poems by Kenny O\'Donnell
The Trying
Doggerel Dave said:
If the underlying message is keep trying, pushing, then you\'ve got it right, I think.
November 15th, 2024 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
If the underlying message is keep trying, pushing, then you\'ve got it right, I think.
November 15th, 2024 19:21
They charge rent in heaven
Tom Dylan said:
A great write! Absolutely fudging hilarious! :-D
November 15th, 2024 09:18
Tom Dylan said:
A great write! Absolutely fudging hilarious! :-D
November 15th, 2024 09:18
They charge rent in heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least you sussed the joint out and made a fair and rational decision that it wasn\'t for you....😂
November 14th, 2024 15:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least you sussed the joint out and made a fair and rational decision that it wasn\'t for you....😂
November 14th, 2024 15:39
A Terribly written confession
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Kenny. A powerful piece and I love the sentiment.
October 30th, 2024 10:14
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Kenny. A powerful piece and I love the sentiment.
October 30th, 2024 10:14
One two till six
sorenbarrett said:
A very cool story well written with good imagery and detail loved it the ending was what tied it together
August 20th, 2024 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
A very cool story well written with good imagery and detail loved it the ending was what tied it together
August 20th, 2024 12:04
Redmarsh
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
August 16th, 2024 18:26
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
August 16th, 2024 18:26
After
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that many have and when the last person to know you is gone who will remember then? Our influence goes on and ripples like waves in a pond. Our influence on one may affect another and so on, A butterfly effect if you would. Nicely written it has a haunting feeling to it.
August 15th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that many have and when the last person to know you is gone who will remember then? Our influence goes on and ripples like waves in a pond. Our influence on one may affect another and so on, A butterfly effect if you would. Nicely written it has a haunting feeling to it.
August 15th, 2024 05:10
After
Cassie58 said:
If you have been loved, you will stay in the memory of those still living who knew you. I remember my great grandmother well and she was born in the late 1800’s. Such a kind old lady. Guilt doesn’t come into it. It’s all about love. Nice poem. Have a happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
If you have been loved, you will stay in the memory of those still living who knew you. I remember my great grandmother well and she was born in the late 1800’s. Such a kind old lady. Guilt doesn’t come into it. It’s all about love. Nice poem. Have a happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:42
Birth of another tortured artist
Doggerel Dave said:
And they do - in great numbers......
Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
August 14th, 2024 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
And they do - in great numbers......
Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
August 14th, 2024 18:09
I went under Bliss
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles) I\'ll have it....all in good time...
August 14th, 2024 18:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles) I\'ll have it....all in good time...
August 14th, 2024 18:00
Birth of another tortured artist
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like poetry is beauty and art to those that will listen. Brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like poetry is beauty and art to those that will listen. Brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 08:58
Memories in waves
sorenbarrett said:
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves and others with delusions. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves and others with delusions. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:17
Chapbook
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 13:42
Fading
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and with good flow this poem reads easy and has a very positive message to give. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and with good flow this poem reads easy and has a very positive message to give. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 13:37
A letter home
sorenbarrett said:
A message that could apply for any war. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
A message that could apply for any war. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:53
Let me breathe
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully crafted this poem dips down into the well of emotion and brings up lost feelings of pain from the past. A great write
July 29th, 2024 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully crafted this poem dips down into the well of emotion and brings up lost feelings of pain from the past. A great write
July 29th, 2024 13:10
Advice for my son
Hurley said:
You just can\'t teach this! It\'s like reading Dante.
April 5th, 2024 03:13
Hurley said:
You just can\'t teach this! It\'s like reading Dante.
April 5th, 2024 03:13
