Comments received on poems by Kenny O\'Donnell
Such a crying shame
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love with a twist at the end. A fun read
March 27th, 2025 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love with a twist at the end. A fun read
March 27th, 2025 16:55
Hell in heaven
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda find yourself singing along as you read the write, enjoyed
March 26th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda find yourself singing along as you read the write, enjoyed
March 26th, 2025 12:52
Hell in heaven
sorenbarrett said:
This has the potential for a song. Nicely written and with chorus as well.
March 26th, 2025 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
This has the potential for a song. Nicely written and with chorus as well.
March 26th, 2025 11:47
We will never die
sorenbarrett said:
So metaphoric this poem strikes close to home I love the line (the lie stings even my own tongue ) a fave the message I take to be that one can take another\'s pain on through a lie and suffer it oneself. A most noble concept that many may debate the ethics of but seems most giving in intent.
March 25th, 2025 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
So metaphoric this poem strikes close to home I love the line (the lie stings even my own tongue ) a fave the message I take to be that one can take another\'s pain on through a lie and suffer it oneself. A most noble concept that many may debate the ethics of but seems most giving in intent.
March 25th, 2025 08:27
Lost moments
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and an exquisite poignancy, tendering a most painful reality many will resonate with, until I\'m left speechless yet so very, very sad. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it, albeit I\'m sorry you must taste such exquisite misery.
March 25th, 2025 00:25
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and an exquisite poignancy, tendering a most painful reality many will resonate with, until I\'m left speechless yet so very, very sad. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it, albeit I\'m sorry you must taste such exquisite misery.
March 25th, 2025 00:25
Lost moments
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about self doubts we have, shall we shan\'t we scenarios, we will never know unless we at least trying, nicely written and a pleasure to read
March 24th, 2025 17:08
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about self doubts we have, shall we shan\'t we scenarios, we will never know unless we at least trying, nicely written and a pleasure to read
March 24th, 2025 17:08
Lost moments
sorenbarrett said:
We sell ourselves short and in doing so lock the door to what could have been. Maybe it would work, maybe not who\'s to know if you don\'t give yourself a chance and try, then persist until it is certain. A wonderful write of the inner self and its doubts.
March 24th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
We sell ourselves short and in doing so lock the door to what could have been. Maybe it would work, maybe not who\'s to know if you don\'t give yourself a chance and try, then persist until it is certain. A wonderful write of the inner self and its doubts.
March 24th, 2025 15:42
The Trying
arqios said:
But the trying is tough and the sense of worth doesn’t come readily. Indeed! So here I remain all the soggier for wear.
December 29th, 2024 05:53
arqios said:
But the trying is tough and the sense of worth doesn’t come readily. Indeed! So here I remain all the soggier for wear.
December 29th, 2024 05:53
The Trying
Doggerel Dave said:
If the underlying message is keep trying, pushing, then you\'ve got it right, I think.
November 15th, 2024 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
If the underlying message is keep trying, pushing, then you\'ve got it right, I think.
November 15th, 2024 19:21
They charge rent in heaven
Tom Dylan said:
A great write! Absolutely fudging hilarious! :-D
November 15th, 2024 09:18
Tom Dylan said:
A great write! Absolutely fudging hilarious! :-D
November 15th, 2024 09:18
They charge rent in heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least you sussed the joint out and made a fair and rational decision that it wasn\'t for you....😂
November 14th, 2024 15:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least you sussed the joint out and made a fair and rational decision that it wasn\'t for you....😂
November 14th, 2024 15:39
A Terribly written confession
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Kenny. A powerful piece and I love the sentiment.
October 30th, 2024 10:14
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Kenny. A powerful piece and I love the sentiment.
October 30th, 2024 10:14
One two till six
sorenbarrett said:
A very cool story well written with good imagery and detail loved it the ending was what tied it together
August 20th, 2024 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
A very cool story well written with good imagery and detail loved it the ending was what tied it together
August 20th, 2024 12:04
Redmarsh
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
August 16th, 2024 18:26
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
August 16th, 2024 18:26
After
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that many have and when the last person to know you is gone who will remember then? Our influence goes on and ripples like waves in a pond. Our influence on one may affect another and so on, A butterfly effect if you would. Nicely written it has a haunting feeling to it.
August 15th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that many have and when the last person to know you is gone who will remember then? Our influence goes on and ripples like waves in a pond. Our influence on one may affect another and so on, A butterfly effect if you would. Nicely written it has a haunting feeling to it.
August 15th, 2024 05:10
After
Cassie58 said:
If you have been loved, you will stay in the memory of those still living who knew you. I remember my great grandmother well and she was born in the late 1800’s. Such a kind old lady. Guilt doesn’t come into it. It’s all about love. Nice poem. Have a happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
If you have been loved, you will stay in the memory of those still living who knew you. I remember my great grandmother well and she was born in the late 1800’s. Such a kind old lady. Guilt doesn’t come into it. It’s all about love. Nice poem. Have a happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:42
Birth of another tortured artist
Doggerel Dave said:
And they do - in great numbers......
Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
August 14th, 2024 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
And they do - in great numbers......
Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
August 14th, 2024 18:09
I went under Bliss
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles) I\'ll have it....all in good time...
August 14th, 2024 18:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles) I\'ll have it....all in good time...
August 14th, 2024 18:00
Birth of another tortured artist
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like poetry is beauty and art to those that will listen. Brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like poetry is beauty and art to those that will listen. Brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 08:58
Memories in waves
sorenbarrett said:
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves and others with delusions. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves and others with delusions. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:17
Chapbook
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 13:42
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