Comments received on poems by Lei



Your Venomous Lies
Cassie58 said:



October 19th, 2024 14:08

Your Venomous Lies
Mase ♪ said:

Beautiful

October 10th, 2024 13:20

endless memories
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 8th, 2024 09:26

writers block + the thoughts that consume us
sorenbarrett said:

That last statement was a bit vague I hope either way writing or self it does not happen. Keep up the good work.

August 13th, 2024 05:48

writers block + the thoughts that consume us
MR.apocalypse said:

i send my hope

August 13th, 2024 02:52

vent poem
sorenbarrett said:

Terrible feelings that one may not be accepted by one\'s family for being who they are. Nice write.

August 12th, 2024 06:11

sorry i\'ve been gone for a while ( the girl i once loved)
sorenbarrett said:

Fragile as a bomb. A most interesting line. They do shatter you know. Most unique. Loved it

August 11th, 2024 20:06

sorry i\'ve been gone for a while ( the girl i once loved)
Mase ♪ said:

Good write Lei. Welcome back

August 11th, 2024 19:45

Untitled
Mase ♪ said:

We\'ll if I could be funny I would, but I simply can\'t so.... Lol, sorry positive can be boring sometimes.

April 27th, 2024 17:08

Untitled
Mase ♪ said:

Beautiful Untitled Write Lei. Your not alone..

April 27th, 2024 17:03

Falling down
2781 said:

Time to get stuck in the good book.

April 26th, 2024 07:13

Please don\'t leave me (TW mentions suicide)
Lei said:

yeah i know its just hard for me to accept that sometimes but thank you

April 22nd, 2024 17:49

Please don\'t leave me (TW mentions suicide)
Mase ♪ said:

Jesus Christ knows the worst about you. Nonetheless, He is the one that loves you the most.

April 22nd, 2024 14:53

Poem I made for my science presentation (deforestation)
Mase ♪ said:

Wow, Bet no one else actually wrote a poem for their presentation. Nice write Lei.

April 21st, 2024 16:46

This sounds creepy
Alan R said:

Oh this really is creepy, lovely!

April 18th, 2024 15:45

This sounds creepy
Mase ♪ said:

Ouch, you taking my brain? Lol.
Good write Lei. Short but surely powerfull.🙌

April 18th, 2024 14:32

To be loved
Cassie58 said:

Sadly we do grow in strength as a result of challenges in life. Pain and suffering hurt like hell but they do make us more resilient eventually. I enjoyed my visit to your page.

April 18th, 2024 08:19

Random poem I made while in a mental health crisis
Lorenz said:

Inspired and inspiring in your deep trouble! .

April 16th, 2024 06:11

Random poem I made while in a mental health crisis
2781 said:

Someone\'s giving you the wrong message.

April 16th, 2024 05:27

bullying
Mase ♪ said:

Study while others are sleeping; work while others are loafing; prepare while others are playing; and dream while others are wishing.

-William Arthur Ward

April 13th, 2024 00:31

goodbye is always the hardest
Mase ♪ said:

Nicely written. Goodbye... For now.

April 12th, 2024 23:52

goodbye is always the hardest
orchidee said:

Erm, say hello then, not goodbye! heehee.
Not to self - Do shut up sometimes! lol.


April 10th, 2024 14:12

I don\'t miss you ( a poem for my first girlfriend )
Lei said:

I\'m so bored I wish we were aloud to write more than one poem a day


April 9th, 2024 00:36


I don\'t miss you ( a poem for my first girlfriend )
orchidee said:

Did ya miss me though? lol.

April 8th, 2024 11:51

dear younger me
Accidental Poet said:

Suicide should never be an option. Smile and light up the world. 😉👍

April 8th, 2024 01:04

dear younger me
orchidee said:

Short answer to last lines - yes.
You won\'t surely throw away your young life, and intelligent too?

April 7th, 2024 11:52

The beauty of the mind
Lei said:

do you have any tips on how I can make my poems more humanly?
and also I chose to post that one because the rest of my poems are about depression self harm suicide etc so I thought that would be the safest option, but thank you for your compliment I appreciate it even though you didn\'t mean it in a good way Lol

April 6th, 2024 13:23

The beauty of the mind
2781 said:

AI can try, but where does conscientious lie?

April 6th, 2024 08:36