Little Green Monster
Elizabeth Eyres said:

It is one of the few feelings that creeps up and consumes, it\'s been a while but ewwww I don\'t like that monster.
Love your poem

January 31st, 2017 17:02

Feelings
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2017 14:23

My Drug
PerpetualFlowers said:

Wow, I'm 15 (so close to your age) But, I can't write this well. I'm really impressed honestly. Good job, keep it up!

April 9th, 2016 11:56

My Drug
Catherine Houston said:

Your poem sticks out brighter than the sun. It has meaning and purpose. It describes life and death. I also shared in the pain of addiction. The numbing. The flying on a high cloud. I woke to a substance. I slept to a substance. It stole my life several times. It crept up on me like a poisonous snake. Biting my vein each time. It scarred me emotionally and physically. I even enjoyed it. It made me into my own character. I could do all things without fear. But when it was gone. It turned me into something that represented a horror film. The sweat that dripped down my face. Could represent the blood that was soon to come. It spoke a message. I looked like a zombie. I attacked like a zombie. I needed fed and it didn't matter much how i was gonna eat. It can be over come. It is powerful and it calls for your life. It will collapse your veins, dreams, family, and all relationships. I as addicted for well over fifteen years. It formed its first seed at thirteen. I will not build your head and tell you that it is easy to over come. I will not tell you it will not be painful. But i will tell you I have 16 months and life regains more joy everyday. If you ever want to talk send me a message and i will be right her by your side. The storm can be overcome together.


April 7th, 2016 13:49

Fly
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI LADY K - Thanks for sharing a very inspirational poem ! So often in times of sadness we pray "Oh that i had the wings of a Dove so I could fly far far away and start anew !" I love all the sentiments in your poem - it echoes thoughts i sometimes have ! To be unknown - to forget the past - lose my hidden pains & worries and have a vibrant present ! It is a lovely poem to recite replete with genuine pathos - PERFECT - I want to fly too ! Thanks for adding me as a Friend - please check my Poems - BRIAN.

April 1st, 2016 15:30

My Drug
chaz2296 said:

Another strong poem brilliant

March 29th, 2016 08:50

Fly
Severus Alexander said:

Gorgeous!

I love it.

March 28th, 2016 09:58

In one year
chaz2296 said:

I really like the way you write your poems.Theres a gentle sadness to this one which I think really comes across.Its a really good poem.

March 13th, 2016 10:57