Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~`` Knees - Parody of Trees
sorenbarrett said:
A great rhythm and rhyme reminiscent of \"I think I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree\" A most fun read. Loved the imagery.
August 5th, 2024 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great rhythm and rhyme reminiscent of \"I think I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree\" A most fun read. Loved the imagery.
August 5th, 2024 12:42
~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Thad.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Thad.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:52
~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale
Doggerel Dave said:
That be no parrot as far as I can see, Thad. That be a Sulphur-Crested-Cockatoo-slightly-the-worse-for-wear.
IF my identification is correct, then best advice is to keep him supplied, otherwise he might take to chewing your woodwork. Go Aussi go….
August 4th, 2024 17:19
Doggerel Dave said:
That be no parrot as far as I can see, Thad. That be a Sulphur-Crested-Cockatoo-slightly-the-worse-for-wear.
IF my identification is correct, then best advice is to keep him supplied, otherwise he might take to chewing your woodwork. Go Aussi go….
August 4th, 2024 17:19
~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale
sorenbarrett said:
My friend had a Doberman that would only drink beer. It was the most mellow Doberman ever seen. A fun read
August 4th, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
My friend had a Doberman that would only drink beer. It was the most mellow Doberman ever seen. A fun read
August 4th, 2024 15:55
~> So Sad, Cookie Monster\'s Gone Mad!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:25
`* Heroin *`
Dan Williams said:
So sad. This just has to be personal. Well done.
August 3rd, 2024 23:54
Dan Williams said:
So sad. This just has to be personal. Well done.
August 3rd, 2024 23:54
~> So Sad, Cookie Monster\'s Gone Mad!
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe the poor fella’s been terribly misunderstood. All he needs is a little love, a stroll round the garden admiring the autumn leaves – you know, the kind of stuff youse poets and poetessesses do so well. Don’t mind me – I’ll take a back seat ‘cos I’m no good at that stuff….. Oh that reminds me I meant to see my manicurist……
August 3rd, 2024 22:25
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe the poor fella’s been terribly misunderstood. All he needs is a little love, a stroll round the garden admiring the autumn leaves – you know, the kind of stuff youse poets and poetessesses do so well. Don’t mind me – I’ll take a back seat ‘cos I’m no good at that stuff….. Oh that reminds me I meant to see my manicurist……
August 3rd, 2024 22:25
`* Heroin *`
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Thad in this sorry tale. Sadly addiction is so common and I have known several who have taken this path. They didn’t all survive either. So very nicely composed and exoressed with feeling. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:52
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Thad in this sorry tale. Sadly addiction is so common and I have known several who have taken this path. They didn’t all survive either. So very nicely composed and exoressed with feeling. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:52
`* Heroin *`
Goldfinch60 said:
Any addiction can be so dangerous and life taking Thad.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Any addiction can be so dangerous and life taking Thad.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:26
`* Heroin *`
Doggerel Dave said:
Witnessed this Thad. Nothing there the slightest bit funny. I\'ll save you the effort:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-126520
Fine poem. Thanks
August 2nd, 2024 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Witnessed this Thad. Nothing there the slightest bit funny. I\'ll save you the effort:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-126520
Fine poem. Thanks
August 2nd, 2024 19:15
`* Heroin *`
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great emphasis to the message.
August 2nd, 2024 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great emphasis to the message.
August 2nd, 2024 15:54
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Thad, I too have that type of love.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Thad, I too have that type of love.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:47
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
Doggerel Dave said:
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line, but...
It never comes,
It never comes.
August 1st, 2024 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line, but...
It never comes,
It never comes.
August 1st, 2024 18:02
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
August 1st, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
August 1st, 2024 09:28
~> It Was, A Female Fly
sorenbarrett said:
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the subject was fun. Perfection
August 1st, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the subject was fun. Perfection
August 1st, 2024 04:33
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
Goldfinch60 said:
New things are always coming in our lives Thad.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
New things are always coming in our lives Thad.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:37
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. ‘Trouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without them glasses he woulda seen two ends to the stick and we woulda got a fork earlier and his competitors woulda only patented a stick….Shows new technology aint always wot it’s cracked up to be…..
July 31st, 2024 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. ‘Trouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without them glasses he woulda seen two ends to the stick and we woulda got a fork earlier and his competitors woulda only patented a stick….Shows new technology aint always wot it’s cracked up to be…..
July 31st, 2024 16:34
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
sorenbarrett said:
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51
~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, I’m a quick learner) so with that past, I must break it to you gently that I’m with puss all the way…
Apart from the challenge and fun I get from your work, I admire your exploration of different forms.
July 30th, 2024 22:12
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, I’m a quick learner) so with that past, I must break it to you gently that I’m with puss all the way…
Apart from the challenge and fun I get from your work, I admire your exploration of different forms.
July 30th, 2024 22:12
~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play on words and spelling nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play on words and spelling nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:16
~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks )
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
Cassie58 said:
You brightened my smile with this fun read. Thanks Thad. All the best.
July 29th, 2024 22:05
Cassie58 said:
You brightened my smile with this fun read. Thanks Thad. All the best.
July 29th, 2024 22:05
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since we first spent time all those years ago. Glad to know those boys appear none the worse for wear… must have access to some really top grade shit.
Any more limericks coming our way?
July 29th, 2024 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since we first spent time all those years ago. Glad to know those boys appear none the worse for wear… must have access to some really top grade shit.
Any more limericks coming our way?
July 29th, 2024 17:58
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol.
Donald Duck never wore any trousers. lol.
July 29th, 2024 13:08
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol.
Donald Duck never wore any trousers. lol.
July 29th, 2024 13:08
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
July 29th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
July 29th, 2024 10:15
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Thad, be care for what you wish.
Good fun write.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Thad, be care for what you wish.
Good fun write.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:43
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a very dodgy garden furniture supplier who utilized an early unsophisticated AI, as yet unable to interpret the subtleties of the English language… Should be a warning to any wishing well devotee (those polystyrene bricks aint going to last, either….)
Up to your usual standard.
July 28th, 2024 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a very dodgy garden furniture supplier who utilized an early unsophisticated AI, as yet unable to interpret the subtleties of the English language… Should be a warning to any wishing well devotee (those polystyrene bricks aint going to last, either….)
Up to your usual standard.
July 28th, 2024 17:24
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