Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
`* Heroin *`
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great emphasis to the message.
August 2nd, 2024 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great emphasis to the message.
August 2nd, 2024 15:54
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Thad, I too have that type of love.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Thad, I too have that type of love.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:47
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
Doggerel Dave said:
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line, but...
It never comes,
It never comes.
August 1st, 2024 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line, but...
It never comes,
It never comes.
August 1st, 2024 18:02
`*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
August 1st, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
August 1st, 2024 09:28
~> It Was, A Female Fly
sorenbarrett said:
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the subject was fun. Perfection
August 1st, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the subject was fun. Perfection
August 1st, 2024 04:33
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
Goldfinch60 said:
New things are always coming in our lives Thad.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
New things are always coming in our lives Thad.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:37
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. ‘Trouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without them glasses he woulda seen two ends to the stick and we woulda got a fork earlier and his competitors woulda only patented a stick….Shows new technology aint always wot it’s cracked up to be…..
July 31st, 2024 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. ‘Trouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without them glasses he woulda seen two ends to the stick and we woulda got a fork earlier and his competitors woulda only patented a stick….Shows new technology aint always wot it’s cracked up to be…..
July 31st, 2024 16:34
~> A Troglodyte Named Zog!
sorenbarrett said:
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51
~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, I’m a quick learner) so with that past, I must break it to you gently that I’m with puss all the way…
Apart from the challenge and fun I get from your work, I admire your exploration of different forms.
July 30th, 2024 22:12
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, I’m a quick learner) so with that past, I must break it to you gently that I’m with puss all the way…
Apart from the challenge and fun I get from your work, I admire your exploration of different forms.
July 30th, 2024 22:12
~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play on words and spelling nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play on words and spelling nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:16
~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks )
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
Cassie58 said:
You brightened my smile with this fun read. Thanks Thad. All the best.
July 29th, 2024 22:05
Cassie58 said:
You brightened my smile with this fun read. Thanks Thad. All the best.
July 29th, 2024 22:05
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since we first spent time all those years ago. Glad to know those boys appear none the worse for wear… must have access to some really top grade shit.
Any more limericks coming our way?
July 29th, 2024 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since we first spent time all those years ago. Glad to know those boys appear none the worse for wear… must have access to some really top grade shit.
Any more limericks coming our way?
July 29th, 2024 17:58
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol.
Donald Duck never wore any trousers. lol.
July 29th, 2024 13:08
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol.
Donald Duck never wore any trousers. lol.
July 29th, 2024 13:08
~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
July 29th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
July 29th, 2024 10:15
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Thad, be care for what you wish.
Good fun write.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Thad, be care for what you wish.
Good fun write.
Andy
July 29th, 2024 01:43
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a very dodgy garden furniture supplier who utilized an early unsophisticated AI, as yet unable to interpret the subtleties of the English language… Should be a warning to any wishing well devotee (those polystyrene bricks aint going to last, either….)
Up to your usual standard.
July 28th, 2024 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a very dodgy garden furniture supplier who utilized an early unsophisticated AI, as yet unable to interpret the subtleties of the English language… Should be a warning to any wishing well devotee (those polystyrene bricks aint going to last, either….)
Up to your usual standard.
July 28th, 2024 17:24
~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable
aDarkerMind said:
I will now be very careful what I wish for Thad...
good one my friend.
July 28th, 2024 14:08
aDarkerMind said:
I will now be very careful what I wish for Thad...
good one my friend.
July 28th, 2024 14:08
~.> Little Miss Muffet ( Parody )
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read. He should have had a check of the DNA.
July 28th, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read. He should have had a check of the DNA.
July 28th, 2024 05:13
~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Thad, did she get her glass eye out of your drink?
Andy
July 28th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Thad, did she get her glass eye out of your drink?
Andy
July 28th, 2024 01:56
~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme)
sorenbarrett said:
Unsightly I say. I wouldn\'t let a small thing like that upset the night. Well written and a fun read.
July 27th, 2024 20:02
sorenbarrett said:
Unsightly I say. I wouldn\'t let a small thing like that upset the night. Well written and a fun read.
July 27th, 2024 20:02
~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme)
Doggerel Dave said:
Any account which includes a proclamation that it is no lie is normally met with a certain scepticism by me. I’m pretty sure further stanzas would poetify her wooden leg and wig. However the middle portion, I admit did get me going a little….so overall, well done Sir.
July 27th, 2024 19:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Any account which includes a proclamation that it is no lie is normally met with a certain scepticism by me. I’m pretty sure further stanzas would poetify her wooden leg and wig. However the middle portion, I admit did get me going a little….so overall, well done Sir.
July 27th, 2024 19:03
~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal
Goldfinch60 said:
I do not need that pill as all is great in my life with my Mary.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I do not need that pill as all is great in my life with my Mary.
Andy
July 27th, 2024 01:26
~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not panic folks just because Shakespeare is spinning in his grave like a turbine since this poet, Thad Wilk has played with the form which bears his name and utilized it in a crass advertising exercise.
Just feed him a couple of Fuckitol………
July 26th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not panic folks just because Shakespeare is spinning in his grave like a turbine since this poet, Thad Wilk has played with the form which bears his name and utilized it in a crass advertising exercise.
Just feed him a couple of Fuckitol………
July 26th, 2024 17:05
~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal
sorenbarrett said:
Have tried that pill sometimes it works and sometimes not its all a matter of thought A most fun read
July 26th, 2024 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Have tried that pill sometimes it works and sometimes not its all a matter of thought A most fun read
July 26th, 2024 12:33
~*` At The End Of My Rainbow `*~
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t knock the gold, Thad - you could make an absolute fortune in the Valentine\'s Day card business.😊
July 24th, 2024 17:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t knock the gold, Thad - you could make an absolute fortune in the Valentine\'s Day card business.😊
July 24th, 2024 17:55
~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet )
sorenbarrett said:
A good write in a format that I have difficulty with. Never had much luck at cards but did at love. Both have the same rules if you stay in the game too long you\'re bound to loose
July 24th, 2024 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
A good write in a format that I have difficulty with. Never had much luck at cards but did at love. Both have the same rules if you stay in the game too long you\'re bound to loose
July 24th, 2024 06:57
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