Comments received on poems by Maplespal
12th poem for: “T.N.D” - Please Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
Dinner Date
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Dinner Date
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
What Makes us Superior?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
What Makes us Superior?
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture
Bella Shepard said:
The final image impressed forever, as perfect as you remember, so beautifully said. The sentiment gently and lovingly conveyed. A touching and very tender write dear poet!
August 4th, 2024 12:00
Bella Shepard said:
The final image impressed forever, as perfect as you remember, so beautifully said. The sentiment gently and lovingly conveyed. A touching and very tender write dear poet!
August 4th, 2024 12:00
7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:24
6th poem for - “That Night’s Dream” - Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
August 3rd, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
August 3rd, 2024 06:17
4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain
Bella Shepard said:
In dreams we can find those lost to us, and the feeling will linger on after day has dawned, they are never gone. Beautifully and lovingly written my friend.
August 2nd, 2024 09:24
Bella Shepard said:
In dreams we can find those lost to us, and the feeling will linger on after day has dawned, they are never gone. Beautifully and lovingly written my friend.
August 2nd, 2024 09:24
4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is a bitter sweet experience. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is a bitter sweet experience. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 05:51
I\'m Watching
Eugene S. said:
Reminiscent of \"Every Breath You Take\" by The Police. Very possessive and \'atmospheric\' in a captivating way!
August 1st, 2024 11:35
Eugene S. said:
Reminiscent of \"Every Breath You Take\" by The Police. Very possessive and \'atmospheric\' in a captivating way!
August 1st, 2024 11:35
I\'m Watching
sorenbarrett said:
Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal of flower or something.
August 1st, 2024 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal of flower or something.
August 1st, 2024 05:53
An Arguments End, Together, and Stay Within Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29
Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You
sorenbarrett said:
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating three poems into one. I like this and it seems to work well for you. It gives a greater meaning to the piece and a broader spectrum overall. Very nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating three poems into one. I like this and it seems to work well for you. It gives a greater meaning to the piece and a broader spectrum overall. Very nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 06:28
Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You
2781 said:
Shame about the voice!
July 30th, 2024 06:10
2781 said:
Shame about the voice!
July 30th, 2024 06:10
Let us talk
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call it lies others exaggeration others a different point of view. What ever it is the point was made.
July 29th, 2024 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call it lies others exaggeration others a different point of view. What ever it is the point was made.
July 29th, 2024 09:51
do it for me
sorenbarrett said:
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the reader along on its currents. A wonderful ride.
July 28th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the reader along on its currents. A wonderful ride.
July 28th, 2024 06:13
3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\"
2781 said:
Emotion is in the truth
July 27th, 2024 08:48
2781 said:
Emotion is in the truth
July 27th, 2024 08:48
3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\"
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are very nicely worded. Feeling that emotion as the reader tells me this is a work of art not just a poem.
July 27th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are very nicely worded. Feeling that emotion as the reader tells me this is a work of art not just a poem.
July 27th, 2024 06:36
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