Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Cheating on her
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled. Well done
May 6th, 2026 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled. Well done
May 6th, 2026 20:49
I still visit you
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:40
Thoughts of six
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly written in good rhyme. Loved it. It is also one number in 369 the number that Tesla felt held the key to the universe. A fun read
May 4th, 2026 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly written in good rhyme. Loved it. It is also one number in 369 the number that Tesla felt held the key to the universe. A fun read
May 4th, 2026 05:42
Growl
Friendship said:
I am glad you fed your dog. Nicely done. Your poem addresses themes of addiction, neglect, and the human condition, showcasing the internal conflict between physical needs and the desire for temporary escape through substances like marijuana and coffee.
May 3rd, 2026 06:08
Friendship said:
I am glad you fed your dog. Nicely done. Your poem addresses themes of addiction, neglect, and the human condition, showcasing the internal conflict between physical needs and the desire for temporary escape through substances like marijuana and coffee.
May 3rd, 2026 06:08
An explanation to self
sorenbarrett said:
Well written entropy prevails in nature and in all things. We all must fall. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well written entropy prevails in nature and in all things. We all must fall. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 12:35
I thought it?
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point and a good question indeed. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point and a good question indeed. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:14
The rally
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for how well written this is. It is quite clear what this refers to and seems to apply quite well.
April 30th, 2026 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for how well written this is. It is quite clear what this refers to and seems to apply quite well.
April 30th, 2026 05:47
Hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Clever cannibalistic chatter contrived in this fun read
April 29th, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Clever cannibalistic chatter contrived in this fun read
April 29th, 2026 05:26
Let me go
sorenbarrett said:
Decisions, decisions in this poem of not staying as it is. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Decisions, decisions in this poem of not staying as it is. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:57
If only
sorenbarrett said:
Synchronous dreaming and thoughts liked by sleep. A most interesting thought. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Synchronous dreaming and thoughts liked by sleep. A most interesting thought. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:31
The hole
sorenbarrett said:
This analogy that grows into a metaphor has meaning in its emptiness becoming a paradox in its concreteness. Well written it makes one think and is a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
This analogy that grows into a metaphor has meaning in its emptiness becoming a paradox in its concreteness. Well written it makes one think and is a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:54
Together
sorenbarrett said:
Quietly romantic this poem walks through a relationship. Well written
April 25th, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Quietly romantic this poem walks through a relationship. Well written
April 25th, 2026 06:26
Freeze a hole & Let\'s
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like your first poem of freeze a hole in its images and fun twist on common known lines. The second is provocative and good fun in a sense of satire. Well done
April 24th, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like your first poem of freeze a hole in its images and fun twist on common known lines. The second is provocative and good fun in a sense of satire. Well done
April 24th, 2026 05:07
Progress?
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the imagery of suffering, death, punishment, and the moral implications of how society deals with evil. The poem reflects on the past\'s physical brutality and compares it to contemporary practices, suggesting a persistent cycle of violence.
April 23rd, 2026 06:55
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the imagery of suffering, death, punishment, and the moral implications of how society deals with evil. The poem reflects on the past\'s physical brutality and compares it to contemporary practices, suggesting a persistent cycle of violence.
April 23rd, 2026 06:55
Progress?
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Powerful the use of parallels past and present, religion and execution implied innocence of a crucified god and criminals all packed into a short that forces the question of have we really made any progress as a species. A fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Powerful the use of parallels past and present, religion and execution implied innocence of a crucified god and criminals all packed into a short that forces the question of have we really made any progress as a species. A fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:11
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