Comments received on poems by Maplespal



Thought 2
TobaniNataiella said:

Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty

December 18th, 2024 18:32

Thought 2
sorenbarrett said:

What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words

December 18th, 2024 17:12

Converse
TobaniNataiella said:

A lovely poem showing the importance of talking, enjoyable read

December 16th, 2024 01:35

Converse
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its possabilities. Nicely worded

December 15th, 2024 20:06

thought 1
TobaniNataiella said:

Clever piece of double edge writing, really like it

December 14th, 2024 15:10

thought 1
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording and well done. Very nice

December 14th, 2024 13:35

Empty thoughts - extended v of Empty Thought
sorenbarrett said:

Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of showing our emotions and finding just the right one to convey the proper meaning and feeling is not always easy. Even knowing ourself what we want to convey is difficult. Nicely written

December 14th, 2024 04:28

Empty thoughts - extended v of Empty Thought
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 13th, 2024 18:01

Empty thought
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 12th, 2024 14:06

Empty thought
TobaniNataiella said:

I empathise with the sentiment of the sad poem sometimes you can hear it all to clearly, thank you for the read

December 12th, 2024 11:41

Empty thought
sorenbarrett said:

.So true emptiness has much to say. so nicely said

December 12th, 2024 10:48

For the readers I write
sorenbarrett said:

A most inspiring poem written from the heart of a poet. A gracious thank you to all the inspirations that create poetry. A most lovely write

December 11th, 2024 15:53

For the readers I write
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 11th, 2024 14:49

For the readers I write
TobaniNataiella said:

A beautiful poem of a thousand story`s, really enjoyed it.

December 11th, 2024 14:01

My mind rests
TobaniNataiella said:

It paints the picture for you, enjoyed the read

December 11th, 2024 00:43

My mind rests
sorenbarrett said:

Had to shovel too much snow in my life so moved south where I\'ll never see another flake. You brought back old memories. Nicely written

December 10th, 2024 20:31

I write for you
TobaniNataiella said:

I am glad she inspires you, enjoyed the read

December 9th, 2024 15:36

Hot and amazing
sorenbarrett said:

All the views now represented. It is always important to see things from all sides. Well done

December 8th, 2024 15:06

I escaped
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 6th, 2024 15:33

I escaped
2781 said:

Seems to be a familiar theme?

December 6th, 2024 06:48

I escaped
sorenbarrett said:

This writing has a most familiar sound to it from your last. Again, another good seductive and sent to us poem.

December 6th, 2024 05:30

That hot day
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 5th, 2024 14:46

That hot day
TobaniNataiella said:

Very clever writing, leads to where ever your imagination wants to go with it, a really good read, thank you

December 5th, 2024 14:21

That hot day
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful beginning and entry into this poem. The drop of sweat was ingenious as it moved it provoked anticipation and arrousal. Very nicely done

December 5th, 2024 13:23

Off I drove
Doggerel Dave said:

PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?

December 4th, 2024 07:03

Off I drove
sorenbarrett said:

Frightening thoughts that many have already had some time in their life. Although some find this disturbing, I think it is more normal than most people want to admit. A start look at one moment in life nicely written.

December 4th, 2024 05:27

Off I drove
TobaniNataiella said:

A emotional poem, tenderly written, Thank you

December 4th, 2024 05:23

2 poems again brain dump
TobaniNataiella said:

I enjoyed the read including the bonus one.

December 3rd, 2024 10:58

2 poems again brain dump
sorenbarrett said:

Poems that grow darker. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow beautiful images as well nicely done.

December 3rd, 2024 07:48

2 poems again brain dump
Demar Desu said:

2 for 1s are always good

December 3rd, 2024 06:45

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