Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Imposing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
Camping
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
Fire starter
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
A morning moment
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
Made in America
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks its sentiments regarding guns and their potential damage. Nicely said
June 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks its sentiments regarding guns and their potential damage. Nicely said
June 11th, 2026 04:47
Clouded
sorenbarrett said:
This wonderful short casts the image of being carried on drugs cloud. Well done
June 10th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
This wonderful short casts the image of being carried on drugs cloud. Well done
June 10th, 2026 06:45
Bored and gunned
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling the rhyme of a serial killer. Short and sweet but hauntingly chilling
June 9th, 2026 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling the rhyme of a serial killer. Short and sweet but hauntingly chilling
June 9th, 2026 06:16
Scrap piece #1 used
sorenbarrett said:
A good read. Just because present technology does not allow it to be seen does not mean it isn\'t there. So it is proven. Well written
June 8th, 2026 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
A good read. Just because present technology does not allow it to be seen does not mean it isn\'t there. So it is proven. Well written
June 8th, 2026 12:47
Air head me
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of pain and a need for its removal. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of pain and a need for its removal. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:54
Too soon
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of multiple meaning here can be taken literally or metaphorically to reflect a loving desire. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of multiple meaning here can be taken literally or metaphorically to reflect a loving desire. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:10
Let\'s try
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of need in this poem and of want. well done
June 5th, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of need in this poem and of want. well done
June 5th, 2026 16:39
Those ones
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem with a good deal of agitation and some anger at what one perceives as avoidance. Lovely
June 4th, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem with a good deal of agitation and some anger at what one perceives as avoidance. Lovely
June 4th, 2026 07:04
The 4 I love
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
One last
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
One last
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
The math of it
sorenbarrett said:
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit mind boggling as evidenced in the answer for all whole numbers summed from one to infinity being -1 over twelve.
June 1st, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit mind boggling as evidenced in the answer for all whole numbers summed from one to infinity being -1 over twelve.
June 1st, 2026 04:33
Ready for departure
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in different creative ways for emphasis
May 31st, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in different creative ways for emphasis
May 31st, 2026 05:55
Where are you
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poet expresses a deep emotional connection to the moon, which serves as a metaphor for a loved one who is often absent or difficult to understand.
May 30th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poet expresses a deep emotional connection to the moon, which serves as a metaphor for a loved one who is often absent or difficult to understand.
May 30th, 2026 08:50
Where are you
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is worded well and flows well. It is call for a lost love. Nicely done
May 30th, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is worded well and flows well. It is call for a lost love. Nicely done
May 30th, 2026 07:37
Rotating days
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line and its rhyme with the previous that cemented the fave on this one. It is wistful and a bit haunting and that last line did it.
May 29th, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line and its rhyme with the previous that cemented the fave on this one. It is wistful and a bit haunting and that last line did it.
May 29th, 2026 08:18
I beg and I plea
Paul Bell said:
Ah the old late night movies.
Keeps you going into the next day, and the next.
May 28th, 2026 14:33
Paul Bell said:
Ah the old late night movies.
Keeps you going into the next day, and the next.
May 28th, 2026 14:33
I beg and I plea
sorenbarrett said:
Whether literal or metaphoric this poem speaks of connections. Well done
May 28th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Whether literal or metaphoric this poem speaks of connections. Well done
May 28th, 2026 08:17
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