Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Anxiety
Maplespal said:
It is hard to put such problems into words that make sense.
thank you for liking it.
June 26th, 2024 07:36
Maplespal said:
It is hard to put such problems into words that make sense.
thank you for liking it.
June 26th, 2024 07:36
Anxiety
Neilton said:
Wow that was intense as I have had many anxiety attacks this past year for various reasons! To be honest I have no idea how to stop feeling stressed but I\'m surely working on it ! Great poem!!!
June 26th, 2024 07:32
Neilton said:
Wow that was intense as I have had many anxiety attacks this past year for various reasons! To be honest I have no idea how to stop feeling stressed but I\'m surely working on it ! Great poem!!!
June 26th, 2024 07:32
Just a Mistake
froya said:
People will come and people will go
The sun will shine bright
Humans will feed from spite
And flowers will always grow
The circle of life will never change
There is always an end and a start
And tho it might feel strange
Don’t shatter your own fragile heart
Perhaps you were not a mistake
But a lesson they needed to learn
how souls and bridges can burn
and how easily promises break
And that love is always hard to earn
So keep creating art and give yourself a chance for a fresh start
June 23rd, 2024 08:05
froya said:
People will come and people will go
The sun will shine bright
Humans will feed from spite
And flowers will always grow
The circle of life will never change
There is always an end and a start
And tho it might feel strange
Don’t shatter your own fragile heart
Perhaps you were not a mistake
But a lesson they needed to learn
how souls and bridges can burn
and how easily promises break
And that love is always hard to earn
So keep creating art and give yourself a chance for a fresh start
June 23rd, 2024 08:05
Sight
Maplespal said:
Yes! our sight is both internal into our thoughts and external from what we can see outside our heads with our eyes.
mine is scrambled as well, hard time focusing.
June 20th, 2024 09:45
Maplespal said:
Yes! our sight is both internal into our thoughts and external from what we can see outside our heads with our eyes.
mine is scrambled as well, hard time focusing.
June 20th, 2024 09:45
Sight
2781 said:
I wondered if you were referring to the brain. But mine is scrambled.
June 20th, 2024 09:35
2781 said:
I wondered if you were referring to the brain. But mine is scrambled.
June 20th, 2024 09:35
