Comments received on poems by Maplespal
The iron run
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that this one puzzled me I had visions of a man with a nine iron chasing down the hill. I guess it could be iron man but I haven\'t followed the comics too much. Very interesting
November 5th, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that this one puzzled me I had visions of a man with a nine iron chasing down the hill. I guess it could be iron man but I haven\'t followed the comics too much. Very interesting
November 5th, 2025 14:49
Wet pillow
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and also in reverse. I love to sleep to the sound of the rain and many say that they cry themselves to sleep. Is sleep a defense against pain or threat well written
November 4th, 2025 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and also in reverse. I love to sleep to the sound of the rain and many say that they cry themselves to sleep. Is sleep a defense against pain or threat well written
November 4th, 2025 19:16
The rain
NinjaGirl said:
Rain is so beautiful it\'s true, and with everywhere it\'s been it does have a lot to say! I love this concept!
November 2nd, 2025 21:49
NinjaGirl said:
Rain is so beautiful it\'s true, and with everywhere it\'s been it does have a lot to say! I love this concept!
November 2nd, 2025 21:49
The rain
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic description conjures memories of my youth, when I loved to pop open an umbrella and take long walks in the rain. Each line creates a blissful experience, beautifully and lovingly written.
November 2nd, 2025 09:55
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic description conjures memories of my youth, when I loved to pop open an umbrella and take long walks in the rain. Each line creates a blissful experience, beautifully and lovingly written.
November 2nd, 2025 09:55
The rain
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pouring of words that fall like the rain. Each drop and word forming pools and rivulets to the next following the stream of consciousness. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pouring of words that fall like the rain. Each drop and word forming pools and rivulets to the next following the stream of consciousness. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 09:25
A thought: Leaves
sorenbarrett said:
This one is lovely both in the literal sense and as a metaphor. It rocks a fave
November 1st, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one is lovely both in the literal sense and as a metaphor. It rocks a fave
November 1st, 2025 11:02
The cat plays
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do. Have had cats and know. A fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do. Have had cats and know. A fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:07
Salted
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that this journey is a metaphor for life itself and the cracks we suffer during the journey taking on water and the question of whether we will reach our destination. A lovely write
October 29th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that this journey is a metaphor for life itself and the cracks we suffer during the journey taking on water and the question of whether we will reach our destination. A lovely write
October 29th, 2025 11:22
Always
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely said Maplespal this poem recounts a relationship deeper than flesh
October 28th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely said Maplespal this poem recounts a relationship deeper than flesh
October 28th, 2025 05:47
What I did
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a statement in time with reflection and hope as well as resignation. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a statement in time with reflection and hope as well as resignation. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 16:17
Jitters
sorenbarrett said:
I see the title in this poem itself. We all get them from time to time under certain circumstances. A lovely write
October 26th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
I see the title in this poem itself. We all get them from time to time under certain circumstances. A lovely write
October 26th, 2025 07:29
Share the light
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
Cloud fun
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
Fallen dream
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
Brain dump # 391
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
My fault
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
My fault
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
A moment of love
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
A moment of love
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
Winter thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
Where I wait
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone lost in this life but retained in memory. There is a sense of longing in this poem that leaves a wistful feeling and a sadness. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone lost in this life but retained in memory. There is a sense of longing in this poem that leaves a wistful feeling and a sadness. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 06:38
This vision
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection upon one\'s deeds and hopes as well as fears. Very nicely said
October 17th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection upon one\'s deeds and hopes as well as fears. Very nicely said
October 17th, 2025 06:59
Hiding view
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful an assertion of self image as evil and bad but I hear anger and defiance as well. Well penned
October 16th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful an assertion of self image as evil and bad but I hear anger and defiance as well. Well penned
October 16th, 2025 16:14
Footsteps
sorenbarrett said:
I can take this two ways Maplespal either the obvious ghosts in the dark or less obvious the aging process and the fear of going soon. Loved it either way.
October 15th, 2025 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
I can take this two ways Maplespal either the obvious ghosts in the dark or less obvious the aging process and the fear of going soon. Loved it either way.
October 15th, 2025 15:52
Cherished memories
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleasures whether tactile, olfactory, gustatory, visual or auditory even memories bring such. A lovely warm and comforting write
October 14th, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleasures whether tactile, olfactory, gustatory, visual or auditory even memories bring such. A lovely warm and comforting write
October 14th, 2025 07:12
Walled
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and practical but with deeper meaning. Lovely
October 13th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and practical but with deeper meaning. Lovely
October 13th, 2025 07:25
Thoughts #178
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where abuse is encouraged as a means of dealing with it. Maybe I misunderstand the intent or maybe it is the old adage of what ever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. A tough read. Nicely and poetically worded
October 12th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where abuse is encouraged as a means of dealing with it. Maybe I misunderstand the intent or maybe it is the old adage of what ever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. A tough read. Nicely and poetically worded
October 12th, 2025 09:55
Silence the words
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the ways words pass on knowledge and feelings and how sound is not necessary by virtue of the alphabet and words written. Well done.
October 11th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the ways words pass on knowledge and feelings and how sound is not necessary by virtue of the alphabet and words written. Well done.
October 11th, 2025 09:21
Sagging
Friendship said:
The poem \"Sagging\" revolves around the struggle with mental and physical awareness, highlighting the relationship between the mind and body. The subject matter delves into the heaviness of thought and the feeling of being weighed down by one\'s own mental state, while also acknowledging the complex interactions between neurological functions and physical sensations. It portrays a sense of introspection, where the speaker reflects on their mental condition and the realities of existence.
October 10th, 2025 17:39
Friendship said:
The poem \"Sagging\" revolves around the struggle with mental and physical awareness, highlighting the relationship between the mind and body. The subject matter delves into the heaviness of thought and the feeling of being weighed down by one\'s own mental state, while also acknowledging the complex interactions between neurological functions and physical sensations. It portrays a sense of introspection, where the speaker reflects on their mental condition and the realities of existence.
October 10th, 2025 17:39
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