Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Yummy!
sorenbarrett said:
War always justified by both sides. It is started and ordered by those that never fight it. A good write my friend
January 22nd, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
War always justified by both sides. It is started and ordered by those that never fight it. A good write my friend
January 22nd, 2026 19:09
Ceiling shards
sorenbarrett said:
Such interesting images in this write and with each wondering what the meaning is. Lovely write
January 21st, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Such interesting images in this write and with each wondering what the meaning is. Lovely write
January 21st, 2026 19:22
Lost words
sorenbarrett said:
I often search the house from top to bottom looking for dishes left around to be done. This may apply to tasks in general.
January 20th, 2026 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
I often search the house from top to bottom looking for dishes left around to be done. This may apply to tasks in general.
January 20th, 2026 20:03
Flickering flame
sorenbarrett said:
The candle and light such timeless images and metaphors. A most lovely write with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
The candle and light such timeless images and metaphors. A most lovely write with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 08:12
Morning thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem of images of culinary delight to fill the stomach and tickle the tastebuds, they warm the soul but soon will be hungry again
January 18th, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem of images of culinary delight to fill the stomach and tickle the tastebuds, they warm the soul but soon will be hungry again
January 18th, 2026 07:18
Be patient
sorenbarrett said:
A poem poignant in its message noting that the earth too has its needs to be heard. Well done
January 17th, 2026 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem poignant in its message noting that the earth too has its needs to be heard. Well done
January 17th, 2026 07:49
Sympathy card
sorenbarrett said:
A sad comment on relationships and the sentiment between people. Well written with good rhyme and meter
January 16th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad comment on relationships and the sentiment between people. Well written with good rhyme and meter
January 16th, 2026 07:54
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Lost things to be found and how, where to look. A great poem of how we find what we need or want. Easier said that done. Nicely written
January 15th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Lost things to be found and how, where to look. A great poem of how we find what we need or want. Easier said that done. Nicely written
January 15th, 2026 06:52
The sun lives
sorenbarrett said:
It beams and dances in the dance of life. A lovely write
January 14th, 2026 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
It beams and dances in the dance of life. A lovely write
January 14th, 2026 09:55
Willing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of withdrawal and addiction. Well rhymed and worded
January 13th, 2026 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of withdrawal and addiction. Well rhymed and worded
January 13th, 2026 17:52
She walked away
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how rejection can turn into anger and revenge. Well written
January 12th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how rejection can turn into anger and revenge. Well written
January 12th, 2026 18:09
Invisible
sorenbarrett said:
A direct assault on religion saying basically if you want me to believe show yourself. A good write
January 11th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A direct assault on religion saying basically if you want me to believe show yourself. A good write
January 11th, 2026 09:51
My brain dump
sorenbarrett said:
Free associations running through this poem. Connections in space. Well done
January 10th, 2026 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
Free associations running through this poem. Connections in space. Well done
January 10th, 2026 09:54
Make me stay
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image of winter in the land and maybe the soul if metaphorical and it is the last line that catches me and gets the fave
January 9th, 2026 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image of winter in the land and maybe the soul if metaphorical and it is the last line that catches me and gets the fave
January 9th, 2026 16:48
I survived
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the way all life should be managed - work out your best choice and act on it.
Worth the read.
January 8th, 2026 17:25
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the way all life should be managed - work out your best choice and act on it.
Worth the read.
January 8th, 2026 17:25
I survived
sorenbarrett said:
A flash exposure to a traumatic incident of fire where playing dead is the best option to survive. A lovely write of tension and anguish. Well done
January 8th, 2026 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A flash exposure to a traumatic incident of fire where playing dead is the best option to survive. A lovely write of tension and anguish. Well done
January 8th, 2026 15:42
A thought, a flake
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and with a feeling of freedom this poem drifts through the mind awaiting a soft landing. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and with a feeling of freedom this poem drifts through the mind awaiting a soft landing. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 06:39
Fresh breath
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes leaving is the best way to deal with the problem. A most interesting poem that seems to postpone the leaving for a while
January 6th, 2026 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes leaving is the best way to deal with the problem. A most interesting poem that seems to postpone the leaving for a while
January 6th, 2026 14:29
Lets be architects
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of service and giving that speaks to what another wants and needs. A lovely poem of charity and love
January 5th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of service and giving that speaks to what another wants and needs. A lovely poem of charity and love
January 5th, 2026 05:25
Who I be
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a declaration of independence and acceptance of who one is. Very nicely written
January 4th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a declaration of independence and acceptance of who one is. Very nicely written
January 4th, 2026 12:41
Washing dishes
sorenbarrett said:
Even in the most mundane of tasks one can free one\'s mind to explore and divert one\'s thoughts to greater things. If one is not enjoying oneself one is wasting time. A lovely write so upbeat
January 3rd, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Even in the most mundane of tasks one can free one\'s mind to explore and divert one\'s thoughts to greater things. If one is not enjoying oneself one is wasting time. A lovely write so upbeat
January 3rd, 2026 08:38
Burning thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and so much to burn. Well written and imaged.
January 2nd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and so much to burn. Well written and imaged.
January 2nd, 2026 09:33
She\'s present
Thomas W Case said:
Stark and haunting — the tender details against the violence create a lasting, chilling image.
January 1st, 2026 09:42
Thomas W Case said:
Stark and haunting — the tender details against the violence create a lasting, chilling image.
January 1st, 2026 09:42
She\'s present
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and vivid in its images it is stark in its presentation of loss. Well done Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and vivid in its images it is stark in its presentation of loss. Well done Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:40
Beatless
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write about having one\'s vitals removed with the loss of someone. Lovely
December 31st, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write about having one\'s vitals removed with the loss of someone. Lovely
December 31st, 2025 08:42
Exploring caves
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem aims to evoke a sense of wonder and reflection on the hidden aspects of existence, encouraging readers to confront the darkness in their own lives and histories in search of understanding and clarity.
December 30th, 2025 07:05
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem aims to evoke a sense of wonder and reflection on the hidden aspects of existence, encouraging readers to confront the darkness in their own lives and histories in search of understanding and clarity.
December 30th, 2025 07:05
Exploring caves
sorenbarrett said:
Spelunking a dangerous sport. Been in caves before and without light so easy to fall or get lost. Same as in one\'s mind. A lovely write
December 30th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Spelunking a dangerous sport. Been in caves before and without light so easy to fall or get lost. Same as in one\'s mind. A lovely write
December 30th, 2025 06:45
It runs free
Friendship said:
Beautifully done. Your poem captures the beauty and grace of a leopard running freely in its natural habitat, emphasizing the animal\'s speed, agility, and independence. It reflects on the wonder of witnessing such a magnificent creature in motion.
December 29th, 2025 09:06
Friendship said:
Beautifully done. Your poem captures the beauty and grace of a leopard running freely in its natural habitat, emphasizing the animal\'s speed, agility, and independence. It reflects on the wonder of witnessing such a magnificent creature in motion.
December 29th, 2025 09:06
It runs free
sorenbarrett said:
Truly special the observation of nature in the wild. Something that is becoming more and more rare now days. Few people get the opportunity and if they do seldom take notice. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Truly special the observation of nature in the wild. Something that is becoming more and more rare now days. Few people get the opportunity and if they do seldom take notice. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 08:55
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