Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Lost voice
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the building of a conscience from past words of a mother. So nicely told it feels right and is a fave
May 27th, 2026 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the building of a conscience from past words of a mother. So nicely told it feels right and is a fave
May 27th, 2026 07:34
Trapped mind
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of suffering in this poem that is resolved on in death
May 26th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of suffering in this poem that is resolved on in death
May 26th, 2026 05:31
Chills
sorenbarrett said:
A write of ghosts that exist in different forms. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
A write of ghosts that exist in different forms. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 15:49
Faded & For the cats
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems each with its merit and appeal. Well done
May 24th, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems each with its merit and appeal. Well done
May 24th, 2026 06:21
Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that uses close internal rhyme and ending to form a feeling of unity. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that uses close internal rhyme and ending to form a feeling of unity. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 07:00
Scrap piece #1
sorenbarrett said:
A really cool rhyme that ends rather abruptly. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
A really cool rhyme that ends rather abruptly. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 05:51
She is
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of admiration that falls in each line and rhyme. Lovely
May 21st, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of admiration that falls in each line and rhyme. Lovely
May 21st, 2026 05:05
A future trip
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous rhyme in this message so poetically said in wonderful rhyme. Well done
May 20th, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous rhyme in this message so poetically said in wonderful rhyme. Well done
May 20th, 2026 05:26
Keep digging
RSM0812 said:
Nice rhyme scheme. I also like the message. Good write.
May 19th, 2026 06:40
RSM0812 said:
Nice rhyme scheme. I also like the message. Good write.
May 19th, 2026 06:40
Keep digging
sorenbarrett said:
Archeology uncovers past societies, beliefs and religions that many would say decrease present religious beliefs. Seeing how nature worship developed into belief in gods and the similarities evolving from one to another with one societies exposure to the next as in Adonis and Mithra to Christ shakes the beliefs of present day Christians. Well written
May 19th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Archeology uncovers past societies, beliefs and religions that many would say decrease present religious beliefs. Seeing how nature worship developed into belief in gods and the similarities evolving from one to another with one societies exposure to the next as in Adonis and Mithra to Christ shakes the beliefs of present day Christians. Well written
May 19th, 2026 05:10
Thoughts of her
sorenbarrett said:
A warning a proclamation of destruction well written and most lovely worded.
May 18th, 2026 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
A warning a proclamation of destruction well written and most lovely worded.
May 18th, 2026 06:13
A choice
Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Your poem explores themes of mortality, the human experience of illness, and the ethical dilemmas surrounding end-of-life decisions.
May 17th, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Your poem explores themes of mortality, the human experience of illness, and the ethical dilemmas surrounding end-of-life decisions.
May 17th, 2026 08:55
A choice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries for me a picture of someone on a machine to sustain life. It is sad and presents the picture of someone that does not want to be carried by machinery but let life take its course. Well done
May 17th, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries for me a picture of someone on a machine to sustain life. It is sad and presents the picture of someone that does not want to be carried by machinery but let life take its course. Well done
May 17th, 2026 06:29
Cough for her
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems directly personal this poem can well be taken as metaphoric about the species as well. Nicely done
May 16th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems directly personal this poem can well be taken as metaphoric about the species as well. Nicely done
May 16th, 2026 07:17
A moment undefined
sorenbarrett said:
Amidst the chaos of life one searches for peace and hear it is found in a poem. Well written
May 15th, 2026 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Amidst the chaos of life one searches for peace and hear it is found in a poem. Well written
May 15th, 2026 13:54
Now I reach
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the refrain of this poem. A write of distancing and regret. Well written and a fave
May 14th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the refrain of this poem. A write of distancing and regret. Well written and a fave
May 14th, 2026 08:53
Bluntly
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a sense of frustration but about what one does not know another possibly. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with a sense of frustration but about what one does not know another possibly. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:20
Wet spine
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful write about the abuse of power in any chain of command. Well written.
May 11th, 2026 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful write about the abuse of power in any chain of command. Well written.
May 11th, 2026 07:41
Not yet
Katie B. said:
This resonates with me. I have long periods of pain but sometimes I\'m able to cope better than others not that it doesn\'t hurt.
May 10th, 2026 10:39
Katie B. said:
This resonates with me. I have long periods of pain but sometimes I\'m able to cope better than others not that it doesn\'t hurt.
May 10th, 2026 10:39
Not yet
sorenbarrett said:
Choice and control in timing is part of this poem. Nicely done
May 10th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Choice and control in timing is part of this poem. Nicely done
May 10th, 2026 07:43
Drink on
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful toast to life and its passing well written and a fave
May 9th, 2026 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful toast to life and its passing well written and a fave
May 9th, 2026 07:19
Cheating on her
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled. Well done
May 6th, 2026 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled. Well done
May 6th, 2026 20:49
I still visit you
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:40
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