Comments received on poems by Maplespal
I alone
sorenbarrett said:
So much wisdom in a short poem that sees right through the self. Loved it a fave
October 7th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
So much wisdom in a short poem that sees right through the self. Loved it a fave
October 7th, 2025 05:19
Those inner thoughts #89
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem almost with a childlike feel but beneath is a far deeper meaning. Lovely
October 6th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem almost with a childlike feel but beneath is a far deeper meaning. Lovely
October 6th, 2025 05:57
Unsecure power
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a larger town or you have no choice?
Neat rant.
October 6th, 2025 00:21
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a larger town or you have no choice?
Neat rant.
October 6th, 2025 00:21
Unsecure power
sorenbarrett said:
Not so much by power but by internet itself I have gone though this. Irritation and aggravation are not sufficient words for it. Nicely said.
October 5th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Not so much by power but by internet itself I have gone though this. Irritation and aggravation are not sufficient words for it. Nicely said.
October 5th, 2025 08:45
Random thoughts #32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revulsion with humanity but juxtaposed to love for flowers. Is this symbolic? A love for certain people and not others. Gathering and selecting the flowers to water and take home. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revulsion with humanity but juxtaposed to love for flowers. Is this symbolic? A love for certain people and not others. Gathering and selecting the flowers to water and take home. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 09:15
Odd thought #21
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in overlay comes to mind although in mentally applying this the question of size comes to play and still it does not work its way out in my poor mind. Loved the word play and rhyme
October 3rd, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in overlay comes to mind although in mentally applying this the question of size comes to play and still it does not work its way out in my poor mind. Loved the word play and rhyme
October 3rd, 2025 06:14
The clouds
sorenbarrett said:
You have in this poem outlined the process of free association the origin of the Rorschach test and the healing power of inner processing. A lovely write put so poetically a fave
October 2nd, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
You have in this poem outlined the process of free association the origin of the Rorschach test and the healing power of inner processing. A lovely write put so poetically a fave
October 2nd, 2025 05:47
A \"High\" moment #257
sorenbarrett said:
Was this really written during a high? A good poem that speaks of feelings of loss and melancholy. It reverts to more comfortable feelings and a sense of playfulness. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Was this really written during a high? A good poem that speaks of feelings of loss and melancholy. It reverts to more comfortable feelings and a sense of playfulness. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 05:26
A Life & The tree
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the first that fave is given although the second is wonderful as well. The theme of the first together with the rhyme of each line like a hammer sinking a nail drives home its point and secures it as a plank. So sadly true. The second leaves a feeling of tragedy a metaphor for the callus uncaring and unhelping had of humans. Nicely written
September 30th, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the first that fave is given although the second is wonderful as well. The theme of the first together with the rhyme of each line like a hammer sinking a nail drives home its point and secures it as a plank. So sadly true. The second leaves a feeling of tragedy a metaphor for the callus uncaring and unhelping had of humans. Nicely written
September 30th, 2025 07:39
Feed me
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and erotic poem that only needs a spark to combust. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual and erotic poem that only needs a spark to combust. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 06:47
A thought on time
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Interesting write. A poem on time is a beautiful choice.
September 28th, 2025 13:51
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Interesting write. A poem on time is a beautiful choice.
September 28th, 2025 13:51
A thought on time
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say if this is a leftover give me seconds. Brilliant wording in the first stanza sets the tone and most thought provoking. Yes there is nothing but the present. A fave
September 28th, 2025 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say if this is a leftover give me seconds. Brilliant wording in the first stanza sets the tone and most thought provoking. Yes there is nothing but the present. A fave
September 28th, 2025 09:47
Rhyming
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s a bit like pig Latin you just have to think a bit before you put it down. Good one.
September 27th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s a bit like pig Latin you just have to think a bit before you put it down. Good one.
September 27th, 2025 10:13
I\'ll sing
sorenbarrett said:
A potential terror that may not be but none the less exists in the mind. Handing over control to any other is filled with fear. Garbage in garbage out they used to say. What is programed or left out of the program is the problem. Programmers make mistakes as we all know and this could be a serious one. A haunting poem of warning.
September 26th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A potential terror that may not be but none the less exists in the mind. Handing over control to any other is filled with fear. Garbage in garbage out they used to say. What is programed or left out of the program is the problem. Programmers make mistakes as we all know and this could be a serious one. A haunting poem of warning.
September 26th, 2025 05:32
Come stare
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a threat, a warning it speaks with strong words with a powerful force. Nicely written
September 25th, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a threat, a warning it speaks with strong words with a powerful force. Nicely written
September 25th, 2025 05:59
Ghosted - 4 views
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach that gives different views and feels. Being ghosted is something most have felt and can identify with. A lonely feeling to this write.
September 24th, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach that gives different views and feels. Being ghosted is something most have felt and can identify with. A lonely feeling to this write.
September 24th, 2025 06:56
She starves
sorenbarrett said:
Could you be a little more clear about what you mean? Wow this one calls a spade a spade. Powerful words.
September 23rd, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Could you be a little more clear about what you mean? Wow this one calls a spade a spade. Powerful words.
September 23rd, 2025 05:44
I am thinking
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in this poem carries the reader onward through line after line of images nicely presented. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in this poem carries the reader onward through line after line of images nicely presented. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 06:57
When I walk away
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition a poem well penned
September 21st, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition a poem well penned
September 21st, 2025 07:32
Jungle living & Worth it
sorenbarrett said:
I detect struggle and strife in these poems where it is tough fighting against the odds. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
I detect struggle and strife in these poems where it is tough fighting against the odds. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 07:14
It brings
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective poem of the past and pain that goes with it. Nicely written
September 19th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective poem of the past and pain that goes with it. Nicely written
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Story Part - Red light waiting
sorenbarrett said:
I do that particularly when the light is green and they still sit in a daze. A lovely write
September 18th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
I do that particularly when the light is green and they still sit in a daze. A lovely write
September 18th, 2025 07:34
Sorry, there are 6 poems
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I’m Only-This poem is exploring the speaker’s sense of self in relation to life’s hierarchy. It combines pride and humility, pondering existence while acknowledging inevitable decline. The rhythm and repetition emphasize both control and contemplation.
Together We Dance: A dark and violent narrative, this poem portrays lethal intimacy and chaos. The imagery is vivid and unsettling, highlighting a bond formed through destruction. The tension between rhythm and horror creates a surreal, almost cinematic feel.
Evasive Thoughts: Similar in tone to the previous poem, this one emphasizes stealth, danger, and precision. The speaker’s perspective blends admiration for skill with a chilling emotional detachment. The tension is relentless, and the imagery of quiet execution is striking.
Heated Work: This poem shifts to a more grounded, heroic tone. It focuses on human effort against natural danger, fire and smoke and expresses admiration for resilience and courage.
My Shot: Aggressive and cathartic, this poem externalizes internal conflict through metaphors of violence and confrontation. The repeated actions stabbing, bludgeoning, aiming mirror the mental intensity and release of emotion.
No Fooling: A sharp, assertive piece that critiques deception and highlights wisdom and discernment.
Nicely written poems.
September 17th, 2025 15:19
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I’m Only-This poem is exploring the speaker’s sense of self in relation to life’s hierarchy. It combines pride and humility, pondering existence while acknowledging inevitable decline. The rhythm and repetition emphasize both control and contemplation.
Together We Dance: A dark and violent narrative, this poem portrays lethal intimacy and chaos. The imagery is vivid and unsettling, highlighting a bond formed through destruction. The tension between rhythm and horror creates a surreal, almost cinematic feel.
Evasive Thoughts: Similar in tone to the previous poem, this one emphasizes stealth, danger, and precision. The speaker’s perspective blends admiration for skill with a chilling emotional detachment. The tension is relentless, and the imagery of quiet execution is striking.
Heated Work: This poem shifts to a more grounded, heroic tone. It focuses on human effort against natural danger, fire and smoke and expresses admiration for resilience and courage.
My Shot: Aggressive and cathartic, this poem externalizes internal conflict through metaphors of violence and confrontation. The repeated actions stabbing, bludgeoning, aiming mirror the mental intensity and release of emotion.
No Fooling: A sharp, assertive piece that critiques deception and highlights wisdom and discernment.
Nicely written poems.
September 17th, 2025 15:19
Sorry, there are 6 poems
arqios said:
That’s one way to do it! And many at the site accept it willingly enough 🕊️🙏🏻
September 17th, 2025 07:40
arqios said:
That’s one way to do it! And many at the site accept it willingly enough 🕊️🙏🏻
September 17th, 2025 07:40
Sorry, there are 6 poems
sorenbarrett said:
All but the last seem to speak of passion and death and the last the taking of something from another. These themes closely woven as in the taking of life itself the most precious of what we have. I identify, having just written yesterday a similar poem. Well worded in most poetic form I give them a fave
September 17th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
All but the last seem to speak of passion and death and the last the taking of something from another. These themes closely woven as in the taking of life itself the most precious of what we have. I identify, having just written yesterday a similar poem. Well worded in most poetic form I give them a fave
September 17th, 2025 06:27
The night cries
RSM0812 said:
\" dawn leaves the tears from the night sky\" what poetic perfection. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:28
RSM0812 said:
\" dawn leaves the tears from the night sky\" what poetic perfection. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:28
The night cries
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful with a great message that all need to hear. Carpe diem, live in the moment and be grateful for what is
September 16th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful with a great message that all need to hear. Carpe diem, live in the moment and be grateful for what is
September 16th, 2025 06:53
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