Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Wrong turn
sorenbarrett said:
A sad set of poetic questions set to rhyme but as said too late to ask. Well written my friend
July 28th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A sad set of poetic questions set to rhyme but as said too late to ask. Well written my friend
July 28th, 2026 05:05
Her dream
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets from a past that can not be undone now too late for reconciliation. Well written
July 26th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets from a past that can not be undone now too late for reconciliation. Well written
July 26th, 2026 14:37
The visit
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its mourning a wistful feeling of loss so apt that we place cut flowers over graves. Nicely done
July 25th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its mourning a wistful feeling of loss so apt that we place cut flowers over graves. Nicely done
July 25th, 2026 06:17
The visit
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write my friend, it states the emotion
July 25th, 2026 04:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write my friend, it states the emotion
July 25th, 2026 04:59
Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of not being valued and ignored. Well written
July 24th, 2026 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of not being valued and ignored. Well written
July 24th, 2026 15:42
I\'m ready
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a return to revisit a grave of one passed where home is defined. Well written in most poetic form
July 23rd, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a return to revisit a grave of one passed where home is defined. Well written in most poetic form
July 23rd, 2026 07:54
Layers and levels
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic view of things around one whether internal with eyes closed to the outside world or open to see what is about. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic view of things around one whether internal with eyes closed to the outside world or open to see what is about. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 05:29
For free
sorenbarrett said:
Different views each with its virtue well expressed in this poem.
July 21st, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Different views each with its virtue well expressed in this poem.
July 21st, 2026 05:12
One moment to relive
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so human. We need to understand the motivations of other\'s actions and why they cause us pain. Well written
July 20th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so human. We need to understand the motivations of other\'s actions and why they cause us pain. Well written
July 20th, 2026 05:33
Reflective sky
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in images and in nostalgia evoked it speaks of a love from the past still remembered. A lovely write my friend and a fave
July 19th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in images and in nostalgia evoked it speaks of a love from the past still remembered. A lovely write my friend and a fave
July 19th, 2026 06:52
Speechless
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been mumbling up my words so much these days I just want to start barking…
July 18th, 2026 08:46
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been mumbling up my words so much these days I just want to start barking…
July 18th, 2026 08:46
Speechless
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there where I can not remember what I just said and wonder if dementia had taken my head. A lovely write so identifiable
July 18th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there where I can not remember what I just said and wonder if dementia had taken my head. A lovely write so identifiable
July 18th, 2026 06:50
With you
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of wanting to be with another but the recognition that there are difficulties. Well written
July 17th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of wanting to be with another but the recognition that there are difficulties. Well written
July 17th, 2026 05:06
Goodnight
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so parental and nurturing. A lovely write
July 16th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so parental and nurturing. A lovely write
July 16th, 2026 14:43
On my breath
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and touching this write carries with it a wistful sadness
July 15th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and touching this write carries with it a wistful sadness
July 15th, 2026 05:33
Zoom
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of the passage of time. Well done
July 14th, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of the passage of time. Well done
July 14th, 2026 13:23
One or the other
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of diversity and sadly so some come to tragedy. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of diversity and sadly so some come to tragedy. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 14:37
Changing view
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like conflict here. Sad and sour it speaks bitterness.
July 5th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like conflict here. Sad and sour it speaks bitterness.
July 5th, 2026 08:34
Centered
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is always a barrier to relationships. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 4th, 2026 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is always a barrier to relationships. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 4th, 2026 12:28
Centered
Syd said:
This sounds quite personal but it can be good to vent.
Enjoyed - Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:18
Syd said:
This sounds quite personal but it can be good to vent.
Enjoyed - Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:18
Some thought
sorenbarrett said:
There are several ways a heart can be used or abused. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
There are several ways a heart can be used or abused. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:41
A note - To you I would send
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to me to be a plea for redemption well written
July 2nd, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to me to be a plea for redemption well written
July 2nd, 2026 12:07
A thought - I have
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic call for those that have had experience. Nicely done
July 1st, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic call for those that have had experience. Nicely done
July 1st, 2026 11:28
For fun
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think the first line is quite clear and I would agree. The second also clear but taken as a metaphor needs reference. The third is also metaphoric and I would agree. The forth a Newtonian fact although maybe not at a quantum level. It is the last line that causes most reflection. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think the first line is quite clear and I would agree. The second also clear but taken as a metaphor needs reference. The third is also metaphoric and I would agree. The forth a Newtonian fact although maybe not at a quantum level. It is the last line that causes most reflection. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:14
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