Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Changing view
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like conflict here. Sad and sour it speaks bitterness.
July 5th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like conflict here. Sad and sour it speaks bitterness.
July 5th, 2026 08:34
Centered
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is always a barrier to relationships. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 4th, 2026 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is always a barrier to relationships. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 4th, 2026 12:28
Centered
Syd said:
This sounds quite personal but it can be good to vent.
Enjoyed - Syd š
July 4th, 2026 10:18
Syd said:
This sounds quite personal but it can be good to vent.
Enjoyed - Syd š
July 4th, 2026 10:18
Some thought
sorenbarrett said:
There are several ways a heart can be used or abused. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
There are several ways a heart can be used or abused. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:41
A note - To you I would send
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to me to be a plea for redemption well written
July 2nd, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to me to be a plea for redemption well written
July 2nd, 2026 12:07
A thought - I have
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic call for those that have had experience. Nicely done
July 1st, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poetic call for those that have had experience. Nicely done
July 1st, 2026 11:28
For fun
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think the first line is quite clear and I would agree. The second also clear but taken as a metaphor needs reference. The third is also metaphoric and I would agree. The forth a Newtonian fact although maybe not at a quantum level. It is the last line that causes most reflection. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think the first line is quite clear and I would agree. The second also clear but taken as a metaphor needs reference. The third is also metaphoric and I would agree. The forth a Newtonian fact although maybe not at a quantum level. It is the last line that causes most reflection. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:14
Behind the mask
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, good rhyme, nice meter and questions in poetic form that many of us think if not ask. Profound and a fave
June 27th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, good rhyme, nice meter and questions in poetic form that many of us think if not ask. Profound and a fave
June 27th, 2026 08:42
Happy
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem of love and gratitude. Clever wording makes it flow. Well done
June 26th, 2026 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem of love and gratitude. Clever wording makes it flow. Well done
June 26th, 2026 15:34
Being brave
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of fear and how it is associated with a childlike searching for security. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of fear and how it is associated with a childlike searching for security. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:22
No second time
sorenbarrett said:
It is the emotive force that gets the fave a past worked, lived now in pieces and too late to put back together the only option to leave. Well written and a fave
June 20th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is the emotive force that gets the fave a past worked, lived now in pieces and too late to put back together the only option to leave. Well written and a fave
June 20th, 2026 06:48
Desperately we burn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a feeling of imminent danger of loss. Well written
June 19th, 2026 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a feeling of imminent danger of loss. Well written
June 19th, 2026 15:01
Got Hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Food and the thought of it makes me hungry too. Well written
June 17th, 2026 17:59
sorenbarrett said:
Food and the thought of it makes me hungry too. Well written
June 17th, 2026 17:59
Imposing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
Camping
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
Fire starter
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
A morning moment
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
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