Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Lets be architects
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of service and giving that speaks to what another wants and needs. A lovely poem of charity and love
January 5th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of service and giving that speaks to what another wants and needs. A lovely poem of charity and love
January 5th, 2026 05:25
Who I be
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a declaration of independence and acceptance of who one is. Very nicely written
January 4th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a declaration of independence and acceptance of who one is. Very nicely written
January 4th, 2026 12:41
Washing dishes
sorenbarrett said:
Even in the most mundane of tasks one can free one\'s mind to explore and divert one\'s thoughts to greater things. If one is not enjoying oneself one is wasting time. A lovely write so upbeat
January 3rd, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Even in the most mundane of tasks one can free one\'s mind to explore and divert one\'s thoughts to greater things. If one is not enjoying oneself one is wasting time. A lovely write so upbeat
January 3rd, 2026 08:38
Burning thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and so much to burn. Well written and imaged.
January 2nd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful analogy and so much to burn. Well written and imaged.
January 2nd, 2026 09:33
She\'s present
Thomas W Case said:
Stark and haunting — the tender details against the violence create a lasting, chilling image.
January 1st, 2026 09:42
Thomas W Case said:
Stark and haunting — the tender details against the violence create a lasting, chilling image.
January 1st, 2026 09:42
She\'s present
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and vivid in its images it is stark in its presentation of loss. Well done Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and vivid in its images it is stark in its presentation of loss. Well done Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:40
Beatless
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write about having one\'s vitals removed with the loss of someone. Lovely
December 31st, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write about having one\'s vitals removed with the loss of someone. Lovely
December 31st, 2025 08:42
Exploring caves
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem aims to evoke a sense of wonder and reflection on the hidden aspects of existence, encouraging readers to confront the darkness in their own lives and histories in search of understanding and clarity.
December 30th, 2025 07:05
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Your poem aims to evoke a sense of wonder and reflection on the hidden aspects of existence, encouraging readers to confront the darkness in their own lives and histories in search of understanding and clarity.
December 30th, 2025 07:05
Exploring caves
sorenbarrett said:
Spelunking a dangerous sport. Been in caves before and without light so easy to fall or get lost. Same as in one\'s mind. A lovely write
December 30th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Spelunking a dangerous sport. Been in caves before and without light so easy to fall or get lost. Same as in one\'s mind. A lovely write
December 30th, 2025 06:45
It runs free
Friendship said:
Beautifully done. Your poem captures the beauty and grace of a leopard running freely in its natural habitat, emphasizing the animal\'s speed, agility, and independence. It reflects on the wonder of witnessing such a magnificent creature in motion.
December 29th, 2025 09:06
Friendship said:
Beautifully done. Your poem captures the beauty and grace of a leopard running freely in its natural habitat, emphasizing the animal\'s speed, agility, and independence. It reflects on the wonder of witnessing such a magnificent creature in motion.
December 29th, 2025 09:06
It runs free
sorenbarrett said:
Truly special the observation of nature in the wild. Something that is becoming more and more rare now days. Few people get the opportunity and if they do seldom take notice. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Truly special the observation of nature in the wild. Something that is becoming more and more rare now days. Few people get the opportunity and if they do seldom take notice. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 08:55
Can I?
sorenbarrett said:
The back and forth of what question can be asked about love. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
The back and forth of what question can be asked about love. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 09:39
Bed time
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams often more pleasant than reality tempt one to stay asleep or daydream and oh how tempting that is. A wonderful write
December 27th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams often more pleasant than reality tempt one to stay asleep or daydream and oh how tempting that is. A wonderful write
December 27th, 2025 08:26
Dreaming lines
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a bit haunting as it reflects on dream like images of a past life. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a bit haunting as it reflects on dream like images of a past life. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 08:20
Dreaming lines
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the concept of dreams as a gateway to the past, suggesting that in our subconscious state, we may revisit memories or experiences from previous lives. It offers a reflective and nostalgic view of a simpler time, contrasting the modern world with a more primal, untainted existence.
December 26th, 2025 08:08
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the concept of dreams as a gateway to the past, suggesting that in our subconscious state, we may revisit memories or experiences from previous lives. It offers a reflective and nostalgic view of a simpler time, contrasting the modern world with a more primal, untainted existence.
December 26th, 2025 08:08
Left first
sorenbarrett said:
Love the directionality of this poem and how it uses it. Right is right and the rest is what is left. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love the directionality of this poem and how it uses it. Right is right and the rest is what is left. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 08:41
The richest
sorenbarrett said:
Today thoughts are free in the future you will have to pay. A great poem nicely written of one of the last things that are free
December 24th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Today thoughts are free in the future you will have to pay. A great poem nicely written of one of the last things that are free
December 24th, 2025 08:04
The richest
Friendship said:
Nicely done, your poem delves into the nature of consciousness, the act of thinking, and the solitary experience of pondering one\'s existence. It reflects on the richness of one\'s inner life as a source of true wealth.
December 24th, 2025 07:39
Friendship said:
Nicely done, your poem delves into the nature of consciousness, the act of thinking, and the solitary experience of pondering one\'s existence. It reflects on the richness of one\'s inner life as a source of true wealth.
December 24th, 2025 07:39
We\'re losing & Here
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded and with a great message. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded and with a great message. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 07:17
We\'re losing & Here
2781 said:
An enjoyable read. I won\'t attempt to get into your head, but it gave me thoughts of eternity.
Thank you.
December 23rd, 2025 06:36
2781 said:
An enjoyable read. I won\'t attempt to get into your head, but it gave me thoughts of eternity.
Thank you.
December 23rd, 2025 06:36
Heartless
PerditaRose said:
Such a sad experience. So expertly written. Inspires compassion.
December 22nd, 2025 07:25
PerditaRose said:
Such a sad experience. So expertly written. Inspires compassion.
December 22nd, 2025 07:25
Heartless
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is more than sad it is tragic and dark with so many images of death and rot. Well written it cries tears
December 22nd, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is more than sad it is tragic and dark with so many images of death and rot. Well written it cries tears
December 22nd, 2025 07:25
Winter drink
sorenbarrett said:
A dangerous journey for a hot drink better to make it at home for sure. Well written with good rhyme and images that bring back memories. The metaphor is deeper and it is often not just coffee that should be made at home but even the brewing of our social relationships
December 21st, 2025 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A dangerous journey for a hot drink better to make it at home for sure. Well written with good rhyme and images that bring back memories. The metaphor is deeper and it is often not just coffee that should be made at home but even the brewing of our social relationships
December 21st, 2025 14:06
She visited
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, child, grandchild this poem tells its tale of how a smile can light up the day and make it something to look forward to with their visits. Nicely written
December 20th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, child, grandchild this poem tells its tale of how a smile can light up the day and make it something to look forward to with their visits. Nicely written
December 20th, 2025 15:31
I can see
Katie B. said:
lOVELY, PEACEFUL, SERENE. BEAUTIFUL POEM. ENJOYABLE READ. THANK YOU, MAPLESPAL
December 19th, 2025 09:43
Katie B. said:
lOVELY, PEACEFUL, SERENE. BEAUTIFUL POEM. ENJOYABLE READ. THANK YOU, MAPLESPAL
December 19th, 2025 09:43
I can see
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being. A declaration of existence and with it hope and the experiencing of all that is wonderful
December 19th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being. A declaration of existence and with it hope and the experiencing of all that is wonderful
December 19th, 2025 08:37
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