Comments received on poems by Maplespal



It is it
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 20th, 2025 17:44

It is it
sorenbarrett said:

Destiny? Well could be then there are no guilty. Loved the poem a great philisophical write

January 20th, 2025 13:04

Your pictured view
sorenbarrett said:

Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad but powerful write

January 18th, 2025 20:35

Thought 3
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living things
Doesn\'t matter what race or species you are we are all equal and with the same value. A most wonderful write

January 17th, 2025 17:30

To my kind: It\'s time
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem. Very interesting

January 15th, 2025 10:34

We are
sorenbarrett said:

A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded

January 14th, 2025 09:14

Influenced by Woodkid
TobaniNataiella said:

I always write listening to music, it seems to open up the old mind and left things flow easier, enjoyed the read

January 13th, 2025 12:30

Influenced by Woodkid
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music. Wonderful images here.

January 13th, 2025 12:26

A question on time
sorenbarrett said:

A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked at several clever worded aspects yet the last question remains a good one for which I have no answer

January 12th, 2025 12:20

A question on time
TobaniNataiella said:

One to get your head around, if not defined what would in then be, enjoyed the read

January 12th, 2025 12:11

Last mans grave
Bella Shepard said:

It takes a man of insight, and dare I say courage to pen these words. I\'ve often wondered what the world would be like if the female perspective were given a chance to blossom. I harken back Robin Williams\'s quote \" If women ran the world, we wouldn\'t have wars, just intense negotiations every 28 days\". I say give it a try. Thank you my friend!!

January 11th, 2025 13:32

Last mans grave
sorenbarrett said:

Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may not be needed, it is so among several species.

January 11th, 2025 07:41

Last mans grave
TobaniNataiella said:

A serious issue of the non value and worth of women that still exists in cultures around the world, man should be verry careful, we are not needed anymore. Enjoyed the read

January 11th, 2025 06:36

Behind the kiss
Bella Shepard said:

The kiss is sweet, but the conversation is priceless. Beautifully expressed, enjoyed to the max.

January 10th, 2025 10:24

Behind the kiss
TobaniNataiella said:

A lovely thank you for the passion and love once shared, nicely written

January 10th, 2025 07:54

Behind the kiss
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem I took the voice to symbolize friendship and the kiss passion. It is friendship that is missed over time. Lovely

January 10th, 2025 06:22

Changes
TobaniNataiella said:

It is sometimes very difficult to except things have changed and that makes it very difficult to move on, this poem highlights that issue in a caring and sensitive way, lovely read

January 9th, 2025 11:53

Changes
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write of letting go and growth. Bushes need to be pruned to gather strength and so do we. A wonderful poem.

January 9th, 2025 06:18

Cesium\'s glow
TobaniNataiella said:

A touching reflection of their fading memories, well written piece, enjoyed the read

January 8th, 2025 10:26

Cesium\'s glow
Tony36 said:

Love it

January 8th, 2025 07:51

Cesium\'s glow
sorenbarrett said:

I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the meaning. Time dims all things and with its wear images fade. A lovely piece and worth a Fave

January 8th, 2025 07:19

One of those days
sorenbarrett said:

Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is doing thoughts become action. A poem dysphoric and moving in that all of us have been there and out of existential crisis are paths to other horizons. Moving

January 7th, 2025 07:11

Understanding
Bella Shepard said:

Perfectly profound my friend, loved every line.

January 6th, 2025 10:46

Understanding
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 6th, 2025 09:43

I\'ll be going home
TobaniNataiella said:

A well written piece on looking back and what is behind after passing on, enjoyed the read

January 5th, 2025 10:00

I\'ll be going home
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or another. Very nicely stated

January 5th, 2025 07:27

Watching the rain
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2025 20:35

Watching the rain
sorenbarrett said:

I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings

January 4th, 2025 15:34

Watching the rain
TobaniNataiella said:

And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read

January 4th, 2025 10:47

A site so blue
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 3rd, 2025 13:29

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