Comments received on poems by Maplespal
If it works
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I feel and for that a fave, furthermore some crafty wording and smooth metering make this a wonderful poem that has this worn homespun feel to it. One of my favorite of yours
August 2nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I feel and for that a fave, furthermore some crafty wording and smooth metering make this a wonderful poem that has this worn homespun feel to it. One of my favorite of yours
August 2nd, 2025 05:42
She screams in dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting the desire for one to be afraid so as to be needed and wanted. A poem of desire and of passions fire.
August 1st, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting the desire for one to be afraid so as to be needed and wanted. A poem of desire and of passions fire.
August 1st, 2025 11:37
A note: I miss her
sorenbarrett said:
Loss reflected in this poem that is hard to let go. Nicely written
July 31st, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loss reflected in this poem that is hard to let go. Nicely written
July 31st, 2025 04:57
A note: I miss her
isa kemmy said:
oh wow am also missing someone i like the piece of art because i can connect
July 31st, 2025 04:52
isa kemmy said:
oh wow am also missing someone i like the piece of art because i can connect
July 31st, 2025 04:52
Why believe
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disbelief well written. This poem is well organized and constructed lays out its logic. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disbelief well written. This poem is well organized and constructed lays out its logic. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 04:57
Not everyone
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
Justice kind
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
Stay with me
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
Are you like me?
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Are you like me?
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
Our CAF
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
Dwelling and Swelling
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections some of self blame but with the knowledge that they are not useful. Well written love the rhyme in this one
July 23rd, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections some of self blame but with the knowledge that they are not useful. Well written love the rhyme in this one
July 23rd, 2025 06:24
The last straw
sorenbarrett said:
Never jump until there is a safe landing. A poem of discontent and frustration with an organization. Powerful
July 22nd, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Never jump until there is a safe landing. A poem of discontent and frustration with an organization. Powerful
July 22nd, 2025 06:33
A thought: My minds stay
sorenbarrett said:
After an intense relationship of love it may be difficult to find another and being alone may be the choice taken. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
After an intense relationship of love it may be difficult to find another and being alone may be the choice taken. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 09:13
Talking to them
sorenbarrett said:
Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it seldom talks back. (downwards is the only way I know.) I have felt that way before and it is not a good ride. A poem of deep inner exploration. Very well done
July 20th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it seldom talks back. (downwards is the only way I know.) I have felt that way before and it is not a good ride. A poem of deep inner exploration. Very well done
July 20th, 2025 12:27
3 texts
sorenbarrett said:
The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most lovely
July 19th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most lovely
July 19th, 2025 05:44
Getting old & Pondering
sorenbarrett said:
The first poem gets a fave maybe it is just my age but it seems to fit so well.
July 18th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
The first poem gets a fave maybe it is just my age but it seems to fit so well.
July 18th, 2025 06:16
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