Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Lights into nights & Kissing death
sorenbarrett said:
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that the more distant the louder the volume. A wistful write. In the second your note helps understand but reading it before I had a feeling that it was connected to the first and was an acceptance of loss so deep that death was the answer. Both lovely writes so well written in good meter that they deserve a fave
February 21st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that the more distant the louder the volume. A wistful write. In the second your note helps understand but reading it before I had a feeling that it was connected to the first and was an acceptance of loss so deep that death was the answer. Both lovely writes so well written in good meter that they deserve a fave
February 21st, 2025 08:43
1st & last Note
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we have sinned. I hear its footsteps here. Regret follows close behind a most unwanted companion and unwelcome visitor. They paralyze us and while waiting on them we loose our opportunity the visit we have been waiting for. A fine write well worded and aptly described
February 20th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we have sinned. I hear its footsteps here. Regret follows close behind a most unwanted companion and unwelcome visitor. They paralyze us and while waiting on them we loose our opportunity the visit we have been waiting for. A fine write well worded and aptly described
February 20th, 2025 06:31
Sleepless
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too clumsy to avoid making noise. A wonderful read that would in fact be quite creepy if shadows made such noise. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too clumsy to avoid making noise. A wonderful read that would in fact be quite creepy if shadows made such noise. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:27
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of life that go with them. Lovely
February 18th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of life that go with them. Lovely
February 18th, 2025 14:26
Watching leaves fall
sorenbarrett said:
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for Larry Bird the basketball superstar and the Twitter logo to honor the same Larry. A fun read
February 17th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for Larry Bird the basketball superstar and the Twitter logo to honor the same Larry. A fun read
February 17th, 2025 08:15
Watching leaves fall
arqios said:
The feel is so real! Wonderful image movements as well. 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
The feel is so real! Wonderful image movements as well. 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 07:51
Message 3
Poetic Licence said:
A message that should be fully taken on board by all, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
A message that should be fully taken on board by all, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:27
Message 3
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
February 16th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
February 16th, 2025 06:18
Old songs
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely write
February 15th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely write
February 15th, 2025 08:19
If I could sing
sorenbarrett said:
Music adds so much to the poetry of the lyrics and I too have thought if I could only write music as well as poetry what songs I\'d make. A most beautiful write.
February 14th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
Music adds so much to the poetry of the lyrics and I too have thought if I could only write music as well as poetry what songs I\'d make. A most beautiful write.
February 14th, 2025 10:34
Touched
sorenbarrett said:
Ruminations over a past that is frozen in time. A deep dive into regret. Well spoken from the heart it is haunting
February 13th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Ruminations over a past that is frozen in time. A deep dive into regret. Well spoken from the heart it is haunting
February 13th, 2025 06:29
Watching the drops
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a metaphor of a life under storm. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a metaphor of a life under storm. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:02
Watching the drops
arqios said:
I love me a rain poem, any day; not so much the rain, for there are days I’d rather it stay away. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
I love me a rain poem, any day; not so much the rain, for there are days I’d rather it stay away. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 06:25
Before the cry
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
February 11th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
February 11th, 2025 08:40
Tuned time
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic write
February 10th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic write
February 10th, 2025 06:18
Charred
MDStone said:
Great feeling and emotion. It drew me in and caused me to feel the loneliness, the empty hole in the heart. Great writing!
February 9th, 2025 20:16
MDStone said:
Great feeling and emotion. It drew me in and caused me to feel the loneliness, the empty hole in the heart. Great writing!
February 9th, 2025 20:16
Charred
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past. A very beautiful piece so well worded your poetry has grown immensely.
February 9th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past. A very beautiful piece so well worded your poetry has grown immensely.
February 9th, 2025 12:35
Behind the blink
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of thoughts and time and the distortion as well as missing parts of a continuation. Loved it
February 8th, 2025 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of thoughts and time and the distortion as well as missing parts of a continuation. Loved it
February 8th, 2025 08:03
Pausing the string
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable the images in this poem so well written in verse it lulls one to sleep and time freezes
February 7th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable the images in this poem so well written in verse it lulls one to sleep and time freezes
February 7th, 2025 11:44
Shadows and rays
Caring dove said:
Very nice poem ..
sometimes I find that , when writing from a picture .. just makes you think and it’s nice to be inspired by things
I liked reading your poem
February 6th, 2025 13:55
Caring dove said:
Very nice poem ..
sometimes I find that , when writing from a picture .. just makes you think and it’s nice to be inspired by things
I liked reading your poem
February 6th, 2025 13:55
Shadows and rays
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and worth a fave
February 6th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and worth a fave
February 6th, 2025 13:55
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