Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Let\'s start a war
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
Repeating my phrase
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
Blurred vision
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
Just ignore what I said
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
Be the first
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the words of a mass murderer. Psychopathic, not to angry just looking for a good time
June 27th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the words of a mass murderer. Psychopathic, not to angry just looking for a good time
June 27th, 2025 11:23
Have you fallen?
sorenbarrett said:
Ups and downs, highs and lows, mania and depression, drugs and sobriety nicely done
June 26th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Ups and downs, highs and lows, mania and depression, drugs and sobriety nicely done
June 26th, 2025 11:19
What the devil does to me
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens the door of temptation and is a sad read of pain that tempts. Nicely worded
June 25th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens the door of temptation and is a sad read of pain that tempts. Nicely worded
June 25th, 2025 06:49
A snippet of thought
sorenbarrett said:
Living in one\'s head is not the most comfortable place to reside but then where to go the vacation home of emotions? Also the not so comfortable place to reside. Nicely written
June 24th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Living in one\'s head is not the most comfortable place to reside but then where to go the vacation home of emotions? Also the not so comfortable place to reside. Nicely written
June 24th, 2025 05:42
Thirteen treasons - I drink
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
A moment: Traumatized
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
A Thought: Let us
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
Shaken
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
Visiting
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
A misted morning
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of mist that is analogues to the morning mist in ones mind and eyes. There is a sense of calm in this poem as should accompany one\'s awakening. A most lovely poem of quiet and peace
June 17th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of mist that is analogues to the morning mist in ones mind and eyes. There is a sense of calm in this poem as should accompany one\'s awakening. A most lovely poem of quiet and peace
June 17th, 2025 06:57
A moment: I grin
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and meaning write, clevery crafted from a different perspective, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:09
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and meaning write, clevery crafted from a different perspective, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:09
A moment: I grin
sorenbarrett said:
Such a feeling of knowledge kept that shifts power in a relationship to that of the viewer. A deep and lovely write
June 16th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Such a feeling of knowledge kept that shifts power in a relationship to that of the viewer. A deep and lovely write
June 16th, 2025 16:11
Let\'s tonight
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is full of metaphor and runs to a conclusion that is implied
June 15th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is full of metaphor and runs to a conclusion that is implied
June 15th, 2025 07:15
Let us dance
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in metaphor as well as literal. I speaks of closeness, understanding, love and cooperation. A fave
June 14th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in metaphor as well as literal. I speaks of closeness, understanding, love and cooperation. A fave
June 14th, 2025 08:12
Reflecting through
sorenbarrett said:
It was Narcissus that was infatuated with his own reflection and yet here self reflection is not one of vanity but of understanding.. A lovely poem well written.
June 13th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
It was Narcissus that was infatuated with his own reflection and yet here self reflection is not one of vanity but of understanding.. A lovely poem well written.
June 13th, 2025 05:02
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