Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Lost to find
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a raw loneliness here, the kind that settles into the empty space beside you and refuses to leave. The picture becomes the last thread to someone gone, and that final search—“where to look, where to find”—leaves the ache wide open.
August 9th, 2026 07:52
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a raw loneliness here, the kind that settles into the empty space beside you and refuses to leave. The picture becomes the last thread to someone gone, and that final search—“where to look, where to find”—leaves the ache wide open.
August 9th, 2026 07:52
Basic living
turningpoint said:
MAKES ME FEEL COMFORTABLE THANK YOU LETS BE FRIENDS
August 5th, 2026 19:38
turningpoint said:
MAKES ME FEEL COMFORTABLE THANK YOU LETS BE FRIENDS
August 5th, 2026 19:38
Basic living
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this wonderful poem the meaning that what one does comes back to them providing comfort to others brings comfort to oneself whether it be physical or emotional one can sleep with a clear conscious A fave
August 5th, 2026 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
I take from this wonderful poem the meaning that what one does comes back to them providing comfort to others brings comfort to oneself whether it be physical or emotional one can sleep with a clear conscious A fave
August 5th, 2026 12:04
Saved
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a tribute to one that brought one back for the brink of death. Lovely
August 4th, 2026 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a tribute to one that brought one back for the brink of death. Lovely
August 4th, 2026 07:58
Distanced shine
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice representation of a star as someone dear and as long as it is in sight everything will be alright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice representation of a star as someone dear and as long as it is in sight everything will be alright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2026 12:58
Farm life
sorenbarrett said:
Lived on a farm for a couple of summers in my teens. I learned to love the peace of it as well as the hard physical work. Lovely my friend
August 2nd, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Lived on a farm for a couple of summers in my teens. I learned to love the peace of it as well as the hard physical work. Lovely my friend
August 2nd, 2026 06:19
Helpless
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic portrait painted in words of rhyme. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic portrait painted in words of rhyme. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 04:39
Wrong turn
sorenbarrett said:
A sad set of poetic questions set to rhyme but as said too late to ask. Well written my friend
July 28th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A sad set of poetic questions set to rhyme but as said too late to ask. Well written my friend
July 28th, 2026 05:05
Her dream
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets from a past that can not be undone now too late for reconciliation. Well written
July 26th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets from a past that can not be undone now too late for reconciliation. Well written
July 26th, 2026 14:37
The visit
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its mourning a wistful feeling of loss so apt that we place cut flowers over graves. Nicely done
July 25th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its mourning a wistful feeling of loss so apt that we place cut flowers over graves. Nicely done
July 25th, 2026 06:17
The visit
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write my friend, it states the emotion
July 25th, 2026 04:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write my friend, it states the emotion
July 25th, 2026 04:59
Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of not being valued and ignored. Well written
July 24th, 2026 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of not being valued and ignored. Well written
July 24th, 2026 15:42
I\'m ready
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a return to revisit a grave of one passed where home is defined. Well written in most poetic form
July 23rd, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of a return to revisit a grave of one passed where home is defined. Well written in most poetic form
July 23rd, 2026 07:54
Layers and levels
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic view of things around one whether internal with eyes closed to the outside world or open to see what is about. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic view of things around one whether internal with eyes closed to the outside world or open to see what is about. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 05:29
For free
sorenbarrett said:
Different views each with its virtue well expressed in this poem.
July 21st, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Different views each with its virtue well expressed in this poem.
July 21st, 2026 05:12
One moment to relive
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so human. We need to understand the motivations of other\'s actions and why they cause us pain. Well written
July 20th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so human. We need to understand the motivations of other\'s actions and why they cause us pain. Well written
July 20th, 2026 05:33
Reflective sky
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in images and in nostalgia evoked it speaks of a love from the past still remembered. A lovely write my friend and a fave
July 19th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in images and in nostalgia evoked it speaks of a love from the past still remembered. A lovely write my friend and a fave
July 19th, 2026 06:52
Speechless
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been mumbling up my words so much these days I just want to start barking…
July 18th, 2026 08:46
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been mumbling up my words so much these days I just want to start barking…
July 18th, 2026 08:46
Speechless
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there where I can not remember what I just said and wonder if dementia had taken my head. A lovely write so identifiable
July 18th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there where I can not remember what I just said and wonder if dementia had taken my head. A lovely write so identifiable
July 18th, 2026 06:50
With you
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of wanting to be with another but the recognition that there are difficulties. Well written
July 17th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of wanting to be with another but the recognition that there are difficulties. Well written
July 17th, 2026 05:06
Goodnight
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so parental and nurturing. A lovely write
July 16th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so parental and nurturing. A lovely write
July 16th, 2026 14:43
On my breath
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and touching this write carries with it a wistful sadness
July 15th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and touching this write carries with it a wistful sadness
July 15th, 2026 05:33
Zoom
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of the passage of time. Well done
July 14th, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this poem of the passage of time. Well done
July 14th, 2026 13:23
One or the other
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of diversity and sadly so some come to tragedy. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of diversity and sadly so some come to tragedy. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 14:37
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