Comments received on poems by Maplespal
The dot
sorenbarrett said:
Quit reflective, philosophical, yet inner observant it speaks of inner awareness and the quantum mechanics of the mind. A fave
September 12th, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Quit reflective, philosophical, yet inner observant it speaks of inner awareness and the quantum mechanics of the mind. A fave
September 12th, 2025 05:55
Victimized
NinjaGirl said:
For me, it\'s realizing that he made me into a victim. And I don\'t want to be his creation, I want nothing to do with him.
September 11th, 2025 18:13
NinjaGirl said:
For me, it\'s realizing that he made me into a victim. And I don\'t want to be his creation, I want nothing to do with him.
September 11th, 2025 18:13
Victimized
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that speaks out strongly against control held over others and abused. A lovely poem
September 11th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that speaks out strongly against control held over others and abused. A lovely poem
September 11th, 2025 06:09
Towards me
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that it is better to voice and vent feelings than to keep them in. Here is seems even more comfortable to hear rage than to have it hidden to hear fear is to be able to deal with it, to hide it is to reinforce it. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that it is better to voice and vent feelings than to keep them in. Here is seems even more comfortable to hear rage than to have it hidden to hear fear is to be able to deal with it, to hide it is to reinforce it. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 05:48
Maintenance time & Simply fun
2781 said:
You reminded me of why I am hoping to live forever - one of my first projects will be a nice, comfortable, rocking chair.
September 9th, 2025 08:21
2781 said:
You reminded me of why I am hoping to live forever - one of my first projects will be a nice, comfortable, rocking chair.
September 9th, 2025 08:21
Maintenance time & Simply fun
sorenbarrett said:
Both lovely in their own way these poems send a message of managing one\'s internal issues through repair, organization, storing and in the end communication without words with nature. Lovely and a fave
September 9th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Both lovely in their own way these poems send a message of managing one\'s internal issues through repair, organization, storing and in the end communication without words with nature. Lovely and a fave
September 9th, 2025 06:07
Do you remember?
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhymes. Beautifully written.
September 8th, 2025 12:20
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhymes. Beautifully written.
September 8th, 2025 12:20
Do you remember?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes thoughts of how we all see things different and how even ourselves in our memories create distortions from what we would now see. Time and perspective make us all blind to what ever reality is. A lovely write and a fave
September 8th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes thoughts of how we all see things different and how even ourselves in our memories create distortions from what we would now see. Time and perspective make us all blind to what ever reality is. A lovely write and a fave
September 8th, 2025 06:37
Questions for you (1) & You\'re Mine
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
These poems are so deep and emotional. I love how they tie dreams, thoughts, and even survival to connection with another person. It feels haunting but beautiful at the same time.
September 7th, 2025 08:39
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
These poems are so deep and emotional. I love how they tie dreams, thoughts, and even survival to connection with another person. It feels haunting but beautiful at the same time.
September 7th, 2025 08:39
Questions for you (1) & You\'re Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that is so commonly voiced. It is meant as an endearment but in meaning can be taken as possession. Very thought provoking and well written
September 7th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that is so commonly voiced. It is meant as an endearment but in meaning can be taken as possession. Very thought provoking and well written
September 7th, 2025 08:17
A couple for ya
sorenbarrett said:
How different we behave in private. The way we treat others governed by how we wish to be perceived. Good write
September 6th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
How different we behave in private. The way we treat others governed by how we wish to be perceived. Good write
September 6th, 2025 07:22
Portraits
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now here we have a group of adjectives talking and interacting in a most understandable manner. Out of the chaos of the crowd it feels very relatable and identifiable. Personification makes this a wonderful poem a fave
September 5th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now here we have a group of adjectives talking and interacting in a most understandable manner. Out of the chaos of the crowd it feels very relatable and identifiable. Personification makes this a wonderful poem a fave
September 5th, 2025 06:03
Watching fire
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I do and in its hypnotic flames and the seduction of the raising smoke many a poem is born. A fave
September 4th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I do and in its hypnotic flames and the seduction of the raising smoke many a poem is born. A fave
September 4th, 2025 06:08
Plates
sorenbarrett said:
This was a most enjoyable light read that left a smile. Very nice
September 3rd, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
This was a most enjoyable light read that left a smile. Very nice
September 3rd, 2025 06:09
A good morning to us
sorenbarrett said:
A bright greeting for all this poem starts the day with sun and light. A lovely beginning to another day of life
September 2nd, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A bright greeting for all this poem starts the day with sun and light. A lovely beginning to another day of life
September 2nd, 2025 05:23
It hit hard
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with feelings of loss, loneliness and longing. A mournful poem that hits hard. Well written
September 1st, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with feelings of loss, loneliness and longing. A mournful poem that hits hard. Well written
September 1st, 2025 09:58
Yesterday
sorenbarrett said:
Charon\'s boat in a sled. Quite a ride and quite a poem. Nice one
August 28th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Charon\'s boat in a sled. Quite a ride and quite a poem. Nice one
August 28th, 2025 08:18
Angered moments - Watching steps
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a threat often is sufficient. A good read
August 27th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a threat often is sufficient. A good read
August 27th, 2025 05:05
Spaceships
sorenbarrett said:
We all had space ships and some that never grew up still have them I envy them sometimes. A lovely write
August 26th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
We all had space ships and some that never grew up still have them I envy them sometimes. A lovely write
August 26th, 2025 06:51
It\'s a bedtime thing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like feeling of familiarity. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like feeling of familiarity. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2025 05:54
Why not share 4 poems
sorenbarrett said:
A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over a cat into the pool. Several shorts nicely done
August 24th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over a cat into the pool. Several shorts nicely done
August 24th, 2025 06:39
Jealous sun
sorenbarrett said:
Jealous sun reminds me of an old Louis Armstrong song (That lucky old sun). A bit sad and a bit nostalgic a wonderful write
August 23rd, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Jealous sun reminds me of an old Louis Armstrong song (That lucky old sun). A bit sad and a bit nostalgic a wonderful write
August 23rd, 2025 07:18
Staying silent
sorenbarrett said:
Silence the verbal hiding that is option to prey under attack. Run fight or freeze as an attempt to disguise oneself. Here freezing in speech is that hiding. A lovely write.
August 22nd, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Silence the verbal hiding that is option to prey under attack. Run fight or freeze as an attempt to disguise oneself. Here freezing in speech is that hiding. A lovely write.
August 22nd, 2025 08:21
Pay up
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is. We all have different gods and each is believed to be stronger and better than others. How many wars over this. A wonderful write
August 21st, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is. We all have different gods and each is believed to be stronger and better than others. How many wars over this. A wonderful write
August 21st, 2025 14:40
Never forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and nurtured us through trial and growth. Well done and heart felt
August 20th, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and nurtured us through trial and growth. Well done and heart felt
August 20th, 2025 15:39
Thoughts of seams
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood and the falling apart hard to accept. Heart breaking. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood and the falling apart hard to accept. Heart breaking. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 14:52
Past messages
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it is believed that the answers to all questions and history lies in the stars and that one that understands it can read all knowledge. A fun read
August 18th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it is believed that the answers to all questions and history lies in the stars and that one that understands it can read all knowledge. A fun read
August 18th, 2025 06:37
Where the mind is
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination a powerful and wonderful tool. Very nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination a powerful and wonderful tool. Very nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:03
Where the mind is
Demar Desu said:
Like a puppy having to train the mind to sit still and enjoy where we are….but now I ask myself How did I get in this trash can?
This is a great poem I love it…
August 17th, 2025 08:07
Demar Desu said:
Like a puppy having to train the mind to sit still and enjoy where we are….but now I ask myself How did I get in this trash can?
This is a great poem I love it…
August 17th, 2025 08:07
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