Comments received on poems by Young Fella
Always By Your Side
TobaniNataiella said:
A loving poem of deep loss of the passed mother and the message i will still make you proud, Nicely written
January 8th, 2025 10:05
TobaniNataiella said:
A loving poem of deep loss of the passed mother and the message i will still make you proud, Nicely written
January 8th, 2025 10:05
Tears Under The Stars
TobaniNataiella said:
A haunting poem of the strength of emotionally pain, well written
December 30th, 2024 04:01
TobaniNataiella said:
A haunting poem of the strength of emotionally pain, well written
December 30th, 2024 04:01
Tears Under The Stars
Caring dove said:
‘ two twin hearts ‘
Sounds a bit like ‘ twin flames ‘
A good writing
December 29th, 2024 16:12
Caring dove said:
‘ two twin hearts ‘
Sounds a bit like ‘ twin flames ‘
A good writing
December 29th, 2024 16:12
Thank You
Bella Shepard said:
Your words speak to the treasure of your life, and your love is a precious gift. Beautifully said my friend!
December 25th, 2024 17:35
Bella Shepard said:
Your words speak to the treasure of your life, and your love is a precious gift. Beautifully said my friend!
December 25th, 2024 17:35
Thank You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem a very high tribute to one that is held in very high esteem. Very nicely written
December 25th, 2024 03:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem a very high tribute to one that is held in very high esteem. Very nicely written
December 25th, 2024 03:00
Thank You
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written way of saying thank you to their beloved wife, a lovely read, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 17:18
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written way of saying thank you to their beloved wife, a lovely read, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 17:18
Bright Christmas
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful family write. Lovely and uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
December 21st, 2024 13:27
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful family write. Lovely and uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
December 21st, 2024 13:27
Bright Christmas
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful little poem displaying true happiness and love to there family, Very uplifting write, really enjoyed
December 21st, 2024 06:33
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful little poem displaying true happiness and love to there family, Very uplifting write, really enjoyed
December 21st, 2024 06:33
My Little Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Daddy used to carry me on his shoulders way, way too many years ago, and how I loved it! He taught me all I know, as Mum did likewise, until this beautifully seems to blend both perspectives only because I\'m an adult. Wonderfully rendered with a charming, lingering poignancy and excellent imagery, this touches a delicate, yet strong and lively cord, playing the most beautiful strains. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 17:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Daddy used to carry me on his shoulders way, way too many years ago, and how I loved it! He taught me all I know, as Mum did likewise, until this beautifully seems to blend both perspectives only because I\'m an adult. Wonderfully rendered with a charming, lingering poignancy and excellent imagery, this touches a delicate, yet strong and lively cord, playing the most beautiful strains. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 17:57
Never Away
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
An outstanding poem
terrific imagery my friend!!
Touching and poignant,
great rhythm, flow and blend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 12th, 2024 10:08
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
An outstanding poem
terrific imagery my friend!!
Touching and poignant,
great rhythm, flow and blend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 12th, 2024 10:08
Adorable Peregrine ( Part I)
arqios said:
Now here is a blend of focus and scope, also a topic quite close to this reader’s thoughts. Welcome to MPS, if rather belatedly by virtue of this tardy time stamp.
October 28th, 2024 18:01
arqios said:
Now here is a blend of focus and scope, also a topic quite close to this reader’s thoughts. Welcome to MPS, if rather belatedly by virtue of this tardy time stamp.
October 28th, 2024 18:01
Whispers To The Ocean
Neville said:
Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:51
Neville said:
Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:51
Whispers To The Ocean
arqios said:
Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!
October 27th, 2024 18:05
arqios said:
Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!
October 27th, 2024 18:05
Whispers To The Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem
October 27th, 2024 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem
October 27th, 2024 16:43
Whispers To The Ocean
Wordsandsilence said:
There\'s no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.
October 27th, 2024 16:42
Wordsandsilence said:
There\'s no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.
October 27th, 2024 16:42
What Is Love?
peet said:
Wow. Great lines and so deep. Keep loving and writing. Look forward.
October 15th, 2024 13:02
peet said:
Wow. Great lines and so deep. Keep loving and writing. Look forward.
October 15th, 2024 13:02
My Jaguar
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written
August 21st, 2024 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written
August 21st, 2024 08:03
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