Comments received on poems by Young Fella
Whispers To The Ocean
Neville said:
Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:51
Neville said:
Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:51
Whispers To The Ocean
arqios said:
Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!
October 27th, 2024 18:05
arqios said:
Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!
October 27th, 2024 18:05
Whispers To The Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem
October 27th, 2024 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem
October 27th, 2024 16:43
Whispers To The Ocean
Wordsandsilence said:
There\'s no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.
October 27th, 2024 16:42
Wordsandsilence said:
There\'s no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.
October 27th, 2024 16:42
What Is Love?
peet said:
Wow. Great lines and so deep. Keep loving and writing. Look forward.
October 15th, 2024 13:02
peet said:
Wow. Great lines and so deep. Keep loving and writing. Look forward.
October 15th, 2024 13:02
My Jaguar
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written
August 21st, 2024 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written
August 21st, 2024 08:03
Words & Silence
Wordsandsilence said:
Shockingly beautiful. It\'s hard to tell the sensuality with words. This lady is lucky !
August 14th, 2024 09:03
Wordsandsilence said:
Shockingly beautiful. It\'s hard to tell the sensuality with words. This lady is lucky !
August 14th, 2024 09:03
Words & Silence
sorenbarrett said:
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued in crowded society. Nicely said
August 13th, 2024 17:13
sorenbarrett said:
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued in crowded society. Nicely said
August 13th, 2024 17:13
Saturday Night
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem. Lovely
August 11th, 2024 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem. Lovely
August 11th, 2024 15:39
Parting Words
sorenbarrett said:
Well expressed in different forms and perspectives through anthropomorphism and metaphor it speaks well to an ending relationship. Nicely done.
August 10th, 2024 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Well expressed in different forms and perspectives through anthropomorphism and metaphor it speaks well to an ending relationship. Nicely done.
August 10th, 2024 06:58
Parting Words
Young Fella said:
Hello! Thanks for favoriting my poem. I appreciate it.
August 10th, 2024 05:10
Young Fella said:
Hello! Thanks for favoriting my poem. I appreciate it.
August 10th, 2024 05:10
The Little Street
Wordsandsilence said:
Young Fella, a \"small sign from the endearing\" ? A loving whisper between the lines.
August 9th, 2024 17:46
Wordsandsilence said:
Young Fella, a \"small sign from the endearing\" ? A loving whisper between the lines.
August 9th, 2024 17:46
Hidden Chaos
Wordsandsilence said:
Young Fella, I read all your poems and I understand you. Your words, a beautiful pont over the silence.
Sorry, my english is very bad...
August 9th, 2024 15:58
Wordsandsilence said:
Young Fella, I read all your poems and I understand you. Your words, a beautiful pont over the silence.
Sorry, my english is very bad...
August 9th, 2024 15:58
The Little Street
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of this poem where a single word is used to evoke ripples in the pond of the mind as a pebble thrown in that circles outward. Then another pebble and more circles. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of this poem where a single word is used to evoke ripples in the pond of the mind as a pebble thrown in that circles outward. Then another pebble and more circles. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 05:57
Hidden Chaos
Young Fella said:
Thanks for your comment. You thoroughly explored the subject in question and successfully uncovered the subtle meaning within the structure. Gorgeous.
August 6th, 2024 16:23
Young Fella said:
Thanks for your comment. You thoroughly explored the subject in question and successfully uncovered the subtle meaning within the structure. Gorgeous.
August 6th, 2024 16:23
Hidden Chaos
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded and neatly metered this poem shows a contrast between the first and last part that captures the difference between the internal and external. Very nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded and neatly metered this poem shows a contrast between the first and last part that captures the difference between the internal and external. Very nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 16:14
The Scorpion And The Frog
orchidee said:
Well, it was another sort of story, maybe similar to yours.
August 6th, 2024 01:44
orchidee said:
Well, it was another sort of story, maybe similar to yours.
August 6th, 2024 01:44
The Scorpion And The Frog
orchidee said:
There\'s that puzzle too of how a farmer must get a wolf, goat, and cabbage in a boat all cross a river without any of the three eating the other - something like that anyway - it\'s online somewhere.
Not that the cabbage will eat the wolf or goat! lol.
August 5th, 2024 14:25
orchidee said:
There\'s that puzzle too of how a farmer must get a wolf, goat, and cabbage in a boat all cross a river without any of the three eating the other - something like that anyway - it\'s online somewhere.
Not that the cabbage will eat the wolf or goat! lol.
August 5th, 2024 14:25
The Scorpion And The Frog
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and woman emphasizing free will over nature. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and woman emphasizing free will over nature. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:38
Watery Waters
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and voiced value of another. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and voiced value of another. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 09:05
Crossing The Ocean, Reaching Beyond
sorenbarrett said:
I sense metaphor here. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
I sense metaphor here. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 20:06
The Emptiness
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a sense of loss in this piece. There seems to be a sense of permanence to this loss.
July 20th, 2024 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and a sense of loss in this piece. There seems to be a sense of permanence to this loss.
July 20th, 2024 11:14
