Comments received on poems by Young Fella



Whispers To The Ocean
Neville said:


Having been visited by you earlier, I felt obliged to return the favour and I am now glad I did .. Indeed, I am sure this is likely to be the first of many such visits .. Write on Young Fella .. Neville

October 28th, 2024 01:51

Whispers To The Ocean
arqios said:

Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!

October 27th, 2024 18:05

Whispers To The Ocean
sorenbarrett said:

Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the waves comming and going. The symbolism is underlying and deep like the sea. I loved the gratitude expressed. Overall it was very nicely worded. Great poem

October 27th, 2024 16:43

Whispers To The Ocean
Wordsandsilence said:

There\'s no word, young Fella. This poem reflects so well love and complicity.

October 27th, 2024 16:42

Why Do They Love?
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 19th, 2024 07:33

What Is Love?
peet said:

Wow. Great lines and so deep. Keep loving and writing. Look forward.

October 15th, 2024 13:02

What Is Love?
arqios said:

Let love lead each moment of each day!

October 15th, 2024 05:01

What Is Love?
Lorenz said:

Just hormonal stuff ...

October 15th, 2024 03:58

My Jaguar
sorenbarrett said:

The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a beautiful cat that I hope will not disappear for a good long time. Nicely written

August 21st, 2024 08:03

Words & Silence
Wordsandsilence said:

Thank you very much, Young Fella.

August 14th, 2024 10:14

Words & Silence
Wordsandsilence said:

Shockingly beautiful. It\'s hard to tell the sensuality with words. This lady is lucky !

August 14th, 2024 09:03

Words & Silence
sorenbarrett said:

As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued in crowded society. Nicely said

August 13th, 2024 17:13

Words & Silence
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing

August 13th, 2024 15:42

Saturday Night
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images painted in this poem. Lovely

August 11th, 2024 15:39

Saturday Night
Caring dove said:

Lovely words

August 11th, 2024 15:30

Parting Words
sorenbarrett said:

Well expressed in different forms and perspectives through anthropomorphism and metaphor it speaks well to an ending relationship. Nicely done.

August 10th, 2024 06:58

Parting Words
Young Fella said:

Hello! Thanks for favoriting my poem. I appreciate it.

August 10th, 2024 05:10

The Little Street
Wordsandsilence said:

Young Fella, a \"small sign from the endearing\" ? A loving whisper between the lines.

August 9th, 2024 17:46

Hidden Chaos
Wordsandsilence said:

Young Fella, I read all your poems and I understand you. Your words, a beautiful pont over the silence.
Sorry, my english is very bad...

August 9th, 2024 15:58

The Little Street
sorenbarrett said:

I loved the format of this poem where a single word is used to evoke ripples in the pond of the mind as a pebble thrown in that circles outward. Then another pebble and more circles. Lovely

August 9th, 2024 05:57

Hidden Chaos
Young Fella said:

Thanks for your comment. You thoroughly explored the subject in question and successfully uncovered the subtle meaning within the structure. Gorgeous.

August 6th, 2024 16:23

Hidden Chaos
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderfully worded and neatly metered this poem shows a contrast between the first and last part that captures the difference between the internal and external. Very nicely done.

August 6th, 2024 16:14

The Scorpion And The Frog
orchidee said:

Well, it was another sort of story, maybe similar to yours.

August 6th, 2024 01:44

The Scorpion And The Frog
orchidee said:

There\'s that puzzle too of how a farmer must get a wolf, goat, and cabbage in a boat all cross a river without any of the three eating the other - something like that anyway - it\'s online somewhere.
Not that the cabbage will eat the wolf or goat! lol.

August 5th, 2024 14:25

The Scorpion And The Frog
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and woman emphasizing free will over nature. Nicely done

August 5th, 2024 12:38

The True Endgame
sorenbarrett said:

Loss can be earth shaking. Nicely written

August 3rd, 2024 06:16

Watery Waters
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images and voiced value of another. Nicely written

August 2nd, 2024 09:05

Crossing The Ocean, Reaching Beyond
sorenbarrett said:

I sense metaphor here. Nicely written

July 30th, 2024 20:06

The Emptiness
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and a sense of loss in this piece. There seems to be a sense of permanence to this loss.

July 20th, 2024 11:14