Comments received on poems by mya
Apollo
Poetic Licence said:
Through the clouds bursts the sun, offering a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:24
Poetic Licence said:
Through the clouds bursts the sun, offering a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:24
Apollo
sorenbarrett said:
A great tie in with Apollo and archery shooting sun rays as also identified with the sun also identified with song and dance it fits in well with the poem mentioning art and then the issue of thawing a heart and his association with healing very well worded and woven this poem
May 16th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great tie in with Apollo and archery shooting sun rays as also identified with the sun also identified with song and dance it fits in well with the poem mentioning art and then the issue of thawing a heart and his association with healing very well worded and woven this poem
May 16th, 2025 09:08
Apollo
MatPie said:
lovely set of words and dreams and imaginations and a glance of hope with your own eyes. or thats how I look at this poem with my own eyes!
May 16th, 2025 06:41
MatPie said:
lovely set of words and dreams and imaginations and a glance of hope with your own eyes. or thats how I look at this poem with my own eyes!
May 16th, 2025 06:41
tongue\'s weapon
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description of how languages used can sometimes lessen or heightened inappropriately what your real feelings and thoughts were, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description of how languages used can sometimes lessen or heightened inappropriately what your real feelings and thoughts were, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:28
tongue\'s weapon
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely write of the inadequacies of language in expressing the inner feelings and thoughts. Wonderfully done.
May 9th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely write of the inadequacies of language in expressing the inner feelings and thoughts. Wonderfully done.
May 9th, 2025 08:49
Fatal & Cold
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper poem and metaphor set in verse that is somehow sophisticated in a rhythm and near rhyme that one, like in a dream, can not quite put one\'s finger on. Very well done
April 28th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper poem and metaphor set in verse that is somehow sophisticated in a rhythm and near rhyme that one, like in a dream, can not quite put one\'s finger on. Very well done
April 28th, 2025 09:27
Lemons
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and painful this poem evokes tears of hurt. Well written the message is clear
April 27th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and painful this poem evokes tears of hurt. Well written the message is clear
April 27th, 2025 14:21
Lemons
Tony Grannell said:
A fierce, from the hip horror story, gut wrenching but so brilliantly expressed by a truly talented poet. Powerful!
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 14:10
Tony Grannell said:
A fierce, from the hip horror story, gut wrenching but so brilliantly expressed by a truly talented poet. Powerful!
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 14:10
Wait for me
sorenbarrett said:
What a magnificent start to this poem. It leaves that feeling of wanting to go but not sure where and the carefree feel of it not being all that important at the moment. A most lovely poem
April 25th, 2025 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a magnificent start to this poem. It leaves that feeling of wanting to go but not sure where and the carefree feel of it not being all that important at the moment. A most lovely poem
April 25th, 2025 10:09
Good Old Friend
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write that has a good feel as you read it, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 00:27
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write that has a good feel as you read it, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 00:27
Long story, Words short
sorenbarrett said:
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in various ways which is always good in poetry. A short but lovely read
April 17th, 2025 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in various ways which is always good in poetry. A short but lovely read
April 17th, 2025 16:17
Good Old Friend
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am intrigued by the rhyme and the flow that work together well. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am intrigued by the rhyme and the flow that work together well. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 16:00
False Salvation
Poetic Licence said:
That is just an absolutely wonderful write, with some great lines, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 13:23
Poetic Licence said:
That is just an absolutely wonderful write, with some great lines, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 13:23
False Salvation
sorenbarrett said:
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt disguised as sugar in flavor.) one of the best lines of the day. As I read this I could tell that the author has a future as a poet. For your age it has as much promise as I have ever seen. A most lovely poem with great wordsmanship, buildup and an absolutely smashing finish. Brilliant! My congratulations
April 1st, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt disguised as sugar in flavor.) one of the best lines of the day. As I read this I could tell that the author has a future as a poet. For your age it has as much promise as I have ever seen. A most lovely poem with great wordsmanship, buildup and an absolutely smashing finish. Brilliant! My congratulations
April 1st, 2025 13:06
Sleeping Through Alarms
Poetic Licence said:
As all children do, they think they know best until they get older, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:43
Poetic Licence said:
As all children do, they think they know best until they get older, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:43
Sleeping Through Alarms
sorenbarrett said:
A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 18:42
Blue velvet
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write and wonderful imagery, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write and wonderful imagery, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:06
morning mourning dove
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
November 29th, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
November 29th, 2024 04:54
Hibiscus Tea
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
Who am i to ask for more?
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
Closed and Clothed
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
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