Comments received on poems by mya
Hibiscus Tea
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
Who am i to ask for more?
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
Closed and Clothed
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Closed and Clothed
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I hear the anguish in this poem nicely written
August 16th, 2024 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I hear the anguish in this poem nicely written
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Closed and Clothed
Thoughtless said:
It\'s called the Spotlight Effect. Most people aren\'t even looking. They are suffering from that same effect. Nice writing.
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Thoughtless said:
It\'s called the Spotlight Effect. Most people aren\'t even looking. They are suffering from that same effect. Nice writing.
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Sapphires & Desires
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 20:04
Apricity
Dan Williams said:
Not often I have to look up two words from the same poem. Apricity I kind of knew, but abditory caught me flat footed. Nicely filtered in, anti cliche. Nice work.
August 11th, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
Not often I have to look up two words from the same poem. Apricity I kind of knew, but abditory caught me flat footed. Nicely filtered in, anti cliche. Nice work.
August 11th, 2024 00:12
Apricity
sorenbarrett said:
We all need something like this a parent, a friend, lover a God. Nicely written
August 9th, 2024 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
We all need something like this a parent, a friend, lover a God. Nicely written
August 9th, 2024 17:56
Searching
sorenbarrett said:
A great write to the life time objective of Einstein, and Hawking. Well written and fun to read.
August 2nd, 2024 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great write to the life time objective of Einstein, and Hawking. Well written and fun to read.
August 2nd, 2024 16:12
Songs of Melancholy
sorenbarrett said:
A bunch of great similes and a message that is good to hear. Nicely said
July 30th, 2024 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A bunch of great similes and a message that is good to hear. Nicely said
July 30th, 2024 06:43
Carpe Diem !
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that we all should take more to heart. Nicely worded in verse.
July 29th, 2024 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that we all should take more to heart. Nicely worded in verse.
July 29th, 2024 10:01
Carpe Diem !
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of living in the present and embracing life\'s journey. The river metaphor flows seamlessly into a message of resilience and hope. I particularly appreciate how you\'ve balanced acknowledging fears with the encouragement to overcome them. The final lines about expressing unspoken thoughts through poetry add a personal touch that resonates deeply. Your words serve as a gentle reminder to seize each day with optimism and creativity.
July 29th, 2024 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of living in the present and embracing life\'s journey. The river metaphor flows seamlessly into a message of resilience and hope. I particularly appreciate how you\'ve balanced acknowledging fears with the encouragement to overcome them. The final lines about expressing unspoken thoughts through poetry add a personal touch that resonates deeply. Your words serve as a gentle reminder to seize each day with optimism and creativity.
July 29th, 2024 09:02
Where Peace Lies
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful imagery in a peaceful poem where I feel release so nicely said.in an artistic way
July 27th, 2024 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful imagery in a peaceful poem where I feel release so nicely said.in an artistic way
July 27th, 2024 06:24
Happy Birthday To You
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, cute and endearing are terms that come to mind with the feel of this poem
July 26th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, cute and endearing are terms that come to mind with the feel of this poem
July 26th, 2024 05:10
Golden Chariot
rengoku said:
amazing mya! i love it!
i actually told a friend named mya to sign up on here a few days ago
we met at a bible camp and shared our testimonies hers was amazing compared to mine
July 23rd, 2024 20:53
rengoku said:
amazing mya! i love it!
i actually told a friend named mya to sign up on here a few days ago
we met at a bible camp and shared our testimonies hers was amazing compared to mine
July 23rd, 2024 20:53
