Comments received on poems by mya
Into my heart
RSM0812 said:
I take two sugar usually in my coffee but i can understand your poetic passion for sure. Nicely done.
June 28th, 2025 10:44
RSM0812 said:
I take two sugar usually in my coffee but i can understand your poetic passion for sure. Nicely done.
June 28th, 2025 10:44
Into my heart
sorenbarrett said:
I am accustomed to my women bitter and dark as well and that taste of sugar tastes strange to me. By the way I too like expresso black. A lovely write and I believe metaphor as well a fave
June 26th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
I am accustomed to my women bitter and dark as well and that taste of sugar tastes strange to me. By the way I too like expresso black. A lovely write and I believe metaphor as well a fave
June 26th, 2025 08:15
Young yet beyond
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation says that kids are not what they used to be but the truth is what spoils children is not children but adults. A beautiful poem of child potential.
June 23rd, 2025 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation says that kids are not what they used to be but the truth is what spoils children is not children but adults. A beautiful poem of child potential.
June 23rd, 2025 13:32
Seasons May Change
Poetic Licence said:
Using seasons nicely to say change happens, dont be afraid of it, as one comes to an end a new one begins, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 10:06
Poetic Licence said:
Using seasons nicely to say change happens, dont be afraid of it, as one comes to an end a new one begins, enjoyed the read
June 18th, 2025 10:06
Seasons May Change
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface a poem of the seasons but I take it for a metaphor as well that speaks to changes. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface a poem of the seasons but I take it for a metaphor as well that speaks to changes. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 08:10
Reverence
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of beauty of the universe, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of beauty of the universe, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 10:46
Reverence
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in its meaning it focuses on beauty and grandeur so often overlooked. It speaks to the beauty of creation and nature. Lovely and a fave
June 14th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in its meaning it focuses on beauty and grandeur so often overlooked. It speaks to the beauty of creation and nature. Lovely and a fave
June 14th, 2025 08:15
unexpected
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of a day where nothing goes right. I enjoyed the read.
June 11th, 2025 13:29
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of a day where nothing goes right. I enjoyed the read.
June 11th, 2025 13:29
unexpected
sorenbarrett said:
The unexpected in many ways startles and sometimes frightens. A wonderful poem of the unidentifiable.
June 11th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
The unexpected in many ways startles and sometimes frightens. A wonderful poem of the unidentifiable.
June 11th, 2025 09:37
Spilled Perfume
RSM0812 said:
To me this emphasizes the old saying \"don\'t cry over spilled milk\". I like your version better.
June 8th, 2025 09:50
RSM0812 said:
To me this emphasizes the old saying \"don\'t cry over spilled milk\". I like your version better.
June 8th, 2025 09:50
Spilled Perfume
Poetic Licence said:
Smells often trigger memories some good and some bad, but they are only memories , nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:10
Poetic Licence said:
Smells often trigger memories some good and some bad, but they are only memories , nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:10
Spilled Perfume
sorenbarrett said:
Scent so strongly attached to memory. Perfume either soft and a lovely memory or overpowering and provoking headaches. A lovely poem
May 30th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Scent so strongly attached to memory. Perfume either soft and a lovely memory or overpowering and provoking headaches. A lovely poem
May 30th, 2025 08:49
Sailor in the Sea
Poetic Licence said:
As in life this write nicely expresses the searching for safety when we are in a storm, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:24
Poetic Licence said:
As in life this write nicely expresses the searching for safety when we are in a storm, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:24
Sailor in the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for searching for safety in a storm or knowledge in the dark. A great write
May 25th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for searching for safety in a storm or knowledge in the dark. A great write
May 25th, 2025 08:22
glass vial
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of the loss of needed blood, sense of will i live or will I die, nicely expressed
May 21st, 2025 12:30
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write of the loss of needed blood, sense of will i live or will I die, nicely expressed
May 21st, 2025 12:30
glass vial
sorenbarrett said:
The loss of a vial of blood well portrayed. Very nice
May 21st, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
The loss of a vial of blood well portrayed. Very nice
May 21st, 2025 09:39
glass vial
Salvia.S said:
This beautifully captures the tension between fragility and strength. The language is direct but evocative, making the poem feel impactful and thought provoking. Well done!
May 21st, 2025 09:33
Salvia.S said:
This beautifully captures the tension between fragility and strength. The language is direct but evocative, making the poem feel impactful and thought provoking. Well done!
May 21st, 2025 09:33
Guitar, Candle, Etc.
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of letting the mind play, nicely crafted
May 20th, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of letting the mind play, nicely crafted
May 20th, 2025 12:26
Guitar, Candle, Etc.
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic write of playing things in the mind. Lovely
May 20th, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic write of playing things in the mind. Lovely
May 20th, 2025 11:34
Wild Child
sorenbarrett said:
Engaging, tender, animating it speaks to the heart and from the heart well written
May 17th, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
Engaging, tender, animating it speaks to the heart and from the heart well written
May 17th, 2025 08:51
Apollo
Poetic Licence said:
Through the clouds bursts the sun, offering a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:24
Poetic Licence said:
Through the clouds bursts the sun, offering a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:24
Apollo
sorenbarrett said:
A great tie in with Apollo and archery shooting sun rays as also identified with the sun also identified with song and dance it fits in well with the poem mentioning art and then the issue of thawing a heart and his association with healing very well worded and woven this poem
May 16th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great tie in with Apollo and archery shooting sun rays as also identified with the sun also identified with song and dance it fits in well with the poem mentioning art and then the issue of thawing a heart and his association with healing very well worded and woven this poem
May 16th, 2025 09:08
Apollo
MatPie said:
lovely set of words and dreams and imaginations and a glance of hope with your own eyes. or thats how I look at this poem with my own eyes!
May 16th, 2025 06:41
MatPie said:
lovely set of words and dreams and imaginations and a glance of hope with your own eyes. or thats how I look at this poem with my own eyes!
May 16th, 2025 06:41
tongue\'s weapon
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description of how languages used can sometimes lessen or heightened inappropriately what your real feelings and thoughts were, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description of how languages used can sometimes lessen or heightened inappropriately what your real feelings and thoughts were, great write
May 9th, 2025 09:28
tongue\'s weapon
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely write of the inadequacies of language in expressing the inner feelings and thoughts. Wonderfully done.
May 9th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely write of the inadequacies of language in expressing the inner feelings and thoughts. Wonderfully done.
May 9th, 2025 08:49
Fatal & Cold
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper poem and metaphor set in verse that is somehow sophisticated in a rhythm and near rhyme that one, like in a dream, can not quite put one\'s finger on. Very well done
April 28th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper poem and metaphor set in verse that is somehow sophisticated in a rhythm and near rhyme that one, like in a dream, can not quite put one\'s finger on. Very well done
April 28th, 2025 09:27
Lemons
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and painful this poem evokes tears of hurt. Well written the message is clear
April 27th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and painful this poem evokes tears of hurt. Well written the message is clear
April 27th, 2025 14:21
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