Comments received on poems by mya
Good Old Friend
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write that has a good feel as you read it, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 00:27
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write that has a good feel as you read it, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 00:27
Long story, Words short
sorenbarrett said:
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in various ways which is always good in poetry. A short but lovely read
April 17th, 2025 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in various ways which is always good in poetry. A short but lovely read
April 17th, 2025 16:17
Good Old Friend
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am intrigued by the rhyme and the flow that work together well. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am intrigued by the rhyme and the flow that work together well. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 16:00
False Salvation
Poetic Licence said:
That is just an absolutely wonderful write, with some great lines, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 13:23
Poetic Licence said:
That is just an absolutely wonderful write, with some great lines, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 13:23
False Salvation
sorenbarrett said:
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt disguised as sugar in flavor.) one of the best lines of the day. As I read this I could tell that the author has a future as a poet. For your age it has as much promise as I have ever seen. A most lovely poem with great wordsmanship, buildup and an absolutely smashing finish. Brilliant! My congratulations
April 1st, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt disguised as sugar in flavor.) one of the best lines of the day. As I read this I could tell that the author has a future as a poet. For your age it has as much promise as I have ever seen. A most lovely poem with great wordsmanship, buildup and an absolutely smashing finish. Brilliant! My congratulations
April 1st, 2025 13:06
Sleeping Through Alarms
Poetic Licence said:
As all children do, they think they know best until they get older, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:43
Poetic Licence said:
As all children do, they think they know best until they get older, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:43
Sleeping Through Alarms
sorenbarrett said:
A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 18:42
Blue velvet
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write and wonderful imagery, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write and wonderful imagery, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:06
morning mourning dove
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
November 29th, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
November 29th, 2024 04:54
Hibiscus Tea
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with them ghosts. A little tea may warm the soul.
September 5th, 2024 13:47
Who am i to ask for more?
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
August 27th, 2024 08:29
Closed and Clothed
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Dan Williams said:
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof, unconcerned. Nice write though.
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Closed and Clothed
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I hear the anguish in this poem nicely written
August 16th, 2024 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I hear the anguish in this poem nicely written
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Closed and Clothed
Thoughtless said:
It\'s called the Spotlight Effect. Most people aren\'t even looking. They are suffering from that same effect. Nice writing.
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Thoughtless said:
It\'s called the Spotlight Effect. Most people aren\'t even looking. They are suffering from that same effect. Nice writing.
August 16th, 2024 07:59
Sapphires & Desires
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 20:04
Apricity
Dan Williams said:
Not often I have to look up two words from the same poem. Apricity I kind of knew, but abditory caught me flat footed. Nicely filtered in, anti cliche. Nice work.
August 11th, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
Not often I have to look up two words from the same poem. Apricity I kind of knew, but abditory caught me flat footed. Nicely filtered in, anti cliche. Nice work.
August 11th, 2024 00:12
Apricity
sorenbarrett said:
We all need something like this a parent, a friend, lover a God. Nicely written
August 9th, 2024 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
We all need something like this a parent, a friend, lover a God. Nicely written
August 9th, 2024 17:56
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