Comments received on poems by gerrylegister
The Beautiful Human
gerrylegister said:
Thank you , I truly agree, its a privilege to be alive on this island earth,
January 22nd, 2017 22:14
gerrylegister said:
Thank you , I truly agree, its a privilege to be alive on this island earth,
January 22nd, 2017 22:14
The Beautiful Human
Augustus said:
My dad used to say there was not any one that could not teach you something. This is an elegant tribute to man. Nicely done.
January 22nd, 2017 14:32
Augustus said:
My dad used to say there was not any one that could not teach you something. This is an elegant tribute to man. Nicely done.
January 22nd, 2017 14:32
The Beautiful Human
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is mist in day and night. Emotion exists in partly at day and partly at night. But light reveals out humanity. We stand together upon this fragile earthly strand.Declaring the testimony of a beautiful human, we feel attention of emotion does magic. Very beautifully presented poem this is. Excellent one!
January 22nd, 2017 14:09
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is mist in day and night. Emotion exists in partly at day and partly at night. But light reveals out humanity. We stand together upon this fragile earthly strand.Declaring the testimony of a beautiful human, we feel attention of emotion does magic. Very beautifully presented poem this is. Excellent one!
January 22nd, 2017 14:09
The Beautiful Human
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed great write
January 22nd, 2017 11:22
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed great write
January 22nd, 2017 11:22
The Beautiful Human
Corey said:
This is a wonderful piece with many beautiful lines. I especially love the last verse! Great write!
January 22nd, 2017 10:59
Corey said:
This is a wonderful piece with many beautiful lines. I especially love the last verse! Great write!
January 22nd, 2017 10:59
Kind Words
Augustus said:
Fortunately, I had a father who taught me those things. Beautifully done.
January 9th, 2017 16:56
Augustus said:
Fortunately, I had a father who taught me those things. Beautifully done.
January 9th, 2017 16:56
Still Waiting
Augustus said:
Patience in waiting is difficult , more so in silence. Like it a lot.
January 8th, 2017 18:13
Augustus said:
Patience in waiting is difficult , more so in silence. Like it a lot.
January 8th, 2017 18:13
The Parting Year
Augustus said:
I feel bended till I\'m broke. Thought provoking poetry.
January 7th, 2017 22:14
Augustus said:
I feel bended till I\'m broke. Thought provoking poetry.
January 7th, 2017 22:14
Revival of the Nephilim
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man..This is absolutely stunning..It\'s obvious that you have studied this particular being well..Your imagery was like standing there watching it happen..And I love how it includes others such as banshees..It is very much like something I would have myself written, had my interest or passion been like yours on the Nephilim.they exist still , in essence or in form... Excellent excellent work,!!
January 4th, 2017 12:55
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man..This is absolutely stunning..It\'s obvious that you have studied this particular being well..Your imagery was like standing there watching it happen..And I love how it includes others such as banshees..It is very much like something I would have myself written, had my interest or passion been like yours on the Nephilim.they exist still , in essence or in form... Excellent excellent work,!!
January 4th, 2017 12:55
Revival of the Nephilim
willyweed said:
Oh wow Jerry this is great!
loved it good job man! way cool!
January 4th, 2017 12:44
willyweed said:
Oh wow Jerry this is great!
loved it good job man! way cool!
January 4th, 2017 12:44
Jewels of Love
willyweed said:
another well written and beautiful work, wonderful poem.
January 3rd, 2017 13:51
willyweed said:
another well written and beautiful work, wonderful poem.
January 3rd, 2017 13:51
Bleak Day
willyweed said:
very visual poetic prose! a joy for love
great reading! Bravo! ww
January 2nd, 2017 16:52
willyweed said:
very visual poetic prose! a joy for love
great reading! Bravo! ww
January 2nd, 2017 16:52
Bleak Day
Christina8 said:
Very well written descriptive poem! A pleasure to read. Great job.--Christina
January 2nd, 2017 15:29
Christina8 said:
Very well written descriptive poem! A pleasure to read. Great job.--Christina
January 2nd, 2017 15:29
Sunshine and Gold
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AH YES GERRY ~ JAMAICA ~ Land of Sunshine and pure joy ! What other blessed Island could produce the whole world's favorite USAIN BOLT. And its not just him its the whole Jamaican Team ~ win or lose they are so so H A P P Y ! i saw this at the West Indian carnivals in the UK and then i visited BARBADOS and saw why for myself. Thanks for the tribute you have brought to JAMAICA and the quality of ATHLETES she produces and the unique TRIPLE ~ TRIPLE. Yours BRIAN Please check my poem for a tribute to the "wicked" BRITISH LADY ATHLETES !
August 20th, 2016 14:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AH YES GERRY ~ JAMAICA ~ Land of Sunshine and pure joy ! What other blessed Island could produce the whole world's favorite USAIN BOLT. And its not just him its the whole Jamaican Team ~ win or lose they are so so H A P P Y ! i saw this at the West Indian carnivals in the UK and then i visited BARBADOS and saw why for myself. Thanks for the tribute you have brought to JAMAICA and the quality of ATHLETES she produces and the unique TRIPLE ~ TRIPLE. Yours BRIAN Please check my poem for a tribute to the "wicked" BRITISH LADY ATHLETES !
August 20th, 2016 14:35
When the wind blows
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI GERRY ~ Thanks for a well crafted poem (full of rhyme and rhythm) but with a stark message exemplified in recent days with political ~ racial and civil unrest in France ~ USA ~ Turkey. In the UK we have has a "regime change" but without any real blood being shed ! Brexit is a massive issue but we will weather the storm and Theresa is an able Leader ~ ordained by God ! You suggest in stanzas 4 ~ 5 ~ 6 that God is still Sovereign (and I believe He is !) so perhaps ~ given the extent of the global turmoil ~ the most sensible thing we can do is pray ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 08:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI GERRY ~ Thanks for a well crafted poem (full of rhyme and rhythm) but with a stark message exemplified in recent days with political ~ racial and civil unrest in France ~ USA ~ Turkey. In the UK we have has a "regime change" but without any real blood being shed ! Brexit is a massive issue but we will weather the storm and Theresa is an able Leader ~ ordained by God ! You suggest in stanzas 4 ~ 5 ~ 6 that God is still Sovereign (and I believe He is !) so perhaps ~ given the extent of the global turmoil ~ the most sensible thing we can do is pray ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 08:36
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