Comments received on poems by gerrylegister



Dreaming of Tomorrow
gerrylegister said:

Thank you Audax

December 8th, 2020 18:08

Dreaming of Tomorrow
Robert Haigh said:

A poem bearing social significance right now. We are all feeling the effects of Covid restrictions, and I\'m sure we all long for things to return to normal. A poignant poem, Gerry.

December 8th, 2020 15:14

Dreaming of Tomorrow
gerrylegister said:

Thank you, I appreciate your sentiments. L. B

December 8th, 2020 06:07

Dreaming of Tomorrow
gerrylegister said:

Thank you, Gold60

December 8th, 2020 06:05

Dreaming of Tomorrow
gerrylegister said:

indeed, we envisioned anew
thank you

December 8th, 2020 06:04

Dreaming of Tomorrow
L. B. Mek said:

\'Through the darkness, I feel lonely.
Sometimes I weep and fall asleep.
Awoken late because I have gone so deep.
And restless with all that I have seen.
Mostly reality within my dream.
Real as the plague with tighter clasp.
That our society cannot grasp.\'
absolutely brilliant set of lines, a Great write!

December 8th, 2020 05:27

Dreaming of Tomorrow
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Gerry. We know that tomorrow all will be good once more, just dream of tomorrow.

Andy

December 8th, 2020 02:37

Dreaming of Tomorrow
Audax said:

I love the title and the words you out together on here! Enjoyed reading it! Hope will always flourish cause tomorrow is envisioned to be there to bring things anew!

December 8th, 2020 01:07

Now to Eternity
L. B. Mek said:

a daunting yet unerringly insightful words of commentary, a haunting depiction of the bleak aspects within our reality,
though thankfully humanity\'s perspectives are moulded from our Amygdala\'s legacy of hopeful ambition to survive and eventually overcome,
good write

November 2nd, 2020 06:27

A Beautiful Ghost
L. B. Mek said:

\'Your chastised mind stirring to strive,
Dare the sun to rise again and shine.
Within the dreams, you survive,
To look upon the gaze that saved your mind.\'
a wonderfully life-affirming write,

October 20th, 2020 03:26

Not All Nations Have Pearls
L. B. Mek said:

truly: what is value, when the scales themselves are so far removed from truth?
a measured write of insightful commentary


October 5th, 2020 03:32

A Day of Reckoning
L. B. Mek said:

even removed from its religious context this is a well thought-out commentary on the bleak reality of those ugly aspects of humanity, that the mainly decent members of our society have been and continue -to: battle - one prevented catastrophe at-a-time,
(though pointedly choosing to dwell in our self-serving wilful ignorance, until absolutely necessary...)
good write

September 28th, 2020 03:47

A Day of Reckoning
orchidee said:

Yes, there is the offer of salvation to all, but also - we\'ve all got to answer for it one day, the good and the bad we have done - or not done.

September 28th, 2020 02:02

This World
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.
I may need to post your poem in two parts - your \'vision\' poem adapted to a hymn-poem.

September 26th, 2020 01:42

The Testament
orchidee said:

It will take a while - it will be a long hymn! lol. But not that difficult. Some old-fashioned hymns went on for 30 verses or more. Phew!

September 19th, 2020 12:23

The Testament
orchidee said:

Good write Gary.
I could possibly adjust this to a hymn-poem, if you wish? There\'s the hymn already: \'Be thou my vision\'.

September 18th, 2020 02:17

The Testament
dusk arising said:

Oh no not another victim of the plague of believing in the fairy tales of the bible.
Is this your personal prayer? If so why do you have to publish it on the web, does it make you feel extra-holy or something?

September 18th, 2020 01:38

The Invisible You
gerrylegister said:

Thank you, much appreciated

September 16th, 2020 20:31

The Invisible You
orchidee said:

Yes, we cannot tangibly see \'invisble\' things such as our wills, emotions, thoughts, etc. Though they are expressed through our physical bodies in our words and deeds.

September 16th, 2020 02:07

Feelings
AwHec8 said:

I hope this is what you quote to an already found Lover, if not then may you find your Love, Quickly.

June 7th, 2020 07:56

Feelings
Goldfinch60 said:

may that love, joy and pleasure be shared for eternity.

Andy

June 7th, 2020 00:45

The Path of Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:

May those things ahead of you become light and meaningful soon, each new day can be wonderful

Andy

June 6th, 2020 01:26

Spring into Summertime
Goldfinch60 said:

May you season of vacation be a wonderful time gerry.

Andy

June 5th, 2020 01:07

I am not Afraid
Goldfinch60 said:

That new chapter in your life will take you to wondrous places and the past will become a forgotten memory.

Andy

June 4th, 2020 00:25

Habits
Goldfinch60 said:

Those things that we do do have consequences but mostly the consequences are from people who think they know better.

May 9th, 2019 15:21

Redemption
ForeverJesus6 said:

\'Redemption Song\', is actually my favorite song by Bob Marly.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key

April 26th, 2019 00:50

My Future
Goldfinch60 said:

That wonderful future is ahead of you, ahead of me. See you there.

March 1st, 2019 01:52

Would You still be Mine
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful poem with the wonderful Miles playing - who could ask for more.

January 4th, 2019 00:53

Would You still be Mine
whisperingquill said:

Pristinely beautiful

January 3rd, 2019 15:04

To Be Blessed
orchidee said:

A good write Gerry.

October 11th, 2018 01:49

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