Comments received on poems by anabella151
Del
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meaning of Dell whether a person or a small valley is questionable and adds to the interest. This possible personification through word play is well done and continued in the personification of the sun as well. Lovely
August 15th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meaning of Dell whether a person or a small valley is questionable and adds to the interest. This possible personification through word play is well done and continued in the personification of the sun as well. Lovely
August 15th, 2026 03:55
Baby
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia or Gaea mother of earth and sky, the Titans as well as others known to the Romans as Terra gives meaning to this poem. Is it the environmental destruction of man that has provoked the tears? Well written it blends the mythological with the modern.
August 9th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia or Gaea mother of earth and sky, the Titans as well as others known to the Romans as Terra gives meaning to this poem. Is it the environmental destruction of man that has provoked the tears? Well written it blends the mythological with the modern.
August 9th, 2026 03:46
Day
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that shows the power of this poem. Great lines well presented a fave
August 5th, 2026 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that shows the power of this poem. Great lines well presented a fave
August 5th, 2026 11:52
Day
peto said:
Welcome back Annabelle
Great write to return with
Worth the wait
August 5th, 2026 11:11
peto said:
Welcome back Annabelle
Great write to return with
Worth the wait
August 5th, 2026 11:11
Hunger
sorenbarrett said:
Hunger sometimes persists beyond its time or usefulness and leads to obesity
August 26th, 2024 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Hunger sometimes persists beyond its time or usefulness and leads to obesity
August 26th, 2024 09:42
Hot Water
Thoughtless said:
About abuse, yes. I hope it\'s not based on experience. Good write.
August 5th, 2024 17:33
Thoughtless said:
About abuse, yes. I hope it\'s not based on experience. Good write.
August 5th, 2024 17:33
Hot Water
sorenbarrett said:
All things have their positives and negatives. It is a matter of which outweighs which. Nicely done.
August 5th, 2024 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
All things have their positives and negatives. It is a matter of which outweighs which. Nicely done.
August 5th, 2024 16:20
To the Skies
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in a literal sense but the metaphor is greater still.
August 3rd, 2024 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in a literal sense but the metaphor is greater still.
August 3rd, 2024 08:54
To the Skies
MendedFences27 said:
This is clever, poignant, and melodic.
The repetition carries the flow along.
We are not all cut out for this world. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2024 08:14
MendedFences27 said:
This is clever, poignant, and melodic.
The repetition carries the flow along.
We are not all cut out for this world. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2024 08:14
Lake of Tears
Thoughtless said:
Not to be acknowledged by the object of one\'s passion is the definition of Hell. Good write.
August 2nd, 2024 21:33
Thoughtless said:
Not to be acknowledged by the object of one\'s passion is the definition of Hell. Good write.
August 2nd, 2024 21:33
Lake of Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Being ignored is one of the hardest things to endure. I hear the anguish in this piece.
August 2nd, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Being ignored is one of the hardest things to endure. I hear the anguish in this piece.
August 2nd, 2024 05:48
