Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
we are soup
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well written and a fave
May 19th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well written and a fave
May 19th, 2025 06:45
Who is sending nukes?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar
May 18th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar
May 18th, 2025 04:55
I must pimp myself!
sorenbarrett said:
This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and for once get the jump on them but sadly any profit gained is still subject to taxation
May 17th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and for once get the jump on them but sadly any profit gained is still subject to taxation
May 17th, 2025 04:30
to be mixed in the USA!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
1 day left to live
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
1 day left to live
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
to be mixed in the USA!
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
to be mixed in the USA!
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
Today I saw a tree fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tycoon to be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Today I saw a tree fall
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
God, Universe and Nature
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
Politically Speaking
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
My best friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
My best friend
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
I am afraid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
I am afraid
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
my taxes came!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
my taxes came!
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
my taxes came!
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
God, Universe and Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
God, Universe and Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
God, Universe and Nature
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
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