Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Women Hating Men
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that women are (mostly) so angry at men because many guys have been overtaken by lust, and cannot give to their women anymore, only take. Then the woman turns off sex, and the guy gets even more frustrated. Not to lay all the blame at our door though. Trying to deal with the awesome power of the sexual force is a cross to bear for sure, isn`t it?
February 20th, 2026 17:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that women are (mostly) so angry at men because many guys have been overtaken by lust, and cannot give to their women anymore, only take. Then the woman turns off sex, and the guy gets even more frustrated. Not to lay all the blame at our door though. Trying to deal with the awesome power of the sexual force is a cross to bear for sure, isn`t it?
February 20th, 2026 17:28
Women Hating Men
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response type senryu that is an answer in a question
February 20th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response type senryu that is an answer in a question
February 20th, 2026 12:27
Women Hating Men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this captures the feeling of being reduced to a category instead of seen as a person. It’s uncomfortable and honest at the same time. The brevity makes it feel like something blurted in the middle of real emotion. Well done. Your reign of being the king of concise continues! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this captures the feeling of being reduced to a category instead of seen as a person. It’s uncomfortable and honest at the same time. The brevity makes it feel like something blurted in the middle of real emotion. Well done. Your reign of being the king of concise continues! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:24
waking up groggy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yessss! Bro! Title? Will totally support!
February 20th, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yessss! Bro! Title? Will totally support!
February 20th, 2026 11:01
waking up groggy
Friendship said:
I hear you. I kept my best friend up late on the phone last night.🤣😂,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Congratulations on your Book.👍🌹
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Friendship said:
I hear you. I kept my best friend up late on the phone last night.🤣😂,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Congratulations on your Book.👍🌹
February 19th, 2026 11:14
waking up groggy
sorenbarrett said:
How late is too late? A thought provoking write Demar
February 19th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
How late is too late? A thought provoking write Demar
February 19th, 2026 09:04
waking up with a boner
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Healthy and/or annoying...which one, depends on who you wake up next to, I suppose! 🤣 This made me laugh, my friend! Basic biology is humorous, no? Well done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Healthy and/or annoying...which one, depends on who you wake up next to, I suppose! 🤣 This made me laugh, my friend! Basic biology is humorous, no? Well done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:27
waking up with a boner
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and might add as an old man a custom well used to but to little avail.
February 18th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and might add as an old man a custom well used to but to little avail.
February 18th, 2026 07:40
i can’t be You
sorenbarrett said:
To be authentically oneself is not always socially appropriate so one must live a traitor if one wishes to live. A strong write
February 17th, 2026 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
To be authentically oneself is not always socially appropriate so one must live a traitor if one wishes to live. A strong write
February 17th, 2026 13:41
i can’t be You
Tonya Titus said:
I love this. It speaks to being authentically me, yet hoping someone still gets me. A reciprocation.
February 17th, 2026 13:33
Tonya Titus said:
I love this. It speaks to being authentically me, yet hoping someone still gets me. A reciprocation.
February 17th, 2026 13:33
You can’t be i
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Amen. Amen. Love this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Amen. Amen. Love this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:18
in pain and still make love
sorenbarrett said:
The older we get the more we loose and it seems that I have none of my childhood friends left. A good write Demar
February 16th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
The older we get the more we loose and it seems that I have none of my childhood friends left. A good write Demar
February 16th, 2026 03:35
to make love in pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly wonderful, my friend. Happy Valentine\'s Day. May we all find the wealth you speak of.
February 14th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly wonderful, my friend. Happy Valentine\'s Day. May we all find the wealth you speak of.
February 14th, 2026 10:26
to make love in pain
Friendship said:
Nicely word. Happy Anniversary to you and your wife.❤️
February 14th, 2026 07:07
Friendship said:
Nicely word. Happy Anniversary to you and your wife.❤️
February 14th, 2026 07:07
Heaven Hates Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and declaration resolves in a personal, unshakeable truth. That exclamation in the middle cracks the poem open before landing in certainty. Sharp, brave, and resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and declaration resolves in a personal, unshakeable truth. That exclamation in the middle cracks the poem open before landing in certainty. Sharp, brave, and resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:35
Heaven Hates Me
sorenbarrett said:
I question who would want to worship a god of hate. Good write Demar
February 13th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
I question who would want to worship a god of hate. Good write Demar
February 13th, 2026 04:21
Heaven Hates Me
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Earth I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Earth I love you
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
Standards Double
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Standards Double
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
Double Standards
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Double Standards
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
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