Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Do you enjoy sex?
Josef Aigner said:
The bare bones of a thought, left shivering without the skin of art.
March 19th, 2026 11:38
Josef Aigner said:
The bare bones of a thought, left shivering without the skin of art.
March 19th, 2026 11:38
Do you enjoy sex?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ll answer your question the way life tends to. What’s not to love? What’s really to love? Why bother? 🤣 Funny how the answers evolve.🤣
March 19th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ll answer your question the way life tends to. What’s not to love? What’s really to love? Why bother? 🤣 Funny how the answers evolve.🤣
March 19th, 2026 10:37
Do you enjoy sex?
Allie561 said:
I’d say for the most part yes, but I don’t always prefer it. I like hugs more personally.
March 19th, 2026 09:29
Allie561 said:
I’d say for the most part yes, but I don’t always prefer it. I like hugs more personally.
March 19th, 2026 09:29
Do you enjoy sex?
sorenbarrett said:
Those that don\'t enjoy are doomed to an evolutionary cul-de-sac. Well done
March 19th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Those that don\'t enjoy are doomed to an evolutionary cul-de-sac. Well done
March 19th, 2026 08:00
-$1.00 in my bank account
Allie561 said:
We often take things for granted until we don’t have it anymore. I certainly took my good knees for granted, wish I still had them lol. I hope you find peace in other things and abundance in joy rather than objects.
March 18th, 2026 13:40
Allie561 said:
We often take things for granted until we don’t have it anymore. I certainly took my good knees for granted, wish I still had them lol. I hope you find peace in other things and abundance in joy rather than objects.
March 18th, 2026 13:40
What is your religious beliefs?
Allie561 said:
I think of myself as a Christian but I don’t associate with a single church. I prefer to go on my own journey and explore my beliefs. Also, good to see you’re back.
March 18th, 2026 13:38
Allie561 said:
I think of myself as a Christian but I don’t associate with a single church. I prefer to go on my own journey and explore my beliefs. Also, good to see you’re back.
March 18th, 2026 13:38
Sometimes I hate myself
Allie561 said:
I believe you can heal yourself Demar. Don’t be too hard on yourself because we can always find faults, you’re only human.
March 18th, 2026 13:37
Allie561 said:
I believe you can heal yourself Demar. Don’t be too hard on yourself because we can always find faults, you’re only human.
March 18th, 2026 13:37
-$1.00 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a quiet strength…laying out the nothing so plainly, then landing on “I understand worth..” like a truth no one can take. It’s restrained, but it hits deep. Beautiful piece, my friend. The king of concise comes up with a KO. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a quiet strength…laying out the nothing so plainly, then landing on “I understand worth..” like a truth no one can take. It’s restrained, but it hits deep. Beautiful piece, my friend. The king of concise comes up with a KO. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:30
-$1.00 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can -$1.00 even be in a bank account?! Anyways, a thirsty kid knows the value of a cool drink of water.
March 18th, 2026 07:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can -$1.00 even be in a bank account?! Anyways, a thirsty kid knows the value of a cool drink of water.
March 18th, 2026 07:46
-$1.00 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
It is in times of fault that understand most what worth and value are. Nicely written
March 18th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
It is in times of fault that understand most what worth and value are. Nicely written
March 18th, 2026 04:22
What is your religious beliefs?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I appreciate you asking this directly… it invites something real. I’m a Christian… I believe in one God as expressed through the Trinity, and at the same time I believe God is bigger than human theology and not limited to my belief system. That’s the space I live in. Thank you for opening that door. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I appreciate you asking this directly… it invites something real. I’m a Christian… I believe in one God as expressed through the Trinity, and at the same time I believe God is bigger than human theology and not limited to my belief system. That’s the space I live in. Thank you for opening that door. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:33
What is your religious beliefs?
sorenbarrett said:
There is always only depending on from where one is looking a great write of belief
March 17th, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is always only depending on from where one is looking a great write of belief
March 17th, 2026 07:00
What is your religious beliefs?
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe in something
I know nothing
About!
March 17th, 2026 06:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe in something
I know nothing
About!
March 17th, 2026 06:37
“For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”
Josef Aigner said:
You have achieved something remarkable. You have proven that with three lines, a moral cliché, and two ellipses, one can produce a literary object that resembles depth… much like a well painted on a wall resembles an abyss.
March 16th, 2026 12:14
Josef Aigner said:
You have achieved something remarkable. You have proven that with three lines, a moral cliché, and two ellipses, one can produce a literary object that resembles depth… much like a well painted on a wall resembles an abyss.
March 16th, 2026 12:14
Sometimes I hate myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That ending! Yes, bro! It reminds me of the Rastafarian concept of I and I. Very holy, very apt message in its simplicity. And yes, I have often hated myself...and the only way out of that is through self-forgiveness and a measure of self-grace. Easier things to say than do. Powerful, powerful, powerful! Thank you for this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That ending! Yes, bro! It reminds me of the Rastafarian concept of I and I. Very holy, very apt message in its simplicity. And yes, I have often hated myself...and the only way out of that is through self-forgiveness and a measure of self-grace. Easier things to say than do. Powerful, powerful, powerful! Thank you for this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:43
“For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu it speaks volumes in so few words and leaves the reader to conclude the message. As for me it would be (and I no better than the rest)
March 16th, 2026 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu it speaks volumes in so few words and leaves the reader to conclude the message. As for me it would be (and I no better than the rest)
March 16th, 2026 08:27
Sometimes I hate myself
sorenbarrett said:
Self forgiveness is so important as is the learning that goes with it. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 02:53
sorenbarrett said:
Self forgiveness is so important as is the learning that goes with it. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 02:53
am I poisoned?
NafisaSB said:
high time to stop this sort of feeling before it overtakes you completely - but yes, people\'s insincerity gets me frustrated and annoyed too..good haiku..
March 11th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
high time to stop this sort of feeling before it overtakes you completely - but yes, people\'s insincerity gets me frustrated and annoyed too..good haiku..
March 11th, 2026 00:54
What is your favorite color?
RSM0812 said:
Simple, short bu great to read. Thank you for posting such a wonder ✍️. :)
March 9th, 2026 21:49
RSM0812 said:
Simple, short bu great to read. Thank you for posting such a wonder ✍️. :)
March 9th, 2026 21:49
I love you....YOU! yes you!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, if more human beings had your inquisitive sensitivity, would their be wars in this world? Surely a lot less, if any ever. Powerful concise poem that actually wowed me. And your\'s continually do that. Well done, my friend. For what it is worth (a lot, I think) I love you too! I mean that. ❤️ 🌈🖤🙏🪨
March 8th, 2026 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, if more human beings had your inquisitive sensitivity, would their be wars in this world? Surely a lot less, if any ever. Powerful concise poem that actually wowed me. And your\'s continually do that. Well done, my friend. For what it is worth (a lot, I think) I love you too! I mean that. ❤️ 🌈🖤🙏🪨
March 8th, 2026 07:18
I love you....YOU! yes you!
Allie561 said:
We find many connections through love, whether it’s a shared interest or someone you admire. I keep hoping and trying to trust in love, great poem Demar.
March 7th, 2026 19:18
Allie561 said:
We find many connections through love, whether it’s a shared interest or someone you admire. I keep hoping and trying to trust in love, great poem Demar.
March 7th, 2026 19:18
I love you....YOU! yes you!
sorenbarrett said:
It is good to trust in something
March 7th, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is good to trust in something
March 7th, 2026 18:57
What\'s your favorite tea?
Mutley Ravishes said:
You know about goji berries? I`m impressed, Demar! I like black tea with milk and black rock sugar (unrefined) or honey, green tea with brown rice (genmai cha), bancha (twig tea), and black soybean tea.
March 6th, 2026 18:16
Mutley Ravishes said:
You know about goji berries? I`m impressed, Demar! I like black tea with milk and black rock sugar (unrefined) or honey, green tea with brown rice (genmai cha), bancha (twig tea), and black soybean tea.
March 6th, 2026 18:16
What\'s your favorite tea?
Allie561 said:
I love earl grey and I’ll take matcha too.
March 6th, 2026 18:04
Allie561 said:
I love earl grey and I’ll take matcha too.
March 6th, 2026 18:04
What\'s your favorite tea?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Peppermint. For real. And Chai. I mean. I LOVE CHAI! LOL! Plain, hot, no milk. Unsweetened.
March 6th, 2026 13:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Peppermint. For real. And Chai. I mean. I LOVE CHAI! LOL! Plain, hot, no milk. Unsweetened.
March 6th, 2026 13:32
am I poisoned?
Syd said:
Very relatable. Especially the drinking. I\'ve had trouble in the past but thankfully all that\'s behind me now.
- Syd
March 6th, 2026 01:29
Syd said:
Very relatable. Especially the drinking. I\'ve had trouble in the past but thankfully all that\'s behind me now.
- Syd
March 6th, 2026 01:29
What\'s your favorite animal?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Son Goku, The Monkey King! I like snow leopards too.
March 5th, 2026 19:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
Son Goku, The Monkey King! I like snow leopards too.
March 5th, 2026 19:53
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