Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
They say no kings, but what about queens?
James Michael said:
It is about nature after all!
March 28th, 2026 20:01
James Michael said:
It is about nature after all!
March 28th, 2026 20:01
They say no kings, but what about queens?
Allie561 said:
Haha I see what you’re saying Demar!
March 28th, 2026 15:35
Allie561 said:
Haha I see what you’re saying Demar!
March 28th, 2026 15:35
They say no kings, but what about queens?
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not sure what to say.
March 28th, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m not sure what to say.
March 28th, 2026 13:46
Thank you to the garbage collectors!
Allie561 said:
I was thinking about this lately too. I was grateful for the people willing to do the hard and gross jobs of the world.
March 26th, 2026 22:29
Allie561 said:
I was thinking about this lately too. I was grateful for the people willing to do the hard and gross jobs of the world.
March 26th, 2026 22:29
Do you understand what poverty is like?
Allie561 said:
I won’t let poverty steal my joy, even though it’s be nice to afford some luxury items every now and then lol
March 26th, 2026 22:25
Allie561 said:
I won’t let poverty steal my joy, even though it’s be nice to afford some luxury items every now and then lol
March 26th, 2026 22:25
Thank you to the garbage collectors!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Hard work with minimal appreciation. Truly, you are a kind soul, my friend. I join you in the salute!
March 26th, 2026 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Hard work with minimal appreciation. Truly, you are a kind soul, my friend. I join you in the salute!
March 26th, 2026 11:31
Thank you to the garbage collectors!
sorenbarrett said:
A promising thought and well expressed
March 26th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
A promising thought and well expressed
March 26th, 2026 07:15
Do you understand what poverty is like?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I can totally relate to this fine poem! Kudos!
March 26th, 2026 02:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I can totally relate to this fine poem! Kudos!
March 26th, 2026 02:35
Do you love your country?
DeadRose said:
I\'m one of those in between. That is to say, I like both the country I live in, the country my family comes from, the country I appreciate a culture from...
I love cherry picking the versions of my countries. But that\'s not the right way to go about looking at them
I appreciate the collective, the art, the humanity of a country and its landscape.
All countries, like humans, fall into some sort of downfall. But, unlike humans, since a country is a collective I suppose it stays more in a state of constant \'downspiralling\' from an individual perspective.
There is bad and good indeed.
March 25th, 2026 18:24
DeadRose said:
I\'m one of those in between. That is to say, I like both the country I live in, the country my family comes from, the country I appreciate a culture from...
I love cherry picking the versions of my countries. But that\'s not the right way to go about looking at them
I appreciate the collective, the art, the humanity of a country and its landscape.
All countries, like humans, fall into some sort of downfall. But, unlike humans, since a country is a collective I suppose it stays more in a state of constant \'downspiralling\' from an individual perspective.
There is bad and good indeed.
March 25th, 2026 18:24
Do you understand what poverty is like?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, more than some…less than many. I do know what it means to live paycheck to paycheck…to not have enough to make ends meet. That reality sticks with you. Well done on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, more than some…less than many. I do know what it means to live paycheck to paycheck…to not have enough to make ends meet. That reality sticks with you. Well done on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 11:04
Do you understand what poverty is like?
sorenbarrett said:
Hope it comes soon Demar.
March 25th, 2026 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Hope it comes soon Demar.
March 25th, 2026 10:47
Do you love your country?
ForeverJesus7 said:
I very much so love my country, The U.S.A., and just like a son, daughter, niece, or nephew; you almost always support them. When they mess up, you are disappointed and when they do good, you are proud. Right now, I could not be any more proud of my country. You are right. We have our ups and downs. No country is perfect, but I think that we are at a highpoint.
Keep writing.
Stay righteous.
Persistence is key
March 24th, 2026 09:39
ForeverJesus7 said:
I very much so love my country, The U.S.A., and just like a son, daughter, niece, or nephew; you almost always support them. When they mess up, you are disappointed and when they do good, you are proud. Right now, I could not be any more proud of my country. You are right. We have our ups and downs. No country is perfect, but I think that we are at a highpoint.
Keep writing.
Stay righteous.
Persistence is key
March 24th, 2026 09:39
Do you love your country?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have long known there is a difference between love and like. Do I love my country? Most definitely. Am I liking it right now? Hell no. There it is. Wonderful question. my friend. And yes, this is all we know. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have long known there is a difference between love and like. Do I love my country? Most definitely. Am I liking it right now? Hell no. There it is. Wonderful question. my friend. And yes, this is all we know. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:48
Do you love your country?
Allie561 said:
Do I love it because it’s my home or simply because of the people in it?
March 24th, 2026 08:35
Allie561 said:
Do I love it because it’s my home or simply because of the people in it?
March 24th, 2026 08:35
Do you love your country?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all love our homeland despite its flaws and weaknesses. Well said
March 24th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all love our homeland despite its flaws and weaknesses. Well said
March 24th, 2026 06:03
Where is the city of God!?
Allie561 said:
Certainly not here, too much hate I think. Good poem Demar.
March 23rd, 2026 18:13
Allie561 said:
Certainly not here, too much hate I think. Good poem Demar.
March 23rd, 2026 18:13
Where is the city of God!?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not yet...it can\'t be. That is for sure. When it arrives...we won\'t be able to miss it either. All I can say to this is, AMEN. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not yet...it can\'t be. That is for sure. When it arrives...we won\'t be able to miss it either. All I can say to this is, AMEN. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:33
Are you also poisoned?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a sharp contrast…that weight of being “a slave” and then the shift into “but my love… I’m free.” That final line doesn’t erase the struggle, it rises above it. It’s simple, direct, and it lands. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a sharp contrast…that weight of being “a slave” and then the shift into “but my love… I’m free.” That final line doesn’t erase the struggle, it rises above it. It’s simple, direct, and it lands. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:17
Are you also poisoned?
Allie561 said:
I know what’s it like to feel trapped whilst in love, it’s not a pleasant feeling. I’m assuming whatever had you feeling caged is no longer, I’m glad you could get away from it. Sometimes I wish I still had someone but it’s nice to not have to worry about it, wonderful haiku Demar.
March 22nd, 2026 21:31
Allie561 said:
I know what’s it like to feel trapped whilst in love, it’s not a pleasant feeling. I’m assuming whatever had you feeling caged is no longer, I’m glad you could get away from it. Sometimes I wish I still had someone but it’s nice to not have to worry about it, wonderful haiku Demar.
March 22nd, 2026 21:31
Are you also poisoned?
sorenbarrett said:
Love they say can set you free or enslave you choose
March 22nd, 2026 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love they say can set you free or enslave you choose
March 22nd, 2026 20:53
What is your hypocrisy?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands with a sharp honesty…“they love poetry / oh! but they hate the poets” says it all. It’s that contradiction we’re quick to point out in others, but slower to own in ourselves. I feel that sting too…which is probably the point. The King of Concise clocks another one in. Rock on, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands with a sharp honesty…“they love poetry / oh! but they hate the poets” says it all. It’s that contradiction we’re quick to point out in others, but slower to own in ourselves. I feel that sting too…which is probably the point. The King of Concise clocks another one in. Rock on, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
What is your hypocrisy?
sorenbarrett said:
The man is not he poem even murderers have produced great works. Well written and a good one for poetry day
March 21st, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
The man is not he poem even murderers have produced great works. Well written and a good one for poetry day
March 21st, 2026 11:33
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hits close…those are the kinds of questions that don’t really let you off the hook. Pain has a way of stripping things down whether we want it to or not. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hits close…those are the kinds of questions that don’t really let you off the hook. Pain has a way of stripping things down whether we want it to or not. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:00
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Allie561 said:
This is an interesting thought Demar. Perhaps it’s a a fear or a confession. I’ll have to think on this.
March 20th, 2026 08:36
Allie561 said:
This is an interesting thought Demar. Perhaps it’s a a fear or a confession. I’ll have to think on this.
March 20th, 2026 08:36
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
sorenbarrett said:
I assume that what we are free to face is our pain and despair. Many do not wish to. A most interesting write
March 20th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
I assume that what we are free to face is our pain and despair. Many do not wish to. A most interesting write
March 20th, 2026 03:44
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