Comments received on poems by MaxSmith



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tallisman said:

Well written, compelling!

October 17th, 2024 13:23

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Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful painting of this scene.

October 13th, 2024 22:56

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Thad Wilk said:

Sensational,
the imagery divine!! 🏆
Just resonates
with greatness!
Love it ; 😍
poetic perfection,
each and every line! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad


October 12th, 2024 11:06

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Thad Wilk said:

Love it! 🤩
Powerful penning,
strong feelings and
emotions expressed
poetess!
Another beauty that
showcases your
dazzling poetic talent!! 🏆
Best wishes 🍀 🌹🤗 Thad

October 11th, 2024 21:32

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Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful sensuous dream Max

Andy

October 11th, 2024 01:53

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Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and erotic. I love it.

October 10th, 2024 17:39

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Neville said:


This is so good, the first time I came by here I was blown clean away ..
Exquisitely well poemed erotica is top of my list of poetic genres and this one is exceptionally tasteful .. bravo Max .. Neville 💛

October 10th, 2024 13:07

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Cheeky Missy said:

I knew this had to be a winner among the boys as, despite being tempted too many hours ago to attempt similarly, I figured someone more experienced might know best how to render the delectable invitation to such heights of pleasure. Superbly rendered with intoxicating poignancy and deliciously graphic imagery. You take the cake! Thank you for sharing.

October 10th, 2024 12:47

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Lorenz said:

A dream which tastes like a subtle liquor ...

October 10th, 2024 12:14

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sorenbarrett said:

Seductive, errotic, sensuous you\'re going to arrouse the crowd. Nicely written.

October 10th, 2024 11:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Those stars will always shine down on us Max.

Andy

October 10th, 2024 01:36

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Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully crafted 🌹

October 10th, 2024 00:18

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Accidental Poet said:

And the light shall shine on thee. 😉👍

October 9th, 2024 20:24

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Accidental Poet said:

You haven\'t lost your poetic touch. Great to have you back. 👍

October 9th, 2024 20:06

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sorenbarrett said:

Love the first line \"The absence of light blinding\" The essence of this paradox is enlightening. The old saying that it always gets darkest just before the dawn makes sense. Also the idea that one has to stand at the bottom of a well to see the stars in day. Your poem introduces the psychological element of darkness and the last line of \"Now see the pretty little stars shining\" such a great finish. Fantastic

October 9th, 2024 15:49

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peet said:

When you wake up each day, you have almost reached the end of the dark tunnel. Wishing a bright a joyful future for you. Remorse well captured in a few short poetic lines. Beautiful indeed.

October 9th, 2024 12:28

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Cheeky Missy said:

Yes, methinks I\'ve been told the stars and moon are never not shining, however it takes the blackness of night to show them. Fascinatingly rendered in such a font with a compelling, subtly strengthening poignancy which half breaks the heart. Thank you for sharing.

October 9th, 2024 12:10

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Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. You nailed the metaphor. Glad you are back.

October 9th, 2024 12:04

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Neville said:


You have excelled here Max, I take my hat off to you and your pen .. Excellent ink more than perfectly spilt and not a single drop wasted my friend .. Your biggest fan Me

October 9th, 2024 11:20

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Blessing Awoniyi said:

Grat write, MaxSmith.

October 9th, 2024 09:46

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orchidee said:

Good write M.

October 9th, 2024 02:15

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Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Max, welcome back and may your inspiration grow each moment.

Andy

October 9th, 2024 00:20

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Dan Williams said:

Nice to hear of gentle kind nights, seem in short supply these days. Nice write.

October 9th, 2024 00:04

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Thad Wilk said:

A Sensual Sational,
romantic and magical write!! 👏
Eye pleasing imagery
and my pleasure to recite!! 🏆
Thank you poetess for
sharing, to read a delight! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🌹 Thad

October 8th, 2024 19:29

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BlessedbyGod said:

Still beautiful as ever my dear Maxine,

October 8th, 2024 18:19

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peto said:

Welcome back Maxine
Passionate as ever
Hopefully inspiration is in the post
Looking forward to reading more

October 8th, 2024 15:41

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sorenbarrett said:

A romantic, sensuous poem written with great imagery and an enticing entry full of excitement and allure. Nicely done

October 8th, 2024 15:32

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Neville said:


What a great reintroduction to your ink Max my word, how much you have been missed Miss .. Wishing you nothing but the best of All Good Things, Neville

October 8th, 2024 14:36