Comments received on poems by Ezekiel Olayemi
Hiss de Secret
sorenbarrett said:
A parable in poetic form where man not only can not keep a secret but enlarges upon it and distorts it. If you want a secret kept it must be told to no one. A lovely write
October 4th, 2025 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
A parable in poetic form where man not only can not keep a secret but enlarges upon it and distorts it. If you want a secret kept it must be told to no one. A lovely write
October 4th, 2025 06:12
Until the World Burns
Poetic Licence said:
A strong defiant message to the troubled world, well written
October 4th, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A strong defiant message to the troubled world, well written
October 4th, 2025 02:14
Until the World Burns
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic in its metaphors it speaks in whispers to a screaming world. Nicely written and a fave
October 3rd, 2025 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic in its metaphors it speaks in whispers to a screaming world. Nicely written and a fave
October 3rd, 2025 18:48
Lost Beyond the oceans
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The speaker conveys the ineffable nature of deep emotional pain, Sad and vividly expressed. Interesting poem.
September 17th, 2025 17:02
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The speaker conveys the ineffable nature of deep emotional pain, Sad and vividly expressed. Interesting poem.
September 17th, 2025 17:02
Lost Beyond the oceans
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly liked the last two lines of this poem. It is a sad poem that ends without resolution.
September 17th, 2025 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly liked the last two lines of this poem. It is a sad poem that ends without resolution.
September 17th, 2025 12:46
Plant and weed
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view on the role of environment in shaping what we are. A poem with a message nicely written
September 15th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view on the role of environment in shaping what we are. A poem with a message nicely written
September 15th, 2025 08:43
On the Other Side of Breath
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Nice write. Liked it very much 👍
September 5th, 2025 10:17
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Nice write. Liked it very much 👍
September 5th, 2025 10:17
Memory Is a Weapon
NafisaSB said:
yes - it\'s a potent tool indeed - well described
August 20th, 2025 01:24
NafisaSB said:
yes - it\'s a potent tool indeed - well described
August 20th, 2025 01:24
Memory Is a Weapon
RSM0812 said:
It reveals the tragedy in a world on fire. Nice write.
August 17th, 2025 00:02
RSM0812 said:
It reveals the tragedy in a world on fire. Nice write.
August 17th, 2025 00:02
Crazy Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
For many it is easier to use the barrier of pen and paper to voice thoughts than to speak them directly. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
For many it is easier to use the barrier of pen and paper to voice thoughts than to speak them directly. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 15:54
Crazy Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of it is easier to write one feelings and thoughts than it is to talk about them, relatable to many. Writing relaxes and frees the mind, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 15:20
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of it is easier to write one feelings and thoughts than it is to talk about them, relatable to many. Writing relaxes and frees the mind, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 15:20
On the Other Side of Breath
Poetic Licence said:
I think possibly we are on that side already, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 23:09
Poetic Licence said:
I think possibly we are on that side already, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 23:09
On the Other Side of Breath
sorenbarrett said:
I have always wondered it this is the other side and that from hear on it only gets worse. lol a fun read that most people wonder about.
August 12th, 2025 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have always wondered it this is the other side and that from hear on it only gets worse. lol a fun read that most people wonder about.
August 12th, 2025 18:20
Memory Is a Weapon
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful write and observation, of something you wouldn\'t think off as a weapon, but it is, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 00:51
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful write and observation, of something you wouldn\'t think off as a weapon, but it is, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 00:51
Memory Is a Weapon
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it does and is. A veery nice write about something so important.
August 11th, 2025 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it does and is. A veery nice write about something so important.
August 11th, 2025 18:06
The Change
Poetic Licence said:
I like this more positive and upbeat version, nicely written, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:25
Poetic Licence said:
I like this more positive and upbeat version, nicely written, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:25
The Change
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response or rather addition to another poet. A lovely addition
August 10th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response or rather addition to another poet. A lovely addition
August 10th, 2025 05:21
THE WEIGHT OF INK
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written write with a positive message, some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 16:37
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written write with a positive message, some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 16:37
THE WEIGHT OF INK
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a wonderful message and in good rhyme as well. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with a wonderful message and in good rhyme as well. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 16:03
When the Voices Multiply
MendedFences27 said:
Always choose the path that leads where you want to go. There are many false prophets in this world, also people who speak untruths, it is best to remain true to one\'s self. Your poem is well written, and it also shares much wisdom It was an enjoyable read. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 15:08
MendedFences27 said:
Always choose the path that leads where you want to go. There are many false prophets in this world, also people who speak untruths, it is best to remain true to one\'s self. Your poem is well written, and it also shares much wisdom It was an enjoyable read. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 15:08
When the Voices Multiply
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and positive write of being in control of yourself, nicely expressed and written
July 10th, 2025 00:51
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and positive write of being in control of yourself, nicely expressed and written
July 10th, 2025 00:51
When the Voices Multiply
sorenbarrett said:
A most motivational poem of taking control of oneself. Very nicely written in good rhyme
July 9th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most motivational poem of taking control of oneself. Very nicely written in good rhyme
July 9th, 2025 20:07
We Are All Travelers
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, giving the reader much to think about, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 12:15
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, giving the reader much to think about, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 12:15
We Are All Travelers
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful story that speaks to me in metaphor and takes its place in myth as does all holy books Bible, Koran, Vedas, Bhagavasd-gita, Tao. Lovely
July 7th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful story that speaks to me in metaphor and takes its place in myth as does all holy books Bible, Koran, Vedas, Bhagavasd-gita, Tao. Lovely
July 7th, 2025 11:09
Just Memories
Poetic Licence said:
As we get older change is worrying and we fear not being remembered in passing, and worry what we will be remembered for, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 19:28
Poetic Licence said:
As we get older change is worrying and we fear not being remembered in passing, and worry what we will be remembered for, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 19:28
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