Comments received on poems by Ezekiel Olayemi



Memory Is a Weapon
NafisaSB said:

yes - it\'s a potent tool indeed - well described

August 20th, 2025 01:24

Memory Is a Weapon
RSM0812 said:

It reveals the tragedy in a world on fire. Nice write.

August 17th, 2025 00:02

Crazy Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

For many it is easier to use the barrier of pen and paper to voice thoughts than to speak them directly. Nicely done

August 15th, 2025 15:54

Crazy Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of it is easier to write one feelings and thoughts than it is to talk about them, relatable to many. Writing relaxes and frees the mind, enjoyed the read

August 15th, 2025 15:20

On the Other Side of Breath
Poetic Licence said:

I think possibly we are on that side already, enjoyed the read

August 12th, 2025 23:09

On the Other Side of Breath
sorenbarrett said:

I have always wondered it this is the other side and that from hear on it only gets worse. lol a fun read that most people wonder about.

August 12th, 2025 18:20

Memory Is a Weapon
Priya Tomar said:

Brilliant write .
A fave !

August 12th, 2025 05:17

Memory Is a Weapon
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a wonderful write and observation, of something you wouldn\'t think off as a weapon, but it is, enjoyed the read

August 12th, 2025 00:51

Memory Is a Weapon
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed it does and is. A veery nice write about something so important.

August 11th, 2025 18:06

The Change
Poetic Licence said:

I like this more positive and upbeat version, nicely written, enjoyed the read

August 10th, 2025 07:25

The Change
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting response or rather addition to another poet. A lovely addition

August 10th, 2025 05:21

THE WEIGHT OF INK
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written write with a positive message, some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read

July 26th, 2025 16:37

THE WEIGHT OF INK
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem with a wonderful message and in good rhyme as well. Nicely done

July 26th, 2025 16:03

When the Voices Multiply
MendedFences27 said:

Always choose the path that leads where you want to go. There are many false prophets in this world, also people who speak untruths, it is best to remain true to one\'s self. Your poem is well written, and it also shares much wisdom It was an enjoyable read. - Phil A.

July 10th, 2025 15:08

When the Voices Multiply
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 10th, 2025 09:18

When the Voices Multiply
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely and positive write of being in control of yourself, nicely expressed and written

July 10th, 2025 00:51

When the Voices Multiply
sorenbarrett said:

A most motivational poem of taking control of oneself. Very nicely written in good rhyme

July 9th, 2025 20:07

We Are All Travelers
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write, giving the reader much to think about, enjoyed the read

July 7th, 2025 12:15

We Are All Travelers
Lorenz said:

I prefer to let them sleep and travel alone !

July 7th, 2025 12:05

We Are All Travelers
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful story that speaks to me in metaphor and takes its place in myth as does all holy books Bible, Koran, Vedas, Bhagavasd-gita, Tao. Lovely

July 7th, 2025 11:09

We Are All Travelers
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 7th, 2025 09:44

Just Memories
Poetic Licence said:

As we get older change is worrying and we fear not being remembered in passing, and worry what we will be remembered for, enjoyed the read

July 3rd, 2025 19:28

Just Memories
sorenbarrett said:

Change is intimidating especially as we age. A lovely writ about such reticence. Nicely done

July 3rd, 2025 13:26

The World We Live In
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely written write of the modern world we live in particularly our youth and the pressures and battles for control of our minds on a daily basis, enjoyed the read

June 12th, 2025 21:12

The World We Live In
Doggerel Dave said:

As good a picture of modern society, its pressures and controls as I\'ve seen in a very long while. A disciplined rhymer as well.

June 12th, 2025 16:58

The World We Live In
sorenbarrett said:

We live in a world of mind control with advertising, news, politics and even friends and relatives telling us what we should think. A most lovely write

June 12th, 2025 16:05

Lost Dreams
teardrop said:

Love love love your metaphors! Awesome write.

April 24th, 2025 03:57

When Faith fades
sorenbarrett said:

A story as old as time lust takes down even the strongest kings. Well worded this poem paints the picture well.

April 5th, 2025 05:33

Forever Entwined
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely poem and commitment to be together always, lovely read

April 4th, 2025 02:16

Forever Entwined
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of unity and timeless togetherness. Nicely written

April 3rd, 2025 18:35

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