Comments received on poems by Simurgh
Smiling Doll
Simurgh said:
I am happy to learn that Tristan, you are very much aware of the protests around the world. This is important to voice against these atrocities in silence through our poems.
Here against this brutal case of atrocity to Abhaya, the \"national doctors front\" of India protested against this significantly and initiated a candle light silent rally to remember Abhaya.
They also did this to protest against the state government which was believed to be involved in this atrocity and many evidence points against them!💀☠️☠️🔥🔥🔥😵😠
It is believed that the state government was much behind this incident because they didn\'t did the post mortem properly and hurriedly on that very day of the incident cremated her even not permitting her parents to be present during their loved and our beloved doctor Abhaya\'s death ceremony i.e only her last rites. How brutal can one be, is found in this incident!!😵😭😠😠🔥🔥🔥☠️
Anyways thanks for reading and commenting this poem, remembering Abhaya heartily.
Thank you.
With regards,
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 11th, 2025 10:35
Simurgh said:
I am happy to learn that Tristan, you are very much aware of the protests around the world. This is important to voice against these atrocities in silence through our poems.
Here against this brutal case of atrocity to Abhaya, the \"national doctors front\" of India protested against this significantly and initiated a candle light silent rally to remember Abhaya.
They also did this to protest against the state government which was believed to be involved in this atrocity and many evidence points against them!💀☠️☠️🔥🔥🔥😵😠
It is believed that the state government was much behind this incident because they didn\'t did the post mortem properly and hurriedly on that very day of the incident cremated her even not permitting her parents to be present during their loved and our beloved doctor Abhaya\'s death ceremony i.e only her last rites. How brutal can one be, is found in this incident!!😵😭😠😠🔥🔥🔥☠️
Anyways thanks for reading and commenting this poem, remembering Abhaya heartily.
Thank you.
With regards,
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 11th, 2025 10:35
Smiling Doll
Simurgh said:
Thank you my friend, Tristan for reading my poem and commenting so nice a message to me!!
You are always appreciated to share your wonderful opinions and feedback to my poem.
I found that you write most authentic poems and I still admire your work!
You are most welcome to join this protest.
It is important to protect our rights and others as well by protesting in a way that reveal our true intent to the general public but hidden for the cruel government those that are behind or support such atrocities and heinous crimes.
This can only be done by us, the true poets who are truly dedicated to the cause of the society, true to the love, in preserving the natural beauties or present and also true to the cause of their poems.
February 11th, 2025 09:46
Simurgh said:
Thank you my friend, Tristan for reading my poem and commenting so nice a message to me!!
You are always appreciated to share your wonderful opinions and feedback to my poem.
I found that you write most authentic poems and I still admire your work!
You are most welcome to join this protest.
It is important to protect our rights and others as well by protesting in a way that reveal our true intent to the general public but hidden for the cruel government those that are behind or support such atrocities and heinous crimes.
This can only be done by us, the true poets who are truly dedicated to the cause of the society, true to the love, in preserving the natural beauties or present and also true to the cause of their poems.
February 11th, 2025 09:46
Smiling Doll
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for your protest, my friend. I have been to many different parts of India. While there, we stopped at a university and heard a lecture on the struggle for women\'s rights in your nation, and I am keenly aware of the struggle for it in mine as well (USA). Silence is violence against the voiceless. We have to do better and speak out when atrocities are done. Before today, I had not heard of Abhaya. Today, my friend, thanks to you, I join in remembering her and all female victims of violence...and victims of violence in general. Well done on this very important poem! 🌹👏
February 11th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for your protest, my friend. I have been to many different parts of India. While there, we stopped at a university and heard a lecture on the struggle for women\'s rights in your nation, and I am keenly aware of the struggle for it in mine as well (USA). Silence is violence against the voiceless. We have to do better and speak out when atrocities are done. Before today, I had not heard of Abhaya. Today, my friend, thanks to you, I join in remembering her and all female victims of violence...and victims of violence in general. Well done on this very important poem! 🌹👏
February 11th, 2025 08:05
Smiling Doll
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rose always bring smiles to your life Simburgh.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rose always bring smiles to your life Simburgh.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:26
Smiling Doll
sorenbarrett said:
From a country where Gandhi symbolized nonviolence such sad atrocities shock. Too bad that man has not progressed far enough to do away with violence. Laws will never prevent it only an evolution of a more peaceful society where violence of any form is foreign. A sad but beautiful write
February 8th, 2025 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
From a country where Gandhi symbolized nonviolence such sad atrocities shock. Too bad that man has not progressed far enough to do away with violence. Laws will never prevent it only an evolution of a more peaceful society where violence of any form is foreign. A sad but beautiful write
February 8th, 2025 20:08
Smiling Doll
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly to say Abhaya would look down from above and be pleased she has not been forgotten. As you correctly state this horrendous and brutal crimes are increasing and happening all over the world, i myself can find no way to understand why men wish to do these things. It does need Cultures, Society`s, Communities and politician from all countries to come together and address this issue. Enjoy the rest of your weekend and good luck with the exam
February 8th, 2025 17:19
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly to say Abhaya would look down from above and be pleased she has not been forgotten. As you correctly state this horrendous and brutal crimes are increasing and happening all over the world, i myself can find no way to understand why men wish to do these things. It does need Cultures, Society`s, Communities and politician from all countries to come together and address this issue. Enjoy the rest of your weekend and good luck with the exam
February 8th, 2025 17:19
Smiling Doll
Simurgh said:
Hoping to get beautiful comments from my friends in the coming days!✍️✍️🌹
February 8th, 2025 16:03
Simurgh said:
Hoping to get beautiful comments from my friends in the coming days!✍️✍️🌹
February 8th, 2025 16:03
Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God
arqios said:
An excellent starting point to grace MPS with. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
An excellent starting point to grace MPS with. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:09
Jimmy Come Home
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the everlasting lasting love and concern from the mother in this lovely piece of writing
February 7th, 2025 04:34
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the everlasting lasting love and concern from the mother in this lovely piece of writing
February 7th, 2025 04:34
Jimmy Come Home
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love is a special love no other can have. Being a son not a mother I can not know it but I have felt it. It is felt in this poem. Nicely done
February 7th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love is a special love no other can have. Being a son not a mother I can not know it but I have felt it. It is felt in this poem. Nicely done
February 7th, 2025 04:23
Jimmy Come Home
Cassie58 said:
This poem tells me that a mother has great concern for her son. She is pleading with to him to return home in this poem. The reader doesn’t know the reason, but as a mother and grandmother myself, that plea is made out of great love and for a reason. Also a promise has been made. When children leave the nest, what a hole it leaves in the heart of their mother.
Heartfelt words here dear poet.
February 7th, 2025 03:43
Cassie58 said:
This poem tells me that a mother has great concern for her son. She is pleading with to him to return home in this poem. The reader doesn’t know the reason, but as a mother and grandmother myself, that plea is made out of great love and for a reason. Also a promise has been made. When children leave the nest, what a hole it leaves in the heart of their mother.
Heartfelt words here dear poet.
February 7th, 2025 03:43
Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God
sorenbarrett said:
Classical in form and topic it shines like Apollo himself. A most lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
Classical in form and topic it shines like Apollo himself. A most lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:48
Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God
SJSangeetha said:
Simurgh....i loved this poem..yes..the visible God is sun...
February 6th, 2025 09:25
SJSangeetha said:
Simurgh....i loved this poem..yes..the visible God is sun...
February 6th, 2025 09:25
Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the source of life and energy on earth. These words show an adoration and acknowledgement of splendor. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the source of life and energy on earth. These words show an adoration and acknowledgement of splendor. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 04:22
Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful Ode to something i wish would return very quickly and get rid of this cold, really enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful Ode to something i wish would return very quickly and get rid of this cold, really enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 03:06
