Comments received on poems by Yazz



You’re not alone!
sorenbarrett said:

A most encouraging poem for those in emotional distress and that if no one else they can rely on themselves. Nicely written

December 8th, 2025 04:28

The lone heart beats for two
sorenbarrett said:

We all feel alone at times and yet we are never alone. A lovely write that speaks emotion in poetic form

December 5th, 2025 11:03

The Azure Lake
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely! a wonderful depiction of nature in its serenity and beauty. A healing source with great imagery and rhyme as well as good flow loved it a fave

December 4th, 2025 10:54

Nightingale
sorenbarrett said:

Coincidence my poem today is about a nightbird as well. Loved the metaphor here and well written as well

December 2nd, 2025 20:13

Leaving your legacy
sorenbarrett said:

Many think of leaving a legacy either in an empire of wealth of fame. Others work more quietly. A good read

August 25th, 2025 16:11

1-800
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and very raw this poem speaks of overwhelming inner pain that is perceived to only stop when life does. A powerful write of powerlessness. Well written

March 31st, 2025 04:39

1-800
Poetic Licence said:

A sad and touching write around the issue of self harming, which is being done a lot more than people care to acknowledge, nicely written and expressed write

March 31st, 2025 02:36

The universe is a Jellyfish.
Demar Desu said:

I agree with the title

March 30th, 2025 05:51

The universe is a Jellyfish.
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting simile that leaves a shiver. I have seen jelly fish but never seen a soul. A most vivid image is left. Very nice

March 30th, 2025 04:25

The universe is a Jellyfish.
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable read

March 30th, 2025 03:50

The universe is a Jellyfish.
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 30th, 2025 02:49