Comments received on poems by Yazz
My Struggles
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of poor self esteem where one must put on a face although one does not feel such. A longing for someone to trust and ally with but with little hope. It calls out of the darkness for help but hears nothing. It is sad and sounds lonely. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of poor self esteem where one must put on a face although one does not feel such. A longing for someone to trust and ally with but with little hope. It calls out of the darkness for help but hears nothing. It is sad and sounds lonely. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 11:28
Lady Earth
Doggerel Dave said:
Open and shut case of rape, no question.
Well poemed.
December 12th, 2025 17:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Open and shut case of rape, no question.
Well poemed.
December 12th, 2025 17:09
Lady Earth
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call to be better custodians of the environment and our place of living. Well done
December 12th, 2025 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call to be better custodians of the environment and our place of living. Well done
December 12th, 2025 14:17
You’re not alone!
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging poem for those in emotional distress and that if no one else they can rely on themselves. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging poem for those in emotional distress and that if no one else they can rely on themselves. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 04:28
The lone heart beats for two
sorenbarrett said:
We all feel alone at times and yet we are never alone. A lovely write that speaks emotion in poetic form
December 5th, 2025 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
We all feel alone at times and yet we are never alone. A lovely write that speaks emotion in poetic form
December 5th, 2025 11:03
The Azure Lake
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! a wonderful depiction of nature in its serenity and beauty. A healing source with great imagery and rhyme as well as good flow loved it a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! a wonderful depiction of nature in its serenity and beauty. A healing source with great imagery and rhyme as well as good flow loved it a fave
December 4th, 2025 10:54
Nightingale
sorenbarrett said:
Coincidence my poem today is about a nightbird as well. Loved the metaphor here and well written as well
December 2nd, 2025 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
Coincidence my poem today is about a nightbird as well. Loved the metaphor here and well written as well
December 2nd, 2025 20:13
Leaving your legacy
sorenbarrett said:
Many think of leaving a legacy either in an empire of wealth of fame. Others work more quietly. A good read
August 25th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Many think of leaving a legacy either in an empire of wealth of fame. Others work more quietly. A good read
August 25th, 2025 16:11
1-800
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and very raw this poem speaks of overwhelming inner pain that is perceived to only stop when life does. A powerful write of powerlessness. Well written
March 31st, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and very raw this poem speaks of overwhelming inner pain that is perceived to only stop when life does. A powerful write of powerlessness. Well written
March 31st, 2025 04:39
1-800
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write around the issue of self harming, which is being done a lot more than people care to acknowledge, nicely written and expressed write
March 31st, 2025 02:36
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write around the issue of self harming, which is being done a lot more than people care to acknowledge, nicely written and expressed write
March 31st, 2025 02:36
The universe is a Jellyfish.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting simile that leaves a shiver. I have seen jelly fish but never seen a soul. A most vivid image is left. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting simile that leaves a shiver. I have seen jelly fish but never seen a soul. A most vivid image is left. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 04:25
The universe is a Jellyfish.
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable read
March 30th, 2025 03:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable read
March 30th, 2025 03:50
