Comments received on poems by Frisk



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sorenbarrett said:

Dark and very raw this poem speaks of overwhelming inner pain that is perceived to only stop when life does. A powerful write of powerlessness. Well written

March 31st, 2025 04:39

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Poetic Licence said:

A sad and touching write around the issue of self harming, which is being done a lot more than people care to acknowledge, nicely written and expressed write

March 31st, 2025 02:36

The universe is a Jellyfish.
Demar Desu said:

I agree with the title

March 30th, 2025 05:51

The universe is a Jellyfish.
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting simile that leaves a shiver. I have seen jelly fish but never seen a soul. A most vivid image is left. Very nice

March 30th, 2025 04:25

The universe is a Jellyfish.
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable read

March 30th, 2025 03:50

The universe is a Jellyfish.
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

March 30th, 2025 02:49