Comments received on poems by Midnight Lasagna
But I did everything right.
Poetic Licence said:
Thats a lovely title and unique way of putting it but I guess thats what we do, try to talk to something that is not listening, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
Thats a lovely title and unique way of putting it but I guess thats what we do, try to talk to something that is not listening, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:36
But I did everything right.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so well put. Sitting down for tea with one\'s anger a great way of putting it. Civilized discussion with a savage. Reasoning with emotion that has no ears or eyes. Nicely done
April 15th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so well put. Sitting down for tea with one\'s anger a great way of putting it. Civilized discussion with a savage. Reasoning with emotion that has no ears or eyes. Nicely done
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Bruised Knees
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our weakness\' and some more than others, never the less I believe that we all do the best we can under the circumstances with the tools that we have to work with at that time. This belief allows me to hold no grudge against others or self. A well written poem with moving sentiment
April 14th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our weakness\' and some more than others, never the less I believe that we all do the best we can under the circumstances with the tools that we have to work with at that time. This belief allows me to hold no grudge against others or self. A well written poem with moving sentiment
April 14th, 2025 04:06
Bruised Knees
Poetic Licence said:
We will all have our limits, some lower than others, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
We will all have our limits, some lower than others, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:32
Succumb
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful poem in its meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:48
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful poem in its meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:48
Succumb
sorenbarrett said:
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and flow. It is a powerful poem in a quiet way. Beautiful a fave
April 10th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and flow. It is a powerful poem in a quiet way. Beautiful a fave
April 10th, 2025 07:25
Chambers
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done. Pride is a great subject to address and my favorite line is the last. Most wonderfully done.
April 5th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done. Pride is a great subject to address and my favorite line is the last. Most wonderfully done.
April 5th, 2025 13:40
Prophecy
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, very enjoyable
April 4th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, very enjoyable
April 4th, 2025 06:17
Prophecy
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
April 4th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
April 4th, 2025 04:24
Paralysis
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable if slightly haunting write, very enjoyed reading
April 3rd, 2025 04:07
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable if slightly haunting write, very enjoyed reading
April 3rd, 2025 04:07
Paralysis
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem set to the meter of a common child\'s prayer is highly recognizable and the conflict between the peaceful sentiment of that meter with the content of the poem is a clash provoking discord. Dissonance reigns a lovely write
April 3rd, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem set to the meter of a common child\'s prayer is highly recognizable and the conflict between the peaceful sentiment of that meter with the content of the poem is a clash provoking discord. Dissonance reigns a lovely write
April 3rd, 2025 03:27
