Comments received on poems by Midnight Lasagna
Love, the ugly sister
Paul Bell said:
Funnily enough, there\'s more insecurity in beautiful people than others it seems.
Now, confident people don\'t care how they look, they\'re to busy radiating to be bothered.
You\'ve highlighted your negative,s dump them, concentrate on the positives, like writing, which you do well.
Get out running, walking, something that makes you uncomfortable, but makes you laugh too.
March 2nd, 2026 06:30
Paul Bell said:
Funnily enough, there\'s more insecurity in beautiful people than others it seems.
Now, confident people don\'t care how they look, they\'re to busy radiating to be bothered.
You\'ve highlighted your negative,s dump them, concentrate on the positives, like writing, which you do well.
Get out running, walking, something that makes you uncomfortable, but makes you laugh too.
March 2nd, 2026 06:30
Love, the ugly sister
sorenbarrett said:
This letter to a sibling perceived as innocent is self demeaning and deprecatory. It is sad and I can feel the pain of poor self esteem. Well written
March 2nd, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
This letter to a sibling perceived as innocent is self demeaning and deprecatory. It is sad and I can feel the pain of poor self esteem. Well written
March 2nd, 2026 03:57
Love, the ugly sister
Allie561 said:
Oh this is so painful to read. I know you may not believe a stranger on the internet, but I believe everyone is beautiful no matter their race, shape, or size. This is such a bittersweet poem, but please don’t consider yourself the ugly sister. Comparison will take your joy, and your features are what make you, you. I understand that feeling, especially from family where they’re meant to be supportive but instead surround us with judgement. I wish you the very best and I hope you realize how beautiful you are.
March 1st, 2026 23:42
Allie561 said:
Oh this is so painful to read. I know you may not believe a stranger on the internet, but I believe everyone is beautiful no matter their race, shape, or size. This is such a bittersweet poem, but please don’t consider yourself the ugly sister. Comparison will take your joy, and your features are what make you, you. I understand that feeling, especially from family where they’re meant to be supportive but instead surround us with judgement. I wish you the very best and I hope you realize how beautiful you are.
March 1st, 2026 23:42
Hey man, I hope you’ve gotten better
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that flows downward and in the pool where it ends has a reflection with an echo. Well done in rhyme
October 8th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that flows downward and in the pool where it ends has a reflection with an echo. Well done in rhyme
October 8th, 2025 04:03
Hollow King
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, someone about to trip and fall over their own arrogance, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, someone about to trip and fall over their own arrogance, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 05:44
Hollow King
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has good meter and rhyme but to this is added a somewhat cryptic message that implies arrogance as a flaw leading to an impending fall. Nicely written and a fave
August 8th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has good meter and rhyme but to this is added a somewhat cryptic message that implies arrogance as a flaw leading to an impending fall. Nicely written and a fave
August 8th, 2025 05:06
B.K.
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem speaks of being sucked dry by the overly needy who are always looking for reassurance, guidance and care. Well written
June 27th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem speaks of being sucked dry by the overly needy who are always looking for reassurance, guidance and care. Well written
June 27th, 2025 04:02
To the Daughter that isn’t and won’t be.
sorenbarrett said:
A vision, dream, desire that is never to be. It carries longing and sadness over a vision not fulfilled. Haunting
June 4th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A vision, dream, desire that is never to be. It carries longing and sadness over a vision not fulfilled. Haunting
June 4th, 2025 04:31
To the Daughter that isn’t and won’t be.
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
All poetry is personal, thanks for sharing
June 3rd, 2025 21:58
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
All poetry is personal, thanks for sharing
June 3rd, 2025 21:58
False hope
Poetic Licence said:
The seed took route long enough to make the mind think, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
The seed took route long enough to make the mind think, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 06:39
False hope
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor indeed and from its seed I have to ask if there was root rot. Nicely done
May 27th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor indeed and from its seed I have to ask if there was root rot. Nicely done
May 27th, 2025 05:35
Fuck you, I wish you the best.
MatPie said:
beautiful wordplay, a tragedy sense of love in display
May 16th, 2025 06:51
MatPie said:
beautiful wordplay, a tragedy sense of love in display
May 16th, 2025 06:51
Fuck you, I wish you the best.
sorenbarrett said:
Words that roll off the tongue and then one wonders what they mean. A fun poem
May 16th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Words that roll off the tongue and then one wonders what they mean. A fun poem
May 16th, 2025 05:10
Transactional
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to only give and never receive. A good write
April 26th, 2025 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to only give and never receive. A good write
April 26th, 2025 19:09
Bitter Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
That is an early loss of one\'s mother and must be very difficult. This poem speaks to the departed from this side asking questions that a parent should be here to address. A sad and poignant poem of loss.
April 25th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
That is an early loss of one\'s mother and must be very difficult. This poem speaks to the departed from this side asking questions that a parent should be here to address. A sad and poignant poem of loss.
April 25th, 2025 04:00
But I did everything right.
Poetic Licence said:
Thats a lovely title and unique way of putting it but I guess thats what we do, try to talk to something that is not listening, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
Thats a lovely title and unique way of putting it but I guess thats what we do, try to talk to something that is not listening, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:36
But I did everything right.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so well put. Sitting down for tea with one\'s anger a great way of putting it. Civilized discussion with a savage. Reasoning with emotion that has no ears or eyes. Nicely done
April 15th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem so well put. Sitting down for tea with one\'s anger a great way of putting it. Civilized discussion with a savage. Reasoning with emotion that has no ears or eyes. Nicely done
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Bruised Knees
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our weakness\' and some more than others, never the less I believe that we all do the best we can under the circumstances with the tools that we have to work with at that time. This belief allows me to hold no grudge against others or self. A well written poem with moving sentiment
April 14th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our weakness\' and some more than others, never the less I believe that we all do the best we can under the circumstances with the tools that we have to work with at that time. This belief allows me to hold no grudge against others or self. A well written poem with moving sentiment
April 14th, 2025 04:06
Bruised Knees
Poetic Licence said:
We will all have our limits, some lower than others, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
We will all have our limits, some lower than others, nicely expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 02:32
Succumb
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful poem in its meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:48
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful poem in its meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:48
Succumb
sorenbarrett said:
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and flow. It is a powerful poem in a quiet way. Beautiful a fave
April 10th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and flow. It is a powerful poem in a quiet way. Beautiful a fave
April 10th, 2025 07:25
Chambers
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done. Pride is a great subject to address and my favorite line is the last. Most wonderfully done.
April 5th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done. Pride is a great subject to address and my favorite line is the last. Most wonderfully done.
April 5th, 2025 13:40
Prophecy
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, very enjoyable
April 4th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, very enjoyable
April 4th, 2025 06:17
Prophecy
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
April 4th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
April 4th, 2025 04:24
Paralysis
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable if slightly haunting write, very enjoyed reading
April 3rd, 2025 04:07
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable if slightly haunting write, very enjoyed reading
April 3rd, 2025 04:07
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